[Bottle Evil] Snowy Illusion

I wrote the ending the night before yesterday, then revised it for a day yesterday, reworked it twice, and finally typed out the last word "end".

Xue Yu is my first novel, and it is not an exaggeration to say that I have more affection for it than all the short stories and half-formed novellas I have written before.

But it can also be regarded as "love-hate". Although I have always said that I will not be cheated, it is not that I have never thought of giving up, because my literary strength is limited, my energy is limited, and my motivation is also limited. It is really painful when I am Cavin.

In these three things, strength is hardware, so it goes without saying that energy is something I can control, and the most important thing I lack is motivation.

I have to admit that writing is still for people to read. Without readers, there will naturally be no motivation. For a long, slow-paced and clear original work, Xiang Pingxiewen, frankly speaking, I have to ask where I wrote it when I know it. Yes, I won't open it if it's less than half of it.

So here is a special thanks to the girls who have been following the article from the very beginning, and leave me a message almost every update. Your messages can go around me many times. www also saved my glass heart.

Speaking of writing, Xueyu’s original idea was only a very simple line. I divided it into upper and lower parts. The upper part is the short stories of each character. Related to each other, eventually converged.Then the second half is a big business done after the convergence. (No deviation, because it is too simple)

At the beginning, the outline was just a few pages of random writing. I am more used to looking for inspiration and brainstorming in the process of writing. I was cured of my illness, but it was just "deviation" and "sudden inspiration" in the snowy area. , most of it can be justified because of luck, of course there must be bugs, and I will try to fill them in when I am editing.

But it is also because the outline is not detailed enough, and because I haven’t written such a long one, the first half is stuck badly. I remember that the one or two months at the end of last year were updated weekly, or even interrupted. After reading it, you are really true love. Thankfully, I persevered.

During the winter vacation, when I wrote the Banai chapter, it went smoothly. First, I overcame the frustration psychologically. Then, due to the previous accumulation, I still made some progress in writing skills. Very, so no matter how lazy I am, I still have time to fill in the holes.

I really started to feel that writing was smooth and enjoyable. It was probably in the two months after the start of school this year. I suspect that it was also because I wrote about Pingxie’s love life that went smoothlyˊ_>ˋSo I deceived myself and felt so happyˊ_>ˋ So I want the author to write quickly and get together soonˊ_>ˋ

And it's a miracle for me that this fire lasted until the end, and I actually finished writing it.

Let's talk about the content of the text.

—————Background and Style—————

【Connect to the sea of ​​sand】

At the beginning I watched Sha Hai completely looking for clues about my little brother, but I found out that the main character was a little boy, so he danced very fast, and then accidentally fell in love with the evil emperorˊ_>ˋ

For the sake of the evil emperor, I read it again. I personally feel that Sha Hai is the best written in the Tomb Raiders Notes series. This kind of feeling that gives people goosebumps from time to time is really great.

However, I yearn for it, but my writing power is hard to match.

It takes courage to write the story of Shahai, it is too complicated and the characters are very complicated.Fortunately, I was ignorant and fearless at the time. After reading it, I didn’t want to skip and ignore it. In the end, I decided to write this story according to the existing clues behind Sha Hai.But also because of this adventure, after a lot of hard thinking and meditation, he barely connected with Sha Hai.

【Original style】

It's really hard to say. The original style I understand is the style of the third uncle's writing. It seems that I am reading the original work.

At first I marked it like this, but later I silently changed it to "the direction of the original work". I can only say that it is a story of the background of the original work, and I dare not say that the style of writing is the style of the original work.

In fact, there were indeed imitations at the beginning, including Tibetan sea flowers and sand seas, diction and the feeling of digging ˊ_>ˋ, but in the second half of the story, there are still more personal styles.I don't think it's bad, I'm quite happy, the imitation is someone else's after all (Third Uncle, do you still dislike it?)

