My tenant is really high street and rich
Chapter 4
The two ordered mandarin duck pot, Shen Wei's was spicy, Su Xingmang's was not.Shen Wei also thoughtfully helped Su Xingmang put the oil-proof cover on his mobile phone.
While waiting for the food to be served and the pot to be boiled, Shen Wei took the initiative to mention his essay: "My novel is a sports essay, about football, I wonder if you read it?"
"What kind of competition essay? It's too professional for me to read."
"Football."
"That's fine, fine."
Shen Wei took out his mobile phone, flicked it for a while, and handed it to Su Xingmang: "That's it."
Su Xingmang didn't notice the name of the article, but first noticed this phone, which is the latest model of Fruit.
Sure enough, he is someone who can afford a hot pot meal.
He saw the title of the article and the author's name at a second glance, "Front's Front", author: It's okay.
"I'll flip through it roughly first, and don't take a closer look. I'll look back and look slowly."
Just flipping through it like this, and when the soup pot was on the table and it was boiling, Su Xingmang had already seen the problem with this article.
"Brother Su, eat first, and watch after you finish eating."
Su Xingmang handed back the phone to Shen Wei, put some vegetables in the pot, and said, "I know why you can't sign the contract."
Shen Wei put down his chopsticks: "I'm all ears."
"Want to hear the truth?"
"of course."
"Online novels are all about Su Shuang, and women's novels add a sweet pet. Competitive essays also read a word of cool. If you want the kind of cheating, you need to look at the process of continuous upgrading and face-slapping. It’s cool enough, it’s hot enough. But what about you, it’s neither cool nor hot.”
"I also wrote about the process of the protagonist's upgrade, but it may not be exciting or exciting enough."
Is it more than cool enough?It's not cool at all, it's not burning at all!
Su Xingmang roared in his heart, but his tone was still very gentle: "Look at your opening article. The first thing you said was that the national football team has entered the World Cup, and they have qualified for the group stage. They are playing in the quarter-finals. The protagonist is the starting forward of the national football team. First of all This is too unrealistic at the beginning. If you are a fiction, you can write it as you like, but you are not a fiction, the starting point of the protagonist is so high and so unrealistic, how can you write later?"
Shen Wei smiled awkwardly: "I just want to write that his performance in the World Cup was very impressive, and he was spotted by a wealthy European club, so he went to play in Europe."
"But this is a very dramatic beginning, well, I understand your desire to give the protagonist a good start, but your beginning is not dreamy and imperfect, you see, Chapter 1 writes that he is in this one-eighth His performance in the finals was eye-catching. In Chapter 2, he was kicked maliciously by his opponent and suffered severe liver rupture. Then he underwent surgery, surgery, critical illness, and critical illness. Please, readers are here to watch the protagonist soar, no? Let’s see how unlucky he is! Even if the protagonist of some novels is unlucky at the beginning, he can be reborn or change his fate quickly. What about you, after this kind of liver rupture operation, at least you have to rest for half a year and can’t play? You let him How to change fate as soon as possible?"
Shen Wei stuffed a piece of mutton into his mouth and blinked at Su Xingmang: "Go on."
"And the heroine of Chapter 2 appeared. At this time, she and the hero are already in a relationship of boyfriend and girlfriend, which is very exciting. Readers who want to read the career line will see that the protagonist has suffered so much at the beginning. Obviously, you won’t be able to see his performance on the court in a short period of time, and you may lose your patience. Readers who want to read the relationship line, see that the two are already in love at the beginning, what else is left to do? What did you watch? What you watched was how to soar in career and how to warm up emotionally! It’s good for you to block both lines.”
Shen Wei thought for a while, and explained unwillingly: "I did not write about the protagonist's performance on the court in the entire first volume, because he had to recuperate, but I also wrote a lot of things related to the game. As for the heroine, so I have been with the hero for a long time, there will definitely be twists and turns in the future."
"How many words are there in your first volume?"
"20 million words."
