The weather is really good today, the sky is clear, and there are white clouds floating in the sky. (I have never seen such a scene ^_^) My classmate Xiao Gang and I rode to school together, and suddenly his car valve core broke, so I pulled out the valve core from my car and put it on for him. Continue to ride happily to school together. (It turns out that "my" bicycle does not need a valve core^_^)

When we passed a department store, I couldn't help but sigh: Ah!It seems that people's living standards have indeed improved. Look at that old farmer, with a refrigerator in his left hand and a TV in his right, he trotted home. (Better than Zhou Xingchi in "Kung Fu"!) It is said that one mind cannot be used for two purposes. When I looked at the old man, an old lady suddenly rushed out of the sidewalk, and said it too late and then quickly, with a "chirp" , I came to an emergency brake, but still knocked the old lady into the air, and the basket full of eggs in my hand was also fluttering in the wind. (What a beautiful egg^_^) With a "pop", the old lady was thrown to pieces, but she stood up and ran away, (this old lady must be a fairy ^_^) She ran a long way before returning He turned his head and said to me: "Boy, ride slowly. If I hadn't rushed home to feed my grandson, I would have seen you today!"

I rushed to the school with lingering fear, and just entered the classroom by stepping on the class bell.The first class is English class. According to the usual practice, because I don't understand, I always sleep secretly until the end of get out of class.And because I was sitting in the last row, the back door of the classroom was behind me. Every time after class, my deskmate would wake me up to soak up the sunshine.Unfortunately today, the teacher asked me to answer questions for the first time, and I was woken up by my deskmate who was sleeping soundly. I thought get out of class was over, so I got up and opened the back door and walked out of the classroom. Three minutes later, I felt a strange environment outside the classroom, and then hurried back to the classroom, only to see all the teachers and students acting in panic.The teacher tried not to get angry, she repeated the question, but I couldn't say anything in a daze, just stood there for about 3 minute and ten seconds, the teacher said impatiently: "Can you Huh? Don’t you squeak too!” So ​​I said loudly, “Squeak.” The teacher fainted on the spot.

Let's stop the article here, because 600 words is enough, I wrote nearly 100 more words, beautiful and lovely Chinese teacher, would you consider giving me more points, please, please, thank you!

The editor said to himself: Composition is to use a pen to write what one sees, hears and thinks on paper. If there are situations in the composition that do not exist in reality, it is called absurd.Therefore, the first step in writing a good composition is to observe carefully, so that there is something to be said in the composition.

[-]. Mishandling of Embarrassing Compositions

1. The 100-meter sprint at the sports meeting finally started, and the students ran out like wild dogs that had run loose.

Teacher comment: Has the sports field become a greyhound race?Ten thousand dogs galloping, spectacular!

2. The teacher asked the students to imitate the text "little tadpoles looking for their mother" to write a composition about a certain person.

The classmates imitated it like this: my mother's snow-white belly, bulging eyes...

Teacher's comment: Like a mother, like a son, I think you also have a snow-white belly and bulging eyes.

3. On the "bangzhuang road" of "rough and bumpy" life, we must be firm in our direction...

Teacher's comment: This road can reach the ninth wonder after the eight wonders of the world, the Terracotta Warriors and Horses.

4. Uncles of the People's Liberation Army crawled forward one by one, like green caterpillars wriggling on the ground.

Teacher's comment: Why did my majestic and mighty teacher become a "Bug Attack Team" at your place?

5. Colorful flags flutter on the sports field, and young and old men throw darts.One dart for you, one dart for me.intestines full

The sky is floating!

Teacher's comment: It's scary, is it a playground or a slaughterhouse?

6. Looking at the gloomy sky in the sky...

Teacher comment: There is a sky beyond the sky!

7. A hunter is chasing a wild boar in the forest. The fat, clumsy wild boar is already in the forest

Risking his life to run for his life, he circled around for an unknown number of times.

Teacher's comment: Risk your life and run for your life?Do wild boars want to die or live?

8. A depressed young man walked alone on the cold street.

Teacher Comment: Poor child!

9. At first, my heart went down to the bottom of Everest...

Teacher Comment: Where is the bottom peak of Mount Everest?Longitude?north latitude?

10. One day, the teacher praised a classmate in the class, saying that he used the idiom "green and green" well.

In the composition handed in next time, almost everyone used "green and green". "There is a pot of green flowers in the corner of the classroom"; "Dad took out a green wine glass"; "She put on a green dress, which is really green." A boy actually wrote: "These two Today I have a cold and my nose is green."

