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Chapter 130 Writer's Disease

Chapter 130 Subtitle The Mother Is So Cool I Forgot To Collect The Money

"It's work."

Timuko greeted and walked in.

It's not very polite to say that, but it's really hard work...

She nudged Yuigahama who was sleeping next to her with her elbow, and she woke up with a groan.

If Zaimoza saw this Baka fell asleep after reading his novel for a while, he would probably be shocked to the point of tears.

"So, let me hear your thoughts?"

Zai Muzao sat down on the chair, embraced his arms in an arrogant posture, his face was filled with a sense of superiority from nowhere, showing a confident and extraordinary expression.

On the contrary, Yukinoshita Yukino, who was sitting directly opposite him, showed a somewhat apologetic expression rarely.

"Sorry, I don't know much about this..."

"No problem! I also want to refer to the opinions of mortals... just say it!" Master Zaimuza responded, with a strong look that you can criticize me no matter how you want to be hurt.

Zaimuza...isn't it good to be alive?

[It seems that you still don't understand the value of life. 】

"Is that so?"

Yukinoshita sighed softly and made up his mind: "It's boring, boring beyond imagination. It's so boring that it even makes people feel painful to read."

"puff……"

Hit the vital point, a knife fatal.

The fallen Zai Muzuo shook the chair, struggled to get up, and finally returned to the previous posture after a long time.

Ye An sighed, and a leisurely voice came slowly: "Indeed, even if the writing style is almost acceptable, there are comics like "Psionic 100%" that the artists can't look at but are very interesting. But, this The story is also somewhat..."

Timber seat falls down × 2

double kill

Zaimokiza used "Repositioning Stance"

"Uh, uh... for reference, please tell me which parts are boring..."

Yukinoshita Yukino's eyes narrowed, and after putting her right leg on her left leg, she showed an unfriendly look: "Then I'll just say it straight, the grammar is messed up. Why do you always use inverted sentences? You can use "てにをは" preposition? Didn't you teach it in elementary school?"

"Ahem... Well, it's because the simpler questions make readers feel friendly..."

"Then at least you have to write it in normal Japanese first, right? There are also many misuses of those pseudonyms. The chikara marked on the ability doesn't have such a way of thinking at all, right? Why did the flash label change to Bloody Nightmare? Where did the nightmare come from?"

"Pfft!...Uh, no. The recent superpower combat works are all marked in this way, and this has become a feature."

Ye An tilted his head, thought about it carefully, and began to retort: ​​"Not really, even JOJO's TV just called the avatar's name in English, such as [World] called [The world]. Besides, even if there is, it won't be so outrageous..."

"This kind of behavior is called self-satisfaction. Is it intended for people to read something that no one can understand except you?" Minister Yukinoshita frowned.

"Writing is easy to talk about, and this aspect can be practiced..." Ye An held his forehead and felt like he was having a headache: "It's mainly about the plot...For example, here, why did the heroine suddenly take off her clothes? It's so strange Bar?"

"Huh? But, but without this kind of plot, it's not easy to sell... This kind of plot is, so what..." Cai Muzuo hurriedly tried to explain.

Ye An stared at dead fish eyes: "The sale of meat is also graded. When others want to sell meat, they will pave the way or give some reasonable explanations. Zai Muzao, you are really weird here."

Selling meat for the sake of selling meat, there is really no second thought other than making people feel disgusting.

"But...but..."

Ye An sighed and started the final pursuit.

"Actually, what I want to complain about the most is this... Why can the flame vibrate at a supersonic speed in the air and still not go out? What is the reason why it can stop in time? Also, don't add the "mysterious voice" in the novel Stuff, super annoying."

"Wow!"

Zai Muzuo let out a wail on all fours, his shoulders still spasming.looks horrible...

Hikigu Hachiman couldn't stand it any longer, raised his hand and said to stop: "Isn't it almost the same, it's not good to continue to criticize like this."

"Ah... It's really exaggerated. After all, there are still too many flaws, I can't help it, I'm sorry, I'm sorry." Ye An apologized with some embarrassment.

"There's still a lot I haven't said...well, let's do it this way, then it's Yuigahama's turn."

Yukinoshita hesitated for a moment, said so and let it go, and threw the ball to Yuigahama.

"Huh? Me...me?"

So, Zaimoza immediately looked at Yuigahama who was questioning with eyes full of tears, probably Yuigahama also felt that he was a bit pitiful, so he looked into the air and began desperately searching for words of praise.

After a while, she suddenly showed a flash of inspiration, and smiled "praise" to Zaimuzao.

"Well, you know a lot of uncommon words."