daily living together
Chapter 47
When Su Yueyue's outline was handed in again, it was already a week later.
This time she handed in slower than before, but it wasn't that she didn't work hard, but spent more time thinking.This time I wrote very slowly, but my thinking was not as smooth as before.
When she handed it in by herself, she was a little confused.
Although I handed in a template-like framework, persona and outline, I always felt that something was wrong and not comprehensive enough.After handing it in, I didn't feel relieved. When I clicked the send button, I couldn't help but feel the urge to make some changes. I felt that the following plots or where might need to be adjusted.
The plot is unstable, just like a continental plate undergoing violent crustal movement, maybe one of them collapsed and wanted to drift to another new continent.
Su Yueyue sat in front of the computer and typed seriously, and said: "Master, I don't know what's going on, it seems that those people are about to jump out by themselves, my pen can't control that world, it's just describing...but it's not good .”
An Chijin replied: "It's considered an introduction, you can play freely, and the current stage is to accumulate experience."
Su Yueyue asked him: "Then master, how should I write now?"
An Chijin said: "That's your world, I can't make the decision, you can think about it before it's too late to start writing."
Su Yueyue was very excited, she was going to find a way to improve herself, and then she went to her big cousin Luo Tong, and asked for advice earnestly and humbly.
Luo Tong has only one suggestion for her: "Go to the library and have a look."
Su Yueyue packed her things, carried a small bag, notebook and water bottle and went to the library!
Then she lost her way on the road of writing.
The article written by Su Yueyue is still stuttering, but it has become transparent from a vacuum, and the only three messages have also become one. Needless to say, her article has rushed.
Su Yueyue insisted on looking up information in the library, but she still refused to give up.
Her ability to collect information was brought up by Luo Tong. Sometimes Luo Tong would just tell her what materials he needed, and she would sort them out.So Su Yueyue was at home in the library. The materials were well sorted and kept in a row at hand, but the more anxious she was, the more stuck her writing was. Obviously, the inspiration the library brought to her was also very limited.
Su Yueyue stayed in the library for three days and had a huge dark circle under her eyes.
When she opened her article column again, she suddenly saw a new message. The reader "monkeys are going to climb trees" asked her why she didn't update it today.
Only then did Su Yueyue belatedly realize that it was already evening, and she usually posted new chapters at noon, although there were few of them, she was still trying to update them every day.
She was depressed, but she still doted on the only wild reader left, and replied to him: "I'm sorry, I'm a little bit Calvin today..."
Monkey wants to climb a tree and soon left a message under her reply to encourage her, and enthusiastically wanted to help Su Yueyue build a readership.
Su Yueyue thought about it, and agreed.
The readership group was quickly established, and there were only the two of them in the group.
The monkey was about to climb the tree and sent a big smiling face over to say hello to her: "Hello, Su Yueyue! I like your book very much~ It's so well written^口^"
Su Yueyue was flattered, and replied: "Thank you, I still have a lot of bad writing, but I will work hard!"
The monkey wants to climb the tree: "I have made obvious progress! At the beginning, it was much worse than it is now^口^~"
Su Yueyue: "Huh??"
The monkey wants to climb the tree: "Oh, I forgot to introduce myself, my name is Hou Ziyu, I don't know if you still have any impression? I met you with God An Chi before, at Leo Tavern, and Hao Zhengwu Juju!"
Su Yueyue burst into tears, the only fan was not a wild one, she even knew her!
After Hou Ziyu revealed his identity, it was easy to continue the chat. He asked, "You haven't updated in the past few days. Are you collecting new materials?"
Su Yueyue said honestly: "It's not all, it feels like it's half written... Uh, the keel has collapsed?"
Hou Ziyu said: "The faith collapsed?"
Su Yueyue thought about it, and said: "It's a little bit. After the two people met, why can they be together and why can they love so passionately? confused."
Hou Ziyu said: "I talked! Let me help you!!"
Su Yueyue: "..."
Su Yueyue didn't really want to eat this bowl of dog food, but the other party enthusiastically stuffed it into her mouth.
Hou Ziyu said: "Actually, if you like someone, it's especially unreasonable, that is, you always chase his shadow in the crowd. When he speaks, you can hear every word even if you hold a book. Open your eyes When I saw him, I couldn't help laughing, and I wanted to do many interesting things with him!"
Su Yueyue asked him: "Then what's the biggest feeling from friends to lovers?"
Hou Ziyu said: "I'm so proud! My date is really good, really, every time I go out with him, I can't help but want to show it off!" He posted a cartoon emoji of a twisting little monkey, and quickly said: "But It will be a little disturbing!"
Su Yueyue said: "Uneasy?"
Hou Ziyu said: "If the other party is too good, you will always feel a little uneasy. If you want to try to catch up with the other party's footsteps, everyone will have such an idea, right?"
Su Yueyue came to understand a little bit, and said, "Then can I set a goal for the heroine, rise up for love, and strive to start a career of my own?"
Hou Ziyu said: "It's good if it's interesting. You see, even if I can't do anything, my partner is still good with me! Between people, the most important thing is feeling. There are thousands of outstanding people in the world. They I can't do it, what can I do!"
