[Bottle Evil] The Old Mansion's Strange Story

#我和老屋怪事的爱恨情恨情#

[-] words of lyricism are omitted here

(Let's just tell the story orz contains a small amount of spoilers (噫)

——setting, plot, clues, decryption——

At the beginning, I wanted to write a small novella with a little supernatural, a little suspense, and a little love, but when it came to the Zhang family, it was inevitable to combine the foreshadowing and decryption of the original work, and after writing the beginning, I wanted to write a novel. The play, so the whole setting has become complicated. (I'm not very used to writing detailed outlines, this is a vivid case of opening a pit and filling a crematorium)

I found that there are still many girls who pay attention to the decryption. I originally wanted to go through all the clues in chronological order, but I found that writing it out in this way has become closer to science orz, so I will only talk about some key points.

The story is actually four lines. The first is the ancient tomb itself, its origin, and its story; the second is the story of the transformation of the ancient tomb by the Zhang family and the story of the figures; the third is the old four in the ancient tomb. experience and what he wants to do with Wu Xie and the others this time; the fourth is the Iron Triangle's inversion.

The prototype of this ancient tomb is an ancient tomb of the Liao Dynasty in a documentary I watched before. I was very impressed when I saw it at the time. The cause of death of the owner of the ancient tomb is unknown, and his identity is unknown. I found that I had forgotten to say it for two days and didn’t say anything (. Of course, this also shows its specialness. There is a text version of the specific archaeological records in China (the writing is also very mysterious and interesting, and there is a link at the end)

Of course, the story has been adapted, using the dynastic background and religious elements involved in the prototype ancient tomb. The specific setting is the content of the last few chapters.

Then the second batch of people who came to the ancient tomb were the Zhang family. They wanted to transform the ancient tomb into a Han tomb. The purpose of doing this was consistent with the replacement of historical clues mentioned in Zanghaihua to mislead those who coveted the ultimate.The second purpose is to make a trap to eliminate the little brother who still knows the secret after everything is over.This part is my personal understanding and setting, it is not mentioned in the original book, it is just a brain hole.The Zhang family is very complicated. Like the infighting mentioned in the original book, it is estimated that they are also full of conspiracies, so I just mentioned a possibility.

But there were accidents during the transformation process. First, they later discovered that the ancient tomb had other secrets. Second, the figure who was used as a tool and a test object put them together. As a result, all the Zhang family members died except for the figure. In the bucket.

The third batch of people who came to the ancient tomb were the other N tomb robbers. They were not important. After they came, they were all killed by the figure using the hexagonal copper bell or other mechanisms.

Then there is the third + N batch, which is the people in the village in the story. During the Cultural Revolution, they went to destroy the Four Olds and killed each other because of the hallucinations produced by the hexagonal copper bell.

Then the fourth child and his little friend went to explore the old house. They strayed into the shadow's lair and got two soul-sealing rings. They were frightened by the figure, but unfortunately the fourth child ran away, and another child entered the tunnel by mistake. and died in the grave.

time flies(.)

It's Wu Xie's little brother Fatty and his business, which is the normal timeline in the story.They have to face not only the test of the ancient tomb itself, but also the traps of the Zhang family forces, the killing of the people who have been guarding the ancient tomb, and the confusion about the real purpose of the fourth child, so it is very... complicated.

The deciphering part is generally very hard to write, because I know all the answers myself, but "I" doesn't know it all at once, what "I" can think of and guess must conform to what I saw and heard at the time, How to guide "I" to decipher all these step by step, and what clues to connect them together, (I also need to pump the air conditioner to have a little love, pull my little hand and kiss my little mouth) I x oh, this process is really "wonderful" orz I read the original book I wasn't a cp fan at the time, the biggest attraction of the original book was the description and rendering of the scenes and atmosphere, as well as the powerful imagination of my third uncle.Reading the original works can be brought into the story, just like taking risks with them in person, which is very cool.I feel that the original work should be restored as the biggest goal (well, I think so), the description method of the scene and the rendering method of the atmosphere should try to imitate the feeling of the original work, so I received comments saying that it is cool to read it in one breath , I am very satisfied (Wang Tian, ​​at least, is "cool")

