The Comprehensive Story of Hiki Valley Hachiman

Zaimokiza didn't have the ability to continue to put on a show under Yukinoshita's bright gaze.

It seems that it is still a bit difficult for Zai Muzao to propose his commission himself.

"Tai Mu Zuo, listen to you, you are a fan of Xia Shizi."

Hearing what I said, Zaimoza looked away as if he had woken up.However, my words also made Kasumigaoka-senpai cast a curious look.

Seeing this, Zai Muzuo turned his eyes away, and quickly looked away, looking at me.

At this moment in the classroom, Zaimuza was being watched by the three girls Yukinoshita, Kasumigaoka and Yuigahama, as if they were going up to the execution platform.

Well, I can feel this feeling.

"By the way, don't you have any novels that you want to be guided by Kasumigaoka-senpai? Don't you want to show them to others?"

After I said this, Zaimoza seemed to have gained some courage, and rummaged through his bag for something.

...Ah, this courage is only enough for him to do this kind of thing.

"Thank you for your understanding. This is the outline and some chapters of my light novel. I want to submit to a newcomer award, but because I don't have any friends, I can't hear everyone's thoughts. Just read it."

Cai Muzuo handed a stack of A4 papers to the desks of the three girls, and then shifted his gaze to me.Thinking about it, this move probably took all his courage.

"I always feel that you seem to say very sad things as if nothing happened..."

It can be said that it is a matter of course for a patient with secondary illness to aspire to become a light novel writer.It is a very normal emotion to want to take shape into shape.

Not only that, but it is not surprising that people who fantasize at times think they can write well.Besides, it is indeed a kind of happiness to be able to combine hobbies and work into one.

"Is it a light novel again?"

Looking at the paper in front of him, Yukinoshita couldn't help frowning.

Obviously, Yukinoshita is really not good at such commissions.

That's why I asked Zaimokiza to come to the service department on purpose.

Moreover, this kind of commission from Zaikiza is also in line with Hiratsuka-sensei, and Kasumigaoka-senpai is an example.

Therefore, this task can only belong to me.

"You mean, you're my fan and want my guidance?"

At this time, Kasumigaoka-senpai suddenly looked at Zaimuza and asked.

"……Well!"

At this time, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's gaze was even more intense than that of Yukinoshita, making Zai Muzuo speechless, and kept winking at me.

Seeing this, Kasumigaoka-senpai seemed to understand something, and fixed her eyes on me.

"Okay, it looks like you did the trick! Mr. Dead Fisheye!"

"Tell me my identity to others at will, but you will be punished! Hikigu-kun~"

"That, that, Zaimoza is my friend. Seeing him worrying about his novel, I couldn't bear it, so I made such a bad plan."

In order to avoid danger in an emergency, I had no choice but to explain it against my will.

Ah~!The word friend is really a mouthful.I never thought that one day I would say such words by myself, and I couldn't help but hate myself a little bit.

"Is that so? But why did I hear that Hikigaya specially pulled him into the service department in order to win the match with Yukinoshita?"

"Misunderstanding, that's just a misunderstanding, and I just did it by the way."

"That's right. Well, since you're so concerned about your friends, then I'll do this favor."

"Well, thank you Kasumigaoka-senpai for your understanding..."

"Huh? Wait...well, Kasumigaoka-senpai, Zaimokiza is entrusted to our service department. You don't seem to be a member of the service department."

I seem to have discovered something is wrong, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu has something to say.

"Didn't Zai Muzao come to ask me for help? What's the matter with the Ministry of Service?"

"Also, even if it is entrusted to the service department, then I can join the service department. Say yes, Yukinoshita."

"Well, how to put it, it is indeed possible. Hiratsuka-sensei originally encouraged our service department to recruit more people, so that we can better complete the club's tasks."

Yukinoshita nodded in affirmation.

Well, this is indeed what I missed.Kasumi Hill is an unstable factor, and this can be regarded as her punishment for revealing my identity to others without authorization.

Chapter 53 The World where Only Zaimuka Was Injured

"So, Mr. Biqigu, do you plan to take on this task alone?"

Well, I completely recognized the threat in Kasumigaoka-senpai's words.

It's true that Zaimoza came to the Ministry of Service to apply for a commission because of me, but he doesn't necessarily need me.

Kasumigaoka-senpai is a new light novelist, so it would be more appropriate to ask her for help.If I act blindly, I'm afraid Kasumigaoka-senpai will completely fall to Yukinoshita's side.

"Okay, let's cooperate on this task."

I had to compromise.

Perhaps, in fact, Hiratsuka-sensei didn't give us the option of confrontation from the very beginning.

Because of the various regulations for accepting the entrustment, and Yukinoshita is the president herself, and she has to be responsible for many things in the service department, it is difficult to attribute the entrustment to only one person.

