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Yoshida Koji's mood was very tangled, as if ten thousand grass mud horses were running over madly.

He never expected that Wei Gongchuan could write such a newspaper script for a simple romance manga.

He looked at Wei Gongchuan's expectant face, and the negative words were swallowed into his stomach again.

"Mr. Emiya...how did you come up with this story?"

Xia Chuanyu blinked: "Of course the materials are extracted from real life!"

Yoshida Koji thought of the layers of courtyards when he first visited, and suddenly understood why the love comics drawn by Emiyagawa were so distorted.

Because in the land where he grew up, I am afraid that there is no free and pure love.

Yoshida Koji instantly fell into the pity of the bewildered.

He pondered for a moment and said: "Teacher Wei Gong, I hope you can understand that this story is a little darker for teenagers."

Xia Chuanyu nodded, he understands this, after all, the stories of those people in his hometown are adult love stories.

"If you really plan to use this story to participate in the Romance Comic Contest, I can tell you frankly that the results may not be very satisfactory."

Xia Chuanyu was taken aback for a moment, he looked at the script he had written, and sighed for a while: "I'm sorry."

Yoshida Koji waved his hands again and again and said, "Please don't say I'm sorry, Mr. Emiya. I'm too rude to say it."

Yoshida Koji blamed himself all over his face: "You were born in a family, and you used to meet a limited number of people. When you reached the age of entering middle school, you became a manga artist early and worked hard all day. I heard that you also wrote scripts in school? If it wasn't for work It takes up your time and prevents you from enjoying student life and feeling the blooming and rainy season, so I’m afraid you wouldn’t write this kind of script, would you?”

Xia Chuanyu tilted his head, what does the editor mean by this?

"As your editor, I didn't notice this, it's really remiss of me!"

Yoshida Koji is really annoyed at this moment, the main reason is that Hiramaru is too a jerk, after allowing Hiramaru to travel once in the first half of the year, he couldn't bear it anymore, he wanted to go out all day, and started to be passive and sabotage, his attention was all blocked by Hiramaru Yiye was attracted away, and he ignored Mr. Weigong's side. It's really... unforgivable!

Yoshida Koji's eyes were burning with anger: "As an apology, I will definitely help you get No.1 this time!!"

Xia Chuanyu: "..." Something seems wrong.

Yoshida Koji read the story carefully, and finally said: "Teacher, this competition is a short comic, you don't need to set it so complicated, hostile or family hatred, just ignore it, or set it as grabbing things. .”

He said earnestly: "In the beginning, both of them were childhood sweethearts. They helped each other train, and secretly communicated with each other behind their parents' backs. They met to reconcile and made an agreement. After the man got something, he would give it to the woman as a bride price, and the woman would give the thing Bring it back as a dowry, so that the treasure belongs to the child."

Xia Chuanyu was stunned when he heard that.

"About fifty pages of comics, let's focus on the last explosion!" Yoshida Koji spoke very quickly: "First, after the male lead got the things, his father said that he wanted to marry him, and just as he was about to refuse, the married woman appeared in front of him , Said to have his child!"

Xia Chuanyu opened his mouth wide.

"The married woman and the heroine are good sisters. That night, the male protagonist remembered the wrong person and mistakenly thought it was the female protagonist! Then the married woman took advantage of this to propose marriage. Under the pressure of the family and children, the male protagonist agreed to the marriage. When the hostess found out, she went to their secret base angrily to look for the hostess, but waited for the trap set by the married woman, and then the woman escaped desperately. Ten days later, at the wedding, the hostess killed the married woman. The real lover of the married woman killed the heroine angrily, only then did the hero know that the child was not his, and everything was fake, he broke down completely, killed the lover, and set fire to the wedding scene, resulting in the death of all the big figures of the Mu clan. The head of the Fire Clan avenged his daughter and razed the Mu Clan, and when they won the war, they encountered natural disasters, and as a result, both the Wood and Fire Clans died!"

Yoshida Koji looked at Xia Chuanyu: "What do you think of this story?"

Xia Chuanyu gasped, this is a newspaper expert!

He said tactfully: "In this case, I can't finish the painting in one sentence."

