[Comprehensive] The fiancé he picked up by writing the article suddenly

I didn't expect this article to have an afterword, but it's not really an afterword, it's just some things that happened when I wrote the article, which doesn't make much sense.

This article is different from the one next door. In fact, it was born in a hurry. It was completely a product of a flash of inspiration. The outline was produced in half a day (although it was completely torn up later...)

My friend Ji asked me seriously after reading the outline: "Are you going to sign the contract?"

Me: "I'm not leaving now. After the telegram is finished, I want to write something original before I want to sign a contract. I can sign it again."

Ji You: "Then you can write whatever you want if you love power generation. It's not a commodity article to make money. You don't need to ask me to read it for you. And let me say, you have to hit the street with this book."

I know it’s going to hit the street. After all, the next door’s 40 words are less than 300. It’s quite hip to write it like this... I don’t even have a hip, so my level is here, but I’m still a little curious, so I asked what happened.

Ji You: "The wind vane of orthodox literature doesn't move very much, but online literature is different. The hot spots of online literature change rapidly and change with each passing day. Zongman has long since stopped writing like this. Parents are short on objects, and your thinking is still stuck in the past. Five years ago, you packaged and sent this article without any sense of disobedience, and now the hot topic in Jinjiang is Su Chongmeng, sweet and supernatural group pets, undercover agents, slapping faces, reversing counterattacks."

A friend in the comment area said that he didn’t expect it to be a serialized article, and thought it was a novel he read several years ago. I have to say (thumbs up), it is indeed like this.

The next door was written by a dull head and stupid. I don’t know anything about jj, so I know how to post. After getting to this book, I’m a little bit of an introduction, and I will be affected by the data as expected. Bookmark, comment What.

And my derivative area is famous for its false prosperity. "Prosperity" refers to the inflated number of collections that enjoy the benefits of the original work.

And next door, 40 words, 300- I have to say it again...

At the beginning, I comforted myself: I haven’t signed a contract, I haven’t been exposed

Until another friend of mine sent me a few pictures and wrote:

"Coordinate derivatives, warm themes, daily rise of 50+ without rankings"

"Coordinate derivatives, out of breath, daily rise of 80-100 without ranking"

…………

... I|I roll with joy when the daily rise reaches 10, and most of the time I am motionless or even convulsed.

To put it bluntly, it is still the problem of the text itself, the rhythm is not well controlled, the character design is weak, the tension between Xiaozheng and the original heroine is insufficient, the setting of the plot is reluctant, the routine is too old, etc., and so on. It’s really rubbish, so I’m really grateful to everyone who accompanied me all the way to finish writing this article, everyone’s existence is my motivation (bow)

Sometimes Calvin, looking back at the past chapters, would secretly scold me several times for what kind of rubbish I wrote, so I just want to give up and pull it down, but the happiness of being an output party is really very simple. If you can jump up by one more number, and add a new comment in the comment area, that kind of happiness can't be obtained by doing anything else.

In fact, I started writing because I love generating electricity. After all, our little basketball is often eaten by people, and the magic is outdated.

In the last book, plus this one, the problems in the early stage are actually very obvious, that is, the writing is too serious, very pretentious, and afraid of OOC. I always feel that Akashi Seijuro is absolutely rational, without any mood swings, even he The expression fluctuated greatly and I panicked: Did I write him down?

But fortunately, I have a group of king Ji friends (although they are all from the original area hahahahahahahaha, but who hasn’t read Japanese comics in their youth!)

They told me earnestly—you are telling his story, so don’t try to label him, we know he is a paper man, but in his world, he is a living person, no one can last forever Rational, never subject to external interference, just like Atobe, is he full of gorgeous words all the time?Yukimura, is he always smiling with a dark belly?I always emphasize a certain part of his body, and then magnify and describe the deformity one-sidedly. Yes, this point is indeed from his body, but only one leg is normal, and the other three limbs are all atrophied. Is this another situation? What about the ooc?