Mr. Hiratsuka did this just to make us be more serious and put more efforts in the ensuing entrustment, even to find a client by ourselves.

Let me just say, according to Mr. Hiratsuka's character and teaching philosophy, we will not really "fight".

This time I came here to find Cai Muzuo to verify this point, it seems that it is indeed right.

"Then, let me read your novel first."

Senior sister Xia Zhiqiu was the first to pick up the manuscript paper on the table, and it seemed that she was really interested in doing so.Otherwise, according to the usual words, only one person will put on the earphones and code on the sidelines indifferently.

Seeing this, we members of the service department couldn't just let an outsider help us complete the commission, so we all stepped forward and took the manuscript paper.

The old clock on the classroom wall is ticking.On the stadium outside the window, members of the sports club are sweating, laughing and shouting one after another, and their youthful atmosphere is constantly overflowing.

But the service department was strangely quiet, only the friction sound of flipping papers, and the time was slowly passing by.

"Whoo~"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's exhalation broke the silence, and she was of course the first one to finish watching.

"Your name is Zai Muzao. Please sit down first, don't stand like that all the time."

It turns out that Timuzuo has been standing upright since he entered the door.Under Yukinoshita's gesture, I moved a stool for him to sit on.

At this time, Zaimoza was facing Kasumigaoka-senpai face to face.

"How should I put it, you should give up writing novels."

Also, it's really merciless at all, Kasumigaoka-senpai just got to the point like this when she opened her mouth.

"Is there really, really no room for change?"

"There is no clear main line in the outline, just write whatever you think of. The setting is completely disordered and very boring."

"As for the text... To be honest, who is your Mandarin teacher, I really want him to take a good look at it, maybe he will resign in shame."

"Seeing that you can speak normally, why is your grammar so messed up? Do you always use inverted sentences? Do you understand the usage of auxiliary words and auxiliary verbs? Didn't you learn it in elementary school?"

"Hmm... Well, it's more approachable to write like that, and it's easier for readers to feel intimacy..."

"This should wait until you can write the correct sentence? Besides, the development of your plot is too easy for people to guess, and it doesn't conform to the basic logic. Why does the heroine take off her clothes here? Why does the second female lead like it? On the male lead?"

"Also, the male lead has too many harems. How can he fall in love with one when he sees one, and the harem is still so united? That's not necessary at all, and it's disgusting to see."

"Hey - listen, I heard that if it is not arranged like that, it will not sell well... As for the development of the plot, that is..."

"There are also narrative sentences that are too long, and too many difficult words to read. After all, don't give people a good look at the unfinished story? Before showing off your literary talent, please add more common sense."

"……Well!"

Kasumigaoka-senpai's merciless words, plus she herself is a contracted light novel writer.Therefore, what she caused to Zai Muzuo was real plus silent damage.

Zai Muzao had no choice but to shift his gaze to our side, looking for a little comfort.

"My thoughts are similar to Kasumigaoka-senpai's. Recently, I have read some light novels, both good and bad. However, the kind you wrote makes me feel very boring, and it even feels painful to read. The work is unbelievably boring."

Unexpectedly, Yukinoshita would say something similar to other people's thoughts. I thought she was always so unique.It seems that Yukinoshita and Kasumigaoka-senpai have a rare unification of ideas through Zaimuza's novel.

"Then, next, Yuigahama-san."

"Huh? Me, I want too?"

Zaimuza looked at the surprised Yuigahama, and gave her a look of help, with tears in the corners of his eyes.Seeing that Zaimuzao was so pitiful, she stared at the sky, trying to find something to praise, and forcefully squeezed out this sentence:

"I, I think...you, you know a lot of difficult words."

"Wow!"

"Why did you give him a fatal blow..."

For a person who aspires to be a writer, that sentence is tantamount to taboo, because it means that he has nothing else to offer.People who are not used to light novels often answer like this when they are asked about their impressions.However, if a novel is evaluated in this way, it is no different from "not good-looking".

"Then, let's talk about small businesses."

Yuigahama quickly escaped from the seat and gave it to me.She was originally sitting diagonally across from the wooden seat, but now she hid diagonally behind me.

It seemed that she couldn't bear to look at the burnt and ashes of the wooden seat.

"Kuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhouuuuuuhouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhouuu

Yes, I understand.

I nodded to reassure Zaimoza, and his eyes also said "I believe in you" to me.

If I don't respond to him, I don't deserve to be a man.So I took a deep breath, and under Zai Muzao's hopeful gaze, I said softly:

"Zai Muzao, since I brought you to the Ministry of Service, I will definitely help you."

Hearing this, Zai Muzao seemed to see the light of hope, which was the light he became that year.

"So, Zaimoza, give up writing light novels! Let me show you the way, and this is the help I can provide."

...that light was shattered at this moment.

I also seem to hear a broken sound.It turned out that it was heartbreaking.