How to Develop a Sick Brother Control

"Okay, thank you anyway, I'll take your opinion into consideration."

"Maybe, when your relationship returns to normal, you will have the same thoughts as me!

Sawamura · English pear. "

Of course, Shi Yu didn't say this to Ying Lili, she just thought silently in her heart.

"Alright alright, if you came to me just to talk about this, isn't that almost there?

Don't be late for your tram! "

"Well, that's about it. Thank you very much for listening. You can tell me when you want to give up, and I'll handle it patiently."

"Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, so I still can't like you, when will your long-winded personality change!"

"Well!"

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"As a result, in the end, no one gave up!"

Shi Yu raised her head to look at Kazuya who was in a busy state, and sighed.

At that time, He Ye went to Hehe City in a somewhat unreasonable way to find himself, and then the psychological barrier that he reluctantly established by leaving was immediately shattered, and then he returned to his previous expectations for him. , I hope he can be closer to himself and more in line with his expectations.

On the side of Ying Lili, although he claimed that he would never forgive Kazuya on the day the comi ended, he was also solved more problems by Kazuya's confusion after the kidnapping case.

"So, this guy, in a sense, is really lucky. He can always tighten the ropes in various ways when they are about to loosen. It's really annoying!"

"Sister Shiyu!

I've been working for half an hour, what are you doing there?

It's not necessary to work so hard just to prove that you are faster than me! "

Kazuya's dissatisfied voice reached Shi Yu's ears.

"Ala, ala, you have seen through my purpose!"

With the same teasing tone as always, Shi Yu jumped out of bed: Well, since there is nothing I can do, I can't help it. The point is, I haven't lost yet. Whether it's Eiri or Ayase, I'm not far behind now. What about you!

"Why did you suddenly become so motivated?"

Seeing Shi Yu jumping up suddenly, Kazuya was taken aback.

"It's just that I suddenly have the urge to write, Kazuya-kun, stay here tonight, let's--"

"No, I don't want my family to worry about me anymore."

"Hey, it's not enough to just write the script together, but I know that you also stayed at the Ethics-kun for this game plan!"

"That's different!"

"What's the difference?

Could it be that Kazuya-kun would rather like an otaku who is younger than himself like Ethics-kun rather than look at a woman like me, I'm really sad! "

"Okay, I promise you to stay, okay?"

"Hey, it's actually not necessary, after all, I'm the type that Kazuya-kun doesn't like!"

"OK, that's it, I've called home!"

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"Senpai is really amazing!

This kind of creative speed is just like opening and hanging. With this ability, I feel like I go to the next mainland website to open a hole, serialize tens of thousands of words every day, and then become an ace writer. In the end, the novel is adapted into a TV series or something. problem. "

Looking at Shi Yu's amazing hand speed after entering the state, Kazuya suddenly felt that he was still weak. During the specific script assignment process, the two were responsible for the writing of the two heroines' plots, and Shi Yu was in charge of patrolling. Li and Kazuya were in charge of Weiyang, and because of the previous preparations and Shiyu of Kasumigaoka who started work an hour behind Kazuya, in just two hours, the amount of text has surpassed Kazuya.

"Hey, it's not that you can't consider making extra money or something, but I don't know how the country on the other side operates like this,"

Shi Yu raised his head, looked at Kazuya who was looking at him in surprise, and said solemnly.

"Yes, yes, I'm telling you, senior, although it's not that the online novels on the other side don't pay attention to quality, but compared with the number of code words you have, everything is scum!

At the current creative speed of my sister, I write tens of thousands of words every day, and then I translate it and send it to the opposite side. It can definitely be a big hit! "

Looking at Shi Yu, who seemed to be interested, Kazuya couldn't help but become interested in this idea that he accidentally proposed,

"Yeah, senpai, don't you often complain that the tax office of Neon robbed you of a large amount of royalties?

You don't have to worry about this on the other side, and you must know that there are a lot of local tyrants on the opposite side. If it suits their taste, it will not just earn that little royalties. "

However, Kazuya's excitement was immediately poured out by Shi Yu:

"what the hell?

