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Xia Chuanyu modified a lot of things under the suggestion of Ma Canghao. What he modified were the basic settings, the overall story direction, the development trend of the story, the overall difficulty of the story, and the character settings. Egg, no detailed follow-up script content.

While Xia Chuanyu was busy rushing to finish the manuscript, Dee Chang Jingsi added fuel to the fire: "Don't forget that you have already passed the transfer examination and become a sixth-year student, and you will take the entrance examination in March next year. If you go to an ordinary public school like before, we This place can help you get over it, but if it's a private middle school..."

He showed a nasty smile: "Aren't you going to go to school with your brother? Since you invited him to go to school in Tokyo, it must be an excellent private high school, right? Private high schools have their own entrance examinations, so you should learn some. "

Xia Chuanyu: "..."

What more can he say?

Shadow Clone Dafa is good!Let's start working honestly!

Zhang Jingsi is indeed capable. Xia Chuanyu asked for leave for years and did not go to school. It is impossible to graduate with that kind of attendance rate, but Chang Jingsi has already helped Xia Chuanyu and Tokyo Bingdi Private Middle School. It is absolutely fine for Yu to pass the admissions exam. It is also okay to ask for leave, but one-fourth of the attendance rate must be guaranteed.

——Because Xia Chuanyu's attendance rate in public elementary schools is 0.

Xia Chuanyu was very sad, but thinking about Emiya Shirou being involved in the Holy Grail War... He sighed and decided to go to school anyway.

Yoshida Koji welcomes Xia Chuanyu's plan to continue his studies. Elementary school cartoonist sounds good, but from another aspect, he also has the suspicion of not doing his job properly. It would be even better if Xia Chuanyu can go to high school and university smoothly.

—He is dreaming.

Since he has to go to school, the profession of manga has become a tasteless one, and it is a pity that it is useless to eat it, but Xia Chuanyu is not a person who gives up halfway, he admits it as soon as he gritted his teeth, isn't it just the bastard who draws Naruto, and it is rare to have him ? !

Xia Chuanyu began to draw manga diligently.

With the avatar technique and shikigami, Xia Chuanyu's efficiency is extremely high. In view of his redesign, the story of the first chapter has been changed.

He lowered Naruto's IQ, raised his EQ, raised Sasuke's IQ, and lowered his EQ, and the pairing was just right. Since Konoha's groups were all in groups of three, Xia Chuanyu still made Sakura a team member of Naruto Sasuke. But this time!

In order to embody the essence of shonen comics and follow the editor's guidance, Xia Chuanyu set Sakura as the heroine.

Yes, as a shounen manga, at least one male and one female protagonists are basically unchanged, and beautiful female characters can also attract a lot of popularity!

Given that Naruto is the male protagonist and Sakura is the female protagonist, the two of them are a couple... Hehe, let's talk nonsense.

Naruto with a lower IQ will make a lot of funny moves, and he is not as handsome as Sasuke. As long as Sakura is not blind, she will definitely like Sasuke instead of Naruto.

So Naruto and Sasuke became brothers for Sakura?

Xia Chuanyu lay on the manuscript laughing like a dog.

He resubmitted the scripts of the first three episodes to Koji Yoshida, and Koji Yoshida breathed a sigh of relief after reading them carefully, his eyes brightened.

"It's very interesting, very interesting, great, please continue to work hard, Mr. Emiya!"

The story content of the first chapter has also been adapted, removing too many political issues and internal fighting issues at the beginning, and adding Naruto’s hard-working school career. Among them, Naruto and Sasuke fought, and then Naruto lost to Sasuke, but he still boasted in front of Sakura that he would pass the exam tomorrow, but Sakura didn't believe it.

The next day when Naruto really relied on his own strength to complete the exam, he was falsely accused by Sarutobi Kohamaru of plagiarism. Shimonin Sarutobi Konohamaru said: "Naruto is indeed stupid, but he is my opponent, I believe he will not cheat!"

Sarutobi Konohamaru was furious and had another fight with Sasuke. Naruto was very moved. When most people in Konoha hated him and the girl he liked didn't believe him, the bastard Sasuke actually stood up !

Naruto was encouraged, and said firmly: "I just didn't plagiarize, the big deal is to retake the exam!"

So the wise and powerful Lord Godai took the second exam. After the exam, Godai looked at the test paper and was very pleased. He personally gave the forehead protection to Naruto.

Konoha Maru's father died in the night of the Nine Tails, but Naruto was not the murderer, the fox. On the contrary, he was the hero who sealed the fox and saved the village. reconciliation.

In order to celebrate Naruto's success in the exam, Konoha Maru gave Naruto the collection of the third generation's grandfather, the scroll of the multiple shadow clone technique. After the third generation knew about it, he was furious at first, but then he was gratified at the photo of the fourth generation and his eldest son He smiled softly.

At the end, Godaime stands in the small building of Hokage, facing the slightly drunk wind, watching Naruto show off to Sasuke with his forehead in the distance, and Sasuke ignores Naruto's blowing hair and shows a gratified smile.

Although the depth of the plot has been reduced, it has increased contradictions, highlighted the charm of the characters, and added two ninja battles. The theme is positive and uplifting, which is in line with the current psychology of children and teenagers.

The first chapter is finally finished.

Xia Chuanyu breathed a sigh of relief, and to be honest, he hadn't considered things like this for many years. The cartoons drawn for children really don't need so many psychological twists and turns, the true feelings are revealed naturally, just go straight.