Teacher Comment: I am verdant with anger from you!

The editor said to himself: For language expression, grammar is to solve the problem of incomprehension, logic is to solve the problem of right and wrong, and rhetoric is to solve the problem of whether it is good or not.A good modification will make your expression more vivid, while a failed modification will make your article a laughing stock of others.

[-]. Typos in an embarrassing composition

1. A girl wrote in her diary: There are many people around my house who keep dogs, and there is no public morality. As soon as I came out of the house this morning, I saw a pile of shit from some wild dog at the door. I ate a catty. (Massive! Massive! Should be "shocked".)

2. There is an essay written by a Chinese teacher. When introducing the teacher's appearance, it should be "the teacher has a face with melon seeds", but the students wrote "the teacher has a face with claws".The Chinese teacher almost didn't go crazy.

3. After getting up in the morning to sort out the "remains", we gathered at the school and took a bus to Kenting for the graduation trip.

Teacher Comment: I don’t know which funeral home your home is?The teacher has never known... (should be "grooming")

4. Last night, my classmates and I went to a fast food restaurant for dinner. We ordered two hamburgers, "chicken nuggets and one dung"...

Teacher comment: Is it delicious?Chicken poop? (one serving of chicken nuggets)

5. My history teacher has long hair and shawls, is short, has a bad temper, and has a little "chest"...

Teacher's comment: The history teacher wants me to tell you: "Wait for the next history class, tighten your skin a little bit." (fierce)

6. I consider myself a good student who cares about both character and study...

Teacher's comment: You should be worried—failing. (excellent)

7. It's going to rain, and the farmer uncles are picking up small watches in the field. (wheat)

Teacher Comment: Where can I pick it up?On Sunday we organize a voluntary labor. (wheat)

8. At this moment, a "Zhongfeng" brand car hit Xiaoqiang.

Teacher comment: "Stroke" brand car?

9. He who eats food is a hero, and the fittest survive.

Teacher Comment: Good teeth, good appetite, good health!Picking fat and thin is not the way to keep in good health. (knowledge current affairs)

10. Qu Yuan, who was exiled, never forgot to serve his country, but in the end he kissed himself in Wujiang because he had no way to serve his country.

Teacher's comment: I still think about Xiang Yu, but I don't want to cross Jiangdong! (suicide)

11.2060. In the morning of [-], the Jiuquan Space Device Launch Base in Gansu Province...

Teacher comment: Jiuquan?It was established by King Yama! (Jiuquan)

1. When I was young, I wrote a diary, and the teacher stipulated that it should be more than 200 words. At that time, there were 4 people in a group, and the group leader checked the number of words. A friend in my group wrote; For a catty of money, the vegetable seller said 5 cents, and I said: "It's really cheap, it's really cheap, it's really cheap, it's really cheap..." The team leader counted and there were still 4 words, so my dear friend added another sentence at the end, "It's really cheap ah.

2. Third graders, write about a rainy day.He said: Rainy day is a good time to sleep, my father and I went to bed after breakfast.That's it!The teacher asked: Is it over in one sentence?He said we fell asleep!Nothing was done.

3. The elementary school teacher made a half-proposition composition: "My xxx" and wrote about people and things randomly. As a result, the composition topic of my class was: "My comrade-in-arms Qiu Shaoyun".

4. "A round of red sun reflects the morning sun... As primary school students in the new era, we know that Beijing is next to the capital..."

5. For the first and fourth grade students, use "brand new" to make a sentence, "A brand new vegetative person was born..." (credited by Zhao Benshan) It is true and true, absolutely original.

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Life doesn't have to be great, as long as you realize every wonderful idea in your life, that's enough.Source: Composition Network

A person can be free from the constraints, frameworks, and restrictions of the secular world, bravely take risks, not compromise with life, and not bow to fate. Between self-willedness and seriousness, whether he is guarding the marginal position or the mainstream position, he can In a wandering and stable life, to experience life, understand life, share life, explore life, and create life is a kind of splendor, and it is a very beautiful splendor.

"Some people are as majestic as lightning, some are as dazzling as rainbows, and some are like shooting stars that only appear for a moment before disappearing. In addition, some people are like dense raindrops that fall on the earth and breed all things."

