Rebirth of America, this is my time

The second volume is finally finished, and the word count of this book has reached 1.05 million words. This word count is slightly more than I expected, because in my outline, my estimate for the first two volumes was 1 million words. , now it exceeds 50,000, which proves that my writing is not concise enough.

However, one thing that makes me happy is that everything I want to write in the outline has been basically completed. The only castration is the branch line of the Donkey and Elephant parties.

The abbreviation of this part is actually very poor, but the reason why it is not expanded is actually related to the fact that the chapters were blocked before it was put on the shelves. Since the scale has been marked, there is no need to commit suicide.

I'm also aware of other aspects of poor writing, such as the use of too many profanities, too many historical stories interspersed, and the pace of the article may be a bit out of control.

The first two questions are really due to writing habits. I used swear words and exclamation points to emphasize the tone. In order to explain the enemy clearly, I used more narration descriptions. This is indeed something I did not control well.

As for the third question... I personally feel that the update is still slow.

For example, Warner's plan in the second volume happened before Chapter 100 of this volume, but the real outbreak happened after Chapter 104. And when I put the chips brought by Warner against the game, It took fifty chapters to finish writing both Unearthing the Real Murderer and Fighting Back.

If the update is completed in one day, it doesn't matter, but in my case, one chapter per day, this seems a bit fragmented, and the mood may not be in place.

In addition, there may be some unreasonable plots. For example, someone left a message asking, Did I write Roy Disney a little too bad? Did I forcefully write Roy Disney as someone who used all his powers in order to intervene in Disney's case?

I have never responded to this kind of thing. This is mainly because like you, I don’t know him. What I know about him comes from the Internet, from the media, and from other people who know him evaluate him. For example, Michael Eisner, Steve Jobs, Robert Iger and other people who have interacted with Roy Disney have all used bad words to describe Roy Disney. And whether it is recorded in his Wikipedia or the profile page created for him by the Los Angeles Times, this guy is indeed willing to do anything for power.

What I actually did was to make certain deductions about the behavior of these people in the book and the company's goals based on the information I collected, which may not be comprehensive.

Of course, I also admit that it must be processed, and it is essentially to serve the story.

And this thing is normal, right? After all, when I first wrote a novel, my beautiful editor told me that the protagonist in the online novel is different from others, and he must be invincible. You can set setbacks for him and pave the way for him to grow, but in the end he must rise. And when you are writing a novel that is linked to real characters, this Yang may make some real characters look stupid, stunned and brainless, but there is no way around this, because if you don’t make the protagonist Yang, then Readers will praise you.

No one wants to pay to suffer.

Of course, the stupidity, stupidity and brainlessness of the supporting characters that readers feel can also be reduced, but this must start from the story itself, starting from the starting point of contradiction. If you can make the protagonist's final pretense look very reasonable, Then readers will feel much less disconnected.

this……

The beauty editor is right, but her ability is limited.

So, thank you for being able to see this. The story I wrote can interest some people, which already makes me very happy.

At the same time, I would also like to thank [cjll] for the leader who rewarded me on September 8th.

This is really a surprise, thank you very much.

I am so thrilled with your support.

If I remember correctly, you seem to have seen this during the free period? It’s really exciting. After all, the most painful thing about online novels is catching up on updates.

Finally, what I want to say is that in the next two days, that is, the 16th and 17th, I may take 1-2 days off. The reason is very simple. My outline was written in 2020, but The beautiful editor I voted for resigned, so I took a break to review the outline a few more times, and then I kept working on this story until now.

Although I read the entire outline before starting the book, a lot of the corresponding information was in a mess, and some of the links were invalid, which was uncomfortable, so I had to supplement the information while writing. In fact, the information in the third volume is almost complete, but there is still something related to the book that I have not read, so I have to complete it and then write it again.

Some people may think, isn't your next chapter about the Avengers led by Steve Ross? Yes, that's true, but their plan involves things in the book.

I'm afraid of making mistakes.

I need some time. There is a high probability that there will be no update on the 16th. It will be updated on the 18th at the latest. I am really sorry for the inconvenience this has caused you.

Finally, I would like to apologize to everyone who doesn't like reading single chapters.

terribly sorry.

Fortunately I didn't go

September 15, 2023.