Master, what path do you cultivate?

Thank you readers for accompanying me all the way.

"Master, what kind of practice do you practice?" 》It’s officially over here.

In fact, if I continue writing, it will start the chapter of the war inside and outside Kyushu, as well as the growth of the second generation of immortals.

But I feel that after experiencing so much life and death, it’s time for Ji Qinglin’s family to live a peaceful life.

After all, peace inside and outside Kyushu is what everyone hopes for, and a war is forced. Unless Kyushu falls.

A big demon appeared inside - the true body of the Taoist Saint.

He has been deceiving the Heavenly Dao of Kyushu, and combined with the scientific cultivation techniques learned from outside, he fell into Kyushu.

Then Ji Qinglin took his family back to Kyushu.

Hahahaha, just thinking about it, it's a bit like a big family in "The Incredibles". Each of the two generations of immortals has their own talents.

But if Ji Qinglin takes action, there will be no room for the children to take action, so Ji Qinglin must be sealed so that the children can take action together.

I see!

Later I will write "The Little Divine Soldier"!

Just kidding everyone.

Just like I sometimes think that "Naruto" will end when Naruto gets married, I still have some fantasy, and there is no need to spread it out.

And I’m also worried that someone will die!

Readers who have finished reading it should have discovered that I am almost useless in writing.

The ones who died from the beginning to the end were a little bit upset, including Shen Bitao, Fosheng and No. 1 Ah Qing, because they were really reluctant to let people die.

Let me also talk to you about my harvest and experience from this book.

Experience:

1. I wrote more than 30 chapters before I realized that I seemed to be able to write about the harem. I had never written one before! The main character of the last book was never confused from beginning to end, so starting from chapter 40 to 50, I followed the feeling of a harem novel, and found that I actually quite enjoyed writing it!

(Actually, if you read the previous chapters carefully, you will find that the first twenty chapters are still a little depressing, because originally I wanted to create a more depressing cyberpunk world, but after writing the thirty or forty chapters, I found that everyone seems to be more interested in the harem. I was interested in it, and I didn’t want to make the writing too depressing, so I completely developed in the direction of harem writing.)

2. During my writing, I discovered that many particularly interesting plot character conflicts, misunderstandings, and contrasts are actually more interesting than the big plot, but they must be laid out and foreshadowed in advance. This also made me realize the importance of outlines and details.

Lessons learned:

1. There are many lessons. The first and most important thing is the outline. To be honest, when this book was released, there were only the outlines of Ji Qinglin and Yuye Chiye, so we can see that the plots and suspense of the three of them are the richest. Death of the Immortal And Ji Qinglin’s true identity is revealed throughout.

(To be exaggerated, to a certain extent, I actually made this dumpling meal because of the jealousy between Ji Qinglin and Yuye Chiye.)

Therefore, the identity plots of other characters and Ji Qinglin are sometimes not so rich. This is indeed the reason why I did not prepare enough for the outline at the beginning. There should be more conflicts between other characters and the protagonist.

2. The arrangement of the harem. Because it is my first time to write a harem article, my understanding of the harem is a little shallow. As a result, the people who are drawn into the harem are all my own people, so the dramatic conflicts are much less. In fact, the people who join the opposite camp and the people who are included in the harem are Camp opposition would be more interesting, I’ll pay attention to it in the next book.

3. The collision of identity and plot. In fact, when reading the first 200 chapters, especially the first 100 chapters, there are quite a lot of interesting collisions of character identities and misunderstandings. For example, when Ji Qinglin’s identity was not revealed to Nangong Qianfeng, for example, Yu Ye’s two souls were integrated into one body. When I think the master doesn’t know, I think people still like to see these.

But when it comes to the normal confrontation between good and evil later, when the goal is achieved at two points and one line, there is not so much conflict, and the sense of fun is weaker. I will also pay attention to this in the new book and add more interesting identity and plot conflicts.

4. Be bolder. This is also what I should reflect on the most. Mainly because of my lack of experience in writing novels, I am often constrained by general logic and dare not write more interesting and coincidental plots, so some of the latter parts are a bit traditional to fight monsters and upgrade. .

As the saying goes, there is no book without coincidence. Many things that are coincidental or bizarre from God's perspective can be accepted by readers as long as they are arranged reasonably, such as "Two Smoking Barrels" and "Crazy Racing", which allow coincidental dramatic conflicts to break out.

Having roughly summarized so much, this book has brought me a lot of gains.

Looking back, I have a lot of problems and everyone has been able to support me all the way. Thank you all again!

Especially for the friends and relatives group of old readers, I will read the monthly votes and recommendation votes every day. Readers who vote for recommendations every day and readers who remember to vote for monthly votes can see it. Thank you all again.

There is a book club group in the introduction. Friends who are interested can join. Currently, there are nearly 900 people. The book friends are very active (when the 500 people are full, I will not be willing to create a new group to separate everyone. I also specially opened an annual membership. The application became a large group to accommodate 3,000 people.)

I will summarize and correct the above issues so that the next book can be better presented to everyone.

About the next book.

At the beginning of the month, the internal submission review was completed, and the outline of characters and manuscripts were being refined.

I won’t go into too much detail, but I’ll leave you with some suspense. In short, the new book will be very interesting and should be released in mid-to-late December.

Damn it, I just found out that my birthday is tomorrow hahahaha (lunar calendar)

What a coincidence. May the good luck of the ending and the good luck of the birthday bring to each of you.

I also hope that Ji Qinglin and his family will live happily in that world~

My book friends who I have never met, let’s meet again in the new book.

The show is over now, thank you for staying with me till the end. (bow)