Let's go, I'm dying to be a fan [Unlimited Stream]

It's finally over, thank you for watching the little cuties here.

There are too many things to say, although it is a bit long-winded, it is also right to be my own summary.

The beginning of this article was very hasty, and a lot of preparation work was not done well, so it was full of loopholes as soon as it was written:

Insufficient human design: from weakness to pendant attack

Insufficient writing power: the whole story is based on dialogue and psychology to grind the plot

Insufficient conflicts between characters in the plot: the presence of supporting roles is not strong, and the big boss disappears in the early stage

The world view is not reflected at all: In fact, this world that relies on fans to survive is very interesting when I have it in my head

Many world rules are tasteless (almost most of the rules are tasteless)

The setting has no effect at all (including fans, etc., as well as the giant eye highlighter, this line is almost gone)

All in all, I want to write a lot

But the degree of completion is too low

It can be said to be a failed test of oneself

I chose a subject that I can't handle well

I can't make up for these weaknesses all at once.

Next, by revising the text, I will slightly change this text to make it more readable

In the next article, monsters will strive to get rid of the problem of insufficient human design first, choose a world view that is easier to control, and reduce secret system settings. Even if they have a favorite brain hole, they will wait until they have the ability to talk about it

I am so grateful to everyone who has given advice to and encouraged monsters along the way.

I wanted to take over the new article immediately - because in that case, maybe I can still have a chance to continue walking with some cuties

But the monster realizes that there are too many things he needs to improve, and rushing to write an article will only write an article with exactly the same flaws.

After learning from the pain, I decided to make comprehensive preparations before launching a new one (it won’t take long)

In the meantime, I bid farewell to everyone temporarily and waved my hands hastily.

thank you all.

See you soon!

Love you guys.

@onion monster

(All revision suggestions are welcome!)