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Chapter 153: Full marks in the monthly exam (Thanks to Xiaotong for reading the Silver Alliance!)
This question is very simple. The key to getting high scores lies in the entry point.
Different from topic composition, it is very versatile.
Chen Yuan still remembers that there was a classic composition on the topic of "Grades, Slaps and Kisses". The comic tells that if you test 100 points and then 98 points, you will get a slap, and if you test 55 points and then 61 points, you will get a kiss.
A topic like this basically sets the direction.
In fact, it directly leads to family education, and its core is a criticism of the Chinese education method.
It is difficult to get a high score for this kind of question.
Because there is not even a different angle.
Chen Yuan remembered that after Liu Fang told them some cookie-cutter high-scoring essays, he gave them a wrong example written by a certain student in the class - if you fall behind, you will be beaten!
All I can say is that it is very novel and has the aesthetic feeling of brainstem atrophy.
A question like this is a semi-propositional composition, not a full proposition. It just needs to be written in a reasonable way. Even like a primary school student, I want to do XXX in the future.
If it is a novel, how should it be written?
Think about what those literary giants would do.
To complete a piece of work with a limited number of 800 words, conflict and sublimation are needed.
The need for online writing to be precise means that it is not suitable for exam writing because the writing needs to be short and concise.
Also, you can’t write about puppy love.
This is a slide that cannot be touched, so be absolutely careful.
So after thinking about it, Chen Yuan put pen to paper.
In fifty minutes, he completed this novel. And at the end, we really stick to the theme!
After all, the marking teacher is not the editor of Qidian. He cannot write too excitingly, let alone write in a Chinese composition that is refreshing.
There are still twenty-five minutes until the end of the exam.
Chinese language is like this. After finishing the questions, you don’t know what to do. Because the answer sheets are all filled up, I can't draw any changes. As for the multiple-choice questions, I felt like I got them all right from the beginning. Or maybe I got them all wrong. How can I make corrections?
Totally over the top.
If you forcefully change the correct answer to the wrong answer, you will have to make a big deal about yourself afterwards.
This is why every time you take the college entrance examination, the first session is particularly popular. On the one hand, it is because Chinese composition is a topic that can be participated by all people. Unlike other subjects, the threshold is too high. What’s more, the time for submitting Chinese papers in advance can be very long. Many students are vying for the benefit of being the first to appear for interviews, so that the designers can understand that the Dao Mei thing still needs to be trimmed.
But seriously speaking, it really doesn't matter if you submit Chinese papers in advance. After all, in Chinese, if you finish it, you've finished it, and if you haven't finished it, you haven't finished it.
If you can hand in the math test paper issued by Ge Jun in advance, then you are really awesome.
However, Chen Yuan did not dare to slack off even if he finished the work ahead of time. When Liu Fang was about to come to him, he quickly turned over the test paper and answer sheet, pretending to be checking ancient poems.
Composition is something that cannot be seen by her.
Liu Fang actually likes diversified compositions, but the premise is that top students are diversified.
She often showed everyone some special compositions from Class 15, such as narratives, novels, and even essays. Because there is a literary genius in their class who writes particularly wonderful prose, even if it is included in Yu Qiuyu's "Cultural Journey", it would not be out of place. As for that person's composition, as long as it performs normally, it will often score above 55 points.
By the way, the highest score for the eleventh grade essay was 56. But if this kind of essay is placed in the college entrance examination, it will be a perfect score reserve.
The reason why it is so strict is to prevent students from speculating.
Try to write argumentative essays as much as possible.
Especially those classes with poor students.
I, Liu Fang, am begging for help. Argumentative essays, three-part forms, and old stereotypes. Your level cannot support such a show off.
Therefore, Chen Yuan is still a little afraid of being criticized.
Of course, he is not worried that the teachers will be too subjective and will give low marks to all novels. After all, the only mandatory requirement in the exam is "poetry excepted", so even if novels are used as a subject, the marking teachers will be fair in their scoring. of.
After Liu Fang passed by him, he wandered to Zhou Fu's position. Standing next to her, she put her hands behind her back and looked at her test paper. After looking at it for a while, she smiled slightly.
It can be seen that she is very satisfied with our Fu Bao.
In other words, she has a natural liking for good students.
Unlike Lao Mo, although he behaved very hierarchically, he was actually quite pleased with some poor students.
After all, the class teacher is the easiest person to develop feelings for students... Of course, I am not referring to teacher-student love!
——"Old Mo's Youth Love Story".
