My tenant is really high street and rich
Chapter 5
The police who received the police asked clearly that one of them was a landlord and the other was a tenant, and said, "One of you two should report the crime and follow me in to make a statement. Who will report?"
Su Xingmang looked at Shen Wei: "Why don't you report it, after all, you are still living here now."
Shen Wei nodded, and followed the police into the room. Su Xingmang was waiting for him in the lobby lounge, just in time to take out his phone and want to continue reading Shen Wei's novel.
I found the article "Front of the Frontier", just after reading a few words, I wanted to read the new article by Shen Wei, so I clicked on the author's column and saw another article, a fast-moving article.
Sure enough, there are more than [-] words, and the number of collections is dismal, and there are very few comments.
Just about to see how bad this article can be, Shen Wei has already come out.
"Why so fast?" Su Xingmang was very surprised.
"It hasn't started yet. Let me go outside to copy various materials, such as lease contracts, receipts, and ID cards."
"Then I'll go with you." Su Xingmang stood up.
"No, you can rest here for a while, and you can read what I wrote again and give me some advice." There were other people in the hall, and Shen Weimai was ashamed to say the word novel, but turned around Smiling and walking out.
The afternoon sun just shone on the entrance of the hall, and Shen Wei's smile looked extraordinarily warm and bright under the sun. Su Xingmang couldn't look away, half admiring and half envious, sighing in his heart how good it is to be young again.
Sit down again, and continue to read the quick time travel article. After reading several chapters, it has been the sad reminder of the protagonist's daily life, and I haven't seen any signs of time travel.
Could this opening be the first world after time travel?Now many quick travel articles are written in this way, because few readers would like to read the real world of the original owner before time travel.
But it seems that the protagonist is still so miserable and aggrieved, when will he be refreshed enough to stand up and slap him in the face?
After jumping back and looking a little bit, he still couldn't see the refreshing plot that made him feel happy, so he decided to abandon the article first.
Wait for Shen Wei to come back and ask him about the framework and outline of this article. Let’s re-read that football article now.
He skipped the first volume and skipped directly to the second volume, which is the volume where the protagonist finally returns to the court after recovering from his injury.
The second volume is still well written, quite satisfactory, and the description of the game scene and process can also be seen that he knows the ball very well. The process of describing the protagonist's integration into the team and slowly gaining the trust of his teammates is also in place. The various emotional changes are quite delicate and moving. The only thing that is lacking is that the rendering before the competition is not in place, and it cannot arouse the readers' expectations to the maximum extent. After the description of the competition, it is difficult to give readers the greatest sense of satisfaction. .In other words, it's still not cool enough, not burning enough, but it's much better than what I saw at the beginning.
Just thinking about how to revise his novel, Shen Wei had already copied the materials and came back. He also brought back two cups of hot and fragrant coffee. He handed one cup to him, and then he took a cup himself and wanted to push the heavy door open again. I went in to take notes, but was stopped and told to wait outside.
Shen Wei turned around and sat down beside Su Xingmang: "I don't know how long I have to wait." After a pause, he continued, "I wanted to make a phone call to ask what kind of coffee you like to drink, but which one The small store only has lattes, there is no choice at all, so I just bought it."
"It's okay, I like latte too, thank you." Su Xingmang was feeling drowsy, and the coffee came just in time.At this moment, he had already taken several sips, and the afternoon sun and coffee warmed his whole body. He turned his head and asked Shen Wei: "You just bought it like this, what if I don't drink coffee?"
Shen Wei was stunned: "You should drink it, I see that on the contract you sent me to see, there is a page with coffee stains, which must have been accidentally put on it by you, so I just..."
Su Xingmang's heart warmed up, and he said with a smile: "It might be that someone else spilled it on my contract, in case I'm the kind of person who doesn't drink coffee..."
"That's okay. If you don't drink it, I'll drink two. Anyway, it won't be wasted."
Su Xingmang laughed, pulled out Shen Wei's new article on his phone, and asked him: "Your fast-traveling article, why have I read it so much that I still don't quite understand it, is it before time-traveling or time-traveling?" The first world after that?"
"Haven't crossed yet, still in the protagonist's own real world."
Su Xingmang almost sprayed a mouthful of coffee on his hands: "Haven't crossed yet? Hurry up and write about the real world with so many protagonists? Who will read it?"
Shen Wei looked innocent: "I think the previous part is very necessary, because the protagonist will return to his real world in the end, so this part has a lot of foreshadowing, and many background things are not explained. Now that it’s clear, I don’t think I can continue writing.”