"20 words?!" Su Xingmang could no longer maintain a calm tone, "Your essay is 20 words, and the protagonist still hasn't played in the game? Which reader has so much patience waiting to see him grow up slowly? Injuries? There are also emotional lines, readers who will know that there will be twists and turns in the future, and who will know when they will see their twists and turns after exhausting their patience? Besides, are you sure that twists and turns must be what readers want to see? Maybe readers will see you say It’s going to be twists and turns, and I still feel like I was suddenly fed a pile of shit by you.”
When he talked about feeding shit, Shen Wei was eating Flammulina velutipes and almost choked on it.Su Xingmang also realized that it was inappropriate for him to say this at the dinner table, he cleared his throat and said, "I'm sorry, I used the wrong words, but you really can't do it like this, and you will definitely not be able to sign the contract."
If it is written like this, who will rush to the street if he doesn't?
Shen Wei swallowed the food in his mouth with difficulty, and said, "You mean that this novel can't be saved, right? Then would you like to read my new article?"
"I'll go back and look at the content behind you to see if I can salvage another one. If the content of the game behind is okay, you can cut off the 20 words of insignificant content in the front. As for the emotional line, you must not let it go. They became lovers at the beginning, but they have to be ambiguous and then ambiguous, always flirtatious, but it is not until the end that the relationship is confirmed."
Shen Wei nodded and said: "Okay. Brother Su, tell the truth, does this novel make you unable to read it?"
"Actually, your writing is not bad. In some places, you have written some tender moments on the football field, but the whole structure and rhythm are too problematic. To be honest, if I didn't know you, I would have seen Chapter 1 of this novel so much. People will give up at the beginning of the show." Looking at Shen Wei's somewhat sad expression, Su Xingmang said again, "My words may be rough, don't mind."
"I don't mind, I don't mind." Shen Wei put some mutton slices and fat beef slices into Su Xingmang's white pot with his chopsticks, "Eat first, and then help me to read my new article after eating." ?”
"How many words have you written in the new article?"
"There are more than [-] words, and I have applied for a visa several times but have not passed it."
Needless to say, it must be a problem with his own writing.
If an online writer like him writes full-time, he must starve himself to death.
Thinking about it, I suddenly realized something was wrong, today is not the weekend, but Shen Wei can still enjoy leisurely at home?
"Why didn't you go to work today?" He asked tentatively.
"I...yes, I didn't go." Shen Wei's answer was not so smooth.
"What do you do for a job? Can you not be on duty?"
Shen Wei stammered again: "I... I'm too embarrassed to say, I'm... just staying at home to write articles, but I'm ashamed that I can't even sign the contract."
Do you really write full-time? !
Su Xingmang couldn't believe his ears. The handsome guy in front of him couldn't sign the contract after writing more than 70 words. Who gave him the courage to write full-time at home? !
"Then you... now you don't have any royalties if you don't sign a contract. What do you live on?" Su Xingmang thought of his apartment and the pile of food in the apartment when he asked this question. Pets are better than people.
Shen Weizheng picked up the glass to drink water, lightly touched the rim of the glass with his lips, looked at the water in the glass and smiled, put down the glass and said: "I still have some money to gnaw on."
"Then what if... the old book is finished?" Su Xingmang was a little worried about his future.
"There is always something else I can eat. There must be a way for the car to reach the mountain. I am not too worried about money." Shen Wei was a little embarrassed, but also relaxed, and he really didn't see anything wrong. The look of stress.
Su Xingmang wondered what he meant when he said "there are other things for him to gnaw on", looked at the mobile phone in his hand, and felt that he was probably going to gnaw on the old man, and felt a little bit sorry for the second elder who had never met .
After a pause, he said, "Yes, if it doesn't work, you can go back to work."
Shen Wei laughed lightly: "There is no such thing as 'really impossible', I have to make achievements in writing essays."
Su Xingmang was taken aback: "You mean, you still have to sign a contract and earn a lot of royalties? Otherwise, you wouldn't look for another job?"
"You can say that."
Su Xingmang was worried for him, why is this kid so awkward?