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I have seen some problems before, about how to balance the plot description and character creation. I didn’t feel any contradiction between the two before. Even if I wrote the long story of Snowy Fantasyland before, I thought it was okay. After writing this, I realized that it was not balanced before. Well, the contradiction between the two does not seem to be prominent in the structure of the snowy illusion, but for the No.1 story, it is very prominent. All the plots of orz must be unfolded from the perspective of "I", so "I" The task is very heavy. All the content to be shown in the story is what "I" sees, hears and feels, so it is easy to downplay the character of the protagonist himself.

So, here comes the point—#我和老吴的爱恨情恩#

At the beginning of the serialization, I occasionally saw comments saying "Wu Xie here doesn't feel like Sha Haixie", and for the same plot, some people said "Wu Xie here is like Sha Haixie" (you can see that a thousand people There are a thousand old Wu, no, this is not the point), and later there was a comment that "Wu Xie here has the feeling of a tomb robber, so cute."

Actually, I want to say that the Wu Xie here is not a "Sand Sea Evil" or a "Tomb Raider Evil", or both a "Sand Sea Evil" and a "Tomb Raider Evil", orz.

I personally feel that our old Wu's personality still has many facets, especially after experiencing the sand sea, in front of different people, it shows differently.Besides, if you have to distinguish between Sha Haixie and Tomb Raiders, I don’t think there is any evil in "Ten Years". Sand Sea and Tomb Raiders can only be distinguished by time period. After all, they are the same person after all. What Uncle wrote is not about Sha Haixie, it’s ooc.

Of course, I understand very well that what I like about Lao Wu may be a certain aspect of his personality, so I will naturally read the article with expectations for this aspect. If it does not match the expectations, there will still be doubts.

I personally feel that after all this is over, Wu Xie's overall state should be relatively relaxed, and he can't always be tense, but his wisdom and cleverness are still there, and in this story, the younger brother is by his side And Fatty, this will affect the performance of his character.But in general, there is still a clear difference between ten years later and ten years ago, that is, maturity ten years later.

So I want to write a settled old Wu who is calmer, wiser, a bit deep, and occasionally has a mental illness. It should be closer to ten years, but he is still very heavy in ten years. This story The only thing that makes him feel heavy is the entanglement between the little brother and the Zhang family, so he will be calmer and more relaxed when facing others.

Some girls said that they felt that Wu Xie was used to giving orders and being the boss, so he should be more handsome.I agree that Lao Wu is handsome (. But I can't let him show the feeling of giving orders and being the boss in front of the fat man and the little brother.

Some people like Sha Haixie's "boss" kind of crazy, cool, domineering dick, and the so-called neuropathy.I was also conquered by Sha Haixie, but what impressed me most about Sha Haili was the phrase "he is a weak person after all".The so-called crazy pull of cool bullying dick is not a manifestation of a person's true inner strength. Everything Wu Xie does in Shahai is forced. He plans everything and controls everything, but that is not what he wants.What I prefer is another expression, which is a Wu Xie who still chooses to move forward firmly in the struggle and pain.Wu Xie is not really crazy, or it is impossible for him to get crazy with anyone anytime, anywhere. His neuropathy is to make enemies difficult to figure out. Control, if you have to talk to the fat man and the little brother, it's just spitting, gossiping, and making fun of facial paralysis (.

In addition, Sha Hai is Li Cu's perspective, and Wu Xie is elusive in Li Cu's eyes, like a lunatic, like a madman, and in the eyes of Wang's family, from insignificance to a fatal blow.But think about it in ten years, he would yell "Yaoshou, Xie Yuchen, come and save me the fuck", and when he got the key left by his brother, he felt a sense of security that he hadn't had in many years. In the Illusion Gate, he would be anxious because of the words of the blind man, which means that in his heart, some people are the support for him to keep his most authentic self. In front of them, he can't be that Wu Xie in front of Li Cuo and others, and No need.