Finally, the exam is over.
After Liu Fang collected the test papers, the students in the examination room left the classroom one after another.
Then, several students in the class gathered around and started chatting with Liu Fang. Chen Yuan also followed him, wanting to hear what was said.
Although she was absolutely confused about the answers after the test, it was only a monthly test after all, so Liu Fang didn't take it too seriously, so she was stingy with her comments.
"The composition this time is very simple. If you can still write off-topic questions, then I will really beat you up." Liu Fang warned seriously, leaning on the podium.
"Teacher, I am writing about my future self, is that okay?"
"Oh." Liu Fang sighed after hearing this and said, "There are so many things to write about, why do you write about me in the future?"
"Then, is that a deviation from the topic?"
"It's not off topic, but it's too common. It's just like writing an essay in elementary school. I want to be a scientist or an artist in the future. There is no argument at all." Liu Fang said truthfully, "This kind of writing is not bad, but No matter how good the writing is, it is difficult for teachers to give it a score of more than 47 points."
"Then teacher, what I wrote is hello, future."
"Where's the entry point?"
"The completion of socialist modernization reflects China's rapid technological development in recent years."
"Well... you can, but you won't get a high score. Of course, if you write particularly well, you still have a chance to get 48." Liu Fang made a pertinent comment.
Writing such a composition is actually very unstable. Because some students are very rigid and focus on this aspect of all propositions, they often tend to go off topic. Of course, if he really comes across this perfect gift composition topic, he is really in luck.
"Zhou Fu, what did you write?"
Liu Fang only read the beginning and felt satisfied.
Time is like a reverse journey, and I am also a traveler.
After Zhou Fu thought for a while, she said: "What I wrote is about facing the future optimistically. I gave the example of the great writer Su Shi. After he experienced the Wutai Poetry Case, he was relegated all his life and could not see a bright future at all. . However, he did not respond passively. During this period, he wrote such eternal masterpieces as "Shui Diao Ge Tou", and also actively enjoyed life and invented delicacies such as Dongpo Pork and Dongpo Pork..."
"Yeah." Liu Fang nodded slightly, fully approving of Zhou Fu's composition.
Composition is like dancing with shackles.
But the key is who can dance better.
As soon as Su Shi said that sentence, she felt it was right.
Just stick to this poem and talk about Su Shi's life experience.
Is it so difficult?
It's not difficult.
Hearing Liu Fang's praise of Zhou Fu, several students next to him showed expressions of 'that's awesome'.
However, Zhou Fu, who was originally a top 200 person, was assigned to the exam room of a top 900 person. It was no less than putting a shark in the pond, a complete dimensionality reduction blow.
"Chen Yuan, what did you write?" Liu Fang saw that Chen Yuan was also nearby, so she took the initiative to ask.
Then, everyone looked at him together. Facing these looks, Chen Yuan said calmly: "What I write is about the relationship between the future and the present..."
"Hey, that's right."
Before Chen Yuan could finish speaking, Liu Fang directly said these words in a long tone. Then, I will explain to everyone: "With such a simple question, does the teacher who gave the test want to see that my dream is to be a scientist? No. The corresponding word for the future is the present, or the past. So inserting it from this starting point is the best."
"Huh? That's it...hiss, wouldn't it mean that everyone else has fallen behind?" asked a student.
"The one written by Zhou Fu is not as good as this one?"
"I'm just talking about the entry point." The teacher explained, "Chen Yuan's entry point is good and has set a good tone. And Zhou Fu's one is because she writes well and has good writing style and accumulation to write from an ordinary perspective. It’s very good and right.”
In short, it is much better than "my future is not a dream".
"How did you write it?" Liu Fang asked again.
Chen Yuan said: "What I wrote is that the future is the result of the continuous accumulation of the present. It is right to look forward to the future, but it is more important to grasp the present..."
"Fifty is enough."
Liu Fang raised her finger and clicked it, fully agreeing with this argument.
She always thought that Chen Yuan, a child, was very thoughtful and had strong understanding ability. Every time he wrote an essay, he could perfectly capture the teacher's pain points.
But what made her a little uncomfortable was that Chen Yuan's reading comprehension was very... not that it was bad, it was just too weird.
She vividly remembered a previous question: What does the rain outside the window represent at this time, and why did the author write this.
Chen Yuan answered: Maybe it was raining outside the window when the author wrote this paragraph.
It can only be said that exam-oriented education has stifled Chen Yuan quite a lot.
