"However, is he a writer? Why don't you submit a manuscript and let the editor read it?"

Yuigahama Yui questioned.

"It's up to him to ask himself."

Hikigu Hachiman shrugged.

After Saikiza Yoshiki packed up the manuscript with sweat on his face, everyone sat down, and Yuhikiya Hachiman asked the question that Yuigahama Yui had just asked.

"No, those guys' mouths are too poisonous, if I let them criticize, I will die."

Saikiza Yoshiki said without hesitation.

"No, no, I think that if these people see you, you will die without any dregs left."

Hikigu Hachiman complained.

Leaving aside Yukinoshita Yukino's poisonous tongue, one or two of the others are quite ruthless.

Yuihama Yui is naturally black, and An Yilun will never show mercy, and Jibril likes to watch the fun, it will definitely make his life worse than death!

Perhaps only Yu Chuan Tsubasa here would tell him gently, just give up.

"give it to me."

To prevent others from being fed shit by Yoshiki Zaikiza, Jibril thinks it's better to read it by herself.

After all, Jibril herself has experienced many battles, so she is not afraid of such things.

But if other people see it, it is estimated that they will not have to sleep after being tortured all night.

He took away his manuscript directly, and then quickly flipped through it.

After only five or six seconds passed, Jibril fell silent.

Although I have already known that Yoshiki Zaikiza's works are like shit, but this does not mean that Jibril has no emotions after reading it.

"what happened?"

Tsubasa Hanekawa keenly noticed something was wrong with Jibril, and asked with concern.

"I just watched it again."

Jibril paused after speaking.

"Wait, I've just read this again??!"

Hikigaya Hachiman didn't care about Jibril's reaction, but was surprised by Jibril's reading speed.

He couldn't even read a few words clearly, let alone read them so quickly.

joke?

"Don't interrupt, a hundred lines at a glance and instant memory are easier for me than drinking water for you. That's enough time for me to read and analyze all the content a few times."

Jibril explained.

so strong? ?

It's not human!

Such thoughts flashed through the minds of everyone present, and then Jibril said to Saikiza Yoshiki, who was not affected in the slightest, "I want to ask, have you really graduated from elementary school?"

"Hay??"

Saikiza Yoshiki tilted his head, making a disgusting gesture.

"It's fine if you don't understand the sentence, there are a lot of typos, don't say these are your own words."

Jibril's words have always been a sharp sword, piercing into Zaikiza Yoshiki's heart.

Hitoriya Hachiman's words would not have this effect, but Jibril is a beauty.

The words spoken by the beauty are even more heart-wrenching.

"There are a lot of useless settings without the slightest logic. Although the novel is not like traditional literature, it can't be without logic at all!"

"For example, here, why did you suddenly take off your clothes?"

Jibril had question marks all over her face.

"Because the current novel must sell some meat, otherwise it will be completely unpopular..."

Yoshiki Zaikiza struggled.

"I'm not talking about selling ~ meat, but about your logic!"

Jibril rolled her eyes, and continued: "Your logic is illogical, your sentences are not smooth, the manuscript is full of typos, and the settings are messy. Even young children can't read this kind of stuff, and even the second-year-old child doesn't suit you at all. airwaves. Are you sure you're fiction and not your own brain?!"

When Jibril finished speaking, Saikiza Yoshiki was lying on the ground, his whole body turned gray

Chapter 290 Professionals

"This, it's a bit too much..."

Hikigu Hachiman said in a low voice.

"If this is the evaluation of sister Jipp, it will definitely not be wrong."

Yukinoshita Yukino firmly stood by Jibril's side, and then patted her chest happily.

Fortunately, Jibril helped them read it, otherwise, with her serious character, she wouldn't be able to sleep tonight.

But everyone looked at Yoshiki Saimukza on the ground, and still couldn't help casting sympathetic glances.

"Well, but don't worry."

Jibril smiled, like a flower blooming, causing everyone to stare stupidly, leaving only the momentary smile in their heads.

Even women can't stand such a smile, it's so charming, it's too charming.

"Sentences that don't flow well can be learned, and typos can also be corrected through learning. No one is a natural writer. Although people have different talents, they can keep up with a little effort."

Jibril comforted.

"So, do you want to give up?"

Jibril suddenly changed her tone.

"The pit is waiting here!"

Σ(っ°Д°;)っ

Yuigahama Yui said in surprise.

Saikiza Yoshiki was in a daze, and was startled by Jibril's change of tone, and it took him a long time to realize: "No..."

After thinking for a while, Zaikiza Yoshiki finally let out a breath and said, "Of course I won't give up."

"After all, this is my dream."

Timokizuo Yihui said.

"very good."

Jibril nodded and said: "Since you insist, then of course our service department will do it to the end."

"Your purpose shouldn't just be to let others read your manuscript and give you an evaluation. If you don't give up, then we can only find professionals to teach you how to write!"

Jibril said confidently.

"Professionals?"

Saikiza Yoshiki was startled, and then asked.

"An Xin, it's different from you. That student is a student from our school. He has already debuted and his grades are pretty good. He's completely different from you."

Jibril's smiling expression looked a little dark-bellied, which made people a little startled.

Not long after, a person was called over, it was a senior, her name was Kasumigaoka Shiwa.

Wearing the school uniform of Zongwu High School, wearing a white headband, and often wearing black stockings, she has a tall figure and sensual curves, which make people unable to take their eyes off.

At the same time, her quiet, even cold expression made people afraid to approach her.

"Xia... Senior Xia Zhiqiu?!"

Saikiza Yoshiki stuttered, but no one paid any attention.

"Are you looking for me?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was a little uneasy, but she didn't show it, she raised her eyebrows and asked.

"Well, I need a little help from you."

Jibril was smiling, as if she was calculating something.

"Can I refuse?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu asked speechlessly.

Hearing this, Jibril silently took out a book from the desk, which said Love Metronome.

"You're violating someone's privacy!"

Jibril smiled, making Kasumigaoka Shiwa's expression a little unbearable.

"I don't know what you're talking about."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu turned her head and spoke firmly.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's emotions fluctuated greatly, so she was able to maintain her state and write such an emotional book, which also affected herself.

Because she was teased by Jibril, she is taking revenge on her as the prototype of the protagonist.

Although almost no one could tell, Jibril was different.

"Tokyo Bay."

Jibril's round and cute face, that smile is like a fox who stole a chicken, very cute.

However, in Kasumigaoka Shiu's eyes, it looked like a devil's smile. She had forgotten that Jibril didn't need evidence to do things.

Although it was just a guess, she had already imagined Jibril's background.

Although the real situation, Jibril is infinitely stronger than the background she imagined.

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