Mad Dog Meiqi

Never thought I'd be able to write a long story.I remember reading the preface of a book by Wang Xiaobo when I was in junior high school. There was a sentence to the effect that a novel that didn’t get 30w was not qualified to be called a novel. I didn’t expect to meet the standard the first time I wrote it.

Generally speaking, there are many problems in this book. I am really grateful that some readers left comments after reading the full text!There are even girls who give rewards, I am super ashamed... I will reflect on it and summarize it, put it here to remind myself, and hope to improve in the future.

First of all, this book is actually not a serial. After all, it started to be uploaded to the Internet when the manuscript was saved for 20. The stupid setting is to update a chapter every day. Later, when I went to complete the signing process, I already posted 20 words. I've finished writing... But I will probably save more manuscripts in the future. On the one hand, I feel more secure and on the other hand, I don't have the confidence to leave a message directly.It is a good habit to save more manuscripts, but you should pay attention to the problem of grinding foreign work in the process of depositing manuscripts.

Some outdated jokes were deleted during the revision, and there are still many weird jokes that are still reserved. After all, the theme is to complain about the starting point, wife, and male second.In the future, try not to think too much when writing things, unless one day you make up your mind that the whole book will be purely meme.

The biggest problem with this book is the rhythm. Although there was an outline at the beginning, the content of each chapter was laid out too evenly, and there were too many unnecessary preparations in the early stage, but it was not easy to change here. On the way, I fell into OCD again. If I want to clarify this question, I have to explain the character setting. I know Hemingway’s iceberg theory, but I can’t do it. I am willing to delete [-] words, and finally the whole structure is extremely bloated... It’s decided , the next book will have a few cool covers that only exist in legends (there is a high probability that this cannot be done)!

When it comes to setting, this is another problem of high-sightedness and low-handedness. I just want to play tricks to make the world view bigger, but I don’t consider that this is not a starting point of several million words. Just a little water).In the future, we must strive for a more reasonable and faster plot development.Millions of words have the rhythm of millions of words, and hundreds of thousands of words have the rhythm of hundreds of thousands of words. The mentality cannot be mistaken...

There is also the writing power.To be honest, because of the influence of my family when I was a child, I haven’t read any local literature, at most it’s Jin Yong Gu Long (not yet considered traditional literature), the habit of choosing words and sentences is actually quite strange, and now writing a local story will be exposed all at once. The truth is that there is no culture, and the style of painting changes from time to time, and there is a huge gap.How to write it is not pleasing to the eye, and because it is behind closed doors and there is no opinion to refer to, the style has changed many times.Halfway through, I decided to try a smoother writing method. However, if the writing is too smooth without enough writing power, it will become a subtle glib. For example, although Chapter 4 is cheap, I feel a little dizzy when I look at it myself.

The setting is not clear, and the theory is hard.At the beginning, I really just wanted to write a happy and joyful text to play with. It is obviously a double happiness, but why there is the appearance of King Ping killing the demon, it may be because of refreshing the spleen... I like this kind of life and death. Is it hard to do the type of i?Or maybe just thought resurrection was cool.In short, the premise is there, but the way of resurrection is not clear, ah...

The various supporting roles are also inexplicable, probably the more you want to speak clearly, the less you can speak clearly, the desire to control is too much, so restrain yourself a little bit.

Then I really am a very impatient and lazy person... I decided to at least learn about the customs of Yunnan and the myths and legends of ethnic minorities before writing the chapter on the saint. I watched an episode of the documentary (Taste of Yunnan): Good , I decided to make it up!After giving up the textual research, everything is happy (X)

As a DM article with the theme of falling in love, even the emotional line needs to be completed by extras, which is really hopeless.Be sure to let them do i in the text next time (the emphasis is wrong).

The next book will be a bit of Western fantasy, this one will be mixed with a bit of Western fantasy, and the next Western fantasy will have some old Chinese medicine mixed in.God's second-generation paladin X old Chinese medicine vampire, try the crematorium.Lessons learned this time, the setting and outline should be more detailed...