"Awesome, the composition is fifty." Yu Jiacheng exclaimed, "Then Chen Yuan's total score can exceed 100."
"No, you."
If Liu Fang hadn't been here, Chen Yuan would have launched a husky attack on Yu Jiacheng.
Why don't you open which pot and pick up which one?
"Hey." But Liu Fang was reminded by Yu Jiacheng's words and sighed. It was a pity.
Yeah, what's in store for me?
He will always only have so many points. If he performs well, he can reach 110, and if he performs poorly, he can reach 100 or more.
Hey, Yoshiko, you have to see people’s progress. Didn’t I write all the ancient poems correctly today...
"So, you are writing an argumentative essay, right?"
Chen Yuan will not let himself down, and since he said so, it must be an argumentative essay. The reason why Liu Fang asked was to let the students next to him know that as long as the argumentative essay finds the right angle, it is impossible to overturn it.
"..." Chen Yuan said after a brief silence, "Ang."
Hearing this, Liu Fang felt relieved. But Zhou Fu on the side saw the problem and understood it instantly.
Chen Yuan usually does not lie, but when he wants to lie, he will choose silence. If you ask him at this time, he will probably answer with "ang".
His arrogance means - you understand.
"Let's go eat. We have exams in the afternoon." Liu Fang reminded everyone not to get the answers wrong and not to take the monthly exam too seriously.
She has never liked the kind of students who seriously ask her to change their scores after taking the exam. This is not the college entrance examination, so why bother?
It's just a monthly exam, what you need to master is how to do the questions.
Then, everyone left the examination room, picked up their schoolbags placed on the desk outside, and prepared to go to the cafeteria.
"How was the Chinese language this time?" Zhou Fu asked, "Do you find it difficult?"
"……good."
Chen Yuan felt that the most helpless thing about himself in the Chinese subject was that no matter what the topic, he could not distinguish the difficulty from the difficulty.
Therefore, he can only pray that the Chinese language in the college entrance examination will be as difficult as possible, so that the score line will be lowered. And I always score a hundred or so points.
"I have a hunch." Zhou Fu looked at Chen Yuan and said with confidence, "You will improve in every subject in this exam."
"Why?" Chen Yuan was confused.
You are really like my mother, you have unlimited trust in me.
But my mother is not as blindly confident as you.
"Because..." Zhou Fule was stunned, covered her mouth with her hand, and whispered in his ear, "504+121=625."
"...No, how could she tell you all this?"
Chen Yuan became popular, very seriously.
Xinbao, can't we talk secretly?
Also, how far have you reached this conversation?
Didn’t you also tell me about my urgent desire to establish a relationship?
Xia Xinyu is such an idiot!
"I think it's pretty good." Zhou Fu smiled and comforted her quickly, "She told me that she also wanted me to supervise your studies."
"That's what I said, but...hey."
Chen Yuan is actually a bit of a school bitch. Before he gets results, he doesn't want everyone to think that he works too hard. Moreover, for the reason of pursuing her to the same school, he was too innocent and virginal.
It doesn't fit his character.
"I also have a Chinese language level of 120. I can also help you a little with some questions." Zhou Fu said proactively, "Except for composition, if you get 70 or 80 points on other questions, you can pass 110. If in my With help, if you can break through 110, you two will treat me to dinner."
Then, while eating, we talked about college.
But can they really go to the same school? The difference is 120 points...
It would be more realistic for Chen Yuan to have the same score as himself.
No, wouldn't it become a university again? We are in the same school, and Xinyu is in a good university next door in the same city?
No, in that case, I really might not be able to help but make mistakes...
No, no, absolutely not!
"But. If you can surpass me, I will treat you to dinner." After some deep thought, Zhou Fu decided to encourage Chen Yuan and let him move higher and further.
It's okay for Chen Yuan to be with her, after all, she has a certain sense of morality.
But if it's another girl who takes too much initiative... this boy might cheat on him.
"Okay, okay, okay."
Chen Yuan nodded and agreed to the bet: "Chao, I will try my best to surpass you."
………
When the students started to take the math test, the teachers in the Chinese language group also rushed to grade the papers. In order to save their weekends, they would not have to work overtime on weekends to correct the papers.
Among them, everyone has their own responsible part.
And in order to be able to alternate marking and not waste time, the composition correction is also carried out at the same time.
The way to change the composition is exactly what everyone complained about. Each teacher can only read it for two minutes at most.
Is the beginning detached from the topic, whether the end is sublimated, and a glance at the examples in the middle are appropriate. Then, you can basically determine the score. This. It didn't even take two minutes.
