The Comprehensive Story of Hiki Valley Hachiman

However, my goal was also achieved...

[Mission Update: Talk to the target person about your true views on "Love Metronome". 】

Although there is still some discrepancy with my guess, at least one thing is certain.

This system task is like a galgame, only after the key plot is triggered will specific options pop up.

In order to find out the specific content of the task, I left the target person behind in a way of showing weakness, in order to know their specific needs.

Unexpectedly, it seems that I guessed it right, and the task was updated.

However, since the specific content of the task is based on the needs of the target person, does that mean that the task is not fixed, but changes with the needs of the target.

If the needs of the target person are reduced, or even disappear, can the task be made easier, or even disappear directly?

After all, not all problems can be solved.

Since the problem cannot be solved, it is better to solve the problem itself, so that the problem is no longer a problem.

"Is that your purpose?"

"That's it!"

"But I already..."

"There is no need to say perfunctory words! Hikigu-kun."

She interrupted me.

"It can be seen that you are still somewhat interested in this novel! If you are not interested, you will not read the book here for so long at this point in time! It just seems that you don't want to contact me. We should be the first Shall we meet again?"

Did this notice me from the beginning?But also, at this point in time, reading a novel for two hours in this kind of place, it's hard to say that I don't have the slightest interest in it.

Even if it's to pass the time, it's best to find a book that interests you.

"I just don't want to be disturbed when I'm reading. However, since it's the first time we meet, there's no need to be as aggressive as before."

"Ah, it seems that it was indeed my problem just now. But people like this book very much. It is inevitable that I will be a little excited when I see someone reading it around me. I want to hear other people's opinions."

Good reasons, but not necessary.Moreover, there is a slight sense of disobedience, which must not be the real reason.

"Ah, in fact, it's nothing. I'm also wrong about this." So where did I go wrong?

"In fact, I don't really like to share my hobbies with others, but at this point, I will talk about my own opinions."

It has been clearly stated so, presumably after I complete the task, she will no longer have any interest in me.

After all, I am not the same person as myself.

The reason for such a beautiful girl to talk to me is only based on the same interest.

"For this light novel called "Love Metronome", my opinion is that it is a light novel of college composition style."

"College composition-style light novel?"

"Well, this novel is full of a lot of gorgeous rhetoric as a pile, and all kinds of riddle-like sentence endings. Moreover, as a light novel with a love theme as the main theme, the emotional description in it is also a bit immature, which cannot make people feel uncomfortable. There is a sense of resonance, which shows that the author does not have any emotional experience."

Ok?There was a stomping sound coming from somewhere.

"However, it can also be seen from this novel that the author has a strong foundation in writing. The use of various writing techniques is proficient, the writing is also very beautiful, and the articles are also well-organized. What I like is the As the heroine, Sayuka, this character makes me feel that the author has really put enough emotion into it.”

"Generally speaking, if you read it as some two-dimensional literary youth, it must be very suitable for your appetite. However, judging from today's light novels, it is difficult to gather popularity, because it does not meet the market."

"As far as I'm concerned, if we continue like this first volume and don't make any changes, if we don't have three volumes, it's very likely that the editorial department will cut it in half."

Although I wanted to make up a lie and just mix it up with empty words, but the task requires that it must be a true opinion, so I had to say so.

As far as she is a reader, after what I said, she will be completely disappointed in me.

Looking at the prompt that the task was completed, I nodded silently.

However, having said that, can expressing opinions on the novel help it?

"Well, actually, don't pay too much attention to it. This is all nonsense from a layman like me. Since this novel can be published, there must be a reason for it, and the editorial department is not a vegetarian."

Seeing her cloudy, pensive face biting her nails, I hastily added.

At this time, the school bell rang suddenly.

"Well, I still have something to do, so I'll go home first."

After all, I immediately took my bag and left, anyway, the task has been completed.

If you are not active when you come home from school, isn't there something wrong with your brain?

Now, the necessary things have been done, and the unnecessary things have not been done.

How to change is her business, and my task is completed.

After the senior sister recovered from her contemplation, Bi Qigu disappeared long ago.

Chapter 12 Monologue

Originally, when Ms. Machida informed me that my novel could be published, I was so excited that I couldn't sleep for several days.

In the few days when it was officially sold, I kept looking for other people's evaluations on the Internet, hoping to gain some sense of identity and find out my own shortcomings.

However, it seems that the sales volume of the novel is not good, and it has not caused any waves.

The few comments I see occasionally are just empty words like "come on".

Some time after the novel was released, I got a piece of news that I had long expected.

If my novel continues like this, it may be cut in half.

At this moment, I have encountered a bottleneck.No matter how well written the second volume is, it is not even as good as the first volume.

Want to change, but do not know how to change.

While I was sitting in the library, worrying about the next plot, a person caught my attention.

To be precise, the book he was holding attracted me.

It is impossible for me to forget that this is my debut novel - "Love Metronome".

At that time, I was really excited. I didn't expect that in the same school, there was such a reader as me, a writer of street novels.

But I'm not sure he liked the work.

So, I secretly observed it for two hours.I found that during this period of time, he has been carefully reading my works.

That makes me sure, at least he's interested in it

With the attitude of giving it a try, I walked up to him with some trepidation, wanting to ask his opinion from the side.

It's just his perfunctory attitude that makes me a little annoyed.

I don't know what happened to me at that time, according to the original words, I would not be like this at all.

He was almost harsh to a stranger, and wanted to try to get close to him.

Usually, I am almost in a state where strangers are not allowed to enter.

I put it all down to the distraction caused by the problems with the work, coupled with the bottleneck period.

Well...every woman has those few days.

However, after listening to his thoughts, some things suddenly figured out.

Although it will not break through the current bottleneck, at least it gave me a new way of thinking.

I really don't know how he analyzed so much. Is it a coincidence of nonsense or did he actually do a lot of research on it?

Just as I was thinking about how to ask him for a solution, he had already disappeared.

But, I remember you, Mr. Biqigu!

At this time, Hikigu, who was riding a bicycle towards home, couldn't help but get excited, and almost staggered and fell to the ground.

Ok?According to my superb driving skills, how could this happen? Is there any danger about to appear?

However, I don't seem to have been bitten by any strange spiders.

......

Next day, lunch break.

Zaikiza found me as a matter of course.

"Hey, Mr. Hikigu, have you finished reading that novel? I want to refer to your opinion."

In fact, except for my opinion, no one can be used as a reference.

Although I don't really want to have too much intersection with it, the annoying degree of Zaimokza is obvious to all.

If you don't give him a satisfactory answer, I'm afraid it will be even more troublesome in the future.

"For you, I recommend you to learn the writing technique of this work. In addition, you must invest enough emotion in the main characters of the work, and you must grasp people's hearts and make readers resonate."

"But, I've put all my emotions into it."

"So, don't write about the protagonist as a tool for your own obscenity!"

For some reason, I got a little excited.

Zaimuza's novels are full of his own obscene plots, completely ignoring the basic logic of the story.

It is basically a product of obscenity before going to bed, self-yyy, not even a cool article, and others will only feel uncomfortable after reading it.

"Well……"

Cai Muzuo was so shocked that he couldn't speak, and lowered his head in silence.

I really hope he cut off his dream of being a writer like this!

Either for him or for me.

Fuck writer dreams.

"Thank you, Hikigu-kun, I understand."

"As expected, you are worthy of being the companion of Ashikaga Yoshiki, the No.13 shogun of the Gomurocho Shogunate, who can see my shortcomings."

"Then, I'm going to practice, don't let anyone disturb me during the period."

Well, here we go again.So, what do you know, give up your dreams!