A Salted Fish in the Second Dimension

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"Ren also."

"Huh? What's wrong. Are you Hanyu coming to help me make games?" Seeing that Hanyu suddenly came looking for him, An Yilun immediately remembered the game and became a little excited.

"No, no." Hanyu hurriedly poured cold water on An Yilun to calm down. "Something else."

"Huh? Does Hanyu-kun need my help with anything?"

"That..." After Hanyu looked around, he whispered to An Yilun about the novel he wrote.

"Eh! Novels!" An Yilun also exclaimed when he heard Hanyu's words.

"Shh!" Hanyu hurriedly motioned to An Yilun to also keep a low voice, while observing whether anyone in the next class paid attention, Hanyu didn't really want to let others know about his own writing.After all, Hanyu felt a little embarrassed until the novel had achieved certain achievements.

"Hey, Hanyu-kun. What kind of novel did you write?" An Yilun was also a little curious about the novel written by his good friend.

"Just an ordinary short love story." Hanyu said after thinking about it.

"Oh, then how much have you written, can you show me?"

"Wait a minute, I'll send it to your phone." Hanyu thought about it, and decided to let An Yilun also want to see some of the content that he has already made, and also to listen to the opinions of professionals.

"I got it, and I'll find you when I'm done reading it."

Because the class was about to begin, Hanyu could only honestly know his seat, and waited anxiously.

After all, Hanyu didn't know what the system gave him, and he didn't know if it would suit the tastes of people in this world.So want to listen to the opinion of the authoritative person before writing it.

Chapter 120 Three, An Yilun's Opinion

"Hanyu-kun, I have already finished reading the part of the novel you sent me." An Yilun, who had finished reading part of the novel, also came to Hanyu's seat and said to Hanyu.

"How is it?" Hanyu asked expectantly.

"It feels... a little ordinary." An Yilun also said to Hanyu after pondering the words.

"Ah, is that so?" Hearing Yi Lun's answer, Hanyu became a little disappointed.At the same time, I was thinking that the original system is not omnipotent.

An Yilun also saw Hanyu's loss, and after thinking about it, he decided to tell Hanyu his detailed feelings about reading the novel.

"What should I say about the novel that Hanyu-kun showed me... The writing still looks very good. And the dialogue where the cherry blossoms are falling at a speed of five centimeters per second is also very interesting." said the advantages.

"What else?" Hanyu heard some hope in his heart.

"However, beyond that five centimeters per second, the novel doesn't feel very amazing, it gives me a rather ordinary feeling. Maybe it's because you gave me too few parts, Hanyu-kun, and the story didn't unfold. So I don't know what happened next. I found it hard to make too many comments."

After listening to An Yi Lun's evaluation, Hanyu felt that what he said was quite pertinent. Indeed, he didn't write too much content yesterday because he was lazy. With just one or two subsections of the story, he wanted to learn from An Yi Lun's mouth. Get high reviews and write whimsical.

"So, Wang Jun, what kind of story is this novel?" Suddenly a girl's voice interrupted the conversation between Hanyu and An Yilunya.

"Ah! It's Kato. Novels or something, I just write and play." Hanyu saw Kato Megumi remembering, and the other party was sitting at the table in front of him.As a result, he recently ignored her again, and now that she knew about his novel writing, Hanyu became a little worried.

Now that the speed of five centimeters per second seems to be a little bad, then I can only offer the catalog of forbidden magical books, but Kato Megumi knew that she was writing a novel, and if she went to tell Misaka Mikoto and the others.Then, getting Misaka Mikoto and the Magical Forbidden Books together, Hanyu was a little worried about what would happen.

So Hanyu looked at Megumi Kato with a serious face and said to her.

"That Kato, don't tell others that I write novels, I'm a little embarrassed."

"Well, I won't tell others. But I'm quite curious about the story Wang Jun wrote." Kato Megumi felt that Hanyu should be really embarrassed to let others know, so he agreed very understandingly.

"Hanyu-kun, so why don't you tell me roughly how you plan to write the story, maybe I can give you some advice." An Yilun also suggested at the right time.

Hanyu thought for a while, and felt that An Yilun had also been in contact with him for such a long time, and Hanyu still trusted his character.So Hanyu felt that even if he told him, he should not come to plagiarize his own ideas.As for Megumi Kato, Hanyu subconsciously ignored her.

So he also introduced the story of five centimeters per second to An Yilun.

"I plan to start 3 short stories in a row with a boy as the story axis. The first episode "Sakura Copy" describes the feelings of Takaki and Akari when they were young, and the day they reunited. The second episode "Astronaut" ", which describes the life of Takaki and Akari after the separation from the perspective of Chengtian Huamiao, who has a good impression of Takaki who entered high school. The third episode "5 cm per second" depicts Takaki and Akari's hearts when they grow up All kinds of hesitations." Having said this, Hanyu paused for a while and took a sip of water.

"Well, um. Continue." An Yilun listened carefully to Hanyu's description and motioned him to continue.

"First of all, you have seen part of the first chapter. According to my plan, I am going to..."

Hanyu eloquently introduced the general content of his story and his writing ideas, while Yilun An and Megumi Kato listened to Hanyu's explanation earnestly, nodded, and expressed their admiration for some of Hanyu's ingenious arrangements.

"At the end of the story, I plan to let Guishu go back to the place where Akari asked him the question of five centimeters per second. There is a tall cherry tree next to the railway, and the petals are slowly flying down. Let him recall that question. When Guishu was passing the railroad tracks, he passed a woman, and suddenly he realized that the woman might be sensible. So, when he completely walked over the railroad tracks, he slowly turned to look at the woman. She also turned slowly. Come over, the eyes of the two of them crossed each other. At the moment when their hearts and memories were about to boil, the passing train blocked their vision. I plan to end the story here."

"Ah, is that the end? I want to continue listening." Kato Megumi felt a little regretful when the story came to an abrupt end.

"Hanyu-kun, write it down!" An Yilun also said to Hanyu solemnly after listening to Hanyu's description, placing his hands on Hanyu's shoulders.

"Eh? Didn't you say that this story was ordinary before? Did it become unusual after I told the outline of the story?" Hanyu said to An Yilun in surprise.

"No, this story is still very ordinary. But after listening to your description, I have to be ordinary but refreshing, ordinary but unforgettable." An Yilun also paused after speaking, as if to think about what vocabulary to use to express their feelings.

"The story I'm talking about isn't as attractive as the stories I've seen, there are no exaggerated settings, no extraordinarily tortuous development, and no bloody plot. It's just like our ordinary people's. Life is the same."

Saying that, An Yilun also clenched his fists.

"But, that's why. It's completely different from those coquettish bitches out there! Hanyu-kun!" An Yilun also said this in the form of shouting.

Suddenly, everyone in the class was attracted by Hanyu's side, especially the girls, who were looking at An Yilun with contempt.

"Shh! Be quiet! Be quiet!" Hanyu quickly tugged on Yilunya An's clothes, telling him not to be so loud.

"Ah, sorry. I can't help it, I can't help it." An Yilun also touched his head in embarrassment, then lowered his voice and continued.

"Wang Jun's story does not want other romance novels to make people feel a sense of distance. Although I am not old and have never experienced such a thing, I always feel that Wang Jun's story happened to me, or it happened to me. On someone I know. I feel very close to me." Kato Megumi took the opportunity to freak out about her feelings.