In short, this is not forced, and there is no need to force it, just look at the third uncle in the original style~

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【Wu Xie】

He patted his chest and said loudly: No. [-] male lead!Argue if you are not convinced (Forget it, I can’t argue with you)

Because of the influence of Sha Hai's style, all the descriptions of Wu Xie at the beginning were basically from the perspective of a bystander, first Li Cuo, then Zhang Haike, but I also feel that this perspective can make the evil emperor very charming and cool He is very handsome, so he has never dared to analyze his thoughts and his heart positively.

Wu Xie is a very complicated character in the original book, especially after Sha Hai, the charisma of the characters soared, and it completely dragged me to the wall (fortunately, I held on to the wall of my little brother and did not fall offˊ_>ˋOh, you It makes sense to say that they are in the same wall)

Let me talk about Wu Xie in the original book first. I especially like the passage from Li Cuo’s perspective in Sanshu’s original text: Wu Xie is controllable, no matter what he does out of the ordinary, you can see the simplicity and harmony in his heart. Suffering, he is a weakling.Even though his wrists are unbelievably strong, at the end of the day, he is a weakling.

It is not to emphasize Wu Xie's "weakness", he is really not weak at all, but those kind natures have not changed.At least I believe so, and write Wu Xie according to this understanding.

What I hope is that although Wu Xie can't completely get rid of the shadows of the past ten years in the end, at least he can leave them behind, just like shadows, follow after him, but there is still light in front of him.

Let’s talk about my own story. The first half of the story also tried to continue the feeling of Sha Haili, but I hope that Wu Xie will be in charge of the game. When I see him, I will feel like seeing the little brother in the tomb robber’s notes. I feel at ease. .

The obvious change began after entering the snow mountain. I found that as long as the little brother was by his side, it would be difficult for me to write Wu Xie like the first half. People who read it would shout that Boss Wu is so handsome, because everyone said that he It has become "counseling handsome", but I unexpectedly like this description, because I always feel that Wu Xie in front of my little brother is still different.So Wu Xie became "cute" occasionally, but he still persisted, and what he was obsessed with never wavered.

When I thought about telling a wife whether such a change would be abrupt, she had a wonderful analogy. After meeting the little brother, the hedgehog first withdrew its thorns, and then began to show its bellyˊ_>ˋ(Wu Boss, I really don’t want to say anything about you).

Probably not too abrupt, after all, the person to be mentioned below is too special to Boss Wu.

【Bro】

The little brother is the character I have been fascinated with since the beginning of the Tomb Raiders Notebook. When I first watched the Tomb Raiders, because the little brother entered the bronze door, I stayed up late to see him appear again before going to bed with peace of mind (this is why I am so obsessed with Golmud. Oops)

In the third uncle’s text, almost all the descriptions about the younger brother are impressive, but the one that touched me the most was mentioned in a short story called "Reminiscence": he has no friends, only partners.It is companionship, unable to share any joy and pain.A person, no longer dare to ask extravagantly, even if it is just companionship.This is my initial impression of Zhang Qiling, in the heavy snow, like a god and a beast, absolutely lonely.

It has been a long time since I accidentally read this passage. The girls who I am familiar with seem to be the same as me. When it comes to my brother, the most direct feeling is still distressed.

So with this kind of heartache, I did everything possible to "please" him in the story. The girls who read it will definitely remember that in my original plot, there is almost no place where I abused my brother. The abuse is all the original works of the third uncle. In the point, I pulled it out and rendered it.I really don’t want to part with it, and it’s unnecessary, the original works are so cruel, please give him some romance and warmth (I’m too nympho TUT)

The little brother’s psychological description in the story is also pitiful. Although I feel distressed, I still can’t guess the little brother’s heart. He always thinks more than anyone else, calmly and directly points to the vitals than anyone else.The only positive statement is his attitude towards Wu Xie. After all, this is a bottle of evil, and we still have to come out appropriately.But I am worried about the literary style of writing a girl's heart, so I can only click to the end, even the stalks are from the original work, the only one who contacts Shenma, I am afraid of Su, but my heart really keeps shouting: Lao Zhang Love to confess, push him down and force kiss.

