The Comprehensive Story of Hiki Valley Hachiman

In the eyes of Xiazhiqiu, there is a large vacant space beside Hikigu at this time.

"I, I'd better take it. What a big deal."

where?

Is it Mai-senpai's body, or does Mai hold it?

Either way, it's a must-die option.

"really……"

Kasumigaoka had such an expression as expected, and felt happy that he had successfully guessed Hikigaya's little thought correctly.

After that, I didn't pursue it any further.

After eating all the remaining pineapple buns...

"!@#￥%...&*()"

"Huh? Sorry, I didn't understand at all."

Hearing this, Xia Zhiqiu gave Hikigu a look.

Although he didn't speak, Bi Qigu understood.

Passed the drink in his hand to her.

Kasumigaoka didn't take it, but just let Hikigaya hold it, and drank all the remaining drinks in it in one go.

This act of feeding the play happened right in front of Mai's eyes.

All the previous behaviors were carried out so openly and aboveboard under her nose, she couldn't bear it any longer.

After the feeding was over, Hikiya remembered that Mai was still by his side.

"Well, that, if Kasumigaoka-senpai really has nothing to do, I'll leave first."

Hikigu applied for withdrawal again.

"What can you do? Don't you just want to find a place where no one is around, and enjoy your lunch break quietly?"

Kasumi Hill rejected Hikigu's request, and broke his mind with a word.

"Ah, this..."

Bi Qigu was suddenly at a loss for words.

I can't tell the truth, and I can't find a reasonable reason.

After all, I always compare Qigu alone, I really thought so at first.

"Okay, it's the same to enjoy lunch break here, just eat the lunch in your hand."

Kasumigaoka pointed to the yakisoba bread in Hikigaya's hand.

"Besides, I did find you for something..."

Eating the bread in her hands, Kasumigaoka-senpai took out a stack of A4 papers and handed them to Hikigaya.

As for Mai, she has no appetite to eat at this time, but is watching Kasumigaoka's every move, to see what she will do next.

"This is the first draft of "Love Metronome", I want you to help me read it."

"So it's this one. After all, it's the task of my club. Since you entrusted it to me, I will definitely take a look."

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"Why do you feel like you are explaining to someone?"

"Yes, is it? Wrong, it's just an illusion!"

Kasumigaoka still remains skeptical about Hikigu's appearance.

"...Forget it, you can read my first draft of the second volume of "Love Metronome" first."

At Kasumigaoka-senpai's request, Hikigaya took a rough look while eating the bread in his hand.

Seeing this, Mai on the side had no choice but to let go of all doubts in her heart and let Bi Qigu read on first.

Treating the butter bread in his hand as if it was Biqigu, he bit down hard.Forced by boredom, Mai's gaze also turned to the paper in Hikigaya's hand.

Looking at the novel in his hand, Hikigu put on a serious expression.Although because of the dead fish eyes, it is impossible to tell whether Bi Qigu is serious or not.It will only give people a lazy and frivolous feeling.

On the other hand, Xia Zhiqiu supported his head and watched intently.

"That, that, Kasumigaoka-senpai, is there something on my face?"

Hikigu was very uncomfortable with Kasumi Hill's unobtrusive, Chiguoguo gaze.

"No. I just think it's handsome to look serious than Mr. Qigu."

"Ah, ah, yes, yes?"

If it was in the past, even if he knew that such words were just to tease himself in some scenes, Bi Qigu would still be a little complacent in his heart.

But judging from the current situation, Bi Qigu is not happy at all.

Trying not to care about Yixia Hill, Hikigu devoted his attention to reading.

Chow mein with bread is absolutely impossible without a drink.

After eating the last bite of bread, Hikigaya reached the limit and reached out to get a drink, only to find that Kasumigaoka-senpai had already held his drink in her hand.

Seeing Hikigaya's actions, Kasumigaoka understood it, opened the package, inserted the straw, and handed it to Hikigaya's mouth.

"That, senior sister, this..."

"It's a reward."

Kasumi Hill answered first.

"No, no need..."

"Um--?"

"……ok, I get it."

Bi Qigu finally understood what a dilemma is.

Enduring his waist being ravaged by Mai, Hikigaya finally accepted Kasumigaoka's "feeding" in front of her.

After drinking all the drinks in the box in one breath, Bi Qigu couldn't help but let out a long sigh of relief.

Finally, he was temporarily relieved.

Involuntarily, a comfortable expression appeared on his face.

"What? It turns out that Mr. Biqigu enjoys my feeding so much~ Do you want to do it again?"

There was a "crack" sound, which was the sound of Pocky biting off, it was the snacks I bought for Mai at the convenience store just now.

"No, there's no need. There's still business to do now..."

In the end, Xia Zhiqiu gave up Bi Qigu's "molesting" first, and didn't bother him to read.

Bi Qigu felt a lot of relief in his body in an instant, and thanked Dade for working harder to check the novel written by Xia Zhiqiu.

……Eh?Because the client removed the pressure she imposed, he couldn't help feeling resentful towards him, instead he seemed a little grateful...?

What kind of social animal is this!

......

"Sister, what did your editor say?"

After roughly browsing it, Hikigu asked.

"I haven't shown it to my editor yet, you are the first one."

Kasumigaoka stretched out his index finger like a green onion, pointed at Hikigu and smiled.

"ok, I get it."

Hikigu let out a breath and nodded.

"Let me just express my humble opinion."

"Obviously, the senior sister has made great progress. Some of the questions I raised before, the senior sister has changed a lot."

"Now, it's just that the plot still needs to be polished, and it's necessary to write the touch that directly hits the readers' hearts."

Presumably Kasumigaoka-senpai is in some respects the same as Zaimuza, both of whom suffer from severe writer's disease, and want to record and convey their thoughts and feelings in words.

If your work can touch the hearts of others, you will be very happy.

It is a wonderful feeling that cannot be described in words.Just like when I read a good book, the thoughts conveyed by the words in it bring me the feeling.

Everyone is different, each has its own characteristics.

In order to accurately convey one's mind, in addition to good writing, excellent plot is also indispensable.

"A plot that hits the heart directly?"

"That's right. It can be seen that there are some shadows of people and things in the Ministry of Service in the sister's article. This is true. However, the plot is being polished to make it less abrupt and smoother. will be better."

"I see……"

Xia Zhiqiu nodded thoughtfully.

"Because of the time, I just took a rough look at this book now, and I just have some thoughts. There may be loopholes, or it may be inaccurate. In short, I still have to show it to your editor in the future."

Bi Qigu added extremely rigorously.It's really becoming more and more like some social animals at work.

"Well, I see. You can take these first drafts back and have a look. If you have any new ideas, you can also tell me."

"Is it really okay?"

Looking at the draft in his hand, Bi Qigu was still a little surprised.

After all, for an author who has signed a contract to publish a physical book, the first draft of the next volume of the new book can be said to be top secret and must not be leaked out.

And now, senior sister Xia Zhiqiu gave it to herself like this?

"Of course... oh~ By the way, just don't show it to others."

Senior sister Xia Zhiqiu replied very straightforwardly, and she only gave some verbal instructions.