Writing and cutting

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Gu Sheng's chat records with Changting are almost all conversations, which is really not easy for Gu Sheng who is fighting for pictures every day.

Xu Shi looked at it with disgust: "Isn't your conversation too straight?"

"Yeah." Gu Sheng sighed quietly: "It's not like you, Chang Ting said to the left, okay, and the right, don't wait for me, tsk, if it weren't for seeing you suffering unrequited love, I would almost doubt whether you two are having an affair. "

Xu Shi: "We didn't, she is innocent, thank you."

Gu Sheng laughed, leaned forward and lowered his voice, "Honestly, have you ever thought that she treats you differently?"

Xu Shi was stunned by the question, Gu Sheng leaned back again, and lazily said: "A Shi, you need to be smart about crushing love."

Zhou Tingyun tapped Xu Shi on QQ at [-]:[-]: Ah Shi, I have read the script.

Xu Shi was doing his homework, and the moment the special switch sounded, he threw away his pen and picked up his phone: What do you think?

Zhou Tingyun: A good news or a bad news, which one to listen to first?

Xu Shi was startled: Bad.

Zhou Tingyun: The bad news is that the screenwriting skills are not enough, and the script is a bit jerky in many places. One fatal flaw is that the whole story uses speaking mode to explain the plot. Too many dialogues will be too tedious and procrastinated, leaving no room for the narration at all. There is leeway.

Xu Shi: Hmm...

Zhou Tingyun: So who is the screenwriter?

Xu Shi: Didn’t you already guess it?

Zhou Tingyun: If I remember correctly, Ah Shi, this is your first time writing a screenplay independently.

Xu Shi: Yes.

Zhou Tingyun: So the good news is that I took it.

Xu Shi: You don't have to force yourself, you don't accept bad scripts.

Zhou Tingyun: The story logic is complete, the plot is brilliant, the setting is attractive, and the characters are three-dimensional and malleable. More importantly, this is your first independent script. I don't want to miss it.This is the reason why I accepted the show. Of course, don’t say the last one, lest you get lost. By the way, your signature is "Xu Shi", right?

Xu Shi: Well, I use Xu Shi.Then should I change the script again? I really won't change the script.

Zhou Tingyun: You are the only screenwriter in your club?

Xu Shi: I am in charge of this notebook.

Zhou Tingyun: Then... think about it, add my name in the screenwriter column?

Chapter 45

Waking up early in the morning, looking through the window, the sky outside is gloomy.The explorer wore a thin shirt over short sleeves, pushed the door out, and the cool wind blew her away.

The door is an old-fashioned wooden door, and it will make a slight noise when it is pushed. The person standing under the tree in the courtyard turned around after hearing the movement, and smiled at her: "Morning."

"Morning." The explorer closed the door, gathered his clothes with both hands and walked into the courtyard.

The swordsman set up a wooden table under the tree. After greeting the explorer at this moment, he turned around and held his pen again.

The explorer walked up to her lightly and asked, "What are you writing?"

The swordsman stopped writing, turned his body to reveal Bai Xuan, and said in block letters, "A garden full of flowers and trees, a house full of mountains and rivers, nothing to gain and nothing to lose, just natural."

The explorer was amazed: "This is Mr. Qian Mu's words!"

The swordsman turned his head and asked her, "Do you know the meaning of this sentence?"

The explorer nodded, and heard the swordsman say again: "This is the purpose of my coming to Huangliang."

The explorer asked: "Do you like the life of living in seclusion?"

"Everyone who comes to Huangliang likes it."

"I came by chance."

The swordsman smiled meaningfully: "Occasionally, sometimes it becomes a kind of necessity."

The explorer raised his delicate eyebrows, but the swordsman naturally looked away: "Ah, it's raining."

As soon as the swordsman finished speaking, the explorer felt a chill on her face. She stretched out a hand, and a few traces of coldness fell on the palm of her hand.