I thought it was the same as writing novels here. It’s enough to write a volume every once in a while, and I have to write it every day. It’s too difficult. "

"I think you can try to write a complete content first, and I can translate a little bit every day. If we receive money, we will divide it into [-] percent, no, how about [-] percent?"

Kazuya still hasn't given up on this seemingly grand idea. After all, he has heard many people's comparisons between online novels and light novels in the past, although the general conclusion is that the overall quality of light novels has been reviewed by editors. It will be better than online novels, but some people insist that the masterpieces in online novels are stronger than light novels. Therefore, if the works created by Shiyu of Kasumigaoka are really put on the Internet and serialized to make a comparison, think about the possibility He was very excited about the bloodshed.

However, Shi Yu seems to have no intention of continuing to echo his thoughts at all:

"Okay, okay, I don't want to go to the opposite side, you are a Chinese culture lover, don't catch up with me, keep working!"

"But senior, Duan's management of paper publications is very strict, your novels are basically difficult to be imported by Duo's, and even if they are imported, they may have to undergo certain revisions, and you hope to have more readers!

I think it's a good way to go straight into their interior! "

"Okay, Kazuya-kun, I don't think it's useful to take the so-called overseas market test now. You have time to help me think about this unreliable way to increase popularity. Why don't you help me finish the script? , so that I can quickly devote myself to the creation of new novels, which is more useful than anything else."

Shi Yu grabbed a pillow beside him and threw it towards He Ya.

"Senior sister, girls' pillows can't be thrown at boys, right?"

Kazuya dodged Shi Yu's attack casually and complained.

"In order to satisfy your bad idea of ​​hentai secretly smelling my pillow at night, I have tried my best, why, do you still want to smell my quilt directly?

In fact, it's not impossible, but it's summer anyway, and I change the quilt often, so the smell may not be so strong-"

"Sister, I was wrong, I work hard!"

----------------------------Dividing line-------------------- ------------ Kazuya is mainly responsible for the Xintian Weiyang line, one of the two heroines. From the setting of the game script, Kasumi Hill Shiyu inherited her double heroine as always. style, but it is conceivable that the setting of this dual heroine plus four personalities is indeed a bit complicated.

First of all, there will be great challenges in the common line, because the double heroine means that it is necessary to balance the plots of the two heroines from the perspective of the two heroines, and the two personalities of each heroine also need to be emphasized In the description, the character of the past life cannot be completely overwhelmed by the present life, and of course, the character of the present life cannot be completely suppressed from the past life. In fact, such a content appeared in the Liuli plot that Shi Yu could perform before. Where there is doubt about the script itself from the very beginning.

Of course, after the current revision, this situation has been significantly improved, each heroine's role has been emphasized in her own line, and the outline of the basic plot has been completed by Shi Yu, and also As long as the environment and psychological description are added, the completion of the current game script is actually not too difficult.

Therefore, although the progress is behind Shiyu, Kazuya is also interested in slowly re-reading the game script created by Shiyu of Kasumigaoka.

At any time, Kazuya always feels that the character of Weiyang has a clear shadow of Ayase, whether it is the image of Yamato Nadeko, who is usually graceful and graceful, or the hysterical character when encountering extreme things, everyone can see it. The younger sister who is very concerned about herself, of course Ayase's character is not as extreme as the Weiyang portrayed by Shi Yu.

Especially when Ying Lili basically completed Weiyang's vertical painting to him and Lunya for review, Kazuya found that Weiyang's vertical painting was also completed with reference to Ayase's appearance, which made him have to smile again and again.

The main content of Xintian Weiyang's plot is: Common Route: After Seiji and Xunli interacted, Weiyang fell into a relatively crazy state.

She tried every means to organize the communication between Seiji and Xun Li, including a series of excessive acts such as kidnapping and stalking. Xun Li, who was a little confused about this situation, tried to communicate with Wei Yang to find a specific solution. But after the communication, a mutation arose.

Weiyang Line, slowly recalling that Weiyang was a sister-in-law, but Seiji, who was actually his lover in his previous life, slowly began to have a strange feeling for Weiyang, who was burdened with the fate of the family. This feeling contains a kind of love. The remorse of a lover in a past life, and the care of his long-term sister.