"Then tell the story!" Yoshida Koji said decisively: "One hundred pages should be able to end this story!"

Xia Chuanyu looked at Yoshida Koji, whose fighting spirit was about to turn into fire, and said weakly, "This story is darker than my original version, right? Is it okay to put it on the jump?"

"No problem! Anyway, the first chapter is pure and fresh. It must be a childhood sweetheart. It can make people laugh when you look at it. The picture must be beautiful. Regardless of the hero or heroine, you must add close-up shots. It must be sweet!" Yoshida Koji excitedly said : "This way everyone will be surprised when the ending comes!!"

Yes, I was covered in black mud. How can I prevent readers from feeling the black mud Dafa of Teacher Wei Gong? !

Yoshida Koji secretly thought, if it was all pure and pure love stories, the game would not be a hit.

The corner of Xia Chuanyu's mouth twitched, and he scratched his head: "Okay, then draw like this."

It took Xia Chuanyu a week to finish the first chapter.

He set the character of the Fire Clan patriarch as Hinata, and the Mu Clan patriarch as Neji. This pair of childhood sweethearts is so sweet to everyone. Watching the interaction between the two children, everyone will laugh involuntarily. When he got up, Ma Canghao, who was on vacation in the middle of the competition, looked at Xia Chuanyu's draft with a particularly delicate expression.

He said: "I never thought you would draw such a pure and fresh love story?"

Xia Chuanyu wanted to laugh when he thought of the plot of the follow-up story. He pursed his lips, trying to suppress the smile on his lips, and said slowly: "Hua Yue contributed a lot of material."

Although Fengniaoyuan Kagetsu had to learn a lot of things in his childhood and had no time to play around, but he had a good horse!What will you say when you are playing, what will you go to play, what is your mood when you are avoiding training, what are your thoughts after hooking each other and having a little secret, Huayue knows best, thanks to Huayue, the first chapter is serious Sweet as honey.

Ma Cang stretched out his hand: "The script for the second chapter, I know you must have finished it."

Without raising his head, Xia Chuan drew the latest issue of Hokage with one hand, and took out a notebook from the stack of books on the table with the other hand and threw it to Ma Canghao: "Look."

Ten minutes later, Ma Canghao raised his head expressionlessly, and threw the notebook in front of Xia Chuanyu.

"What are the last twenty pages?"

Xia Chuanyu laughed loudly: "How is it? Does it feel particularly sour?"

Ma Cang closed his eyes and opened them again. The anger in his eyes before had disappeared. He hehe: "I feel like eating mustard when I want to eat sugar."

Xia Chuanyu smiled and said, "So this is the song of the Warring States Period~"

Ma Canghao: "You are really bad." He got up and went to Xia Chuanyu's side: "Is this the latest Hokage manuscript?"

"Well, do you want to see it?"

"Did you tell me that the third generation is dead?"

"not dead."

"It's a pity." Ma Canghao curled his lips: "There is no one dead?"

Xia Chuanyu shook his head: "It's not time to die yet."

Ma Cang said casually: "Will you have to wait for a long time?"

"Of course not." Xia Chuanyu said as it should, "Of course he will die in the hands of his apprentice."

Now in the plot, the third generation is still eating bento, and the fifth generation is the attending physician. If the third generation really swallows the bento, then the fifth generation will be in trouble?So Xia Chuanyu thought about it carefully, and decided to eat the bento after Tsunade's return.

In this way, the third generation does not count as dying in the hands of the fifth generation~

Tsunade hadn't received treatment for many years, and she killed her teacher as soon as she returned to the village. As a result, her fear of blood intensified, and she left the village again.

After listening to the general plot, Ma Canghao couldn't help nodding: "That's right. Political struggles have always been so dark and cruel. How could the Fifth Hokage really help the Third Hokage? Sure enough, according to your setting, the Third Hokage has three disciples. This disciple is actually a competitor of Hokage, the fifth generation's opponent."

The more Asakura talked, the more he praised: "Three apprentices, Orochimaru was exposed for human experimentation, Tsunade was troubled by blood phobia, Jiraiya, who just appeared on the stage, has a dissolute personality, and has a bad reputation... This fifth generation is really a sleight of hand. Superb guy."