It's hard for me to imagine Wu Xie yelling at the little brother and the fat man, you all fucking listen to me ++, the sense of dissonance is overwhelming orz and the difference in person, Sha Hai and the previously written Sha Hai fan Snow Land Fantasy is The third person, but No.1 in the old house, it is very obvious to give an example.

A scene of Wu Xie in the snowy illusion: Wu Xie's slender figure wrapped in a gray windbreaker fell quickly.The windbreaker was lifted by the falling force, and a corner flashed in the light circle of the flashlight, and then Wu Xie disappeared into the darkness in the coffin.

We now change it to No.1 name (smile): the gray windbreaker wraps my slender figure, I jump down, the windbreaker is lifted by the force of the fall, and they can only see the corner of my windbreaker flashing in the light circle of the flashlight After that, there is only the darkness of the coffin, and I have covered it. (Smile)

Flip the table gif (The third person I wrote is not so handsome, but if No.1 said that this scene is written like this, it will be over!

So in fact, Lao Wu has brought many handsome scenes by himself, otherwise he would be too narcissistic, please make up for yourself. There are a few places where orz is praised as "handsome", mainly brain max, and playing scenes, and then there are Reflected in the dialogue, these are relatively easy to express.

No.1 said that most of the time he still acts as a recorder. He wants to record what he sees, and he can have his own feelings and analysis, but it is difficult to focus on himself. Orz also refers to the original narrative mode in some places, such as Tibetan Haihua, there is a long section describing what happened when Zhang Haike and his little brother were released into the wild. Wu Xie is an outsider, so there is basically "nothing", and it will not affect the characters. After all, it is an important way to tell the story.

However, I found that I really love Lao Wu. Snowy Fantasyland wanted to write about him. I originally wanted to write more about the little brother, but in the end he had more dramas. I have to face up to my heart. For inappropriate and deficient places, we can only expect the text to be adjusted slowly. Here is my understanding.

Bro:

This has been said in another topic before, and I still think that way.Starting from the phrase "You are old" and "He smiled at me" in "Ten Years", our little brother is different w.

In the Tomb Raiders Notes series, Zhang Qiling is the "man as powerful as a god and Buddha", strong and lonely.But now, every time I write about the little brother, I think he is different from that time after all, "And these changes are given to him by us, which is undoubtedly an encouragement to me." (In the illusion Wu Xie said so)

So Zhang Qiling can also be changed.

For Zhang Qiling now, the ultimate is meaningless, and the Zhang family has never occupied his emotions. The only important thing is the connection between Wu Xie and Fatty and their meaning to him.

Here comes a key word that I want to write, which is meaning.I personally understand that in the Tomb Raiders Notes, the reason why the little brother said that the word meaning itself has no meaning is because...it really doesn't mean much to him orz, because all he has is the mission of the Zhang family and his life , his life, his whole being, is bound to this mission and is occupied by it. It can also be said that this is his meaning, but this meaning has no "value", no temperature, and cannot make him feel that he exists and is in harmony with the world. contact.

Until we Old Wu and Fatty appeared in his life, they broke the little brother's fate from the outside.

After ten years of separation, I personally think that Fatty has not changed much. After all, Fatty has always been a "mature" person, but Wu Xie's change should be a general understanding for my little brother, but the specific , Wu Xie is like a mechanism, every time you touch a small mechanism, there will be new surprises hahaha (seems like this metaphor is a bit dirty)

In short, it is unlikely that the little brother will still be the same as he was during the period of the tomb robbery. He is only a protector. I think he will be willing to share some things with Wu Xie under the background of the old house.

Due to the setting of the little brother's memory in the story, he was not sure about some things at the beginning, so he still didn't fully say it, until he gradually became sure, he told the fat Wu Xie, and analyzed it with them.It’s just that I’m used to many things, such as bloodletting, preemptive strikes, speaking with actions, etc., and it’s unlikely to change quickly. Before doing anything, I have to report to the other two for opinions.

