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This development is embarrassing.

Nozaki-kun fully introspected and believed that the reason for not passing the draft was that there were no lines.

He shouldn't just show the draft to others. The first impression is very important. Once the lines in the reader's mind are different, the plot will also change drastically.

More importantly, a heroine portrayed that did not make readers like it proved that the character he created was not attractive enough.Regarding the Queen of Stars, he only grasped the two points of beauty and arrogance. As a reader, Yuanyi instantly realized that the heroine is a selfish and unscrupulous woman from the charm and action performance, so he reacted like this Fierce, after all, the prototype of the elder brother whom I adore chooses a woman with such a character, no one can accept it.

Nozaki-kun put his head in his hands: "I shouldn't have shown my work to Yuan, he is a brother-controller."

After reflecting on his own mistakes, Nozaki-kun decided to put this manuscript away first, clear his mind and think about how to make changes.

Game description: [Mr. Mengye, I have checked. If you need it, the system can publish your work on your behalf, but it will cost points. ]

Nozaki-kun had a blank expression: "Not enough points."

Game description: [Because you used to buy painting tools! ]

Nozaki-kun: "That is a necessity, just like ink is the plasma of cartoonists, it is essential! There are no materials for drawing cartoons in this era, and they can only be purchased from shopping malls. Speaking of small descriptions, why do you call me Mengye-sensei?"

The game description box shook a bit: [Because, because when the samurai called you Mengye teacher before, you seemed very happy. ]

Nozaki-kun: "Well, I'm really happy, it feels like I'm back in the past again. Thank you, little description. You can call me Nozaki-kun, that's what my friends call me."

The game description window floated up a bit, and it seemed a little floating.

Nozaki-kun: "Speaking of which, I have thought so since the first time I met you. Since you are so good at describing, can you fill in the words for me? If you can write the game description so well, it is definitely not a problem to fill in the original manuscript! No I will let you do it for nothing, if you need anything, you can tell me, whether it is points or others, I can give you."

Game description: "——!"

Please add a red heart outside the game description box!Congratulations from all four hearts!

Nozaki-kun: ...What's so scary about this?

Game description: [Also, it’s not that good. You, even if you praise others like this—you can help me do it. In exchange, please help me accumulate points to buy and activate the voice function. Only 10 points are required. ]

Nozaki-kun: "Sorry, I can't afford to hire you."

Game description: [In addition to crosswords, I can also help you black out and paste dotted backgrounds! ]

Nozaki-kun: "I will definitely collect the points as soon as possible!"

Nozaki-kun has become more motivated, and now he thinks more and more that drawing manga can upgrade and increase points. You see, he only drew the beginning of a manuscript, which is already level 10. If he can complete a complete work, he will be able to upgrade and gain points immediately !In order to get an assistant, Nozaki-kun thinks that a manuscript must be completed as soon as possible.If this one fails, he can start the next one, preferably a shorter one, so that he can get points quickly.

Game description: [Nozaki-kun, Nozaki-kun, the samurai is here! ]

Nozaki-kun is shocked, has the samurai really come to attack at night?excited!He immediately grabbed the pen and paper and squatted at the window, ready to draw the heroic figure of the samurai stepping into the window!

It's a pity that he squatted in front of the window for a long time, only to see the figure of the samurai walking along the wall in the distance of the yard.

Along the wall, gone?

Nozaki-kun jumped out of the window in confusion and followed from a distance.

Game description: [Wait Nozaki-kun, you are so easy to be found, hurry up and exchange the remaining points for this item! ]

Nozaki-kun: "No, if you are discovered, you will be discovered. I will save points to enable the voice function for you."

Game description: [Although I am very grateful, it is really not the time to be stubborn, Nozaki-kun! ]

Nozaki-kun: "It's the Patriarch's room. Are you planning to talk to the Patriarch?"

The samurai came near the Patriarch's room, and after standing still, he suddenly looked back in the direction of Nozaki-kun.

Nozaki-kun waved his hand happily, saying please ignore my existence and continue!

The samurai walked over helplessly: "Sakiko, go back quickly, it's dangerous."

Nozaki-kun: "With you, there is nothing to be afraid of, right?"

Who would dare to bully the Patriarch's younger brother?

The samurai's face was reddish: "It's not this problem——!"

Suddenly, Ji Guoyuan pressed Nozaki-kun with his hands and forced him to lie on the ground, and he also bent down on the ground, and the two hid.

A beautiful figure appeared in the darkness, walking gracefully towards the residence of the Patriarch.

Nozaki-kun was surprised, isn't this the heroine?

Yuan Yi frowned, he stood up, and was about to walk over, when he saw Nozaki-kun who also stood up, obviously ready to follow, he suddenly showed a helpless expression.

So he gestured not to make a sound, and picked up Princess Nozaki-kun, a jump appeared near the door of the house, and then he put him down and looked at the house, as if he could see through the wall into the house.

Nozaki-kun: ...? ?

The game description was ahhhhhhh at first, seeing that Nozaki-kun didn't respond, and then embarrassedly speculated: [Is he afraid that you will make a sound to disturb the inside?Hugging a female princess is also showing respect? ]

Nozaki-kun thought to himself, for my princess who is of this height and weight, I think he should go to sumo, maybe he can get a yokozuna.

Wait, the Sun Prince, who looks slender but actually has amazing arms, is going to use force to persuade the Moon Prince to beat the mandarin ducks?

This... can have!

However, shojo comics are not allowed to show scenes such as fights and beatings, which violates the law. One of the regulations is the crime of dueling.