Shin, Five Generations of Hokage, Natsukawa Fish, Emiyagawa: "..."

He said with difficulty: "Actually, even if the fifth generation can't do the black hands, the body of the third generation can't do it either."

In fact, after Orochimaru attacked Konoha that year, Sandai's body did collapse. If he and Tsunade hadn't joined forces to treat him, Sandai would definitely have received a lunch box. Sit in the office and write documents, or guard the rear with the help of many junin.

The main reason is that Orochimaru's sword was really accurate. If it was even one millimeter more to the left, the third generation would really be dead.

Ma Canghao snorted coldly: "I'm quite optimistic about the fifth generation, he will be the final boss in the future, right?"

...How can Uchiha Madara be so embarrassing?Is the legendary Otsuki Kaguya going to cry blind?

Xia Chuanyu's mood was extremely delicate.

He coughed repeatedly: "It's still early, I won't spoil it."

Ma Canghao shifted his attention to the tutor again: "Speaking of which, when I was with Mr. Xie Pila, I didn't know that there were so many stories between you and that boss named Peng Gelie?"

At this moment, the plot of the story has progressed to parting ways with Ra to develop Pengelie. Among the family members, Naker and G are already in place, and Elena with thick thighs is about to go online.

Xia Chuanyu nodded: "He's actually a pretty good kid."

Ma Canghao glanced at it, then put it down again.

He is not very interested in this kind of story where he can tell at a glance, but Hokage is more interesting.

"I met Diarmuid in Pachi Village."

When Ma Canghao talked about the Shaman King competition, his face was full of smiles: "That spirit is really good, and it will greatly help Ye's strength."

Speaking of Diarmuid...

Xia Chuanyu was surprised and said, "Ma Cangye can use a two-handed sword?" The progress is quite fast!

"No." Ma Canghao shrugged: "But those two swords can bring anger to Ye, I am very satisfied."

He said meaningfully: "An angry leaf can burst out with great power, this is my half body."

Xia Chuanyu didn't bother to deal with his brother's accusation, so he had to go along with this kind of person and say, "Of course, that's your brother. Speaking of which, I haven't officially met your brother yet."

Ma Cang took a good look at Xia Chuanyu: "After the official competition starts, there will be many opportunities."

Xia Chuanyu's eyes flickered slightly, he smiled and said, "Then I have to take a good look."

Asakura suddenly said, "You can ask Shirou to come and open your eyes."

Xia Chuanyu was silent for a while before saying: "Forget it, Shirou will start school at that time, so there is no time."

Ma Canghao nodded, turned his face away, and raised the corners of his lips slightly.

If he remembers correctly, the Holy Grail War is next year?

"The Shaman King... Contest?"

Emiya Shirou was peeling potatoes while talking to the paper figurine in front of him.

"Xiao Chuan won't let me go?"

Paper figurine Ma Canghao: "Yeah, your brother doesn't seem to want you to have too much contact with these things?" He said in a harsh tone, "Maybe your brother doesn't believe in your ability."

Wei Gong Shirou was silent for a while before saying: "Before Xiao Chuan took me to the gathering of demon masters, which shows that he has recognized my ability, but everything should be done slowly, Xiao Chuan probably wants me to adapt myself one time."

Paper figurine Ma Canghao: "Haha, you are kind-hearted, but do you want to see your strength in advance? The heroic spirits from the last Holy Grail War will appear in the psychic contest."

Emiya Shirou's eyes lit up: "Really?"

"of course it's true."

Emiya Shiro frowned: "The game time is too tight, I can't go to the uninhabited island without telling Xiao Chuan."

Paper figurine Ma Canghao: "Don't you have a cat you? Let the cat record video for you."

Speaking of Maoyou, Ma Canghao was very angry. In the [-]th century, Maoyou tricked him so much that he almost missed the preliminaries. He has not yet avenged this revenge.

Shirou Emiya was taken aback: "What about Maomata...will Ogawa find out?"

"It depends on your means."

Hehe, it would be nice to be discovered. It would be even better if Wei Gongchuan could beat the cat up again.

