Are You Born Again?

Part [-]: Komachi is still thinking~

Hikigaya Komachi poured a cup of barley tea, and the room was getting cooler with the air conditioner turned on. Hayato sat on the sofa and took a sip of iced barley tea.

"In fact, someone in our class proposed to participate in the summer comic exhibition. I don't know why everyone went together, and then the person who proposed to participate in the summer comic exhibition... I strongly recommend that I go to cosplay with Hikigu. Now I want to ask Is your brother there?"

Hayama Hayato said euphemistically, still smiling.

Komachi was also smiling, and after thinking about it, his eyes suddenly lit up.

"Okay, okay! I must let my brother go to that... manga exhibition? Well, I must let that autistic brother go!"

What a rare opportunity!Komachi thought.

At the same time, Hayama Hayato over there was also puzzled, this time it was very strange.

"Why did Yumiko also suggest Hikigaya to participate...? Kawasaki-san was not invited because she was going to the cram school, but the girls' group strongly urged Hikigaya to go. This is a big change...Especially Ebina classmate."

The more Hayama Hayato thought about it, the more confused he became. Is there something abnormal in this world?Or can people's attitude towards a person change so quickly?

Taking another sip of barley tea, Komachi was already a little confused.

"Well, you don't know where your brother is?" she asked.

"Yeah, we don't know...huh? You don't know either?" Two words came to Hayama Hayato's mind for the first time: Coincidentally~

Komachi was speechless, you don't know where your brother is?What's the use of you.

"Then where do we go to find Biqigu?"

Hayama Hayato was a little troubled, so he promised everyone in the class that he would call out Hikigu responsibly.

Ding dong.

At this time, the doorbell rang again, Komachi's eyes lit up, he was a guy who didn't know anything before, this time it must be his brother!

"Just wait a moment."

After saying this to Hayama Hayato, Komachi quickly ran to open the door, twisted the door handle and said, "Brother..."

——The person at the door is still not Hikigaya Hachiman.

"Hmph! My friend's sister, I come, I meet, I conquer! ~~~Rome~~~"

Komachi looked at the second-year-old who was fighting with his unicorn arm, and couldn't help but imitate the tone in the TV series and said, "Who is here?"

"It's me!"

Komachi knew that this person was called Saikiza Yoshiki, and he was a friend of his brother's since junior high school, and he also came to the house to play a few times, that is, during the summer vacation of junior high school.

"What Rome is not Rome, you can go."

While Komachi was talking, he looked at this person strangely with his eyes, really, why did my brother know such a strange guy...

"What, what..." Yoshiki Zaimuka raised his right hand: "My friend's sister, don't you know Rome?"

"what?"

What the hell is Rome...

It can be seen that Yoshiki Zaikiza seems to be in a bad mood now.

Ye Shan also came out, chuckled lightly: "Haha..."

Saikiza Yoshiki pointed at him and said, "Why are you laughing, you are also Rome!"

"What have you been talking about since the beginning? But since you're here, let's sit in the room first."

Komachi rubbed his forehead, it's too bad, he started to have a headache.

But at this time.

A taxi parked safely outside Biqigu's house.

The door opened and a foot stepped out.

Then, Hikigu Hachiman appeared from inside, stared at the door of the house, and was immediately taken aback.

"My friend, Hachiman, help me!"

Saikiza Yoshiki ran over, Hikigaya pushed him away and looked at the door of the house, what combination is this?

"Hayama Hayato is obviously not familiar with me at this time, Zaimoza...it's okay." He thought suspiciously.

A few minutes later, Hikigaya stepped into the house, Saikiza Yoshiki sat next to him, Komachi stood behind him, and Hayama Hayato sat opposite the sofa, looking at the three of them like a boss being beaten by a group of players.

"I went to Kadokawa Bunko to submit a manuscript half a month ago, but I was sent back again. Damn it, it seems that this time my talent is still not seen through by the world, ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!"

Saikiza Yoshiki laughed.

"Brother, what is this guy talking about?" Komachi asked.

Bi Qigu thought for a while: "I didn't pass the essay contest this time, so please comfort me...?"

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!" Saikiza Yoshiki roared loudly, pointing to the sky: "Solomon, I'm back again!"

"Brother, what is this guy talking about?"

"Don't be so shy."

"Oh."

Timber seat: ...

What the hell, have any of you played like this?Don't I even have the right to be shy?Don't poke me like that!

"I'll leave here in half an hour. If you have any questions, just ask."

Hikigu gave Zai Muzao a look. He came back to get professional books. The novel lacks some material, so he made a detour to go home. Why are so many people blocking me?

