My Girlfriend is More Than Beautiful
Chapter 129: Mo Nanbei seized the opportunity ===(2)
Li Ziqian couldn't help feeling a little sighed by Nanbei's description.
"Like this??"
"Yeah, didn't I show it to you as well, I can actually post my first draft, but it would be better if I revise it."
"More water, right?"
"Not exactly. In fact, at first glance, the first draft is the more watery one.
Because most of the dialogues are listed and piled up, and then occasionally there will be radio-wave dialogues and exchanges. "
Listening to Mo Nanbei's description, Li Ziqian recalled the first draft that Mo Nanbei sent him last time, and he nodded thoughtfully.
There is nothing wrong with what Mo Nanbei said.
"Alternatively, sometimes, when I was revising, I found out that because I wrote too fast, and then a large part of the plot was missing.
Sometimes I make up for this story, and I can make up about 4,000 words less.
I remember the most outrageous, once again, I was so stunned that I filled in 20,000 words, and this filling was only two days..."
Li Ziqian: …
It has to be said that although Li Ziqian does not understand Mo Nanbei's writing style very well, it does not prevent him from saying that this person is awesome.
"You have this speed, why don't you rush Feilu."
"As long as you can write fantasy." Mo Nanbei responded with a very heartbroken expression.
"Hey, I can write."
Mo Nanbei: …
How I know you can write!
Grass!
Stupid idiot! To die!
A few superior ones!
It's amazing to write, right?
really! It's so amazing!
Immediately, Mo Nanbei asked Li Ziqian sincerely,
"So the boss is going to teach me when."
"How to teach this?"
Mo Nanbei: ?
Listening to Li Ziqian's words, Mo Nanbei changed his previous attitude and sneered at Li Ziqian,
"You can't teach this, what a piece of trash you are!"
"Don't you owe a fight!"
"Clam?"
"Why, you don't have a long memory, do you?"
Mo Nanbei: …
While taking a deep breath, Mo Nanbei folded his hands and said to Li Ziqian,
"Sorry Dad, I was wrong."
Li Ziqian: …
He's used to it.
real.
Really no longer surprised.
This person, why always make his peaceful life full of drama.
This has really become a daily routine.
Damn it!
With a sigh, he didn't continue to expand on the topic of who's father.
Li Ziqian started a discussion about the fact that Mo Nanbei said he wanted to write fantasy.
"I think this kind of thing, if it is not possible, then go to Chinese translation. Isn't this the process of online texts at the beginning."
"What you said makes sense." Mo Nanbei nodded and agreed.
"Find a book by a big guy, and then go and learn it.
Learn other people's outlines, writing style, rhythm, etc., and you will be your own when you learn it.
Then you master the skills, and then you can start writing books yourself. "
"There's nothing wrong with what you said, but I basically don't watch fantasy. What should you do if you say I'm so special?"
Li Ziqian: …
"If you don't read it and want to write it, isn't that a **** idiot."
After finishing speaking, Li Ziqian gave Mo Nanbei an angry look.
"Okay, my fault, some other day you recommend some books for me to read."
"East brother, the eagle, is always in awe, and the Shifang Martial Saint who is out of the way is also good-looking. I have been chasing it recently." Li Ziqian said to Mo Nanbei.
"Like this?
No, don't they all say eagle water? "
"You'll know when you see it, the water returns to the water, the rhythm and hatred are really awesome, the kind you have to admire.
Moreover, people can use water at 30,000 yuan per day. What's wrong with water, it's awesome to be able to use water! Who can't write about watering! ", Li Ziqian explained to Mo Nanbei.
"What you said is very reasonable. 30,000 a day is really **** unaffordable."
"Actually, once or twice a day is nothing, but for a month, half a year, and a book in a row, that's really not a **** thing."
"Beasts! It's really outrageous." Mo Nanbei pouted, expressing the same emotion as Li Ziqian.
"I think you actually have the potential to develop." Li Ziqian suddenly changed the subject. He looked towards Mo Nanbei with research eyes.
Mo Nanbei: ? ? ? ? ?
"I'm sorry, Wan ordered a certain amount." Without thinking about it, Mo Nanbei directly rejected Li Ziqian's proposal.
joke.
30,000 in a row?
Impossible.
"Grass, can you be a little bit more promising, and the boutique must be good?"
"No, consecutive days are my last decent and bottom line."
"A silver cute."
"Twenty thousand consecutive days is my last decent and bottom line."
"A golden cute."
"Damn it, isn't it 30,000! A month a month! A month is a **** month!"
Li Ziqian: …
What should he expect from Mo Nanbei's morals?
Sure enough, this person does not have a misplaced foundation and bottom line, right?
Ugh.
After sighing, the topic of the two returned to Xuanhuan.
"However, the audience of Xuanhuan is really large. Although they say Xuanhuan is dead, the top sellers are basically Xuanhuan." Mo Nanbei sighed to Li Ziqian.
"No problem, everything can be magical."
"I feel that if I want to work hard, it is best to slowly overdo it from the perspective of fantasy romance."
Fantasy classification, love essays...
"I think it's very good." After thinking for a while, Li Ziqian nodded and said that Mo Nanbei's idea could be put into practice.
"Take your time, if you really have such a plan, it will be the next book."
"Under the next book????"
Li Ziqian was surprised when he heard Mo Nanbei's plan.
Is Mo Nanbei's schedule so full?
"yes.
The next book is the new love essay, um... about you and about me.
The next one is a short love story with a small idea.
Then if you really want to write fantasy romance, don't you just write the next one. "
Mo Nanbei was serious, counting one, two, three with his fingers while explaining to Li Ziqian.
"Is your special schedule going to the next year?"
"What are you talking about? It's just scheduled for next year!"
"what?"
"When I open a book now, I would finish it a few years ago at the earliest.
So the short story can be finished in the first half of next year. After all, the requirement for the theatrical version is no more than 500,000 words.
If you don't take a break, you can open the book seamlessly. If you take a break, this fantasy love story will also be published in the second half of next year. "
"Ah...that's it..."
He forgot that Mo Nanbei was always a model worker.
Especially when trying hard.
"Then come on, come on." Li Ziqian said to Mo Nanbei with emotion.
"Come on, hammer, I don't know how to write at all."
"Then I can't help you either, I don't know how to fall in love."
"Ugh... you rubbish... oh yes! How about you write about the supernatural wind?"
After scolding Li Ziqian, Mo Nanbei immediately threw another question to him before the other party could reply.
Li Ziqian: …
Listening to Mo Nanbei's question, Li Ziqian fell silent for a while.
After a long time, he opened his mouth and complained to Mo Nanbei,
"Do you think the review did not add you to the priority list?"
Mo Nanbei: …
"I'm not, don't talk nonsense without you."
"It's also a color, and a special draft.
Say how long you want your book to live. "
"Ah this... I... um...
After you say that, I want to write more. "
"Grass, neurosis."
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Today's update is here.
This chapter has a total of 12,000 words, which means that I have successfully returned five chapters today.
31-5=26, only two days have passed since the National Day holiday.
In other words, a few days off for the National Day holiday, seven days, right?
75=35
Well, ok.
This wave must be won.
By the way, how do you count the number of characters in the ellipsis today?
Let's take a look in the group tomorrow, this number of words is not too much to be included in the addition.
I don't think it's too much.
Calculate this tomorrow.
I was tired and went to bed. I forgot to take the medicine today, so I will have to make it up later.
Gee.
Good night Minasang.
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