King
Review
Seeing that many readers were trolling, Haiyue said: It's unfair, I really didn't deliberately troll.
In a slow-paced novel, the plot will definitely not advance quickly. Haiyue has tried to reduce the foreshadowing content as much as possible. No matter how little logic there is, the loop cannot be closed.
I don’t deny the repetitive content and gossip. If you read it carefully, you will find that the contents that appear to be similar before and after have different meanings.
From part to whole, it is a step-by-step process in itself. If you don't read it carefully, you might think it's the same thing said twice, but this part of the content is indispensable.
The part cannot represent the whole, and the individual cannot represent everything.
In order to reduce the criticism, Haiyue blindly cut off the appearance opportunities of many characters. The character background introduction is also greatly reduced. So much so that I have read a lot of books but can only remember very few of the characters.
——Failure.
To sum up: The main reason is that Haiyue's skills are not enough. In terms of local and overall description, he failed to balance the relationship between the two. He really deserves to be sprayed.
Blindly running to cut the characters and plots is putting the cart before the horse. Haiyue will work hard to improve in the future and strive to balance the characters and plot.
Insufficient updates are also one of the core reasons for review.
Embarrassing, trivial matters are indispensable in life. If there are too many trivial matters, the output will be low.
Then superimpose to create peak and trough periods, which can be reversed without human intervention. Try to stabilize the 7,000 behind Haiyue, it seems a bit difficult, I will try my best to pump blood myself!
Before I knew it, it was almost twelve o'clock. One chapter of my review was missing. I will try to write as little as possible in the future.
The review is complete, and I hope readers will continue to encourage supervision. Of course, don’t forget to vote and subscribe. I love you Haiyue forever!
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