Su Xingmang almost felt that he couldn't hold the coffee in his hand anymore, and finally managed to stabilize, and began to earnestly said: "Quickly wear the text, fast wear the text, the first point is to put it on, and the second point is to put it on quickly. It’s based on the words Kuai and Chuan. You’ve been scratching your head for so many words that you haven’t started wearing it yet, and you’re still stuck at the wedge stage. Who has the time to read it? Let me tell you, your Kuaichuan article needs major revisions. , if you don’t change it, there is no need to write it down, and if you continue to write it, there will be no good results.”
Shen Wei still tried to explain, but in the end he just asked humbly: "Then... how do you think it should be changed?"
"The content before time travel is extremely simplified, or even completely deleted. It is the first world after time travel, and a little bit of background content before time travel is interspersed in this world."
Shen Wei drank his coffee in silence, his impeccable profile and thoughtful expression made Su Xingmang feel a bit of regret.
Would it hurt his self-esteem and confidence to tell so much truth to such a handsome young man?
Suddenly wanting to make up for it, he said eagerly: "I read a lot of the content of your football article just now, and I actually think it's not bad. Some parts are quite poignant to me. The content of the first volume in the front Change it, especially the beginning change, I think that article can be saved. And after all, the article is already 60 words, you may be able to sign a contract after changing it, and you will soon be paid for the manuscript.”
Shen Wei was unwilling to retaliate: "But I think the content of the first volume is also very important, what should I do if I am reluctant to delete it?"
"I didn't ask you to delete all of them. You can pick out a part of the content and intersperse it in the following chapters. Besides, there is nothing to be reluctant to do. When necessary, you must delete it."
Shen Wei pondered for a moment and then suddenly smiled: "I seem to have a clue, I probably know how to change it, thank you, Brother Su, I will be the first to send it to you for review after I am done!"
So you know how to change it?I hope it doesn't get worse and worse.
Su Xingmang wanted to make some more specific suggestions. A policeman opened the door, looked around the hall, pointed at Shen Wei and said, "Come in."
Su Xingmang stayed in the lobby to wait for him again, and out of boredom, he simply wrote down the opinions and suggestions he wanted to give to Shen Wei on his mobile phone one by one, and sent them to Shen Wei's WeChat.
He is busy taking notes at the moment, so he probably doesn't have time to read WeChat. Unexpectedly, Shen Wei responded in seconds: "Thank you very much, Mr. Su, for your valuable advice. I'll take a good look when I go back."
Su Xingmang was called by Mr. Su every day, but being typed by Shen Wei made him feel more responsible.
If you don't help Shen Wei improve the article and sign the contract, you will be sorry for the title of Teacher Su.
After waiting for half an hour, Shen Wei finally came out with a relaxed expression: "Okay, this matter is finally resolved, now we can talk about our contract renewal?"
"Contract renewal?"
Shen did not change his words: "It's not called a contract renewal, should we be asked to sign a new contract?"
Although it was very difficult to speak, Su Xingmang said, "Sorry, I can no longer rent this house to you."
Shen Wei was a little surprised, but not too surprised: "You still can't accept my cats and dogs, can you? I promise you that it will really not disturb the people or cause other troubles. Otherwise, once there are neighbors Complain that my pet is a nuisance, and I will move out immediately. If no one complains, you can let me continue to live in it. I really think that house is destined for me, and I don’t want to move.”
Shen Wei's eyes were pure and eager, and for a moment Su Xingmang felt that it was too much of a fuss to resolutely take back the house because of the pet issue?Because I am afraid that he will have no source of income, spend money lavishly, and fear that he will not be able to pay the rent. Isn't it too unreasonable to worry about it?
The words of refusal were really hard to say, so he just lied casually: "Actually, it's not all about pets. I kind of want to take this house back and live in it myself." Seeing Shen Wei's obviously puzzled expression, he seized the time to save his life. Lie thought of a seemingly reasonable reason, "It's like this, I run an art training institution, and I want to open a branch near here by the end of the year, and I want to open it as soon as possible to catch up with the wave of training during the winter vacation. I will spend my time and energy mainly on the branch here, so I don’t want to travel all the way back and forth every day, I just want to take this apartment back and live in it myself, but at that time I had already signed a two-year contract with the agency, so I was not good Immediately break the contract. Now that the agent has run away, the contract with the agent is considered void, and I don’t intend to rent it out anymore.”
Shen Wei didn't say anything for a while, and Su Xingmang didn't think about how to continue talking, and the two fell into an awkward silence.
It was still Shen Weixian who laughed softly: "But Brother Su, I have already paid three months' rent, do you want me to move out immediately?"
Su Xingmang didn't dare to look him in the eyes: "If it's convenient for you to move now, that's the best. I can refund the rest of the rent to you."