After I listened to it, it suddenly became clear.

I went back and read the manga again, and bought the formula book again, because I lost everything, everything can disappear (scratching head)

I found many, many small details. The paper man who was cold and distant to me before really suddenly became vivid and vivid, and he stood up.

I have to say that this is a problem with the author's writing skills hahahahahahaha, although I scold Pain Juan every day, I have to say that he is good at this aspect, of course I am different, I am a passing line.

Details that don’t need to be deducted: Pu Chi’s appearance has already made it clear that he will also escape, and he is also weak. The little boy wants a safe haven for him to hide when he is approaching the point of collapse.

Not only that, but he will show obvious "discomfort" emotions because his teammates put something he doesn't like.

He will seriously eat the light novel Amway of his teammates, not only to read it by himself, but also recommend it to his middle school classmates.

I have never eaten in a chain fast food restaurant, and I can also go to experience it with my teammates, and say a young master's taste: "I never thought that a chain restaurant can make such a taste."

He would eat fried noodles with the miracles on the roof of the old student building, and then urge everyone to pack the fried noodles boxes before leaving.

In addition to playing shogi after class, he also plays guessing games with Midorima, and has never lost a single accident.

Go to the store to buy games with the miracles, and play online together when you go back.

When everyone was scrambling for meat, one person quietly ate up all the tofu on the table. When I was in junior high school, I also ordered a lot of tofu in the store (you love tofu too much? By the way, you are a young master and you go out to buy it yourself Tofu?)

A bit straight, he said that when he was called Akashi-sama, he was so disgusted hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!

After the rock-paper-scissors win, he took Takao's cart, made candy in the laboratory with Midorima for Murasakihara to eat, and made miracles when Heizi was broadcasting.

Speechless about Midorima's dullness, they teased Aomine's complexion together.

Everyone was not there when they graffitied, but they sent a capital brush A via email, which happened to fill in the first A of the basketball, and they participated remotely very cooperatively. Later, they went with Luoshan, which not only cheated Senior Dai to come over , and even teased him that he could draw an apple charcoal hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Making funny faces made Hayama Kotaro laugh, comforting Ling Yang who missed a free throw, and comforting Hayama Kotaro who was dissatisfied with his nickname.

You will feel distressed by the manager's poor cooking, and you will also feel distressed because your friends are angry with you.

There are many, many, many more.

In fact, our Xiaozheng is just a fifteen or sixteen year old male high school student who looks very ordinary from a certain angle.Rather than thinking that his mother left early and his father was ruthless, I prefer to believe that Akashi Masomi also loves him silently.

After all, after losing the game and being dissatisfied, he still let the cubs play basketball.

The inevitable result of his mother's premature departure and his father's cold elite education will be that his gender is blank.

But I let him fall in love with a girl secretly during the period of Emperor Guang Ichi. How should I put it, the altar and the ten-foot-long soft world, I hope he can happily walk into the latter.

And it feels quite traditional!As for the kind of authentic Japanese men, don't you say that nurturing is a man's romance?It is also quite a sense of accomplishment to turn the high mountain flowers that grow on the top of the iceberg into the sweet little roses in the palm of your hand.

There are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers, and each reader has his own understanding of the characters. For the same thing, you think he is Akashi if he did XXXX, but I think he is Akashi if he did YYYY .

Difficult to reach.

So I was very scared, I was afraid that he would collapse. I said "I flow" in both copywritings, but there was no "flow" at all. To be brilliant, let everyone agree with "Ah, this is the true nature of Akashi!", at least let everyone feel that it is not satisfactory.

2020.0301 officially started daily update, 2020.0805 officially ended, five months, less than half a year, thank you for being with me all the time, willing to see my immature brain and broken writing.

Xiyuan Temple Winter Flower wants to say goodbye to everyone.

Bye bye.

See you next time.