"I don't think you can do it like this." Su Xingmang said, "Many online writers first write articles part-time. After they have enough readers and achieved certain results, they will consider full-time writing. Writing essays. It is very dangerous for you to give up your job first and then write essays. It is normal for you to fail to achieve results in a year and a half. In case you still can’t reach the height you want to achieve in two or three years, you still don’t have a stable Income, what do you do?"
Just because his competitive novel is so bad and he still doesn't know it, obviously he hasn't got the hang of writing yet, and he can't be expected to have a lot of writing fees immediately, so he will still eat a lot of money. Old book of time.
What if my parents are eaten up after eating my money?
Now I can still use the latest fruit phone, buy the best cat and dog food for cats and dogs, and rent an apartment with a monthly rent of more than 6000. What about in the future?
Thinking of this, he felt that his apartment could no longer be rented to him, and he didn't want to be owed rent one day.
After deciding to go to the police station to report the case, he made it clear to Shen Wei that he wanted to take back the house.
Once he made up his mind, he became more relaxed, chatting and chatting with Shen Weidong, this hot pot meal was very comfortable and comfortable.
I have to say that the kid Shen Wei is quite likable, he can talk, but he is not too chatty, and the two of them can chat quite well, if you don't consider his house full of pets and his really annoying Qian Jing was worried, but he was willing to continue the relationship between landlord and tenant, and even become friends with him.
After eating the hot pot, Su Xingmang scrambled to pay the bill, but was stopped by Shen Wei: "Brother Su, I've already paid. It's a stored-value card, and the boss has already deducted the money from the card."
"Then how much did the boss deduct? I'll give it to you." Su Xingmang was short-tempered, and Su Xingmang was afraid that if he ate his meal, he would lose face and take back the house.
"It's not much money. I've agreed to ask for it, but you don't want to give it away. Let's go and report the crime."
Shen Wei's car is a very ordinary family car, which is about [-] yuan, but Su Xingmang feels that this [-] yuan car is also a luxury for the current Shen Future.
The two soon arrived at the police station. The policeman in charge of registration at the door let out a yo when he heard the name of the agency, and turned to his colleagues around him, "There are two more. How many landlords and tenants did this agency cheat?"
While waiting for the food to be served and the pot to be boiled, Shen Wei took the initiative to mention his essay: "My novel is a sports essay, about football, I wonder if you read it?"
"What kind of competition essay? It's too professional for me to read."
"Football."
"That's fine, fine."
Shen Wei took out his mobile phone, flicked it for a while, and handed it to Su Xingmang: "That's it."
Su Xingmang didn't notice the name of the article, but first noticed this phone, which is the latest model of Fruit.
Sure enough, he is someone who can afford a hot pot meal.
He saw the title of the article and the author's name at a second glance, "Front's Front", author: It's okay.
"I'll flip through it roughly first, and don't take a closer look. I'll look back and look slowly."
Just flipping through it like this, and when the soup pot was on the table and it was boiling, Su Xingmang had already seen the problem with this article.
"Brother Su, eat first, and watch after you finish eating."
Su Xingmang handed back the phone to Shen Wei, put some vegetables in the pot, and said, "I know why you can't sign the contract."
Shen Wei put down his chopsticks: "I'm all ears."
"Want to hear the truth?"
"of course."
"Online novels are all about Su Shuang, and women's novels add a sweet pet. Competitive essays also read a word of cool. If you want the kind of cheating, you need to look at the process of continuous upgrading and face-slapping. It’s cool enough, it’s hot enough. But what about you, it’s neither cool nor hot.”
"I also wrote about the process of the protagonist's upgrade, but it may not be exciting or exciting enough."
Is it more than cool enough?It's not cool at all, it's not burning at all!
Su Xingmang roared in his heart, but his tone was still very gentle: "Look at your opening article. The first thing you said was that the national football team has entered the World Cup, and they have qualified for the group stage. They are playing in the quarter-finals. The protagonist is the starting forward of the national football team. First of all This is too unrealistic at the beginning. If you are a fiction, you can write it as you like, but you are not a fiction, the starting point of the protagonist is so high and so unrealistic, how can you write later?"