Shen Wei still stared at him, with a faint smile: "Is it just a refund of the remaining rent? Don't you have to pay liquidated damages if you drive me away halfway?"
Su Xingmang looked at Shen Wei: "Why don't you report it, after all, you are still living here now."
Shen Wei nodded, and followed the police into the room. Su Xingmang was waiting for him in the lobby lounge, just in time to take out his phone and want to continue reading Shen Wei's novel.
I found the article "Front of the Frontier", just after reading a few words, I wanted to read the new article by Shen Wei, so I clicked on the author's column and saw another article, a fast-moving article.
Sure enough, there are more than [-] words, and the number of collections is dismal, and there are very few comments.
Just about to see how bad this article can be, Shen Wei has already come out.
"Why so fast?" Su Xingmang was very surprised.
"It hasn't started yet. Let me go outside to copy various materials, such as lease contracts, receipts, and ID cards."
"Then I'll go with you." Su Xingmang stood up.
"No, you can rest here for a while, and you can read what I wrote again and give me some advice." There were other people in the hall, and Shen Weimai was ashamed to say the word novel, but turned around Smiling and walking out.
The afternoon sun just shone on the entrance of the hall, and Shen Wei's smile looked extraordinarily warm and bright under the sun. Su Xingmang couldn't look away, half admiring and half envious, sighing in his heart how good it is to be young again.
Sit down again, and continue to read the quick time travel article. After reading several chapters, it has been the sad reminder of the protagonist's daily life, and I haven't seen any signs of time travel.
Could this opening be the first world after time travel?Now many quick travel articles are written in this way, because few readers would like to read the real world of the original owner before time travel.
But it seems that the protagonist is still so miserable and aggrieved, when will he be refreshed enough to stand up and slap him in the face?
After jumping back and looking a little bit, he still couldn't see the refreshing plot that made him feel happy, so he decided to abandon the article first.
Wait for Shen Wei to come back and ask him about the framework and outline of this article. Let’s re-read that football article now.
He skipped the first volume and skipped directly to the second volume, which is the volume where the protagonist finally returns to the court after recovering from his injury.
The second volume is still well written, quite satisfactory, and the description of the game scene and process can also be seen that he knows the ball very well. The process of describing the protagonist's integration into the team and slowly gaining the trust of his teammates is also in place. The various emotional changes are quite delicate and moving. The only thing that is lacking is that the rendering before the competition is not in place, and it cannot arouse the readers' expectations to the maximum extent. After the description of the competition, it is difficult to give readers the greatest sense of satisfaction. .In other words, it's still not cool enough, not burning enough, but it's much better than what I saw at the beginning.
Just thinking about how to revise his novel, Shen Wei had already copied the materials and came back. He also brought back two cups of hot and fragrant coffee. He handed one cup to him, and then he took a cup himself and wanted to push the heavy door open again. I went in to take notes, but was stopped and told to wait outside.
Shen Wei turned around and sat down beside Su Xingmang: "I don't know how long I have to wait." After a pause, he continued, "I wanted to make a phone call to ask what kind of coffee you like to drink, but which one The small store only has lattes, there is no choice at all, so I just bought it."
"It's okay, I like latte too, thank you." Su Xingmang was feeling drowsy, and the coffee came just in time.At this moment, he had already taken several sips, and the afternoon sun and coffee warmed his whole body. He turned his head and asked Shen Wei: "You just bought it like this, what if I don't drink coffee?"
Shen Wei was stunned: "You should drink it, I see that on the contract you sent me to see, there is a page with coffee stains, which must have been accidentally put on it by you, so I just..."
Su Xingmang's heart warmed up, and he said with a smile: "It might be that someone else spilled it on my contract, in case I'm the kind of person who doesn't drink coffee..."
"That's okay. If you don't drink it, I'll drink two. Anyway, it won't be wasted."
Su Xingmang laughed, pulled out Shen Wei's new article on his phone, and asked him: "Your fast-traveling article, why have I read it so much that I still don't quite understand it, is it before time-traveling or time-traveling?" The first world after that?"
"Haven't crossed yet, still in the protagonist's own real world."
Su Xingmang almost sprayed a mouthful of coffee on his hands: "Haven't crossed yet? Hurry up and write about the real world with so many protagonists? Who will read it?"
Shen Wei looked innocent: "I think the previous part is very necessary, because the protagonist will return to his real world in the end, so this part has a lot of foreshadowing, and many background things are not explained. Now that it’s clear, I don’t think I can continue writing.”
