This is Zhizhi calling Qiye on the night when he returned to Kyoto, which scared him into a cold sweat.

Therefore, in order to quell this farce as soon as possible, Qiye has been living a two-point and one-line life in Jiufeng Building and Villa during this period, for fear of being caught by the reporters and causing trouble.

It's just that during this time, Qiye really doesn't have much work to do.

The 1.0 version of UBW has just been sent to the MPAA for grading. In order to ensure the accuracy of the rating agency's feedback, Qiye couldn't modify the movie even if he wanted to.

So the super boring Qiye directly called Lao Xu over after being tortured to death by ZUN's "Oriental Flowers Reflecting the Tomb".

Don't get me wrong, he didn't come to find Lao Xu to play Oriental Masochism together, but to discuss the FZ outline he had written,

After all, ZUN's games are really difficult to play.

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pS1: The war between Fatty Qiu and [Weekly Bunshun] has been going on for 30 years, so far we can only say that each has its winners and losers.

Feiqiu ordered people to smash [Weekly Wenchun], and Wenchun kept distributing scandals about Feiqiu and his idol group.

In fact, a lot of black material in AKB comes from [Weekly Bunshun], they basically focused on Heiqiu for 100 years.

Regarding the love and hatred between them, if you are interested, you can Baidu it yourself, and I won’t expand here.

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pS2: Someone mentioned the problem of typesetting, this... Mi Jiang really can't do anything about it.

Because the number of characters in each line displayed by the author in the background is 43 in Chinese, but the APP display has 18 characters in each line without adjusting the font size.

So when there are special characters in English or emoji, there will be typesetting misalignment, unless Mi Jiang counts the grids, otherwise I really don’t know.

Moreover, the font size setting of each reader's APP is different, and it is even more impossible to predict. ┐(?~?)┌

In fact, in the final analysis, it is the scheduling problem of the platform itself. If special characters and English can be automatically line-wrapped and scheduled like World...(*/ω\*)

Chapter 303 Welcome Back 【Addition】

Snapped.

Qiye put the outline in his hand on the table, he looked at Lao Xu who was sitting opposite him, and didn't speak for a long time.

"That...Kiryu-san, is there something wrong?"

Lao Xu was a little scared, he didn't know what he did wrong.

"No...it has nothing to do with you, Lao Xu. This is my own problem. I was negligent."

Qiye squeezed the space between his eyebrows, he didn't have the habit of blaming others for his mistakes.

The outline brought by Lao Xu is completely different from the fz in Qiye's memory, and many places are even far from each other.

Of course, Qiye had to carry the blame himself, because of his own negligence, he didn't leave fz's character design to Lao Xu, which resulted in this very strange outline.

Yes, strange.

Qiye really couldn't think of other more suitable adjectives.

This outline is very old fashioned.

Black, black to black.

Although it is just an outline, after reading this story, Qiye can feel the deep despair in it.

You must know the FZ plot in the previous life, although the ending was various, but Kiritsugu at least found Shirou in the end and was redeemed.

Although it was dark, there was still a glimmer of light.

Even without the fsn plot, readers can still feel that Kiritsugu's ideal of being a partner of justice has been passed down.

But in Lao Xu's outline, Qiye didn't feel such a thing.

Except for Kiritsugu, Mapo and Winky, not to mention the total annihilation, Kiritsugu's rationality was completely destroyed by the Holy Grail.

Rescuing Shirou is not the final redemption, but a kind of numbness after liberation.

He didn't become a partner of justice, but he didn't get his own redemption either.

In this outline, Kiritsugu saved Shirou only because of his behavior.

"Old Xu, your outline is too dark."

Qiye shook his head and said.

The story of Lao Xu may be liked by many fans who like dark and dark stories, but the overall audience is really too small.

As a commercial story, fz really wants to write according to this outline, it is courting death.

For commercial genre films, what is needed is more universal value, or an ending that is popular with the public to set the tone for the entire movie.

One of the very important ending requirements is that the protagonist can lose, but the villain cannot win.

In other words, even if the protagonist's halo is broken in the ending, at least there must be a ray of light for the protagonist, and give the audience a little hope and hope.

This is very important, because it will make the audience feel regretful but not too uncomfortable after reading the story.

For example, the darkest and best movie among superheroes, Nolan's "The Dark Knight".

This story was made dark enough by Nolan, but even in such a story, it still abides by the rules of such commercial films.

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