Another line about the little brother is his fate. This thing really tortured me to death in the original book.So the first theme and idea of ​​this opening article is to let the little brother jump out of this fate.Finally, all kinds of forceful pulls, I pulled him out, so, brother, you can be happy (sorry for being crazy again)

【Fatty】

The fat man gave me the impression in the original book that he was always a loyal and pure man, and he was more likable than the fat man in the ghost blowing lamp (oh, there is no comparison, just thought of it).What surprised me the most was his feelings for Yuncai. I always thought he would be a person who can see everything very openly, and it turns out that this is indeed the case, but it is precisely because of this that his grief for Yuncai's death can It is even more obvious that this man is of flesh and blood.

What's more, he has a deep brotherhood with Wu Xie and the younger brother. In the original book, it can be seen that Fatty is actually a character who has nothing to do with the ultimate and fate, Lao Jiumen and the Wang family and the Zhang family. To control this situation, or want to get out of it, only Fatty, his consideration has never been these, but his two brothers.

So in fact, among the three, I admire Fatty the most. Wu Xie and the little brother have no choice but to choose him, and he can accept it, open-minded and unrestrained.

In the story, I threw the last hot secret to him, because I believe that the fat man is the only one who can truly resolve it, and only by handing it over to the fat man can world peace be maintained. ˊ_>ˋ

But I can't write him well. I still feel that in my story, the fat man didn't show his due demeanor, but just kept being a green leaf, which is a pity.

【Li Tuo】

Some girls said that the main character is Li Cu, but I can’t refute itˊ_>ˋ. The first half of the story is about how powerful and handsome Wu Xie is, and it basically depends on his perspective. Later, this kid’s performance is getting better and better. I can say, I I fell in love with this character in my own story (also narcissisticˊ_>ˋ)

Li Cuo in the original book is also very complicated. A teenager who has experienced so many things will definitely be changed if he doesn't want to change.But what I like about him is that even if he is forced to do something, he will not obey subjectively. He looks very stubborn and stubborn, but it is actually a rare personality.

There are many aspects of Li Cu’s personality that resonate with me, and I think there should be many people like me.He has no obvious advantages, but he is pure and courageous. Although he suffered heavy consequences because of his impulsiveness, he is always awkward and consistent.

So I am also trying to express his complexity and multi-faceted, but there are also his choices and persistence, and finally converge to one point, I want to write about his growth.

Apart from Ping Xie's emotions, Li Cuo's growth is what I want to express most.

Some people may think that Li Cu has nothing to do with the end of his fate, but I think this is his own choice. He can grow up during the trip to Changbai, and it is a worthwhile trip for him.A person always has to prove himself, others prove it, and he proves it to himself, and Li Cu has done it.

Of course, it’s good to be cute once in a while, but the scene between Li Cu and the snake, although the effect of expression is limited, I was moved by him.At the end of the story, his birthday was written, and some girls understood what I meant.It is a sign of most people's psychological and physical maturity, and I also hope that he can take this step smoothly. (From then on, I got promoted and raised my salary, married Bai Fumei, and went to the pinnacle of life (not)

Probably like the ending of many disaster films, it is the birth of some beautiful new things, such as the birth of a baby, the sprouting of a grass, Li Cu has grown so big, so he had to write another "" Birth", to express my hope for a better future for all.

【Zhang Haike】

Girls who have read the article will definitely find that the uncle is also a character that I "value" very much. There are many scenes, and it is quite complicated.

I also like Zhang Haike in the original book, especially when I saw that he chose to be with my brother because he looked at his thin and lonely figure when he was a child (again because of the nympho) and felt very kind to him.What's more, Ya still has a face of Wu Xie, hey, adding drama and drama.

Zhang Haike represented the Zhang family in the story, but he was also "whitewashed" by me, because I hope he will stand on the side of Wu Xie and my brother, whether he likes it or not, as long as Wu Xie and my brother are happy ˊ_>ˋ

He is considered a clue person, so there is nothing more to say, but please take care of Uncle, after all, he is also Wu Xiepo's family (mistake)

【Su Wan】

Little angel, I don't have any special feelings for him in the original book. This kid is a little dumb, but cute.