No matter you are a peddler or a dignitary, everyone can show their infinite self in a limited life. What others remember is not necessarily your title or label, but they will never forget you The wonderful things I have ever had.

A person who can live a wonderful life is able to thoroughly understand what he is doing, what he wants, and what he has, and he can make others feel inferior, cast their eyes on each other, and feel admiration.

It is not your title, occupation, income, or even your name that makes others respect you!

In fact, these are not important, you might as well think about it carefully!

How many people do you remember who exchanged business cards with you in the past?Some people have the title of chairman of the board, some are university professors, and some claim to earn hundreds of thousands of dollars a month. However, in a blink of an eye, you will forget all of these people.

However, those wonderful characters always make you want to forget and never forget. Even after many years, you will still remember the name of a certain writer, because he once wrote a book that affects your life; maybe, you You will miss a designer in a beauty salon, because only she can make a hairstyle that satisfies you; maybe, you will still remember a certain master you admired, because his words and deeds deeply moved you. move.

Those who linger deeply in our memory are all charming and wonderful characters.

Their characteristics are that they have excellent vitality, and their intelligent connotation is better than their gorgeous appearance. Their every frown, every gesture, every gesture is full of moving charm.

They don't necessarily have prestigious titles, they don't necessarily have to drive luxury cars, or wear famous expensive jewelry. They don't need to have such high-level titles. The important thing is that they live out their wonderful and charming lives.

Everyone, as long as he can be sincere and sincere, is right to do what he loves most.When you write a good book, do a beautiful hairstyle for others, complete a difficult task, and make yourself an attractive person while making others happy, this is a kind of Wonderful.

In this way, the reason seems to be very simple, but in fact, it is not easy to do it.

Among all living beings, there are many people who are doing jobs they don't like, are limited in their self-frame, and want to escape, but they don't have enough courage.

Think about it, have you done it yourself?Do you consider yourself a wonderful character?Do you love your current job?Do you love those around you?Do you love what you do every day?

Or, are you happy now?Do you think about making more money all day long?Buy a better imported car?Wearing more precious diamonds and emeralds?Or climb to a higher position?Or, you don't know what to pursue.

How much thought do you spend every day, thinking about various problems in life.

Maybe, you live in a muddle, just looking forward to the future, but forget the most important thing in front of you; maybe, you always just think why dreams are always just dreams?But I forgot to realize my dreams by myself.

Over time, when you live the same life every day without seeing any progress, without any satisfactory achievement, people can easily forget you, and you can only watch the time fly by, and then Continue to lament that you have accomplished nothing.

All these mistakes are because you did not recognize yourself and did not understand yourself.

In life, the things that make people shine are not in dreams, but in real life; not in tomorrow's fairyland, but on the soil under your feet today.

We don't have to feel sorry for the lack of life. You may lack a college degree, you may not be rich, or your appearance may be ordinary, or even you may not have any prominent family background.

However, none of this can stop you from becoming a charming and wonderful person, and you can still become a wonderful person who is memorable, memorable and unforgettable.

You have to have fun in order to live a wonderful life.

What can be envied by others is not necessarily having diplomas, diamonds, imported cars, and beauty, but they must be stepping on the hard soil, sincerely and hardworking to do what they should do, and they can quickly Proudly display the fruits of their hard work.

Recognizing yourself is not an easy task.

No matter which industry you are in, any particularly outstanding person must go through a lot of tempering, even after decades of hard work, before he can shine and shine.

However, like looking for diamonds in a mine, you have to detect where the diamonds are before you can aim and dig hard.

Recognizing your own characteristics is like looking for diamonds. First analyze your personality, hobbies and talents, and then aim at the target, digging and carving for a moment.

The light of life, like a diamond, must go through a long period of excavation, painstaking pondering, and hard waiting, and finally, that sparkling and dazzling diamond will emit dazzling light, which is amazing. It also makes people cry. At this time, you will suddenly realize that the last beauty begins with the painstaking efforts and sincerity at the beginning.

Everyone has the opportunity to become a dazzling diamond. The key is, have you recognized your own characteristics?Would you like to live a more wonderful life?Even though you may suffer hardships because of this, you still have to seriously seize every fleeting opportunity in life and strive to grasp every possibility in life.

To live a wonderful life is not to yearn for what you can't do, but to move to another realm of life step by step, and learn to live your own life between ordinary and extraordinary.