Su Yueyue was amused by him, and said, "What about you?"
Hou Ziyu said: "I have already found the best one!"
Su Yueyue thinks this person is very interesting, she has never seen such an upright show of affection, and the show is not annoying at all, like a little monkey rolling in the palm of her hand, she wants people to see him What else do you want to do.
Hou Ziyu said: "By the way, I saw Mr. An Chi help you make the character design before, but he has too little time. If necessary, I will help you complete the following, okay? I can also help you follow the outline!"
Su Yueyue also maintained the same respect for the great god's roommate, and this was her first reader fan, so she made a proof of it after being moved.
Hou Ziyu may not write well, but his vision is unique. In addition, he has been chasing Su Yueyue's essays, and he knows the characters in her book very well. There is no great master between the two of them. The estrangement between them was more like friends, and they were very happy to discuss, and they chatted for more than an hour without knowing it.
Being friends with a sunny and happy person, the feedback you get is also happy, and your mood gradually improves.
Hou Ziyu helped her follow a part of the outline, and continued the plot as if someone was chatting with her, pointing out what was more exciting, and Su Yueyue also slowly found her way.
Hou Ziyu encouraged her: "You have to keep writing, and you can't give up every book!"
Su Yueyue replied earnestly: "I know, I have to do it well from the beginning, and I will work hard."
Hou Ziyu looked at the line of words on the screen, stroked his chin for a while, and suddenly grinned.
He suddenly wanted to understand why he liked Su Yueyue so much. Maybe it was because she reflected her stubborn efforts on the characters in the novel. She was stupid, but she really worked hard!
Just like those hidden jades mentioned by the fat man, not everyone can see their light.
An Chijin has his own brilliance, but he has already flown too high to explain the roads he has traveled to a novice, and all the roads must be walked by himself in order to know the joys and sorrows, and to learn something. Receipt.
To only blindly learn skills is to take a shortcut. Maybe Su Yueyue is not a genius, but she is still improving slowly with hard work.
When Hou Ziyu saw her, it was like seeing those stubborn lights that were as weak as fireflies but refused to go out.
Be small and work hard, burn your own spark.
Hou Ziyu looked at the episode that Su Yueyue sent again, he thought for a while, and tried to think about the problem from An Chijin's point of view.
If it was Young Master An Chi, what would he do?
Hou Ziyu faced the computer screen, put his finger on it, and started typing.
His expression was rare and serious.
Perhaps Su Yueyue is not the only one who is working hard, he has to get serious, since he can't write so many articles, it's not bad to be a digger.
This time she handed in slower than before, but it wasn't that she didn't work hard, but spent more time thinking.This time I wrote very slowly, but my thinking was not as smooth as before.
When she handed it in by herself, she was a little confused.
Although I handed in a template-like framework, persona and outline, I always felt that something was wrong and not comprehensive enough.After handing it in, I didn't feel relieved. When I clicked the send button, I couldn't help but feel the urge to make some changes. I felt that the following plots or where might need to be adjusted.
The plot is unstable, just like a continental plate undergoing violent crustal movement, maybe one of them collapsed and wanted to drift to another new continent.
Su Yueyue sat in front of the computer and typed seriously, and said: "Master, I don't know what's going on, it seems that those people are about to jump out by themselves, my pen can't control that world, it's just describing...but it's not good .”
An Chijin replied: "It's considered an introduction, you can play freely, and the current stage is to accumulate experience."
Su Yueyue asked him: "Then master, how should I write now?"
An Chijin said: "That's your world, I can't make the decision, you can think about it before it's too late to start writing."
Su Yueyue was very excited, she was going to find a way to improve herself, and then she went to her big cousin Luo Tong, and asked for advice earnestly and humbly.
Luo Tong has only one suggestion for her: "Go to the library and have a look."
Su Yueyue packed her things, carried a small bag, notebook and water bottle and went to the library!
Then she lost her way on the road of writing.
The article written by Su Yueyue is still stuttering, but it has become transparent from a vacuum, and the only three messages have also become one. Needless to say, her article has rushed.
Su Yueyue insisted on looking up information in the library, but she still refused to give up.
Her ability to collect information was brought up by Luo Tong. Sometimes Luo Tong would just tell her what materials he needed, and she would sort them out.So Su Yueyue was at home in the library. The materials were well sorted and kept in a row at hand, but the more anxious she was, the more stuck her writing was. Obviously, the inspiration the library brought to her was also very limited.
Su Yueyue stayed in the library for three days and had a huge dark circle under her eyes.
When she opened her article column again, she suddenly saw a new message. The reader "monkeys are going to climb trees" asked her why she didn't update it today.
Only then did Su Yueyue belatedly realize that it was already evening, and she usually posted new chapters at noon, although there were few of them, she was still trying to update them every day.
She was depressed, but she still doted on the only wild reader left, and replied to him: "I'm sorry, I'm a little bit Calvin today..."
Monkey wants to climb a tree and soon left a message under her reply to encourage her, and enthusiastically wanted to help Su Yueyue build a readership.