"There is no class in the school this afternoon, and I will start to enroll in school on my own tomorrow. I don't need tutoring, so it's like a holiday."

Ye Shan smiled wryly and explained casually.

Immediately, Zaikiza Yoshiki sighed, clutched his forehead and pursed his lips, as if there was something hard to say.

"Wum, I submitted my newly edited novel for submission, but this time I was very lucky. When it came to the review stage, I went to the Kadokawa Bunko, and then met a demon, and the demon killed me. !"

Bi Qigu was stunned, ordinary people usually don't understand Cai Muzuo's words, but he understands a little bit.

"What's the name of the person who reviewed your novel? Is it the one with long black hair and beautiful legs?" Hikigu asked.

"Those who know me...could it be you too!"

Oh, it’s really Xiazhiqiu Shiyu. The current library will let the author review the essays for the newcomer award. There are only more than 100 books that have passed the preliminary review, and ten more books will be picked up, and the author will be interviewed for an interview.If it was Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, ordinary people would really be unable to bear it...

"Brother, brother~"

Komachi patted Hikigaya on the shoulder and whispered in her ear.

"What are you talking about?"

"Oh, Komachi, this student Zaimozao, he has been sprayed out of his mind, so let me comfort him, and read his novel by the way."

Bi Qigu said lightly.At the same time, he directly took the manuscript in Zaikiza Yoshiki's hand, and looked at it casually.

I don’t know, I’m scared.

Sweeping away, there is a very conspicuous sentence in it——

—Oh, my old friend John, God, I'm going to kick your ass!

The next sentence is——with my Lord, the arrows of three thousand light oaks, I pray for the death of you, Amen!

Saikiza Yoshiki looked at Hikigaya eagerly, waiting for an answer.

"What the hell is this..." Bi Qigu seemed to have seen something strange, he knew each word individually, but couldn't understand it together... Absolutely!

Let's put it this way!In the profession of writer, because the object of work is words all day long, the ability to understand words is slightly stronger than that of ordinary people.

"Things that I can't even understand, show it to... students? Is this guy really going to write light novels..."

Oh, let’s not talk about the story here, how the writing is, how the characters are, how the plot is, how the paragraphs are, how the words are used, and how the sentences are made.

……can not understand.

Can't understand it at all.

Bi Qigu is embarrassed to say these words, if he doesn't know each other... Ask Bi Qigu to help read the novel, don't stuff a big red envelope, and then treat him to a better meal, he doesn't even bother to talk to the other party.

"Light novels are like a person telling a story to readers." Hikigu suddenly said, "You will tell your mother, 'I am a social bomb!'; you will tell your father, 'I will beat you to death. 'What?"

Saikiza Yoshiki shook his head, definitely not!

"Then why do you write like this? Your content is like a storyteller who suddenly enters a restaurant and says: Everyone sitting here is rubbish-although the actual situation is different, it is similar."

Even the illustrations that give this guy Sawamura Eriri level can't be saved!Because you can't understand what he's writing at all... He looks like an old general on a stage, no matter his back or his knees, it's full of things.

Bi Qigu doesn't want to say too much now, because a novel, from the perspective of the creator, will not use criteria such as 'logically rigorous story', 'interesting plot', etc. to comment on a work.

Because this is the reader's perspective.

The author's point of view is this: the control of the release of characters and emotions in the plot, the control of the character's emotions in the writing, and the construction of a story structure and ending.

This is what the author reads. As for the story itself... It would be disrespectful to intervene in another author's story. In martial arts novels, it's just like smashing the field and kicking the gymnasium.

While Bi Qigu was thinking, he heard the phone ring. He picked it up and saw that it was a golden retriever who sent a message from a stranger.

Come to think of it, I haven't gone to + her line yet.

"help me!"

Um?Hikigu was stunned, what happened to Sawamura Eriri?

"That demon, that demon Kasumigaoka Shiyu, locked me up! She locked me up! Help me!"

"Huh?" Hikigu wrote back.

"Kasumigaoka Shiwa, the big devil, she locked me in Kadokawa's editorial department and threatened me to keep working. I have escaped from this insane devil!"

"What's wrong? Brother." Komachi also leaned over to take a look.

"It's not something young kids should watch."

Hikigaya covered up his phone, and then went straight to the toilet.Komachi smacked his lips, and began to drink barley tea rather displeased, this brother is hiding from Komachi again!

Saikiza Yoshiki sat on the sofa depressed, staring at Hayama Hayato... own... own novel... so... so unbearable?

Ah ah ah ah ah! !Not reconciled ah ah ah ah! ! !His heart roared.