How to Develop a Sick Brother Control

Kazuya stared at Kato aggressively for a while, but shook his head helplessly under the other's calm eyes.

"However, why is the information about Eri's delayed flight being notified to you, not me?"

"Maybe it's more convenient to contact me?

After all, my phone is on standby 24 hours a day, so you don't necessarily pay attention to incoming calls or emails. "

"Okay, is there anything else?"

"There is one more thing that has nothing to do with work."

"Something unrelated to work?"

"In two hours, Ayase is about to arrive in Zurich, um, from London."

"Wait a moment,"

And also widened his eyes,

"She told me in the morning that she had a photo shoot, so she might not be able to make it, right?"

"It seemed that the job was cancelled, so I hurriedly bought a plane ticket and came here."

Kato couldn't help covering his head. Kato, who was by his side now, Shiyu who had arrived in Zurich, Ayase who was about to arrive soon, and Eiri who arrived tomorrow, suddenly remembered that six years ago, he was taken by himself. The fear dominated by the Shura site.

"So, everyone is going to watch the awards ceremony live, right?

There aren't that many locations, are there? "

He gritted his teeth and asked.

"I managed to find a position for everyone. As Kazuya's agent, you still need this ability, don't you?"

"Kato, is this what you planned?

When you were my agent half a year ago, you started planning all this, right? "

"By the way, Eri-ri means she won't get mad, but, on the other hand, if you're number one, you need to kiss her in front of the TV cameras.

Shouldn't this be difficult?

For you who repeatedly gestured to your girlfriend while scoring a goal during the game. "

Kazuya looked at Kato with a confused expression.

He could even imagine Ying Lili's somewhat angry but somewhat arrogant face, and he could also imagine Shi Yu's rather playful expression when he saw him tomorrow.

Of course, there's also Ayase's embarrassed but stubborn look when she sees him.

Of course, there is Kato's light-hearted look.

"Can you explain to the organizing committee, can I not attend the awards ceremony?"

He said sadly. (End of the book)

Finish this testimonial

去年2月5号，我在点娘上上传了病娇的Chapter 1，我还记得我当时为了新增的3个收藏和3个推荐而欣喜若狂的样子。

Then, on August 8th of this year, I wrote the last chapter of Sick Jiao, well, it took me exactly one and a half years to write.

About three months ago, when I was thinking about the ending of this book, I said that I was going to write a very long testimonial for the end of the book, and then I was writing the last few chapters of Sick Jiao for the past two days. At that time, I also kept thinking about how I should write this testimonial, and now when I'm about to write it, I feel like I should just write it casually.

I am a very idealistic person. As reflected in the books I write, I don’t like to cater to the mainstream. I can only write, and I can only write what I want to write. Of course, if what I write is just right The mainstream appetite is a coincidence.

However, after being idealistic, I still pay attention to reality, so when my grades are not good, I often send some self-complaints and self-complaints.

I have always felt that if an author likes to make such petty complaints to show how different he is, he must be a very narcissistic author. He may not necessarily write well, but he must have a high self-esteem.

Well, I think I should be the kind of person who can't write well and has a high self-esteem.

Well, let's talk about the book Sick Jiao.

Many people should know that the book Bing Jiao didn't have an outline when it opened. This is my first book, and it's probably the worst one I've written. Ironically, this should also be my grade. The best book (probably because of the title, it attracted a lot of sick and girl-controllers, and then I digress with honor, of course, my sister and passers-by are also relatively popular, and this book should be relatively One of the reasons for the fire).

The outline of Bing Jiao at the beginning was a timetable, my sister's time line, and the time line of passers-by. I combined the two. As for how to write the plot, to be honest, my thinking at the time was very simple. The new protagonist replaces the original protagonist to complete the original protagonist's flag.

In fact, it doesn't matter. I think most of the small white texts are written in this way at the starting point. At that time, I didn't have any pursuit, and I was going to write according to this line of thinking.

By the way, the ending I expected at the time was a happy ending with a pure harem ending.

You can observe this maddening transformation of me from a HE Party member to a writer of literary youth in the past year and a half.

The goal of Kai Sing Jiao's book is for Ayase. I still remember this point. At that time, I should have read Kaka Miao's "Mourning Girl", and then I thought that there were so many of my sister's colleagues, why they all wrote black cats As for the protagonist, whether it is bearable or unbearable, and then there is this work with Ayase as the leading role - well, that's what I thought at first.

As for the content of the heroine of the passerby, it was purely because I particularly liked the novel passerby at the time. When the first season of the passerby first came out last February, I didn't expect it to be as popular as it is now.