However, there are also test papers that take three or four minutes to read completely, and that is a good composition.
"The questions this time are very simple, and there are basically no deviations from the questions, so everyone tried their best to lower the scores. Also, those who miss the questions, don't be unbearable and give low marks." When correcting the paper, the Chinese grade group Chief Wu Wensen gave these instructions to the Chinese teachers.
Then, everyone also follows this standard, and the essays they revise are generally around 45 points, with better ones at 47 or 48. Those who are obviously off topic but write 800 words will be dealt with 30.
There is no difference in Chinese language scores, but there is a 17 or 18-point gap between good and bad students just in composition.
I don't understand why students don't pay attention to this subject.
There are several students in Class 15 who scored 130 points in the test. Aren't they quite competitive?
"Is this the young writer in your class? Teacher Liu." When a male teacher was correcting his composition, he suddenly turned around with a smile and said to Liu Fang who was at the desk behind him.
"Whether this test paper is sealed or not, it means nothing to him." Liu Fang sighed.
"The writing is so good. I can't even achieve this level of literary talent. When writing prose, it doesn't have a lousy theme like 'use your dreams as a horse and live up to your time'." The teacher sighed.
"What's the entry point?" Liu Fang asked.
After thinking for a while, the teacher said: "When you let go of the past, you have the present; when you have the present, you also meet the future."
"Okay!" Hearing this, Wu Vincent came over, took the test paper, and nodded while reading, "This kid is really stable, he can cut the main points so accurately, and he can also write prose. I remember him, and he also has the overall ranking Top thirty, right?”
"Last time, I was 29, in the first examination room of liberal arts." Liu Fang said.
"Yes, it's true." Wu Wensen nodded and said, "If he really doesn't want to write an argumentative essay, and if he can perform like this every time, he might really be able to get full marks in the essay in the college entrance examination. And he already has 985 If you have such a strong performance in your composition, you may be specially recruited to a higher-level prestigious school.”
For example, Haidong University has some support for local students.
"Are you like the author of "The Death of Red Rabbit" who was admitted to Nanjing Normal University under special circumstances?" a teacher asked.
"It's not impossible." Wu Vincent really thought so.
The definition of literature is too broad, and pure literature majors generally like this kind of spiritual children.
Of course, there are times when things turn over.
That is, Jijing University recruited a candidate who wrote essays in Oracle, and then after entering, he found out that he was a fool...
Nowadays, it is true that we don’t find new ways and use this method to make exceptions for admission.
However, he already had such a good overall score. Coupled with his good literary talent, it is not impossible to be favored by the highest literary institution.
"What's the score?" the teacher asked.
After thinking for a while, Vincent Wu said: "55 points, one point less than the full score."
The full score out of 11 is 56, which is basically only given to top-notch masterpieces.
A score of 55 is equivalent to 58 in the college entrance examination marking scale.
It is even said that I will be lucky enough to get a perfect composition.
"Then the group you changed is from the first examination room for liberal arts."
After a female teacher finished speaking with envy, she pinched her temples with her hands and said in a subtle mood: "I seem to have been transferred to the essay writing class for the poor science class..."
Then the torture began.
Quickly correct test papers, 44, 45, 44, 46...
But there is Ganoderma lucidum in the grass.
Life is like a journey against the odds, and I am also a traveler.
Citing Su Shi's example, each paragraph tightly focuses on the theme. Moreover, the handwriting looks like it was written by a girl, and it is very beautiful.
51.
After the overall score, it is already a very high score.
It's really surprising that there are such candidates in the poor science class.
But Ganoderma lucidum is Ganoderma lucidum. If it could be seen everywhere, it wouldn’t be precious.
There are more weeds, and the particularly insidious Baba hidden in the weeds.
"My future is up to me"
What you are writing is not about the future.
What kind of brain is this?
36.
43, 47, 44, 46.
It takes an average of one and a half minutes to correct a test paper. The female teacher hopes to end this wave as soon as possible.
However, I was stuck in front of a test paper for a long time.
A good five minutes.
Finally, she was really unsure and said to the Chinese team leader: "Teacher Wu, come here."
"What, is it difficult to judge?" Wu Vincent asked.
Generally speaking, the purpose of this should be very clear.
"No, it's easy to judge. I subjectively think this is a masterpiece."
After the female teacher handed over the test paper, she said, "But I'm not sure. Should this test paper also be judged according to the standard of 56 as a full score?"
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