Great Writer of Parallel Space

"Let's continue to talk about the issue of serialization... Seven Stars is published three times a week, so according to the plot of "Shook and Beta", it is roughly the serialization volume of 9 stories a week. Nuanyang, you need to publish it a week in advance. Send me the next week's story." Tian Huiguang took out his business card and handed it to Lin Nuanyang, "There is my email address on it, and the story can be sent directly to the email address. Do you understand?"

Lin Nuanyang put away the business card, "Don't worry, I know how to do it."

"Well, that's good. Don't worry, if I fail to receive the manuscript, I will come to the door in person." After Tian Huiguang finished speaking, he took out a thick document bag from his bag, "I have prepared the information you need to fill in, And the things to pay attention to. There are also problems in your manuscript. The places that need to be corrected have been marked. Just look back and look carefully. If you have any questions, you can directly call me. In addition, because Nuanyang, you are still underage , so there are some materials and certifications that need to be communicated with your parents or guardians. Look... when will you have time to make an appointment to meet again?"

"In a few days? I will notify the guardian as soon as possible." Lin Nuanyang replied.It seems that brother Chen Yue is going to be bothered again, and I don't know if he has time?

"Well, no problem. As soon as possible, we can meet this week and sign the contract. After all, the serialization will be next week, and there are still many things to deal with." Tian Huiguang looked at Su Ruyu, who was silent all the time, "I There is nothing to do here, and Nuan Yang will talk to Su Meigong about the picture distribution."

"Ah! Oh oh oh! Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes." Su Ruyu was a little silly, and finally it was her turn, "Nuanyang! Hello, hello, I am in charge of "Shook and Beta" Meigong, you can call me sister Ruyu!"

Just as Tian Huiguang breathed a sigh of relief, his heart ached again.My dear sister!You are so familiar!

Lin Nuanyang couldn't help but gave a big smile. This sister Ruyu is quite interesting, and she is more approachable than Editor Tian, ​​"Hello, sister Ruyu!"

"Hehe! Hello, hello." Su Ruyu replied stupidly, "Well... let me talk about the picture. According to the general plot of "Shu Ke and Beta", I have already conceived a general image. Now just look at Nuan Yang's opinion, and specifically talk about what kind of style the character in your heart should be!"

Lin Nuanyang smiled embarrassedly, "I just want to say that the two protagonists, Shu Ke and Beta, can be drawn very distinctively... I'm not saying that, it's just that according to the appearance I described in the story, it can be seen at first glance. Shuke and Beta! Actually...if I really talk about it, I can't tell..."

Shuke and Beta in the cartoon shown in the video of a certain fruit 6 are indeed very spiritual and characteristic, which is impressive.But I feel that the details of the characters are too rough, and Lin Nuanyang is not very satisfied, but it really looks like that kind of feeling, but I can't say what it is.

"Hmm... Okay, I probably have some ideas. I will send you the first draft in a few days." Su Ruyu wrote down Lin Nuanyang's request in a small notebook, and also gave her email address to Nuanyang, " This mailbox is newly created by me, and it will be used exclusively for our communication with pictures in the future, I will send pictures here every time, Nuan Yang, please remember to pay attention! I wrote down both the user name and password!"

"Okay, I will remember it!" Lin Nuanyang put away the note, "Thank you Editor Tian and Sister Ruyu today!"

"it's okay no problem!"

"It's fine!"

Tian Huiguang and Su Ruyu saw that the matter was almost finished, they made an appointment for the next signing, and left first...

"Hongye... Thank you very much this time!" Lying on the bed, Lin Nuanyang looked at the information left by Tian Huiguang, and suddenly said with great emotion.

"Really! Thank you very much!" Lin Nuanyang turned over and leaned on Gao Hongye's lap who was sitting on the edge of the bed, "If it weren't for Hongye, Qixing would not have agreed so easily!"

Gao Hongye put down the tablet in his hand, and put his arms around Lin Nuanyang's shoulders, "What is the relationship between us, do we still need to say these words?! You forgot! We agreed when we were in kindergarten, Be a family member for the rest of your life!!!" Not friends!Gao Hongye quietly added this sentence in his heart.