Weiyang, on the other hand, kept wandering between the two identities, not knowing whether it was more important for him to bear the fate of his family, or for the aspect of sacrificing his life for love.

In the process of this intertwining, Weiyang chose to self-destruct painfully, but was stopped by Seiji at a critical moment. With the joint efforts of Seiji and Weiyang, and the help of Xunli, the conspiracy of the family to let Seiji exterminate the clan finally ended. Bankruptcy, and Seiji and Weiyang happily got rid of the shackles and lived together.

From the perspective of the plot, the plot of the Weiyang line is actually not that novel, but Shi Yu's unique writing and dialogue description made Weiyang and Seiji's hesitation come to the fore, so even Kazuo wanted to give the plot from an objective point of view. To make an evaluation, he often substitutes himself into Seiji, and then returns to the complicated plot of grievances and grievances in the game.

And at this moment, Kazuya suddenly felt something was wrong:

"After entering the Weiyang Line, what happened to Xunli?"

It can be said to be the convention of galgame. After entering a heroine, although other heroines will still appear and interact with each other, they basically no longer have an emotional connection with the hero. Under normal circumstances, is it not? There will be emotions that transcend the normal friendship between men and women for the male protagonist, and even that kind of love triangle plot will eventually end with a female protagonist looking away and giving up, so it is chosen for the male protagonist and the player. That finale between the heroines gives plenty of space.

Therefore, in the Weiyang line, as the relationship between the male protagonist and Weiyang continues to deepen, the bond between him and his original girlfriend, Xunli, gradually weakens, although Xunli's dual personality is more than once. Played a key role at a critical moment, but in the end, these things became the catalyst for the relationship between Seiji and Weiyang. In the end, Xunli's performance also seemed very indifferent. She blessed Seiji and Weiyang and chose to quit. .

However, is Xunri really willing to quit just like that?

He also suddenly remembered such a question. This is a very simple question. It seems that all the heroines who did not choose themselves seem so satisfied when they quit, but if they put themselves into their true feelings, they may be able to accept it. Tears farewell, but certainly not happy!

They must also want to be with the person they like, right?

In many games, Kazuo also likes to find the so-called hidden and revealed

"The Harem"

The ending, although this ending is often only to satisfy the so-called desire to conquer the player, but for Kazuya, although this ending is a bit cliché, it can bring everyone a satisfactory result. This made him feel very satisfied.

Of course, someone will definitely point out that the person you like cannot be shared. Such an ending is actually unfair to all heroines, but in Kazuya’s view, he would rather believe that this is a way for everyone to share their love. The dreamlike situation with a smiling face, although this kind of dream cannot exist, he still wants to find a little comfort for the two-dimensional girl in the virtual world in this game, or he thinks he is self-righteous.

"Senpai, I have a question!"

After hesitating for a long time, Kazuya still walked to Shi Yu's side. He knew that if he asked this question, it would actually be a subversion of Shi Yu's script creation, but he still felt that he wanted to propose this idea.

"Um?

Kazuya-kun, are you finished?

It's not that I don't trust you, but you still show me your text. Your speed is a little too fast? "

Shi Yu raised her head and said in a daze, apparently being interrupted in her creative state, it was difficult for her to immediately return to the real world.

"Uh, I haven't finished it yet. After all, I said it before, I'm not that good at things like psychological description and environmental description, so the progress is relatively slow-"

Kazuya slowly talked to Shi Yu, thinking about letting the other party be numb before putting forward his own ideas.

"Then write it well. You can actually use texts like mine for reference first. By the way, I can also take a break."

Shi Yu stretched and yawned, squinting her eyes and said to Heya,

"By the way, Kazuya-kun, can you help me make a cup of coffee?

After all, I haven't had this kind of high-intensity continuous work for a long time, and I suddenly feel uncomfortable. The coffee beans are in the drawer next to the computer desk. "

"All right,"

After thinking about it again and again, Kazuya decided to get straight to the point and say what he thought,

"Sister, I have some questions about the specific plot settings. Can I ask you a few questions?"

"Ah, tell me!"