The swordsman cleaned up the paper and pens on the table, put them all into the felt and hugged them up, "If you're fine, sitting under the eaves and listening to the rain is also a good enjoyment."

The explorer followed behind the swordsman step by step. The swordsman put the blanket back into the house, took out two small stools, and gave one to the explorer.

The explorer took it, sat in front of the threshold, looked at the sky, "I don't like rain."

The swordsman didn't sit down, she leaned against the door frame, stood taller, and saw more things, she saw a swallow flying from a distance, after a beautiful pause, it burrowed into the courtyard wall made of yellow soil and straw "The branches of the old tree in the courtyard trembled slightly, and a few green leaves with clear veins swirled and slowly floated down.

As the nostrils twitched, he could smell the humidity in the air. The rainfall from just now to now was enough to make the soil smell fragrant.

The swordsman lowered his head and asked, "Why?"

"It will be very troublesome. If it rains, you will not be able to go out. You will need an umbrella when you go out. It will be very troublesome. Your shoes will get wet and your body will swell." The explorer looked disgusted, "It will cause trouble for many things."

The corner of the swordsman's mouth curled into a smile, "Trivia?"

The explorer thinks, "So to speak."

"What about now?" The swordsman asked: "You came to Huangliang and left the world. There is no job, no informatization, and no mobile phone signal here..."

The explorer chimed in: "So I hate that, it's unforgivable to have no signal!"

The swordsman continued: "You don't have much to do now, do you still feel that the rain will be a hindrance?"

Explorer: "Yes. Cloudy weather affects my mood, too much rain will disturb my sleep."

The rain gradually became heavier, and the swordsman smiled and said nothing.

Xu Shi was pulling her hair while doing homework. In the first few months of school, she was busy with new things every day and enjoyed it, but she neglected the most important things.Fortunately, she was still clear-headed, and finally had a sudden epiphany on a certain November weekend.

It seems that I should return to study, after all, this is the business.

So on Saturday morning, she got up early and patiently finished all the homework left from last night in the morning.

I didn't really feel like eating at noon, so Xu Shi made a bowl of instant noodles in the dormitory, and added ham and spicy kelp shreds from the supermarket downstairs for a bag of one yuan. After eating, I touched my stomach and felt guilty and sorry for it. Looking at the table, he dragged out the milk crate from the bottom to get a bottle, got some boiling water to heat up and drank it.

It was rare that the whole dormitory was there on weekends. After Xu Shi threw away some scented tea in a thermos cup, she asked if anyone wanted to go to the library with her. Of course, she got rejected x3. small curtain.

Xu Shi replied three "tsks" to this, and then she installed the computer and draft notebook, and grabbed a handful of candies from the storage box after thinking about it.

The explorer had been sitting on the small bench listening to the rain for more than an hour. She recovered from her daze and didn't understand why she was so bored.

She was about to get up, but she caught a glimpse of the person next to her still maintaining the same posture from the corner of her eye. The explorer got angry and simply turned half of her body away: "Is it interesting to listen to the rain?"

"Intentional or not, it depends on how you understand it."

The explorer propped his chin and raised his eyebrows to signal the other party to continue.

"Unintentionally because làng wasting time for nothing, intentionally..." The swordsman stood up straight with his hands behind his back, "What were you thinking just now?"

The explorer didn't expect the other party to change the topic suddenly, and an angry expression appeared on her face, but after a moment, she didn't know what to think of, and the expression disappeared again.

"Where is your sword?" asked the explorer.

The swordsman subconsciously looked at his hands, which were empty, and then she remembered: "It's in the room."

"Is your sword a Han sword?" The explorer propped up the stool with both hands, and leaned forward half a point: "Chixiao, Zhongxing, Longcai?" The swords of the Han Dynasty became famous one by one, "Yan, Shengui, Bafu, Maoling...?"

"Do you know Han Jian very well?"