"This... this is to gain readers' sense of identity through a simple and plain style of writing..."
"Let's talk about this kind of aspect after you can write in Japanese smoothly. Also, there are too many pseudonyms, and the target of writing [Magic Red Blade Flash] has become Nioody... bloody? What are these things? ?”
"The same text, first in traditional characters, then in simplified characters, then into hiragana and katakana, and finally add this unreasonable English, what do you want to use?"
Yukinoshita said everything he couldn't understand. Is this the light novel Jingu Rin has been talking about?Totally torture stuff, right?
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Chapter 170 Seven Bad Manuscripts
"I'll stop here first, and leave the rest to others to comment on."
Yukinoshita took a breath and stopped her ruthless criticism of Murakiza. Under her cold words, Murakiza was injured and riddled with wounds. It is really embarrassing for him to bear it until now and not escape.
Hikigaya looked at Yukinoshita with admiration. She was able to read what Murakiza wrote so calmly and give such a profound judgment. She deserves to be the legendary Yukinoshita. I hope she will not fall into her hands in the future. Otherwise, the whole value of life will be denied.
"The maggots over there, please don't cast your gaze over there, I feel creepy to be looked at by your eyes."
Yukinoshita hugged her shoulders and pretended to be very scared, which hurt Hikigu's heart even more.
Sure enough, this kind of vicious woman still has to be cleaned up by Rin Jingu, and she is obedient like a cat in front of him, why treat herself like a blizzard?
Hikiya, who was at the lowest level in the service department, was thinking unconsciously.
"Then it's up to Yuigahama to express my thoughts."
Yukinoshita cast her eyes on Yuigahama, she had been lying on the table with Jingu Rin and watched since just now, she sat up in shock after hearing Yukinoshita's words, she didn't know what she was going to say.
"Me, me? But I don't understand..."
"Just say something casually, I know you definitely didn't watch it last night, so just express your thoughts based on what you just watched."
Yukinoshita caressed her long hair, she really didn't want to put her eyes on the collection of words at all, hot eyes, no matter what Yuigahama said, this person can accept it, after all, he has been so merciless just now I've met... Thick-skinned should be one of his strengths.
Look at Jingu Rin lying on the table, and then look at the one over there. It turns out that there is a difference between the second and middle school, at least Jingu Rin doesn't hate it.
"Why, how about it? Have different opinions. After all, it is impossible to meet everyone's wishes. Most people can still appreciate it?"
Murakiza rekindled his confidence, he looked up at Yukinoshita who was ashamed by Yukinoshita, and looked at her expectantly through the thick lenses.
The sight of this person is so scary, Yubihama dare not meet his eyes, the girl of the dumpling looks at the ceiling, her small head is searching for words that can be called praise in her memory, she was just talking to Jingu Rin They were just lying on their stomachs together, she didn't pay attention to that difficult novel at all, her only impression was...
"Well...well, I...I think, you know a lot of very rare Chinese characters and English, very good."
Yuigahama is a kind girl, she will not be as cold and direct as Yukinoshita, but her only shortcoming is that her brain is not very good, she thought it was a word of comfort, but Murakiza didn't think so.
"Pfft!"
As if being shot by a bow and arrow, Murakiza clutched his chest and began to roll on the ground. Hikigu looked at Murakiza who rolled to his legs in disgust.
"Don't be ashamed, isn't there another person who hasn't commented... Although I don't think he will say anything good."
Yes, there is another one. The bruised Murakiza stood up and looked at the blond figure with firm eyes. In his heart, Jingu Rin was at the same height as Yukinoshita. Such dazzling people usually do not If he can communicate with someone like himself, his words must be more convincing.
Yukinoshita also wanted to know what Jingu Rin would say. Everyone in the room was focused on him, but he kept a single movement, lying on the table without taking his eyes off the manuscript. It's as if you're really reading it carefully.
Murakiza's eyes lit up, could it be that someone who really understands himself has come?No wonder I also felt a strange power from him. Could it be that he was also my partner in the previous life?
Or is it the mutual attraction between the two?
"The shrine, the shrine?"
Yukinoshita touched his shoulder, and finally leaned down beside him and listened quietly for a while, Jingomiya Rin's steady breathing came into her ears, Yukinoshita raised her head speechlessly.
"Maybe it's because it's too boring, Jingu fell asleep after watching it, but you should know how he feels about his reaction, right?"
Expressing his feelings for Jingu Rin, Yukinoshita helped the sleeping Jingu Rin to sit up, and let him lean on the schoolbag on the table to change into a more comfortable position. His gentle movements were like taking care of a kitten.
"Xiaoxue, or let Xiao Lin lean on me."
Yuigahama volunteered, Rin looked so cute sleeping, even cuter than when Yukinoshita was sleeping just now.
"No, you can't keep moving so much, just let him do this. He should have been stimulated a little last night. Just let him have a good rest."
Rejecting Yuigahama's proposal, Yukinoshita let go of the hand on Jingu Rin's shoulder, and made that level of dark cooking with his own hands last night, and he would definitely not be able to sleep well.
Jingu Rin's reaction deeply hurt Murakiza's heart, and coupled with the interaction between Yukinoshita and Yuigahama, as a lone wolf, he couldn't accept it even more. He was injured and crawled to the feet of Hiki Valley On the side, he pinned all his last hopes on his last partner.
"Hachiman, even if it's not a close friend... But if it's you, you can understand it! Understand the world I describe, my great work that ordinary people can't understand..."
He seems to have included Yukinoshita Yubihama and the sleeping Jingu Rin as "mortals".
"Of course."
Hikigaya's dead fish eyes cast a kind gaze on Murakiza, with a faint smile on his ordinary face. This kind of peaceful posture greatly benefited Murakiza. Sure enough, Hachiman still understands himself.
"Tell me, where did you copy it, and how many copies did you copy?"
Hikiya knew Murakiza well, and with his knowledge reserve, it was impossible to write such a long thing, it was definitely copied.
Murakiza didn't respond, and the whole person slowly turned black and white. Should it be said that it is the Ministry of Service?Everyone's attitude towards his works is astonishingly consistent, and it feels like being tortured here!
At the entrance of the teaching building in the setting sun, Murakiza turned to face the three people on the steps. There were originally four people, but the cat lover Yukinoshita couldn't bear to wake Rin Jingu, so he was still alone in the service department Catch up on sleep and call him again later.
"Then let's talk about it, I will read my novels in the future."
Obviously being scolded so badly, but Murakiza didn't care much after recovering. Maybe his real entrustment is to let people see what he wrote, to see himself.
In a way, his commission was indeed fulfilled.
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