Huang Shang gl

La la, I see that you don't write long comments for me, and you don't respond to my comments, so I got angry and wrote a long comment for myself, huh ╯^╰!

About the author: Sa Luo, Luo Luo means a student party, writing for the first time.

Those bad friends in Luoluo said, you are content, the first time you write an article, you only get so many clicks, let's see which of the newcomers has hundreds of clicks, what else do you want?The author also thinks in his heart that I didn’t summon my friends to promote this article. It might be really good compared to other newcomers, but in fact, I’m still not very satisfied. Maybe it’s too hasty, and I couldn’t stand it at the beginning. The plot was not handled well, and the student party was really in a hurry. I originally planned to write it in a holiday, and the number of words was expected to be less, but then the plot development was not as expected. In the end, I... express my regret for this (﹏)

Regarding the later stage, now that school is approaching, I must tell everyone, yes, I am a prospective freshman! !There is also military training, the school is very strict, I live in the school, and I have to adapt to the new environment at the beginning of school. I don’t think I have time to update the article. According to the current situation, I will definitely not be able to finish the article. Therefore, I guess I will update the article when the National Day is off. , and if it is still over budget, I can only choose a long holiday to update the article, but you can rest assured that there are not many articles left, and I will never cheat.And if I'm going to start a new article, Huang Shang will make a big change, from the beginning to the end, but I don't know when I will have time, it should be in the first year of high school.Recently, I have a headache, and I am busy preparing for the start of school. I can update a few chapters, and try to see the end of the ending.I will not give up the first article with more than [-] words! ! !

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Okay, okay, serious long review

The roles of Ye Lin and Bai Jiu are a bit hasty, and their personalities are not very clear, but most of the characters in the later stage are okay.For the main story of Ye Lin and Bai Jiu, the plot develops quickly. Ye Lin fell in love with Bai Jiu at first sight, and Bai Jiu fell in love with Ye Lin for a long time.

Ye Lin's feelings for Bai Jiu are relatively clear. From the beginning, she has been pampering. Ye Lin is very good as the attacking party, but you should be able to see her arbitrariness and possessiveness as a superior. When shaping her mood, she also shaped her mood. Contradictory, Ye Lin was raised as a boy, so the environment shaped the boy's character, but I can't deny some of the characteristics of a woman in her, such as being sensitive and vulnerable in front of Bai Jiu, etc. I don't know Ye Lin's role How is it portrayed? After all, I am the author. I don't know what Ye Lin sees from the reader's point of view.

But Bai Jiu's feelings for Ye Lin are actually not so clear, because of the main attack perspective, Bai Jiu's inner drama is not much, and Bai Jiu's portrayal has failed. He originally wanted to portray the arrogant attribute, but it doesn't feel so obvious. Bai Jiu's Ye Lin The love of love is accumulated, and the chapter on the birthday is a comprehensive understanding of love. After all, Ye Lin has always shown others as a man, and it is easy for people to ignore the real face of a woman. If Bai Jiu just loves Ye Lin who is a man and does not accept Ye Lin On Lin's female side, this kind of love is incomplete, and Ye Lin also has a spoiled side in front of Bai Jiu.

Prepare to shape and remedy Bai Jiu's character in Jiangnan.

Then there are two children.Ye Muran, Yao'er, talented and intelligent, grew up under Ye Lin's love, relatively precocious, not domineering personality, more ghostly.Ye Muxin, sixteen, is not as talented as Yao'er, Ye Lin is relatively indifferent, and has developed a low self-esteem character under the shadow of the emperor's sister since childhood, and is more sensitive.

The role of Yao'er is my favorite, and her sub-cp scene with Changming is also my favorite.Although Ye Muran seems to be the happiest person with thousands of dotes on her and she is talented and intelligent, she was precocious since she was a child and thought she was very good to her younger brother, but she was hit hard by Shiliu's usurpation of the throne. For a person like her, if she doesn't have a younger brother who absolutely owns the throne, she is capable of being a good one.And she is sixteen, so even if she is talented, she must restrain herself. Even if her father loves her, she still cannot inherit the throne, even if that younger brother is not as good as her at all.Yao'er is precocious, so she must have thought about the throne in her heart, but because of her younger brother, she is willing to be a princess with nothing to do. Which talented person dares to say that she has no ambition at all?It's just that Yao'er suppressed her ambition for the sake of sixteen.

Compared with Yao'er, Shiliu knew that he was not as good as the emperor's sister since he was a child, and his father also favored the emperor's sister since he was a child, which led to his inferiority complex and sensitivity. , Later Frontier Sixteen did not realize Ye Lin's painstaking efforts at all, but just let all the negative emotions explode.

Shiliu's heart is not bad, it's just that he is in the royal family...

——Okay, that’s all, there are too many and no one will read——