I'm Renting out in Dongying

"I have to say, both of them are very young, especially Ms. Kashiwazaki, she looks like Rita, she is still a high school student, it is not easy to take care of Mashiro."

"Yes, I'm still a high school student, but you don't have to worry about taking care of this guy at all."

Senna replied.

"Let's not talk about our affairs, let's start with her comics."

"Ok."

Iida Ayano nodded, and picked up the stack of manuscripts again.

"Well, the first chapter is not bad, it is a relatively good love story, you must know that in the current story, there are very few boys who take the initiative to act for love, in order to draw new plots as much as possible, usually the kind Boys are slow, and at least two girls have a crush on him, but they don't say it out, they just do something to show it, and there are even several, through constant rounds between girls, the same performance, To create an emotional story with the hero.”

"So from the first chapter, if there are no new female characters appearing later, it must be a very novel story, it can be regarded as a pure love story."

"Don't worry, it's impossible for other female characters to appear, don't even think about it!"

Hoshina directly answered Iida Ayano's question instead of Mashiro, which surprised her very much.

"You seem to be very clear about what Zhenbai wants to draw, and you actually answered it for her directly."

"Because there is also my contribution in it!"

Senna didn't hesitate to let herself take the credit.

"However, in this way, the requirements of this story are high. You know, if it is just a love story of a couple, then there must be enough stories. Otherwise, it will be boring after a long time. The story should be about the process of getting along between the hero and the heroine, have you considered that the same routine day after day can retain readers?"

This question made Mashiro and Senna puzzled at the same time.

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7. Do things differently than usual

"In short, the first part of this sketch is okay, but it needs a follow-up. If there is no good follow-up, then it still won't work."

As an editor, Iida Ayano will not choose to relax the selection conditions just because she knows Mashiro, or is even asked to take care of her by Rita.

As for the manga brought by Zhenbai, her evaluation is that the front is fine, but the latter will depend on the situation.

After all, if a manga wants to be serialized, what it needs is permanence, unless you come up with short manga, that's fine, but Mashiro definitely doesn't want to draw any short manga.

So such a short-term is naturally not acceptable.

"Well, let's do it this time."

After tidying up the drawings and putting them back in the file bag, Ayano Iida handed them back to Mashiro.

"Can't you?"

Mashiro took the file bag and looked at Ayano Iida in a daze.

"Well, no, there is no follow-up work, it can't be done."

"Of course, if you can tell me what is the story behind your sketch, the general outline, I can modify the decision based on your follow-up, so is there a follow-up?"

When Iida Ayano spoke, she didn't look at Mashiro, but at Senna instead.

Because of what I said before, Iida Ayano now regards Xingna as a helper in Mashiro's manga, or in other words, the person who gives the idea.

Then the person who came up with the idea naturally needs some advice, after all, Zhenbai listens to her.

Moreover, Xingna, unexpectedly pays attention to Mashiro's manga. After all, this is the story of her and Takumi. She is looking forward to it even more, she is very happy to tell others the love story between herself and Takumi, especially the feeling of envy after hearing it, Senna also wants to see it.

It's a pity I haven't heard it until now

"This... of course!"

Senna answered directly.

"Oh? Then tell me?"

Iida Ayano looked at Hoshina with interest, waiting for Hoshina to say something.

"Now it's just acquaintance, the male protagonist in the middle will pursue the female protagonist."

"I know this, and Zhenbai has already drawn it, but the process of pursuing it is a bit long. It has been pursuing for a year, and it has always been the same daily routine. This is not acceptable."

"Then let the courtship be shorter, and let the male lead confess to the female lead."

"Confession is indeed a good event, that is, it is confirmed that there is no second female lead. If the time is shortened in the middle, don't you think it is a bit abrupt?"

"That...."

"Of course, if you modify it, you can just bring up the daily life of the middle year, and you can start directly from the confession. Then the plot after the confession becomes a lover is the daily life?"

"That's right, isn't the love between lovers not enough in daily life?"

"Yes, yes, but..."

Iida Ayano ordered the table.

"That doesn't have much attraction. Although that kind of daily life is very warm and looks very comfortable, but there must be some episodes or stories in the daily life of love. For example, today's love is different from yesterday. , Tomorrow's love is different from today's, so it can be interesting, isn't it, is this your arrangement for Zhenbai?"

"A daily life of love that is different every day..."

Said by Ayano Iida, Senna frowned and looked at Takumi next to her.