The story is basically cute, but what I hope is that he will grow up.

【black glasses】

The blind man in Notes on Tomb Raiders doesn't have many scenes, but he is very eye-catching.Sha Haili is simply stealing the limelight. Although I will stay away from people with this personality, but it doesn't hinder me.

I'm not very good at writing about blind people, so I borrowed from the more prominent points in the original book: ease and chic.I also wanted to write him as a warrior as much as possible. After all, the value of force is very high, and he was injured the most in the end (orz)

Maybe I still have some pessimistic feelings about him, and I always feel that he is also very tired, and it is time to take a rest (don't take the lunchboxˊ_>ˋ).

———————Character relationship (various emotional lines)———————

【Bottle evil】

Although this pair is the main thread, there is no need to say more. I have written all my understanding into the story word by word. The most important thing is the content in the ending chapter, the uniqueness.

What makes me happy is that there are many girls who have the same understanding as mine, or can accept my understanding.As the most important part of the whole story, I feel that I have achieved the goal infinitely close to [-]%, and I am very satisfied.

【Iron Triangle】

The iron triangle in the original book shocked me a lot. These three people have an unconditional trust in each other. As long as the three of them are together, no matter what they go through, they can overcome all difficulties and dangers.

Just like what he said in the original book when Wu Xie and Xiao Hua went to Sichuan, he felt guilty because those two people were not there.Also in the underground jade mine, Wu Xie still felt at ease because he was obviously trapped in a place with no way out, because he was with the fat man and the little brother.So they are not afraid.

If the presence of the little brother in the original book can make people feel safe, then the Audio-Technica will have double the sense of security when they are together.

Pingxie in the Iron Triangle, (forget it, you two are not pure brotherhood, I don’t want to continue flashing everyone)

Wu Xie and Fatty in the Iron Triangle.The part that made me very excited in Zanghaihua was the part where the fat man appeared under the call of Wu Xie.I remember Uncle San said that he originally only wanted to write a quiet story, but after the fat man appeared, he couldn't be quiet anymore.Because he missed those people more than Wu Xie.

The same is true for Sha Haili. I was once worried that Wu Xie's change would make him no longer trust anyone, but it can be seen from the lines that Fatty is not included in anyone.Fatty is like Wu Xie's elder brother. He saw his innocence and innocence from the moment we met him, and he protected him all the way. No matter how crazy and "willful" Wu Xie's plan was, he supported him and it was true. Put your life on the line.

In the story, the part where Wu Xie and Fatty are alone is in the Nether Palace. It’s a pity that Wu Xie has been entangled with my little brother, but he listens to Fatty’s words. He can also be in a relaxed state in front of Fatty. Fatty You can still tease him, you can run on him.

Later, Wu Xie was entangled in whether Fatty should continue to accompany him on the final journey, because he cherished this brother, but in the end, out of the deepest understanding of each other, Wu Xie did not say no, because he knew that Fatty would accompany him them.The same is true for Fatty, who could see through what Wu Xie was thinking at a glance.In fact, Fatty did not help in any real way to solve the ultimate problem, but it is precisely because of this that he still risked his life to accompany him, which was invaluable.

The fat man and the little brother in the Iron Triangle.There seems to be no direct description of the two of them being together alone in the original book. I have a yy episode myself, which is the one where they were trapped under the jade mine.I feel that these two people actually have a kind of tacit understanding in their hearts. Their attitudes towards Wu Xie, their attitudes towards puzzles, their attitudes towards each other's lives, and their responses to danger in various tense moments, they all have a look in the same eyes. A tacit understanding can be communicated.

The rivalry in the story is mainly Banai. I want to express this kind of tacit understanding, and of course the fat man's "loyalty" to the younger brother.

The younger brother will go to Fatty first because he knows Fatty well, trusts Fatty, and also because of the tacit understanding between them.And the fat man followed the little brother into the ancient building of the Zhang family without hesitation, and prevented the little brother from obtaining the secret again at the last moment, all because of his loyalty as a buddy, and of course his wisdom.