If we regard our life as a journey of life, how we live out the splendor and self of life becomes extremely important. When life cannot go backwards, our only choice is to move forward.

A person who lives a wonderful life is a person who can freely sway in life, and has the courage to choose and take responsibility for life.

In this ordinary life, everyone presents their own brilliance and brilliance. In terms of the form of life, each different life seems to be on the same topic, displaying different content.

We are fortunate to be able to seriously do what we really like to do in this colorful and noisy era. When we see them at the intersection of life, they show the wisdom and courage of making choices, and we will also applaud them.

In this confusing generation with diverse values, we have witnessed all kinds of possibilities in life.Everyone comes from different backgrounds and environments, has different encounters, and different motivations for achievement. However, everyone also lives out their true self without compromise.

Desiring to be wonderful is everyone's wish.

Deep down in everyone's heart, they hope that there will be a beautiful rainbow in their life.Even if you are ordinary, if you have a hot heart and persistent perseverance, you can still bloom beautiful flowers for ordinary life.

When the curtain of life comes to an end, the beauty will eventually disappear. How to live wonderfully in a limited life?Perhaps, we don't have to be wonderful all our lives, as long as we have wonderful things in every stage of life, that's enough.

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Just when the excitement of the two reached its highest point, a mobile phone rang.Accompanied by the melodious bell, the two people on the bed roared deeply.

The boy pushed away the boy next to him, got out of bed, and picked up his pants.He took out his mobile phone from inside, opened it for a look, and put it back into his trouser pocket without saying anything.

He picked up the cigarette case on the table, took out one, and put it in his mouth. He habitually wanted to look for the lighter, but he couldn't find it. He frowned unconsciously.

Seeing this, the boy also got up, got out of bed, and took out the lighter from his underwear.He raised his arm and put it on the man's shoulder, and raised his other hand to light the boy's cigarette.

"Brother Yuan, are you satisfied with my performance today?" The boy looked at the boy as if asking for credit, his lips rubbed against the side of the boy's neck, and there was still a desire in his eyes that hadn't completely retreated.

The boy didn't answer his question, nor did he look at him. He walked to the bathroom on his own, holding a cigarette in one hand, fearing that it would be extinguished, and took a few puffs from time to time. Body.The boy just smiled at his reaction.

He is always like this, he looks indifferent after sleeping with others, he is used to it.Moreover, this is also the charm of that person. Even though he is really ruthless, he treats his bed partner and lover very tenderly, and they are still willing to sleep with him.

After the boy finished cleaning his body, he walked out of the bathroom.A large bath towel was wrapped around his waist, and he wiped his hair with the towel with both hands.The muscles on his body are slightly bullied following his movements.

The boy was a little stupefied, this man is really handsome.Boys his age should rarely have abdominal muscles, but his six-pack abs all show that he exercises regularly.

The boy smiled, no wonder he was so fierce on the bed!He still wanted to say something, but the other party didn't give him any chance, put on his clothes, opened the door and left.

Leaving the boy alone, he sighed helplessly, "Hey, Brother Yuan is still so unfeeling~" Couldn't that person be gentler to his bed partner?It's really unfeeling.

But the boy still didn't miss the opportunity to look at him, and he didn't care whether he was wearing clothes or not, lying on the window sill.The street outside can be seen from here, and the boy waited until the man appeared in his field of vision again.

"Hey, why is Brother Yuan so handsome? Even looking at the back is deeply fascinating." The boy looked at the boy's back, and couldn't help but become a little nympho.That person is the object of many people's daydreams, and he was so lucky that he caught it.

As soon as he walked out of the hotel, the boy took out his mobile phone again, the sun was a little dazzling, he raised his arm in front of his eyes, and dialed the missed call just now with the other hand. "Hello? What's the matter?"

On the other side of the phone, the voice was a little weak, coughing a few times from time to time, and the voice became much deeper, and the hoarse voice made people feel distressed, "I have a cold, you don't need to pick me up tomorrow."

Hearing the man say that he had a cold, the boy was smiling, but immediately turned into a frown as if changing his face. "Well, I see. Then take good care of yourself and drink more hot water, it will help you catch a cold."

When he went to find him yesterday, he felt that his face was red, and he felt that he had a cold.He also touched his forehead, not hot.Moreover, the man also stubbornly said that he was just exposed to the sun.