Then there is only talk, ah, the Sun Prince does not lie, it is difficult to let a person who is not good at communication talk.

Nozaki-kun has the image of Sun Prince in his mind!With slightly curly hair and a frosty face, the quiet and murderous king is like a famous painting, holding a sword tightly in his hand!No, wait, it should be replaced with a wooden knife—no, the wooden knife is still easy to hit people's eyes, and it is safest to replace it with an inflatable one.

The long hair is slightly curly, the face is like frost, the quiet and murderous king is like a famous painting, holding an inflatable stick tightly in his hand!

The sense of violation is so strong.

Then hold nothingness in your hand and have a sword in your heart, even if you don't have a sword in your hand, there is a sword; the way of fighting is to use the spiritual power of the two sides to duel when their eyes meet.

Teacher Mengye quickly solved this small problem in his own good way.

At this time, the voice of conversation has already sounded in the house again, Nozaki-kun feels that the voice is very small, he can hardly hear anything, but looking at Yuanyi's gradually serious and increasingly terrifying expression, it can be seen that the Sun Prince has strong feelings for the Moon Prince and the Queen of Stars Look good, get ready to beat the mandarin ducks.

Sure enough, Yuan Yi quickly couldn't stay still, and rushed into the house directly!

Nozaki-kun followed the notebook with a pen in his hand, and followed him bravely like a war correspondent!

Yuan Yi: "Shut up, Wu Mi! Big Brother won't be deceived by you!"

Nozaki-kun wrote vigorously, 【Prince Sun angrily scolded the Queen: "Shameless, you actually seduced my brother!"】

Wu Mi: "Your brother doesn't think so, am I right, Ji Guoyansheng?"

Nozaki continued to write, [The Queen of Stars retorted: "Your brother doesn't think so, we are in love with each other, if you don't believe me, ask him!"]

Yan Sheng: "It's too rude, Yuanyi, how could you break into my room without permission and interrupt my conversation with others? It's really disrespectful!"

【Prince Moon is displeased: "Which woman do I like, why do I need your permission, it's simply disrespectful!"】

Yuanyi: "Brother, you are deceived by the evil spirit. He is an ogre who brutally killed many people and created many ghosts and evils. Please wait a moment until I kill him and remove the evil spirit. I will explain it to you in detail."

[Prince of the Sun: "She is the queen of the enemy country, killing countless of our compatriots! I'm sorry, brother, as the crown prince, you can't be with her. You were deceived by her lies, she is actually a cruel and cold empress. Please You wait a moment, wait for me to defeat her with my spiritual power, so that she can no longer hurt you, and then I will discuss this matter with you in detail."]

Yansheng was annoyed: "You are contradicting me, Yuanyi. Do you still remember that I am your elder brother?"

【Prince Moon: I don't allow you to hurt her. Regardless of whether our relationship has any results, it shouldn't end due to external forces! 】

Yuan Yi: "My lord brother, Wu Mi is the king of ghosts who created other ghosts. My wife and children I have never met were brutally killed by ghosts. You know this, but you still want to protect him!"

[Prince Sun: You clearly know that when the two countries were at war, my wife and children were killed by the enemy, and she was the one who gave the war order!I can't forgive her. Do you love her more than your own brother? 】

As soon as Yuan made a move, he slashed at Wu Mi with his sword!Wu Mi knew that it was difficult to escape, so he did a very disastrous thing - he dragged Yan Sheng over and stood in front of him!

Yuan Yi stopped the sword as a matter of course, what he couldn't understand was why his elder brother, who was also a swordsman, could dodge it, but let Wu Mi do it.

Ji Guoyansheng pulled out the long knife at his waist with a gloomy expression: "Yuanyi, you—"

【Prince of the Moon: "Why are you so aggressive! Whether our love is true, I can only prove it to you!"】

Yan Sheng suddenly noticed that in this serious scene, Yuan Yi did not pay attention to himself, but stared at Wu Mi, and at the same time took a step forward, blocking someone with his own figure.

Ji Guoyansheng took a closer look: "You are that chef, what are you writing about?"

Nozaki-kun, who is addicted to creation, is still flying around!

[Prince Sun: "My lord, since you are so stubborn, I can only try my best to convince you." Prince Sun used all his mental power! (Huge eyes should be painted here as the background.)]

Yuanyi: "Teacher Mengye, be careful!"

【However, the Queen of the Stars took the opportunity to attack her friend who was fighting with Prince Sun, the Bard! 】

[When the Moon Prince and the Sun Prince were entangled, the Queen of the Stars took away the bard whose magic power was sealed in both hands and was unable to cast spells, and quickly fled the scene as a hostage. 】

【"Stop!" Prince Sun cried out, is he going to lose the important person around him again? 】

Game description: [Nozaki-kun, quickly exchange points for props and escape, don’t care about the comic setting!Nozaki-kun!Nozaki-kun! ! ]

【However, it was too late. The Queen of the Stars activated teleportation magic and fled here with the bard.With a hostage in hand, the queen believed that Prince Sun would be chained and could no longer kill herself for revenge. 】

Writing this, Nozaki-kun breathed a sigh of relief.

Great, the heroine is out.It would be nice to set the Queen of Stars as a female villain. Sure enough, female characters should be positive and negative, so that the ups and downs of the plot are more exciting.

Wu Mi looked down at the hostage he was holding, feeling a little confused for a moment.He couldn't help but ask, "What the hell are you writing?"

Nozaki-kun sighed a little: "A story about an ambitious heroine who has to abdicate to become a supporting villain."