Starting Today, I'll Work as a City Lord

Nicole decided to make curry rice for lunch, and the curry cubes that Liu Feng brought back from the earth were still frozen in the freezer.

More than half an hour later, Nicole brought out two steaming beef curry rice.Lucy's golden eyes stared straight, and she said nostalgicly, "The last time I ate was last year."

"Yeah, I haven't eaten for a long time." Nicole also misses it very much.

The two finished their lunch quickly, and met in Nicole's room, ready to improve - to write the novel about afternoon tea.

Nicole took out a dozen sheets of paper from the drawer, and said embarrassedly, "Look, this is the novel I'm writing recently, but it's all scattered."

"It's okay, just take your time at first." Lucy said gently, and sat on the stool to browse.

Nicole poured two glasses of water unhurriedly, and sat quietly waiting for Lucy's opinion.

Lucy stared at the manuscript very seriously, staring at it word by word, reaching for a cup to drink water several times in the middle, but all failed.

Nicole covered her mouth and smiled several times, her gray eyes were also staring at the manuscript, obviously still very nervous.

Half an hour later, Lucy raised her head and said softly, "It's written very carefully, it's very clear at a glance.

"Where's the problem?" Nicole worried. There must be problems when writing a novel for the first time.

Lucy spread out some of the pages, pointed to several places and said, "Here, here, and here, the descriptions are too complicated, so readers will look a bit complicated."

"It turns out that's the case. No wonder I always have a hard time reading it myself." Nicole said thoughtfully.

Lucy nodded slightly, pointed to another place and said, "And here, the description of the sentence can be a little more gorgeous, but here it seems a little plain."

Nicole nodded frequently as if she had found a treasure, and said in surprise, "You are so right. I always feel that something is wrong in these places, but I just can't tell."""Take it easy, you are the first- This is the first time to write, it is already very good to be able to write like this. ' Lucy encouraged.

Nicole blinked her gray eyes and asked, "But these are scattered, I don't know how to put them together."

"Don't worry, it's still a while before it can be published. If you have inspiration, write it first, and I will teach you how to typesetting and combination when it's almost ready." Lucy said gently.

"Okay, then I'll continue writing." Nicole's doubts these days have been resolved.

Lucy took a sip of water and asked, "Is there any problem? Anyway, I have a rest today, so let's solve it once."

Nicole nodded heavily and spread out the paper, saying, "What about here? How should I write it? I don't know how to proceed smoothly."

Lucy read the words carefully, thought for a while and said, "The problem is very simple, that is, you didn't pave the way for the bottom, so it would be awkward to write cake directly."

"Then if I said above that milk tea is better served with strawberry cake, will it be better to write about this cake next?" Nicole asked tentatively.Lucy was surprised by the girl's intelligence, nodded repeatedly and said, "Correct, the context will be coherent when written in this way."

"You can always gain a lot of knowledge from chatting with Lucy." Nicole smiled sweetly.

"Your book will be a hit." Lucy said firmly.

"It doesn't matter, as long as I can publish a book of my own, I don't want to sell it." Nicole said softly.

Lucy smiled sweetly, took the girl's hand and said, "I'll take you to read my novel, and you can give me some advice."

"I'd love to." Nicole blinked her gray eyes.

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Chapter 410: A monster living on the bottom of the sea? (1 more for customization)

In the early morning, the crisp bird chirping sounded all the time, and along with the bells, Chang'an City ushered in a new day.

A few familiar people appeared at the gate of the airship field, and they were the four elf sisters.

They set off a little later, and the boat was an ordinary sailing boat. They only arrived in Haiyan City two days ago, and they just rested for one night, and they couldn't wait to get on the airship and come to Chang'an City.

The fourth sister Polly opened her hands, closed her eyes and said with a smile, "We are finally back in Chang'an City."

"Yeah, the big storm last time almost made me think I couldn't come to Chang'an City." The third sister Xila still had lingering fears.

When the four elf sisters were about ten days away from Haiyan City, they encountered an unprecedented huge storm, and strong winds rolled up high waves.Like a monster devouring people, the waves opened their mouths wide and rushed towards their shopping mall. If it weren't for the calm command of the skilled boatman and eldest sister, they would all be buried in the sea.

The second sister, Lan Ni, nodded heavily, and said, "I haven't encountered such a situation before. The high wind is still blowing the water. Could there be some strange things living on the bottom of the sea?"

"It's also possible, otherwise how could the sea water be mixed with the wind." Third sister Sheila nodded her head.

"Don't think about it, it's all over. If you're really confused, you can ask Jenny. She might know about it after staying in Chang'an City for so long." The eldest sister Mengsi interrupted their speculation.

The fourth sister Polly fiddled with her hair and said with a smile, "I haven't seen Jenny for a long time. I don't know if she's doing well."

"Silly girl, Chang'an City has the best food, clothing, housing and transportation, how could she have a bad life?" Rose teased.

The fourth sister Polly blinked her big watery eyes and said, "Sister, shall we go to Jenny first?"

Rose thought for a while, and said, "Okay, anyway, we don't rush to go back this time, and we need to rent a house in Chang'an City. It's not worthwhile to live in a restaurant."

"Okay, rent a house!" The fourth sister, Polly, had a smile on her face.

"But where are we going to find Jenny? She is probably in the castle of the king of the Han Dynasty?" the third sister Sheila asked suspiciously.

The fourth sister, Polly, rolled her eyes and guessed, "Jenny needs to go to work. She should be in that sketch training class, as she said before."

"Okay, let's go find her there." Rose nodded slightly.

The four elf sisters originally wanted to go to the dance training class in a carriage, (aiec) but seeing a platform not far from the entrance of the airship field, curiosity drove them to go there.

The second sister, Lan Ni, tilted her head, looked at the writing on the platform curiously, and asked in confusion, "What is this?"

"The bus station? *Third sister Xila read one word after another.

car?It should be the same as a horse-drawn carriage, it can go anywhere in Chang'an City-