The boy just responded lightly, without saying anything more to comfort him, and hung up the phone.I don't know if he doesn't care about that person, or if he doesn't know how to say thoughtful words.

And the person on the other side didn't expect the boy to hang up the phone so quickly, and threw the phone on the bed as if he was angry. He caught a cold, but he didn't even show any signs of it. Anyway, he was caring for him!Yuan Shuai, you dead man!

Looking at the time on the phone, it was only in the evening, Yuan Shuai stretched his waist, it would be better to go to two o'clock in the morning at this time, maybe there will be an affair at night.

Every city has its own label, and this city is no exception.Fourteenth Street, North District, is his label. If you think it is just a very ordinary street, then you are wrong.

The city's bars, disco bars, nightclubs and other places are basically gathered on the [-]th Street in the North District, including Internet cafes and hotels.It can be said that it is the best place for men and women to vent their desires and emotions.

Moreover, it is also the concentration point of gang forces.It is closed during the day, only at night it is brightly lit, and the typical night is more beautiful than the day.Therefore, city people gave it a name, "Never Night Street".

And on such a nightless street, there is a bar called Two o'clock in the morning.Two o'clock in the morning is one of the best bars on this street, and it's a gay bar.His shop owner is Yuan Shuai's best buddy, so Yuan Shuai spends here almost every night.

"Second son, why did you come so early today?" Yuan Shuai had already arrived before the door opened, and the shop owner Wang Sen also expressed his surprise.Shouldn't he be sleeping at home at this time?

Yawning, Yuan Shuai rubbed his hair that hadn't completely dried, "I just came out from there, so I didn't want to go home, so I came here directly."

Wang Sen nodded clearly, "Oh! I understand!" My buddy is good at everything, good-looking, good at studying, he is a playboy, and he belongs to the kind that will not refuse anyone.Hey, I really don't know, isn't he worried about getting sick?

"Can you put away your obscene thoughts, your brother and I are strong! And even if you get sick, I will not hesitate to infect you! Don't worry." Yuan Shuai saw through Wang Sen's thoughts at once, Said bluntly.

Shrugging his shoulders, Wang Sen smiled, but he didn't care.Brother, it is also worth sharing when you are sick.Except for lovers, he and Yuan Shuai are basically in a shared state, but even so, he wants to be infected, but the conditions simply don't allow it.

"I don't mind you infecting me, but you can ask your elder brother to let you infect me." Wang Sen smiled wickedly, and he said that the conditions are not allowed at all, and their family Hanhan will not agree .

Speaking of Big Brother, Wang Sen thinks that Yuan Shuai, who is so arrogant and arrogant and narcissistic and thick-skinned so hard to get through, is willing to call him Big Brother, maybe that is the man.

"Brother didn't come tonight?" Yuan Shuai was a little curious when he didn't see the familiar face.Except when they were in school, almost anyone who could find Wang Sen would see his elder brother Yin Mohan.

It is said that when his elder brother was just born, the fortune teller said that he was hit by lack of water and soil, Mo meant desert, and three o'clock next to water, and Han meant education.Later, the family named it Yin Mohan, and later I don't know if it was watered too much, but Yin Mohan developed rapidly.

Yin Mohan's family has been a policeman for generations, and his father even became the chief of the bureau.But Yin Mohan's grandfather and mother were both from the underworld.Grandpa is a well-known figure in the underworld, and he is also Yin Mohan's male god and idol.

So Yin Mohan didn't want to follow the steps, he insisted on following in the footsteps of his grandfather, but after negotiating with his father repeatedly, and getting his father's final approval, after promising to be a "kind" underworld, he resolutely entered the underworld ranks.

After working hard for just a few years, Yin Mohan, relying on his own hard work and ability, and the connections through his father, managed to create a gang, Tu Ren, and make Tu Ren bigger and bigger. , not worse than my grandfather's.

Although my grandfather loves his grandson very much, he wants Yin Mohan to take his place.But Yin Mohan's answer is that he wants to create a new era through his own efforts.

Yuan Shuai also met Yin Mohan by chance when he was in junior high school, and he didn't know if the two had a similar taste or a heart-to-heart, and the two hit it off and became close brothers.

I still remember that time when the two of them made an oath together: not to be born on the same day in the same year, but to die on the same day in the same year.In the end, Yuan Shuai regretted it after swearing, how the hell did he forget that Yin Mohan was nine years older than him!

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