Of course, I think it is precisely because of the addition of the content of passers-by that my book has shifted from the joyous yearning at the beginning to the stomach medicine in the later period.

It's very simple, because Lun in the passerby has also set up the flags on other heroines early. As the plot progresses, you can replace Lun Ye's role, but you have to replace the flag set up by Lun Ye. , you have to use the black history to unplug his previous flag. As for the black history, you have to explain that he is different from this He Lun, why the guy who is not a slow dead house doesn't respond to the favor of the other heroines, While pondering this question, slowly, the style of the book became weird.

The second node that makes this book sour is probably in the kidnapping incident after the summer comi, after solving the problem of Ayase, before that, all the plots of my book were plagiarized from the original, after that, I I started to have my own ideas. I don't want to copy books anymore. What's the point of writing fanboys and copying the original work, just to make a joke?

So, I started my own journey to the death of the original creation. Everyone has seen the content after that. There are places where it overlaps with the original, but except for the background settings, everything is different - but it is precisely because of the writing. My own things, I will further develop in the direction of stomach medicine.

Of course, it is precisely because I want to write these things that the problem of my lack of an outline is further exposed.

If the book continues to plagiarize the original, it doesn't matter if there is no outline, because the outline of the original plot is your outline, but if this book is to be written as your own novel, then no outline is a flaw.

I think a lot of people who have been chasing after the sick from the early days, when they saw the plot of falling off the cliff, would think that the ending of the sage had been predetermined, and they had done everything that was supposed to be done. And then on the date, I directly chose Inri Pear.

This runaway plot is a typical pot where I didn't have an outline and was emotional for a while.

When I was writing about Falling from a Cliff, I gave Kazuya the girlfriend Xiaohui in the mid-term, but before I wrote the date, the characters I brought into the novel were too emotional, and I felt that Ying Lili was too pitiful, so I had a big otaku. victory.

At that time, my thinking was very simple. The big victory in the middle of the house pear, ushered in a peak, and then you can abuse, you can break up, it is not difficult to write any ending - but in fact it is not like this, in the house pear When we win in the mid-term, the otaku line of the ending is already doomed.

The post two days ago said it very well. If I, as a snow vegetable party, betrayed him at that time, I would become the Dongma TE in WA2, and it is absolutely impossible for me to write this kind of thing. In the end, if the last part of Kazuya and Ayase's kiss is excluded, the second half of the book has a more obvious Yukina TE-style twist to Otaku.

Then I want to talk about Ayase, Ayase was supposed to be the first heroine of this book, but she didn't play much in the plot, and the ending could only be given to this kind of open-ended.

This is totally my problem.

At the beginning, when I copied the plot of the original work, because Ayase's role in my sister was not very strong, Ayase's presence was always very weak. Then, when Ayase's role in the timeline increased, I started to go with the original story.

In the original plot, I originally designed an extremely dark Ayase, and it is not an exaggeration to call it a big boss. Even all the emotional problems between Kazuya and Otaku, and the emotional collapse between Kazuya and everyone, were caused by Aya. It was planned by Sei - but this plot was rejected by me when I wrote about 270 chapters. Such Ayase is not a little angel, just a pure sick girl, and she is also a sinister sick girl who really likes Ayase. Man, Ayase shouldn't be written in this image.

So the last part of the content, Ayase never got black, and I was restrained when it was almost black.

However, the problem also arises. If Ayase is not the big boss, if you don’t plan all this, then all the preparations I have written to set up Ayase as the big boss will be meaningless, which also directly leads to my original plot. Ayase's content is equally weak. According to the book review, the sister's plot is optional.

In fact, it's not that my sister's plot is optional, but the sister's plot that I planned at the beginning, I didn't dare to take it back - if Ayase is really dark to that level, I wouldn't dare to read the book review section. If you are sprayed badly, then it is not Ayase.

Therefore, Ayase's plot was slowly too late to write in this kind of indecision of my own. At the last moment of this book, when I finally grasped the image of Ayase in my writing, this book also It's over.

Ayase should be the biggest victim of my random writing in this book. Ironically, she is my favorite character, and I honestly carry this pot.

If I were asked to write a sick girl again, I think I could write better. If I followed the Ayase line at the beginning, then I should write well about the interaction between Kazuya and Ayase, and not in the plot of passers-by. I spent too much energy on it. If I decided to go the house pear line from the beginning, then I should change the title, and then go to a good description of the so-called traveler who has conquered the girl, complained about herself, and got rid of it with the help of everyone. The story of this state.