Emiya Shiro thought deeply for a while. In view of the success of the cat and bell bug last time, he decided to buy a cat and bell video recorder this time, and wait for the cat to come back to watch the video.

But there is a very real problem here.

...he has no money.

Here I want to solemnly explain the financial management of the Emiya family.

The two brothers of the Emiya family and Kazuki, who is a boarding house, mainly rely on Natsukawa Yu's manga manuscript fees and book income. Kazuki has extra money, but neither Natsukawa U nor Emiya Shiro asked about Hana The month is over, after all, the Black Bird Yard pays the boarding fee in the middle of the night.

One of Huayue's expenses went to the midnight card of the Black Bird Yard, and most of Xia Chuanyu's manga money was used to buy magic materials, part of it was deposited in the bank for interest, and the last part was used for living expenses.

Although Emiya Shiro also went to the field to practice, but he didn't earn a penny from the missions, and it was all counted as the teaching fee of the field.

In the daily living expenses, the tuition fees for the two of them occupy a large part. After all, the Ice Emperor Academy is a private noble school, and the poor food and clothing will make the students look down on it. There are also purchase fees for club activities, and The guidance fee paid to Kagome Higurashi, the annual maintenance fee of the Emiya old house in Fuyuki City, the offering fee to Yahara Temple, etc.

To sum it up, in fact, the annual expenses of the Emiya family... are very large. The reason why Emiyagawa and Emiya Shiro can live happily with such expenses is all because of the fact that the family saved them A large amount of communication expenses—after all, Xia Chuanyu is legally underage, and the communication expenses of many family forces can be represented by Chang Yimen—and a considerable amount of inheritance left by his father, Emiya Kiritsugu.

But Xia Chuanyu didn't dare to use too much. In theory, there was still part of Illya's inheritance, so he couldn't spend it all!

Emiya Shirou doesn't have much living expenses. If he just lives at home to buy vegetables and cook, the money is enough, but if he wants to do something else...of course it is not enough.

Now Emiya Shirou's only way to make money is to become a demon master, but he must not accept the task through the field, otherwise he will not get a penny.

So he set his eyes on... Natsume.

If he remembered correctly, Ogawa said that Natsume was living with relatives, right?

What if he has no money?

"Painting talismans makes money." Natsume replied simply: "My healing talismans can be sold for a lot of money."

Emiya Shiro held the phone in distress: "Except for this? I think I have some experience in eliminating demons. I want to try to take the task alone, but I don't have a source of customers..."

"I do know a demon extermination master. He sometimes lacks assistants. If you want, I can recommend it to him."

"Ah, thank you, Natsume, you were so helpful!"

"You're welcome." Natsume paused, and suddenly said: "Mr. Wei Gong, I have a puzzle..."

"what happened?"

"...If I offend you, please forgive me, but there is a problem that has troubled me for a long time." Natsume whispered: "If a person is not strong enough but still wants to save people, will he cause trouble for others?"

Emiya Shirou thought for a while and said, "It's quite troublesome, but... just because there are such people in this world, the exorcists will work hard to eliminate monsters and protect human beings."

"Don't let those kind-hearted humans die at the hands of monsters. Isn't that the reason for our existence?"

Xia Mu's eyes suddenly widened, tears flashed faintly, his voice trembled slightly, but the corners of his lips were raised high, revealing a bright smile.

"Ah, thank you, Emiya-kun."

The exorcist Natori recommended by Natsume is named Natori Monday, and he is a well-known... star.

"I found that... people in [another world] have a variety of occupations."

The first time we met, Emiya Shirou felt very strange. After shaking hands with this Mr. Natori Monday, his first reaction was...

"Would you sign it for me, whether it's done or not?"

I sold it for a lot of money =v=

Natori laughed on Monday, took the notebook and wrote his name in a chic manner.

"You are the elder brother of His Royal Highness Chuan?"

Emiya Shiro was surprised: "In the legend?"

The introducer Natsume also stared round his eyes: "His Highness Chuan?"

Looking at the blank expressions of the two teenagers, Natori couldn't help laughing again.

"Ah, you don't even know."

At this moment, the three of them were sitting in a cafe, and the cafe was very quiet. The three of them were sitting behind the potted plants, and almost no one could see them.