Su Yueyue thought about it, and agreed.
The readership group was quickly established, and there were only the two of them in the group.
The monkey was about to climb the tree and sent a big smiling face over to say hello to her: "Hello, Su Yueyue! I like your book very much~ It's so well written^口^"
Su Yueyue was flattered, and replied: "Thank you, I still have a lot of bad writing, but I will work hard!"
The monkey wants to climb the tree: "I have made obvious progress! At the beginning, it was much worse than it is now^口^~"
Su Yueyue: "Huh??"
The monkey wants to climb the tree: "Oh, I forgot to introduce myself, my name is Hou Ziyu, I don't know if you still have any impression? I met you with God An Chi before, at Leo Tavern, and Hao Zhengwu Juju!"
Su Yueyue burst into tears, the only fan was not a wild one, she even knew her!
After Hou Ziyu revealed his identity, it was easy to continue the chat. He asked, "You haven't updated in the past few days. Are you collecting new materials?"
Su Yueyue said honestly: "It's not all, it feels like it's half written... Uh, the keel has collapsed?"
Hou Ziyu said: "The faith collapsed?"
Su Yueyue thought about it, and said: "It's a little bit. After the two people met, why can they be together and why can they love so passionately? confused."
Hou Ziyu said: "I talked! Let me help you!!"
Su Yueyue: "..."
Su Yueyue didn't really want to eat this bowl of dog food, but the other party enthusiastically stuffed it into her mouth.
Hou Ziyu said: "Actually, if you like someone, it's especially unreasonable, that is, you always chase his shadow in the crowd. When he speaks, you can hear every word even if you hold a book. Open your eyes When I saw him, I couldn't help laughing, and I wanted to do many interesting things with him!"
Su Yueyue asked him: "Then what's the biggest feeling from friends to lovers?"
Hou Ziyu said: "I'm so proud! My date is really good, really, every time I go out with him, I can't help but want to show it off!" He posted a cartoon emoji of a twisting little monkey, and quickly said: "But It will be a little disturbing!"
Su Yueyue said: "Uneasy?"
Hou Ziyu said: "If the other party is too good, you will always feel a little uneasy. If you want to try to catch up with the other party's footsteps, everyone will have such an idea, right?"
Su Yueyue came to understand a little bit, and said, "Then can I set a goal for the heroine, rise up for love, and strive to start a career of my own?"
Hou Ziyu said: "It's good if it's interesting. You see, even if I can't do anything, my partner is still good with me! Between people, the most important thing is feeling. There are thousands of outstanding people in the world. They I can't do it, what can I do!"
Su Yueyue was amused by him, and said, "What about you?"
Hou Ziyu said: "I have already found the best one!"
Su Yueyue thinks this person is very interesting, she has never seen such an upright show of affection, and the show is not annoying at all, like a little monkey rolling in the palm of her hand, she wants people to see him What else do you want to do.
Hou Ziyu said: "By the way, I saw Mr. An Chi help you make the character design before, but he has too little time. If necessary, I will help you complete the following, okay? I can also help you follow the outline!"
Su Yueyue also maintained the same respect for the great god's roommate, and this was her first reader fan, so she made a proof of it after being moved.
Hou Ziyu may not write well, but his vision is unique. In addition, he has been chasing Su Yueyue's essays, and he knows the characters in her book very well. There is no great master between the two of them. The estrangement between them was more like friends, and they were very happy to discuss, and they chatted for more than an hour without knowing it.
Being friends with a sunny and happy person, the feedback you get is also happy, and your mood gradually improves.
Hou Ziyu helped her follow a part of the outline, and continued the plot as if someone was chatting with her, pointing out what was more exciting, and Su Yueyue also slowly found her way.
Hou Ziyu encouraged her: "You have to keep writing, and you can't give up every book!"
Su Yueyue replied earnestly: "I know, I have to do it well from the beginning, and I will work hard."
Hou Ziyu looked at the line of words on the screen, stroked his chin for a while, and suddenly grinned.
He suddenly wanted to understand why he liked Su Yueyue so much. Maybe it was because she reflected her stubborn efforts on the characters in the novel. She was stupid, but she really worked hard!
Just like those hidden jades mentioned by the fat man, not everyone can see their light.
An Chijin has his own brilliance, but he has already flown too high to explain the roads he has traveled to a novice, and all the roads must be walked by himself in order to know the joys and sorrows, and to learn something. Receipt.
To only blindly learn skills is to take a shortcut. Maybe Su Yueyue is not a genius, but she is still improving slowly with hard work.
When Hou Ziyu saw her, it was like seeing those stubborn lights that were as weak as fireflies but refused to go out.
Be small and work hard, burn your own spark.
Hou Ziyu looked at the episode that Su Yueyue sent again, he thought for a while, and tried to think about the problem from An Chijin's point of view.
If it was Young Master An Chi, what would he do?
Hou Ziyu faced the computer screen, put his finger on it, and started typing.
His expression was rare and serious.
Perhaps Su Yueyue is not the only one who is working hard, he has to get serious, since he can't write so many articles, it's not bad to be a digger.
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