Of course, when I realized this, there was no way for me to cut off the rewrite. In the end, it was such a twisted, off-topic, unsatisfactory, rhythm-less, front-to-back style. A very different kind of junk fiction.

Bing Jiao is indeed a rubbish novel. Although I feel that I have written very well in many details and many plot points, it is still a rubbish novel.

In the end, I just reluctantly gave this book, which was supposed to be doomed, to continue its life.

It's off topic, I'm sick, brother control, not to mention the ending, the content of the article does not reflect how Ayase is

"Sick Brother Control"

of.

Its pacing is terrible, and many of the plots before the mid-date are completely useless from the perspective of the main line, such as the dark history of the famous Kazuya women's clothing, different people have different opinions on it, but from my point of view The plot, that's a god-horse thing. In comparison, the plot after the mid-term date exploded, giving no room to breathe at all. This kind of loose-front and then-tight mode makes me feel sick to my eyes.

All kinds of holes dug before, all kinds of foreshadowings buried, there are main lines, there are branch lines, and they are not recovered in the end, the main story, one of the most important events in the story of my sister's original Ayase - the voyeurism incident , I started to bury it when Kanako appeared before the date, but in the end I found that there was no place to add it and cut it off. As for the branch line, do you still remember the editor Machida of Lily by the Daming Lake?

However, what I want to say is that Bing Jiao should be the most emotional book I have written.

To paraphrase what I've said before, there was a time when the book was writing me, not me.

I'm just writing this book according to the flow of emotions in the book. What I write is the most likely ending according to the characters' characters, but even I don't know what will happen to them next. I just feel their feelings, and then write them out, I can't grasp what they are going to do.

Of course some people will think this is a bit ridiculous, but it's the truth, I have completely smashed my feelings into the characters of this book, and I don't think I will write a novel that is more deeply emotional than this book.

Although writing novels can’t be emotional, I really feel sorry for every character in my writing who becomes helpless because of the progress of the plot. When I watch the emotional explosion of my characters, I will feel especially sad. , maybe even sadder than everyone reading this book, I even hate that I can't do anything to change their endings, which is called emotional investment.

I have no way to grasp the plot of Sick Jiao, so the plot of Sick Jiao collapsed into what it is now.

But I still managed to get over the sickness.

The ending I gave, different people should have different opinions. Some people will feel that it is unfair to continue to be vague, and it is not fair to Xiaohui, senior sister, and Ayase who have been working hard. Some people It may be thought that this may be a sign of the harem line in the future.

But I wrote this, in fact, just to give these characters in my own writing a happy ending that I think is possible and that everyone will be happy together.

I can't write a harem, but if I have to say it, in this ending, my attitude is the attitude of the harem.

Maybe, many years after the process of this ending, there will be a good solution to everyone's problems, and there will be a situation where everyone is not sad, will it?

I hope so.

Therefore, the ending is not the harem, the ending is the house pear line, but the development of the ending I hope is the ending of the harem.

I'm a little greedy, but I just can't stand the tangled emotions of this book.

Even with a forced harem, I'd like to be able to do that, and that's about it.

Of course, Bing Jiao is not completely finished. I have also said that in addition to the orthodox ending, Bing Jiao will have a special episode. About everyone, each person's own ending of the if line of the episode, I will make up for this in the future. It's finished, but it will definitely not be updated like it is now. When I have time, I will adjust my mood, and I will finish it slowly.

Finally, I am very grateful to everyone who read this book, whether it is from Dianniang to Shuike, or to find this book in Shuke, although the results have plummeted since this book was moved to Shuke, but every time I When bookers see everyone's complaints, I always feel that real

"Someone is supporting me"

This should be the reason why I was able to insist on finishing this book!

If possible, I also hope that everyone will support my other two works, both at the starting point, "My Youth Love Story does not need a white album", "Senior Hosaka is a good person", especially the latter book, as Lengfan fan, now the 5w word collection has not reached 300, I can't bear to look directly, I feel on the verge of ending at any time.

Chapter 1: If you believe in fate

Before reading the extras, please read the works related

"About the explanation of the other episodes", it is convenient to understand the settings of the episodes.

In the extra part of the Ayase line, the changes in the world line are in the second and eighth chapter of the main text, "Barrier", which means that the plot is the same before chapter [-], and then there are changes.

-------------------------------The following text ----------------- -------------Whenever in the shopping mall where people come and go, Ayase will feel as if she is in the center of the world.