Thanks to the Iron Triangle, the most stable structure supports the entire story.

【Wu Xie and Li Cuo】

In the original book, it can be said that Wu Xie did use Li Cuo to drag him, a young high school student, into a dangerous world, but Wu Xie felt very disgusted with what he did, and it was him who took other people's lives into consideration. He once hated the practice, but he also had to become such a person.

At first, Li Cu thought that Wu Xie was a dick, and later scolded a lot of things like crazy and crazy, but in the end he still stood by Wu Xie, because Wu Xie reminded him of himself.

How these two people developed into a father-son relationship in the story is purely me who contributed to the flamesˊ_>ˋ

This stalk has always been very cute, so I can't stop at all.It is also a hope. I hope that Wu Xie and Xiao Yali will not only not evolve into the relationship of enemies, but also develop a relationship with companions. The age difference is a bit big, and Li Cuo will dislike being friends, so I have to accept it. Godfather ˊ_>ˋ (what logic)

Occasionally quarreling and quarreling, Wu Xie teased him cheaply, but he couldn't help it anymore, he was still quite cute.

It’s always my wishful thinking, but I really like itˊ_>ˋ

【Li Cu and little brother】

There is also a short paragraph in the original work, but the sentence "the heart contracted, and an unprecedented feeling of laxative passed through his whole body like an electric current" left a deep impression on me, it felt like "love at first sight"...

Afterwards, I analyzed it. Firstly, it may be because of the specialness of the little brother, and secondly, it is because Li Cuo just heard an unbelievable story, so the description is probably like this.

There is a big part of Li Cu's personality that wants to break through the existing situation in life and want to change, this kind of stubbornness.He doesn't believe in anyone. This belief refers to relying on and trusting, but it doesn't prevent him from having an "idol". Most people who only believe in themselves will admire the absolute strength and strength of the little brother, at least the little brother he saw They are all divine.

So I wrote about the relationship between idols and fans, and the relationship between belief and being believed, and finally developed into a father-son relationshipˊ_>ˋ.

(It's all related to Li Cu, it really is Li Cu's main power max)

【Black Glasses and Su Wan】

The one-on-one scenes in the original book are very loving, and I feel that blind people sometimes have helplessness, but Su Wan is really a little angel.

After the story was written, since I ate some black suanli, I inevitably sold some, but I still insisted on ordering until the end.Because at the beginning it was said that Pingxie was the only one, and other original works were based on standards, so I cut off all the parts of Heisu, even if I wrote it, I could only write the derivation of my own story, and it would not be included in the main text.

(There is quite a lot of space left, for example, two people fell down at the beginning and the blind man rescued Su Wan and injured his leg, then Su Wan detonated the explosives and the two escaped, and then they got along after saying goodbye to Audio-Technica, so if there is a girl If you are interested in writing, please come and feed me www)

I think it's okay, it's not an obvious Hei Suxiang, and there is a "seed" stalk in the original work, how pure I am.

【Wu Xie and Zhang Haike】

The part that left a deep impression on me in the original work of these two people is Wu Xie's complaint, saying that they are doing good moves as brothers, and they look exactly the same, so it must be very funny.

Really happy!Ha ha!In Zanghaihua, Wu Xie was tricked by Zhang Haike, so in my story, I wanted to avenge the evil emperor, and it happened that Zhang Haike himself was whitewashed by me, so in the end it became a real "brothers are good" ", I fabricated it again ˊ_>ˋ.

—————Decrypt—————

Before writing Xueyu, I was a person who never read decrypted texts. I read selectively any texts involving decryption and skipped decryption because of headaches.Why.

But the text of the original work does not involve at all, and it must be very empty to talk about feelings.In the original work, Pingxie also had a deep bond in various puzzles, so I feel that if the two of them want to develop further, they must still develop in the "decryption"ˊ_>ˋ.

But to decipher the secrets in the original book, I never thought about it, my brain is not enough, and I am afraid that my third uncle will hit my face after writing, so I had to choose another angle.