Shen Wei smiled awkwardly: "I just want to write that his performance in the World Cup was very impressive, and he was spotted by a wealthy European club, so he went to play in Europe."
"But this is a very dramatic beginning, well, I understand your desire to give the protagonist a good start, but your beginning is not dreamy and imperfect, you see, Chapter 1 writes that he is in this one-eighth His performance in the finals was eye-catching. In Chapter 2, he was kicked maliciously by his opponent and suffered severe liver rupture. Then he underwent surgery, surgery, critical illness, and critical illness. Please, readers are here to watch the protagonist soar, no? Let’s see how unlucky he is! Even if the protagonist of some novels is unlucky at the beginning, he can be reborn or change his fate quickly. What about you, after this kind of liver rupture operation, at least you have to rest for half a year and can’t play? You let him How to change fate as soon as possible?"
Shen Wei stuffed a piece of mutton into his mouth and blinked at Su Xingmang: "Go on."
"And the heroine of Chapter 2 appeared. At this time, she and the hero are already in a relationship of boyfriend and girlfriend, which is very exciting. Readers who want to read the career line will see that the protagonist has suffered so much at the beginning. Obviously, you won’t be able to see his performance on the court in a short period of time, and you may lose your patience. Readers who want to read the relationship line, see that the two are already in love at the beginning, what else is left to do? What did you watch? What you watched was how to soar in career and how to warm up emotionally! It’s good for you to block both lines.”
Shen Wei thought for a while, and explained unwillingly: "I did not write about the protagonist's performance on the court in the entire first volume, because he had to recuperate, but I also wrote a lot of things related to the game. As for the heroine, so I have been with the hero for a long time, there will definitely be twists and turns in the future."
"How many words are there in your first volume?"
"20 million words."
"20 words?!" Su Xingmang could no longer maintain a calm tone, "Your essay is 20 words, and the protagonist still hasn't played in the game? Which reader has so much patience waiting to see him grow up slowly? Injuries? There are also emotional lines, readers who will know that there will be twists and turns in the future, and who will know when they will see their twists and turns after exhausting their patience? Besides, are you sure that twists and turns must be what readers want to see? Maybe readers will see you say It’s going to be twists and turns, and I still feel like I was suddenly fed a pile of shit by you.”
When he talked about feeding shit, Shen Wei was eating Flammulina velutipes and almost choked on it.Su Xingmang also realized that it was inappropriate for him to say this at the dinner table, he cleared his throat and said, "I'm sorry, I used the wrong words, but you really can't do it like this, and you will definitely not be able to sign the contract."
If it is written like this, who will rush to the street if he doesn't?
Shen Wei swallowed the food in his mouth with difficulty, and said, "You mean that this novel can't be saved, right? Then would you like to read my new article?"
"I'll go back and look at the content behind you to see if I can salvage another one. If the content of the game behind is okay, you can cut off the 20 words of insignificant content in the front. As for the emotional line, you must not let it go. They became lovers at the beginning, but they have to be ambiguous and then ambiguous, always flirtatious, but it is not until the end that the relationship is confirmed."
Shen Wei nodded and said: "Okay. Brother Su, tell the truth, does this novel make you unable to read it?"
"Actually, your writing is not bad. In some places, you have written some tender moments on the football field, but the whole structure and rhythm are too problematic. To be honest, if I didn't know you, I would have seen Chapter 1 of this novel so much. People will give up at the beginning of the show." Looking at Shen Wei's somewhat sad expression, Su Xingmang said again, "My words may be rough, don't mind."
"I don't mind, I don't mind." Shen Wei put some mutton slices and fat beef slices into Su Xingmang's white pot with his chopsticks, "Eat first, and then help me to read my new article after eating." ?”
"How many words have you written in the new article?"
"There are more than [-] words, and I have applied for a visa several times but have not passed it."
Needless to say, it must be a problem with his own writing.
If an online writer like him writes full-time, he must starve himself to death.