After confirming the first chapter, the following content will be easy to handle. He first asked the avatar to write idea, and went to find Chang Jingsi himself.

"Are you sure you want to move there now?" Zhang Jingsi was a little surprised: "Is it too early?"

The junior high school will have to wait until April next year. If the manga is serialized, the editor can let the editor run away. Xia Chuanyu can just stay at home.

Xia Chuanyu shook his head, he said: "It's better to prepare earlier." After a pause, he added: "This year I want to invite Shirou to celebrate the New Year together, and I haven't seen him for more than two years."

By the way, Amway and Shirou go to Tokyo to go to school together, presumably Shirou will not refuse, and that guy Asakura Hao may come to him, if he always stays at Mamamoto’s house, come to him, Asakura Hao and Ma Shizuka It's not convenient to say.

Chang Jingsi thought for a while and said, "I asked Higurashi Sota before, and he said it's not convenient to live in his house. Do you have any other plans?"

In fact, Higurashi Sota was also very depressed. He welcomed Emiyagawa to live in his house, but the problem was that there was a terrible well and a terrible dog brother-in-law!A big dog demon who forced his sister to send Xiaopang [cat] to relatives because he was a dog!

If Wei Gongchuan lived in the house, and one day the dog brother-in-law and sister came home, the dog sniffed and smelled the smell of a strange exorcist...

...Brother-in-law dog will definitely overturn the beams of the house! !

Moreover, Wei Gongchuan is also a person from the same family. What is his attitude towards monsters?

Sunset Grass thought it over and over again, but still refused.

It's a pity for Xia Chuanyu, but Mama Higurashi's food is so good, it tastes like home.

He said: "In that case, let's live in Shinjuku."

He'd better go to his friend Jian Shibingwei and forget about it.

Chang Jingsi nodded: "I see."

Xia Chuanyu paid for it, and Dechang went out to help Xia Chuanyu buy a two-story villa in Shinjuku, with a small garden and a garage behind it. Although it was a little small, it was exquisite enough. After seeing it, Xia Chuanyu said it was special satisfy.

After packing up his research over the years, Xia Chuanyu moved into a villa in Shinjuku, Tokyo half a month later.

After spending a day settling in, Xia Chuanyu sent a message to Ma Canghao, telling him that he had moved, and that he should not throw himself into a trap and ran to the gate of the field. No one opened the enchantment for him this time.

Ma Canghao responded very quickly, and only said that he knew and would come to visit when he had time.

But Xia Chuanyu didn't expect that on the second day he arrived in Tokyo, Higurashi's mother came to visit with Higurashi Kusata under her pressure.

Xia Chuanyu frowned slightly, then smiled again: "Thank you for your kindness, but..."

"Ah, my Kusata is really good. It's no problem if you want to come and borrow me. Kusata just thinks too much." Higurashi's mother warmly invited Xiachuan Uo to live in Higurashi Shrine: "You are still young! Children live in such a big place My house is not safe, so come live with me!"

Higurashi's mother stared at Higurashi Kusata while talking, she didn't know that the child Wei Gongchuan was coming to live, and her daughter was indeed in trouble, but her daughter didn't live at home every day, and Kusata was studying in Kumamoto, so the family How lonely she and grandpa are, it's good to have a child living here.

And Mama Higurashi has another idea, Kusata still needs the elders of Emiyagawa to take care of them in Kumamoto and reciprocate, so she naturally needs to take good care of Emiyagawa.

Xia Chuanyu looked at Rimucao's bitter expression, then looked at Rimu's mother's warm and loving face, hesitated and said, "That's good, I'm here when I'm working on weekdays, and on rest days..."

He bowed seriously: "Just please."

That night, Higurashi Sota ran over again.

He said apologetically, "I'm really sorry, there was a reason for rejecting you before."

Xia Chuanyu said: "If it really brings you trouble, then forget it."

Hi Mucao opened his mouth too, he shook his head, and said softly: "What does Wei Gong-kun think of monsters?"

Xia Chuanyu raised his eyebrows: "...Does your family have something to do with monsters?"

Sunset Grass sighed, "Yes, my brother-in-law is a dog demon."

Xia Chuanyu understood in an instant, no wonder Higurashi Kusanagi was so unwilling, the attitude of the Mamoto clan towards monsters...was extremely bad, it was normal for Higurashi Kusao to hesitate.

Xia Chuanyu said: "Don't worry, I just pretend I didn't see it."

Sunset Grass let out a long breath and said gratefully, "Thank you."

What?Dog brother-in-law's opinion?Higurashi's mother can kill him directly.

In order to apologize, Higurashi Sota said: "Are you busy with work? If not, come to the shrine tomorrow. Mom said that she will clean up a small room for you. I hope you like it."

Xia Chuanyu smiled: "I'm causing you trouble."

But Xia Chuanyu didn't think so the next day.

Higurashi Shrine is a good place, it is still the vermilion torii, it is still the tall and warm sacred tree, and it is still a quiet and mysterious environment. However, Grandpa Higurashi asked Xia Chuanyu to help him move the cabinets in the warehouse, and because of curiosity, he walked to the next door. The room was bumped by that nervous dog again, after Xia Chuanyu's saber Kaga Kiyomitsu fell into the well in the room! !

He turned over and jumped in ==

A slip, Xia Chuanyu came 500 years ago.