I am bound to the comic forum and changed the original work [comprehensive]

After leaving the world of "Gintama", all the contents on "JUMP" were emptied.

Wanting to know the forum's tolerance for "manga existence", Yuan Qikong asked Qiao Wei to draw a few paintings of the original work.

Painting is Qiao Wei's specialty.

Because of the shock brought to her by the top war, coupled with the timeline of the war, she draws all the classic shots of the top war that remain in her mind.

However, the completed paintings were not forcibly emptied.

After probing, Genji Sora understood that all outside items and things related to comics are absolutely forbidden.

But paintings through their hands are allowed to exist.

Compared with the previous situation that could not be mentioned by the source dispatching airlift, the management is much more slack.

Perhaps there is a reason why all the members of the Longshou already know the truth.

Yuan Chikong glanced at Qiao Wei and Bailey.

Bailey stood on Qiao Wei's shoulders.

One person and one bird clenched their fists at the same time and made a cheering gesture. Qiao Wei retreated outside the door, closed half of the door, and observed them secretly from the crack of the door.

Yuan Qiankong: "..."

His eyebrows twitched, Yuan Qiankong took a step forward, and said cautiously: "Hello?"

Ace bowed his head and said nothing.

Yuan Qiankong called twice more, but the young man who was severely hit still did not respond.

After being silent for a while, Yuan Qiankong simply stepped forward to put away the pile of paintings on the table, and the wood-like young man immediately raised his head to snatch it.

But his arm went through the paper.

Ace looked at his hands in confusion, and then remembered that he was dead.

"Hello, Portgas D. Ace, welcome to the Dragon Hunt."

Ace, who heard his name, looked up at Yuan Qiankong, and pointed at the paper in his hand eagerly: "That! Daddy!"

"That's the end."

Minamoto Sora's words shattered all of Ace's luck.

That picture has been deeply imprinted in his mind.

The strongest man in the world, even if he dies, he will die standing up.

"Father...everyone..."

Ace squatted down, crossed his fingers into a fist against his forehead, and his voice was full of despair.

Yuan Qiankong waited quietly for a while, then opened the door with a pen and paper.

Qiao Wei and Bailey, who were peeping, were taken aback.

Yuan Qiankong closed the door, handed the things to her, and gestured silently.

Qiao Wei's eyes lit up, she took the pen and paper and lay down on the ground to start painting.

In just a few minutes, Qiao Wei handed over the finished product to Yuan Qiankong.

Looking at the painting, he gave a thumbs up, and Qiao Wei raised her head proudly, without any shyness.

After standing for a while, to give the people in the room...the souls in the room some time to vent, Yuan Qiankong opened the door and walked in.

Ace knelt on the ground, and he could feel the despair that suffocated his soul.

Going over and squatting down, Yuan Qiankong put the newly released painting in front of him.

Ace's body trembled, he lowered his hand and wanted to take the paper, but his fingers stopped before touching the paper.

"……This is……"

"Luffy." Yuan Qiankong replied for him: "Your brother, who you sacrificed your life to save, escaped Marlin Fandor successfully, and after the war on the top, he will go to the Navy Headquarters to ring the 16 bell."

The amount of information contained in this sentence is too great, but Ace has no energy to explore.

What was drawn on the paper was that Luffy decided to receive Rayleigh's training on Nine Snake Island. In order to cancel the original agreement of everyone to meet in three days, the agreement to meet in two years was passed on to his partner.

The scene where Luffy took off his straw hat and mourned for Whitebeard and Ace rekindled the glimmer in the dead eyes of the young man in front of him.

For a hopeless person, there is nothing more inspiring than a significant other who has hoped to carry on with his will.

Yuan Qiankong slowly put the painting on the ground, and Ace stared at it without saying a word.

Softly retreating to the door, Yuan Qiankong closed the door to leave him some private space to calm down.

Yuan Qiankong met Qiao Wei and Bailey's nervous little eyes, nodded silently, and each person and bird breathed a sigh of relief at the same time.

The two came to the control room one at a time, and Qiao Wei couldn't help but asked, "Ace is in a soul state now?"

"Ace in this world is dead, and he probably has to leave this world to be completely resurrected."

Qiao Wei understood, she had a terrified expression: "I was really scared to death, can you imagine, when I opened the door, I suddenly saw a ghost standing in front of my desk, goosebumps They all came out."

Bubbles popped up on Bailey's head: When I saw that the "ghost" was Portgas D. Ace, and he was still looking at the painting, my heart was cold, Qiao Wei was really too careless .jpg]

Qiao Wei: "Can you stop standing on my shoulder? This way I can't see your bubbles, and Bailey, you're getting heavier again. Let me tell you, the food will be halved from today."