Thinking about it, I suddenly realized something was wrong, today is not the weekend, but Shen Wei can still enjoy leisurely at home?
"Why didn't you go to work today?" He asked tentatively.
"I...yes, I didn't go." Shen Wei's answer was not so smooth.
"What do you do for a job? Can you not be on duty?"
Shen Wei stammered again: "I... I'm too embarrassed to say, I'm... just staying at home to write articles, but I'm ashamed that I can't even sign the contract."
Do you really write full-time? !
Su Xingmang couldn't believe his ears. The handsome guy in front of him couldn't sign the contract after writing more than 70 words. Who gave him the courage to write full-time at home? !
"Then you... now you don't have any royalties if you don't sign a contract. What do you live on?" Su Xingmang thought of his apartment and the pile of food in the apartment when he asked this question. Pets are better than people.
Shen Weizheng picked up the glass to drink water, lightly touched the rim of the glass with his lips, looked at the water in the glass and smiled, put down the glass and said: "I still have some money to gnaw on."
"Then what if... the old book is finished?" Su Xingmang was a little worried about his future.
"There is always something else I can eat. There must be a way for the car to reach the mountain. I am not too worried about money." Shen Wei was a little embarrassed, but also relaxed, and he really didn't see anything wrong. The look of stress.
Su Xingmang wondered what he meant when he said "there are other things for him to gnaw on", looked at the mobile phone in his hand, and felt that he was probably going to gnaw on the old man, and felt a little bit sorry for the second elder who had never met .
After a pause, he said, "Yes, if it doesn't work, you can go back to work."
Shen Wei laughed lightly: "There is no such thing as 'really impossible', I have to make achievements in writing essays."
Su Xingmang was taken aback: "You mean, you still have to sign a contract and earn a lot of royalties? Otherwise, you wouldn't look for another job?"
"You can say that."
Su Xingmang was worried for him, why is this kid so awkward?
"I don't think you can do it like this." Su Xingmang said, "Many online writers first write articles part-time. After they have enough readers and achieved certain results, they will consider full-time writing. Writing essays. It is very dangerous for you to give up your job first and then write essays. It is normal for you to fail to achieve results in a year and a half. In case you still can’t reach the height you want to achieve in two or three years, you still don’t have a stable Income, what do you do?"
Just because his competitive novel is so bad and he still doesn't know it, obviously he hasn't got the hang of writing yet, and he can't be expected to have a lot of writing fees immediately, so he will still eat a lot of money. Old book of time.
What if my parents are eaten up after eating my money?
Now I can still use the latest fruit phone, buy the best cat and dog food for cats and dogs, and rent an apartment with a monthly rent of more than 6000. What about in the future?
Thinking of this, he felt that his apartment could no longer be rented to him, and he didn't want to be owed rent one day.
After deciding to go to the police station to report the case, he made it clear to Shen Wei that he wanted to take back the house.
Once he made up his mind, he became more relaxed, chatting and chatting with Shen Weidong, this hot pot meal was very comfortable and comfortable.
I have to say that the kid Shen Wei is quite likable, he can talk, but he is not too chatty, and the two of them can chat quite well, if you don't consider his house full of pets and his really annoying Qian Jing was worried, but he was willing to continue the relationship between landlord and tenant, and even become friends with him.
After eating the hot pot, Su Xingmang scrambled to pay the bill, but was stopped by Shen Wei: "Brother Su, I've already paid. It's a stored-value card, and the boss has already deducted the money from the card."
"Then how much did the boss deduct? I'll give it to you." Su Xingmang was short-tempered, and Su Xingmang was afraid that if he ate his meal, he would lose face and take back the house.
"It's not much money. I've agreed to ask for it, but you don't want to give it away. Let's go and report the crime."
Shen Wei's car is a very ordinary family car, which is about [-] yuan, but Su Xingmang feels that this [-] yuan car is also a luxury for the current Shen Future.
The two soon arrived at the police station. The policeman in charge of registration at the door let out a yo when he heard the name of the agency, and turned to his colleagues around him, "There are two more. How many landlords and tenants did this agency cheat?"
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