But in the end, the little brother is still more popular.

fat man:

There was a comment before, saying that the fat man is so old, and he still fights with them, so I feel sorry for orz.In fact, I am also the same. At the very beginning, I wanted not to add fat, only Pingxie and Lao Si, but I always felt that if there were three people, how could it not be the Iron Triangle.And it was true that Fatty didn't appear in the first scene, and I had that symptom—"I miss Fatty even more than Wu Xie".

Everyone is used to the partners of the Audio-Technica, this is also the place where the relationship between the characters in Tomb Raiders is very impressive, so there must be a fat man!

Ten years later, Fat Lord doesn't seem to have changed much. With him around, everyone can feel at ease.The biggest characteristic of the fat man here, I think, is that he is not chaotic in the face of danger, he sees his tricks, throws his arms away, and fucks his mother (.

It's a pity that I still don't know how to write Fat Lord, I can only say that I have tried my best orz

Fourth child:

This snarky character is very important 233, he is a clue character in the full text, but why he follows the fight, it is all Lao Wu's fault (X Lao Wu has too much knowledge now, the general fight is against him It's nothing exciting, so I feel that such a character is still needed to take on the rookie's task, which is better to exaggerate the atmosphere orz (but the fact is, when he opens his mouth, you will be out of the play, right, no, don't do this)

There is another important thing about the fourth child, that is, I want to write about the people outside the whole bureau of Tomb Raiders Notes, Wu Xie in the eyes.

This is all reflected in the paragraph at the end.

The fourth child is also an ordinary person, with the desire and selfishness of ordinary people, as well as the persistence and magnanimity of ordinary people.

silhouette:

He is actually a poor man, but he is also an ordinary Zhang family. His fate is arranged by the Zhang family. It can be said that he is a shadow of the younger brother.

Sometimes I think that if my little brother didn't know Wu Xie and Fatty, maybe he would end up like a shadow, staying in the dark underground forever, even if he was alive, he would be a walking dead.

Yingying's feelings for Zhang's family are complicated. He was used because of Qilin's blood, and he was saved because of Qilin's blood.The feelings for the little brother are also complicated, he is a substitute and a test product for the little brother, but in the end he saw the difference between the little brother and the Zhang family, so he pointed the way for the little brother Wu Xie.

I have never had the heart to let him hang up orz, so I handed him over to Zhang Haike, the uncle in my mind, he is still a good silver orz, and he will probably treat him kindly.

other people:

The old man's words are also clues. The story the old man told him is to write about sin, guilt and ulterior motives.

Zhang Haike is also a support team, just like Xueyu Mirage, he is a member of the Zhang family who is more inclined to the younger brother.

Female Zongzi, a victim of barbaric and dark beliefs.

The owner of the tomb, the mysterious behind-the-scenes boss.

--Character Relationships--

瓶邪

I really can't write about love!

So I can only write all kinds of ambiguity!

But why do many people think they are old couples (laughing)

In Snowland Illusion, I want to write about Pingxie’s feeling of finally choosing to face everything side by side. Here, I want to write about how old Wu filled my brother’s life with meaning. Brother's heart.

Although the emphasis is different, if you have read both, you can still see that my understanding of the emotion and connection between them in these two articles is consistent.

Because I think the original work has already been paved in place (.

The little brother’s mind is more difficult to figure out, but it can still be seen that since he went to Hangzhou to say goodbye to Wu Xie, he has already “deviated” from the track of the Zhang family (. The sentence “You are old” coming out from behind the door can be ranked in the The top of Zhang Qiling's classic quotations. He changed because of Wu Xie.

The younger brother is probably very rare about Wu Xie. After all, the hearts of the people he has been in contact with before are very complicated and dark. It is rare to have such a simple person who is so attached to himself.

Wu Xie said to his younger brother and third uncle himself: Zhang Qiling should be Wu Xie's projection of the life he most yearns for.

But in his heart, they "are they real friends? Now that I think about it, I feel a little sad" (Zang Haihua), and he also knows that "he lives in a world that I can't understand, and I will never be able to do anything with him side by side." Things." (Fantasy Land Lunar New Year) This kind of thinking runs through Wu Xie's relationship with the younger brother. Wu Xie envies the strength of the younger brother and feels sorry for his loneliness, but there is still a sense of distance after all.