Bailey suddenly looked like he was hit.

Yuan Qiankong looked at Bailey's begging face, Qiao Wei's expression of indifference, and his heavy mood suddenly became much lighter.

The next goal of the Dragon Hunting Group is Jiu Snake Island.

Yuan Qiankong's old friends are all there, and it's hard to come back, and it's hard to justify seeing each other.

Besides, seeing Luffy is also good for Ace now.

Yuan Kaikong does not have the record pointer of Kusnake Island, but he has world-leading technology.

Qiao Wei picked up a lot of good things from the spaceship of Chunyu Pirates, and she made a tracker following Chunyu's template.

Minamoto Sora had already glued the transmitter to the Polar Diving, so there was no need to record the pointer at all.

And a few days later, Ace, who had been staying in the room, appeared in front of them.

Qiao Wei and Bailey each found a reason to escape, and threw the burden to the captain Yuan Qikong.

That was the only time they would remember him as the captain.

Yuan Qiankong took Ace to the outside of the Longshou.

One dragon and one soul sit on the dragon's head overlooking the sea.

"I thought I couldn't get out."

Ace made Yuan Qiankong look over, and he whispered, "I wanted to go back and have a look, but I couldn't leave this ship."

Yuan Qiankong was silent, and said: "You have to know, you are no longer in this world."

Ace: "..."

"Do you still hate Roger now?"

Ace turned to look at him suddenly: "Do you know that man?"

"En..." Yuan Qiankong moved his body and faced him: "Let's get to know each other formally, my name is Yuan Qiankong, I am 124 years old, and I am from Ralph Drew."

"Hello, my name is Portgas D. Ace, this year..."

Ace, who was not picky in terms of politeness, subconsciously introduced himself, but suddenly stopped in the middle of speaking.

"Sure enough, it will be this expression."

Yuan Chikong smiled, "Roger is a very interesting person."

"...Don't mention that man to me!" Ace clenched his fists and roared.

"But don't you really want to know? About Roger, I will save you because of him."

Ace didn't answer.

In the Pirates, as Roger's most powerful competitor in that era, Whitebeard knew a lot about Roger.

But Ace is shy about his biological father, and has even more hatred for Gol D. Roger.

He didn't take the initiative to ask, and White Beard wouldn't say much.

Ace admitted that his father only had a white beard, but Minamoto Sora put it so bluntly.

Even though he couldn't accept Roger as a father, he remained silent.

Roger may be the greatest Pirate King in the world, but he is by no means a good father.

For Ace, what Roger brought to Ace was a nightmare from which he could not wake up.

Since Roger was executed as One Piece, the navy has been looking for his blood, vowing to strangle the evil demon offspring to death in their infancy.

Portgas D. Loujiu hid everywhere and conceived Ace for 20 months, but died of exhaustion after giving birth to Ace.

Everyone hates Ace's father, the kind of person who lives in the bottom of the world, the hatred for Roger is even stronger, and even Ace can't admit that his father is Roger.

In this environment of completely denying Roger, Ace couldn't find his own meaning when he was born because of Roger, and everyone wanted him to die.

In this case, it is only natural to have hatred for the identity of his father Roger.

Yuan Chikong could understand, but as long as he recalled Roger's expression when he talked about his child, he felt a little soft-hearted.

At least he wanted to convey Roger's expectation for the birth of Ace to him, that his biological father loved him.

Yuan Qiankong talked about when Roger first landed on the island, he was obviously older than his grandfather, but he was treated like a child in turn.

Speaking of Roger when they were drinking, they often used the excuse that he was a minor in his own race, and he was only allowed to watch them drink heavily.

Speaking of the deeds in the adventure journey of the Pirates that Roger told him, the love for the sea completely ignited his desire to go to sea.

Also talking about his own child that Roger told him...

Ace was very quiet, at first he was just trying to hold back his impetuous patience.

But after a long time, his clenched fist couldn't help but relax.

All of this can be seen in the eyes.

"Roger said, if I meet you in the future, we will definitely become very good friends."

The sea breeze blew, Yuan Qiankong's bristling hair was blown, but Ace's seemed to be shaped.

"You know, Roger, he surrendered himself."

Ace's eyes widened instantly.

Yuan Qiankong didn't say any more, but took out his pocket watch, "Roger gave it to me. If I can't save you, I plan to give it to you as a funeral."

Ace, who heard his funeral objects with his own ears, had mixed feelings.

"I'll give you this pocket watch in the next world."

Yuan sent Kong to put away his things, before Ace had time to ask what the next world meant.

I heard him say again: "Our current course is the territory of Boa Hancock, the Empress of the Seven Martial Seas, Nine Snake Island, where your brother is."