Su Xingmang almost felt that he couldn't hold the coffee in his hand anymore, and finally managed to stabilize, and began to earnestly said: "Quickly wear the text, fast wear the text, the first point is to put it on, and the second point is to put it on quickly. It’s based on the words Kuai and Chuan. You’ve been scratching your head for so many words that you haven’t started wearing it yet, and you’re still stuck at the wedge stage. Who has the time to read it? Let me tell you, your Kuaichuan article needs major revisions. , if you don’t change it, there is no need to write it down, and if you continue to write it, there will be no good results.”
Shen Wei still tried to explain, but in the end he just asked humbly: "Then... how do you think it should be changed?"
"The content before time travel is extremely simplified, or even completely deleted. It is the first world after time travel, and a little bit of background content before time travel is interspersed in this world."
Shen Wei drank his coffee in silence, his impeccable profile and thoughtful expression made Su Xingmang feel a bit of regret.
Would it hurt his self-esteem and confidence to tell so much truth to such a handsome young man?
Suddenly wanting to make up for it, he said eagerly: "I read a lot of the content of your football article just now, and I actually think it's not bad. Some parts are quite poignant to me. The content of the first volume in the front Change it, especially the beginning change, I think that article can be saved. And after all, the article is already 60 words, you may be able to sign a contract after changing it, and you will soon be paid for the manuscript.”
Shen Wei was unwilling to retaliate: "But I think the content of the first volume is also very important, what should I do if I am reluctant to delete it?"
"I didn't ask you to delete all of them. You can pick out a part of the content and intersperse it in the following chapters. Besides, there is nothing to be reluctant to do. When necessary, you must delete it."
Shen Wei pondered for a moment and then suddenly smiled: "I seem to have a clue, I probably know how to change it, thank you, Brother Su, I will be the first to send it to you for review after I am done!"
So you know how to change it?I hope it doesn't get worse and worse.
Su Xingmang wanted to make some more specific suggestions. A policeman opened the door, looked around the hall, pointed at Shen Wei and said, "Come in."
Su Xingmang stayed in the lobby to wait for him again, and out of boredom, he simply wrote down the opinions and suggestions he wanted to give to Shen Wei on his mobile phone one by one, and sent them to Shen Wei's WeChat.
He is busy taking notes at the moment, so he probably doesn't have time to read WeChat. Unexpectedly, Shen Wei responded in seconds: "Thank you very much, Mr. Su, for your valuable advice. I'll take a good look when I go back."
Su Xingmang was called by Mr. Su every day, but being typed by Shen Wei made him feel more responsible.
If you don't help Shen Wei improve the article and sign the contract, you will be sorry for the title of Teacher Su.
After waiting for half an hour, Shen Wei finally came out with a relaxed expression: "Okay, this matter is finally resolved, now we can talk about our contract renewal?"
"Contract renewal?"
Shen did not change his words: "It's not called a contract renewal, should we be asked to sign a new contract?"
Although it was very difficult to speak, Su Xingmang said, "Sorry, I can no longer rent this house to you."
Shen Wei was a little surprised, but not too surprised: "You still can't accept my cats and dogs, can you? I promise you that it will really not disturb the people or cause other troubles. Otherwise, once there are neighbors Complain that my pet is a nuisance, and I will move out immediately. If no one complains, you can let me continue to live in it. I really think that house is destined for me, and I don’t want to move.”
Shen Wei's eyes were pure and eager, and for a moment Su Xingmang felt that it was too much of a fuss to resolutely take back the house because of the pet issue?Because I am afraid that he will have no source of income, spend money lavishly, and fear that he will not be able to pay the rent. Isn't it too unreasonable to worry about it?
The words of refusal were really hard to say, so he just lied casually: "Actually, it's not all about pets. I kind of want to take this house back and live in it myself." Seeing Shen Wei's obviously puzzled expression, he seized the time to save his life. Lie thought of a seemingly reasonable reason, "It's like this, I run an art training institution, and I want to open a branch near here by the end of the year, and I want to open it as soon as possible to catch up with the wave of training during the winter vacation. I will spend my time and energy mainly on the branch here, so I don’t want to travel all the way back and forth every day, I just want to take this apartment back and live in it myself, but at that time I had already signed a two-year contract with the agency, so I was not good Immediately break the contract. Now that the agent has run away, the contract with the agent is considered void, and I don’t intend to rent it out anymore.”
Shen Wei didn't say anything for a while, and Su Xingmang didn't think about how to continue talking, and the two fell into an awkward silence.
It was still Shen Weixian who laughed softly: "But Brother Su, I have already paid three months' rent, do you want me to move out immediately?"
Su Xingmang didn't dare to look him in the eyes: "If it's convenient for you to move now, that's the best. I can refund the rest of the rent to you."
Shen Wei still stared at him, with a faint smile: "Is it just a refund of the remaining rent? Don't you have to pay liquidated damages if you drive me away halfway?"
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