My understanding has changed, or it has been enriched. It is Sha Haili Wu Xie who said that if he picks up his little brother, he will tell him that he is a patient, and now he can rest. (There is a feeling that I can follow you now) The Battle of Sand Sea really made Wu Xie stronger, but also lonely. He got closer to the little brother, and he also understood the little brother's indifference to everything.

However, judging from his performance in the past ten years, Wu Xie is quite like that to my little brother (. All things related to my little brother will be treated specially by him. Even if my little brother has not come out, he can still bring him A sense of security, he has unconditional trust in his younger brother, and to some extent "dependence".

I also want to write about the connection and mutual trust and "entrustment" between them?In short, it’s still the only feeling. I won’t say much about this part. It’s better to understand it from the story. It’s too pale to say it. XD Audio-Technica

There is a part in the story, it is a scene in which a figure sows discord, and then Wu Xie has a section of analysis. Some girls read it and think that Wu Xie doubted the fat man at first, and then chose to believe it. It can be said that way, but this "doubt" Not the kind of doubt that negates trust.In fact, I just wrote Wu Xie's analysis process, and Wu Xie would never put "malicious" suspicions on Fatty at all.But sometimes logic and emotion are contradictory. When Wu Xie is simply analyzing the situation, he must first follow the logic, so there is a possibility that the fat man has a problem, and he even found a "reason" for the fat man.Well, it's a thought process, not a visceral skeptical fat man.

Between the three of them, there is really no need to say much. One thing I personally understand is that the fat man and the little brother actually have a better understanding. It is also said in the original book that they can achieve outflanking with just a glance.Probably because the level of thinking and experience is closer to that of Wu Xie.

And there is always a feeling that Fatty treats Wu Xie as if he was looking at his own son, I don’t know why I always have this feeling orz is just very rare, and he has to follow it and worry about marriage.

——It’s time to thank you again——

When Snowland Fantasy was written, the original work hadn’t finished yet, so everyone wanted to see their happy ending in the doujin, which is easier to get into the drama, and it seems that everyone is more accustomed to the narrative style of Shahai doujin, and they are also more accustomed to the kind of full-staff mode, so the writing of that article was actually relatively relaxed, mainly because of a relaxed mind, and I myself had a very strong expectation for the ending, so I was very motivated.

Strange things in the old house are different. The original work was not finished when the pit was opened, but after writing it for a long time, the original work was HE!Although I'm following HE, but I want to start a new fight, I guess it's not easy to get into the show, because everyone wants to watch Yucun's daily life, and I'm suffocating myself. , Girls who leave messages to support me, thank you for your encouragement, it is a very important support for writers who write long novels, of course I also thank the girls who caught up halfway, and it is also an encouragement to me to be able to catch up [Bow] Some girls every time I write a lot every time, and it’s very poking at my point, and the girl’s reply is so clear, it makes me laugh and cry every time. Thank you doctor’s wife. When I’m halfway through the writing, thank you for analyzing the characters with me. plot.

Thank you Dusan, Chengcheng and Guoer for drawing me pictures.

Thank you my harem (噫) Although your messages are all left in the q and they become dirty as you talk, but I know you love me and I love you when doge plans to write the postscript, he has a strong desire to express, Because the writing of this article is generally more laborious than that of Snowy Mirage, orz, but as it is written, it is better to put it away (right) and let me love it silently in my heart.

Next, I will edit the text, focus on the front, unify the tone, and adjust the rhythm.

There will be extra episodes, there should be two articles, too many books can’t fit orz

The meat slag at the end (have to face) was "accused" perfunctory 233 so I completely changed it to pull the lamp (it matches the style of the whole ascetic style), if there is a destiny... I will write an online version of the meat fan (no Looking forward to talking about it, and asking for a long review!

Finally thanks again!Thank you for your company and support all the time. This story is over, but their good days are not over. Please produce more food and feed more (comments are also output)!I need you guys after being hungry for a long time!

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