Natori Monday looked at Emiya Shirou with a smile: "Your brother has the favor of the gods. To a certain extent, he is the spokesperson of the gods. If he joins Shinto, he will probably become a great priest immediately."

Emiya Shirou asked in surprise: "The great priest?"

Natsume still didn't understand: "Then why are you called His Highness?"

"Because the gods can appear in the human world through Wei Gongchuan, if you call the gods... how dare you not use the honorific title?"

Emiya Shirou frowned, he thought about it carefully, and finally said in frustration: "...I don't know at all."

Natori Zhou smiled, and he changed the subject: "I heard from Natsume that you want to be a demon exorcist?"

"Correct."

"But aren't you a disciple of the first school?" Natori Yiyi was well-informed in the circle.

Emiya Shirou said helplessly: "If I go out with the mission in the name of the field, all the work funds I get will go to the field, and I won't get a penny."

Natori Yiyi was stunned for a moment, and said clearly: "So that's the case, should it be said that it is a place where the interests are paramount?"

He said: "Since you intend to be my assistant, I'm also very happy, but I don't know much about your strength, so you don't get a share of the first order. If you prove your strength after the first order is over, then From now on, we will split between three and seven, how about it?"

Emiya Shiro nodded: "Okay! No problem!"

Natori said curiously on Monday: "Aren't you afraid that I will trick you? Just trust me like that?"

Emiya Shiro scratched his head: "Since you know about Ogawa, I don't think you will cheat me."

Natori Zhou Yi was dumbfounded, yes, who wants to be sent to Huangquan Kingdom for a day trip by His Royal Highness who is highly valued by the Queen of Huangquan? !

"Then it's settled."

Without Xia Chuanyu's knowledge, Emiya Shiro found a new way to make money. By the time the school started in September, he had sent out three missions and successfully bought a small video recorder.

At the same time, all the love comic showdown activities organized by Boy Jump have also ended. Starting from August, each issue of the magazine will add a love comic by an author. Some authors end one episode, and some authors end two episodes. , and continued until the end of October, when all authors have finished serializing and entered the final voting stage.

Jump released three rankings this time, the first ranking: the manga you think you want to fall in love with after reading it, the second ranking: the manga you think is the most impressive, and the third ranking: the manga you most want to change into a full-length novel Serialized comics.

In the three rankings, Xia Chuanyu won the first place in all of them.

"Mr. Emiya, this is the result of the ranking."

Xia Chuanyu couldn't straighten up laughing directly after seeing the ranking.

The first ranking, the Warring States Anthem ranks the bottom one.

Many readers commented that...

[I didn't expect Emiya-sensei's love manga to be so dark. After reading it, I completely despaired of boys! 】【Is Teacher Wei Gong broken in love? 】

[The first half of the story is so sweet, the second half of the story is suddenly dark, what's wrong with you, Wei Gong teacher? 】【After reading it, I completely gave up on love. 】

……

The second ranking, the Warring States Anthem ranked first.

Reader Comments:

[I was so impressed, when I close my eyes now, I see the scene of the heroine killing the supporting actress. ]【Among these comics, Teacher Wei Gong's story is the most shocking. The story is indeed very old-fashioned, but why after reading it, my heart is filled with... the anger of tearing up the book? 】【Among a group of sweet and beautiful stories about love, the only one that describes the despair and madness of love is worthy of Mr. Emiya. 】……

In the third place, Song of the Warring States is ranked first from the bottom.

Reader Comments:

[I don't want to read this long story at all, the short story is enough to make people sad, and the long story is simply unacceptable. 】【The contradiction of this story lies in the sudden turning point and sudden explosion. If it is changed to a long story, it will lose this charm, and it is not supported to change to a long story. 】【Mr. Emiya should concentrate on painting Hokage, the tutor is also very good, as for this Warring States song, please forget it! 】【I feel as uncomfortable as being forcibly fed black mud. When I think that I will drink black mud every day after it becomes a novel, I am completely desperate. 】……

Yoshida Koji smiled.

"I just said, the teacher must be the first!"

Regardless of whether it is positive or negative, it is the first anyway.