"Hmm! Hongye is the best!" Lin Nuanyang was so touched that he hugged his awesome "little partner". To have a good brother who can help each other in a lifetime is something that many people can't ask for!I am so lucky!

Gao Hongye was extremely happy in his heart, his brows and eyes were filled with joy, "That's right! I and Yang Yang are with whom!"

"Hehehehe!" Lin Nuanyang raised a big smile, "Hongye is the best!"

Three days later, accompanied by Gao Hongye and supervisor Chen Yue, Lin Nuanyang successfully signed his first work contract.

At the moment when he wrote his name, Lin Nuanyang suddenly felt like crying, his nose was sore, and even if he left, he could leave a trace of his existence in this world...

"Ahem, Nuanyang!" Tian Huiguang stood up after signing the contract, and stretched out his hand solemnly, "We are partners from today! Please give me your advice!"

"Yes! Editor Tian, ​​if I do something wrong in the future, please teach me more!" Lin Nuanyang looked at Tian Huiguang firmly with a stern face, "I will definitely try my best to correct it!"

Looking at Lin Nuanyang's resolute expression, Tian Huiguang suddenly felt an inexplicable sense of excitement, as if watching a phoenix about to spread its wings and soar high...

I have to say that although Tian Huiguang does have a little less qualifications than other editors, he really works hard and has a good research on fairy tales, especially in grasping children's psychology.Lin Nuanyang really learned a lot from him, and gradually began to understand Tian Huiguang.Although this person is a little timid, he is really a good editor with a sense of responsibility!

Although "Shook and Beta" has been revised many times in the hands of Lin Nuanyang, there are still some problems.It may be due to the reference to too many videos. The story is written in great detail, but it also seems that the center of the story is not prominent enough, and the development of the plot is a bit out of balance.

In addition, since it is serialized in a magazine, the integrity of the story should be more prominent, so that readers can quickly feel a sense of substitution even if it is the first time they read it.It's not that you don't read the front less, and you don't understand after reading the back. This is the most taboo point in magazine serialization!

Under Tian Huiguang's explanation, Lin Nuanyang began to revise each story one by one, trying to make each story more independent but connected with each other.In terms of language style, some didactic meaning is removed, it is more lively, and it is more suitable for readers' tastes!

In terms of matching pictures, Su Ruyu is also full of effort!After working for a few days, the first draft was ready.There are dozens of large and small character sets, and these are only the characters of the first 9 stories!

Of course the most important thing is Shuke and Beta!In order for Su Ruyu to understand the characteristics of the two protagonists more intuitively, Lin Nuanyang also specially wrote a resume of the two little mice.

Name: Shu Ke

Sex: Male

Age: 6

Birthday: May 8

Subject: mouse

Brief introduction: It is a little mouse who drives a helicopter.Good-natured, with writing expertise, mature and stable, smart and methodical in doing things.Understand the psychology of others.

Name: Beta

Sex: Male

Age: 6

Birthday: May 8

Subject: mouse

Introduction: It is a little mouse that drives a tank.Good-natured, likes to drink, is discouraged but kind-hearted, forthright, free and easy, and willing to help others.

In fact, some of the information here is different from the original.For example, the age, Lin Nuanyang chose to be 6 years old because he hoped that this work could really become an evergreen tree like the original work, and grow up with him, so he chose to be the same age as Lin Nuanyang.As for the birthday, Shu Ke used Lin Nuanyang's own birthday, which happened to be the day he traveled through, and it was also the original body's birthday; Beta was Gao Hongye's birthday, and my friends strongly demanded that it be the best no matter where you go. The status of friends is unshakable!Even in fairy tales!

From this resume, it can be seen that Shu Ke's image should be more gentle, calm and responsible, and his physical performance should be more restrained.Beta has to show a big grin, a bigger mouth, and a bold look.

Because the characters in "Shook and Beta" are too rough, the current aesthetic must be more vivid, so Lin Nuanyang can only describe the characteristics in as much detail as possible, and let Su Ruyu play it automatically...

Although there are frequent minor problems, but fortunately everything has been successfully completed and the preparations have been completed. Next, I will wait for the feedback after the magazine is published...