I don't know if there are any girls who think it's a pity that I didn't have a conjecture and explanation in the end.If so, then I have no choice but to regret.

Frankly speaking, I really didn’t intend to give a definition of orz from the beginning, the reason is as above, and I’m really not curious about the ultimate behind the bronze door, what I think is that it’s better not to know , whoever has anything to do with it will be unlucky, so I don't want Wu Xie and my brother to continue to explore this secret, it's best to close the door, and let's not touch anyone in the future, and live a good life (well, very naive ).

So in the story, I have been laying the groundwork. First of all, this is a fate, which must be recognized, but there is no way to escape. No one has done it before, because it is subjective and because there are huge benefits.So I separated the little brother from this interest, so that he can think about it, so there is a possibility.

The hexagonal copper bell, ghost seal and bronze gate are the key elements in the pseudo decryption. How to put them together is as recorded in the story. It is also quite complicated. I don’t want to think about it anymore, and I have a headache againˊ_>ˋ

In short, the story is set by me to close the bronze door, so you can feel at ease, so everything they do is around this point, not what the ultimate is.In fact, the last part of the story reveals a little bit of a small tendency in my mind. I don’t know if anyone can see and understand it.But this is not important, what is important is that what they have been working on is for a program, not a specific content.

Compared with various emotional lines, decryption is really thin, but I hope the warmth of emotional lines can make up for it.

——————Thanks for the time—————

The above wordy words are actually my "hopes" and "thoughts", but the extent to which this story is realized is still up to the judges. I will write them out to express my own opinion on the original Then, the understanding of Xueyu will be fine.

The following may not be much to say, but it is what I want to say most in this postscript.

Xue Yu was able to finish writing, I really want to thank many people.

Some girls encouraged me and supported me as soon as I started writing short stories. Maybe I haven’t read or finished this story, but you gave me my initial courage and motivation.

There are a few girls mentioned above, who have been writing with me since the very beginning, and will leave a message for almost every update. I am very honored for half a year.

About the middle of the writing, there may be some girls like me, who feel that they are quite fat, so they also start to follow up, so another batch of www broke out.

A girl who often comes to show off.

Every time there are a lot of exclamation points and very excited girls.

It's so easy to get my point that I almost want to ask if you are a girl who peeked at my draft.

The girl who said she doesn't know how to comment but still often leaves a message to encourage me silently.

The girl who writes a long message every time and analyzes my story thoroughly.

Every time you leave a message, it's wonderful, the girl who makes me laugh so hard that I can't help myself.

Of course, there are a few who are actively grabbing the sofa www

There is also a girl who was caught in the plot and couldn't extricate herself and "threatened" me to call my motherˊ_>ˋ

There are also girls who are so distressed by one or two of the characters that they become nympho^^

Of course, there is also the crazy girl orz who sold me Amway, I was scared www

There are also many girls who don't often bubble, but occasionally I know you're looking at it.

Later, I came up with this book, and I troubled a few girls, and I keep your help in my heart. Now I can only keep saying thank you, thank you for your enthusiasm and patience.

There are also a few girls, not only in the old songs, but we have more exchanges. You continue to encourage me, discuss the plot with me, provide suggestions, and tell me that it is coming to an end.In fact, I really want to say that I am also reluctant, but what I am reluctant to bear is not the story (I have long wanted to finish it ww)

What I can't bear is the joy of completing it with you.

Please take a seat, you must know that I am talking about you.There are really a lot of people, and I won't name them all, but I remember them all.

This story is over, but there is still a lot of work to do in the follow-up, and there will be extra episodes, (the letters are not originally orz, but I can't resist some blood-red eyes, I won't put it in the book, but you can wait and see in the online version, and look back See if the stew training class is open ˊ_>ˋ)

I will work hard to finish this book, and hope it can lie in your hands as perfectly and happily as possible.

Finally, thank you, Uncle Sanˊ_>ˋ

The feeling of "clothing and food parents"...

And those of you who love this pair of CP and the original book together, I hope that we will come to Japan to witness the birth of more stories together, communicate with words, let this emotion have a sustenance and find resonance www

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April 2015