It is said that I joined the wrong organization with my friend

Chapter 64 What's wrong with the inspiration and the final draft being completely different

Things went better than Saiki Kusuo thought, although it was a bit of a waste of effort to make the beach on the small island near Japan exactly the same as the one here, so that they wouldn't notice any changes.

But luckily no one found out.

#It doesn't feel right? #

……what.

Obviously, Atsushi Nakajima, who had been in the port mafia for so many years, was the first to notice something was wrong.

As a member of the port mafia, it is also one of the compulsory courses to always pay attention to the surrounding situation. Whether it is an assassination or to complete the handover task, pay attention to the surroundings to prevent the enemy from suddenly rushing out of that place-although these things are in the high position of Atsushi Nakajima In the future, he won't need to worry much, after all, he has many people under his command.

"What's wrong?" Akutagawa Ryunosuke saw that Atsushi Nakajima was standing there, instead of going to the rescuers with everyone, he pulled him and motioned him to go with him.

"Ah, it's nothing." Seeing that no one responded, Atsushi Nakajima unconsciously wondered if he was thinking too much, and followed Ryunosuke Akutagawa to the rescue boat, "I always feel that the beach is different from yesterday's incident." It's the same... but I must be thinking too much."

#Yes, no matter how you think about it, it’s impossible, right?Could it be that we went to another small island exactly like this one in one night? #

call--

Saiki Kusuo secretly heaved a sigh of relief.

All in all, it's great that this guy can think this way, otherwise, I would really use that yellow object similar to banana to hit his head to replace this part of the memory.

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The following days were uneventful.

Thinking about it, Akutagawa Ryunosuke and Nakajima Atsushi have only been here for a month. Even if it is a daily show, the exchange students will have four or five episodes, but I don’t know what happened to them during this time. If the experience really turns into a drama, how much will there be?

So, with less than half a month left, the two basically spent their ordinary and ordinary school life.

But maybe something interesting happened somewhere they couldn't see?Sometimes when several students in the class come to Qi Mu's house as guests, the two of them will unconsciously think of it.

For some reason, they felt that Qi Mu-kun might want to be alone for a while.

All in all, Akutagawa Ryunosuke has already started to prepare his sketches, although he has not yet said that he has designed all the images of Clow cards, and even the number of costume designs is not much-it can be counted with two hands.

However, these are enough for the time being.

As for Atsushi Nakajima, he started to finalize the draft.

There is no possibility of comparing the two works together. One is a novel and the other is a manga. Besides, one is completely original, and the other is semi-original, but there is no need for Akutagawa Ryunosuke in terms of plot and so on. Fee brain cells, as for Atsushi Nakajima, it's much more troublesome.

It was just an inspiration at the beginning, but this inspiration is also just an opportunity. You must know that the final appearance of this work may be completely different from the author's initial flash of ideas.

At first, Atsushi Nakajima wanted to write about the ordinary daily life of people with superpowers, but now, it has become a combination of the mastermind behind the recovery of spiritual energy.

Completely unrecognizable.

If there is any difference, others are spiritual recovery, he is superpower recovery, and the protagonist of other people's family, the black hand behind the scenes, will stand in front of the stage, but he is good, the person who caused the recovery—that is, in terms of common sense The protagonist is hardly on the bright side, but most of the plot is given to other people in this super power recovery.

In other words, the behind-the-scenes man he envisioned—that is, the protagonist is an existence with almost zero sense of existence.

Under such circumstances, who would think that he is the protagonist!

Even, it was named super power recovery because of consideration... the Japanese people may have never heard of the term "reiki recovery", so they simply used "super power" instead.

"If it can be sold to China, it can be directly translated into Reiki recovery." Atsushi Nakajima said.

If you look at this book from the reader's point of view, then what this book is about is: Ordinary people who were originally ordinary without any characteristics, or who suffered setbacks in life, had the opportunity to climb up because of the recovery of spiritual energy, and even passed Their own efforts have made remarkable achievements in this new era.

Well, from this perspective, it is still a very inspirational novel.

There are even various coincidental opportunities in the text, time and space tunnels connected to other worlds... etc., these are definitely enough for readers to feel as refreshed as drinking a bottle of iced Coke during the dog days.

So the question is, what about the protagonist designed by Atsushi Nakajima who caused everything?

Before the spiritual energy revived, he attended ordinary classes at school; after that, he attended ordinary classes in a special school.

The protagonist seen from the reader's perspective is an ordinary deskmate who only said hello at school, that is the protagonist designed by Atsushi Nakajima.

#At least the protagonist is still an ordinary superpower who is in school, the same as the original setting. #

When Saiki Kusuo read these revised contents in Atsushi Nakajima's mind, there was only one thought:

It’s all at this level, is there any point for the protagonist to keep your original setting?And no matter how you look at it, you will be beaten to death as the final boss, right?

However, Atsushi Nakajima said: What are you kidding, I have nothing to do to let them know who is the culprit for this super power recovery?As for when the people in the book will find out who is behind all this?

#See when readers notice it. #

# If not, just follow my pace. #

Are you sure your readers will see it when you describe you this way?

Finally, Atsushi Nakajima finished the outline and showed it to Ryunosuke Akutagawa with great interest.

"Isn't this just the revival of spiritual energy?" As the first reader of every work of Atsushi Nakajima, Ryunosuke Akutagawa flipped through the outline manuscript of Atsushi Nakajima, "... you, don't you just be with those Are the novels of the behind-the-scenes masters similar? But the protagonist behind the scenes is not clearly written."

Atsushi Nakajima nodded with a smile, he is still very satisfied with his idea of ​​this work: "Yes, it seems to be a story born due to the mutation of the world, and no one would think that someone is actually manipulating it behind the scenes. with everything."

"I always feel that when I write this, it will definitely cause a sensation." Atsushi Nakajima must be looking forward to the moment when he will push his real protagonist to the public.

"It's pretty good..." Ryunosuke Akutagawa nodded in affirmation.

This is like a fantasy novel in which the protagonist counterattacks. When you see the end, the author suddenly tells you that the protagonist is not the protagonist. The ordinary passerby next to him who has saved him many times is the one. Even, what you saw The protagonist, everything he experiences is related to this passer-by.

...No, this is the villain at all!

"..." Thinking of this, Akutagawa Ryunosuke fell silent.

After a long time, he considered and said, "Are you sure you won't get beaten for writing like this?"

"Oh? What's the matter?" Atsushi Nakajima was puzzled, "I think this is pretty good, how cool!"

That is when you know who the protagonist you set is!

"Hehehe...Actually, I also thought about whether I should have this novel from the perspective of the protagonist of the original book." Apparently, this way of writing novels from another angle inspired Atsushi Nakajima: "You how do you feel?"

"Ah, this..." Seeing Atsushi Nakajima's enthusiastic and expectant eyes, Akutagawa Ryunosuke couldn't say anything to tell him not to abuse the reader's mentality, and finally broke the jar and said: "Forget it , as you please."

Anyway, readers shouldn't make any drastic moves, right?

"What do you mean by being happy with me?" Atsushi Nakajima approached reluctantly, "Speak clearly, what do you think of my idea?"

"Hmm... well, it's quite creative." Even he was a little moved.

Akutagawa Ryunosuke thinks that this reverse writing method is still very interesting. Of course, this means that Atsushi Nakajima has a large reader base supporting him now. If he is replaced by an author who has just entered the industry, it may not be fun to play this true and false protagonist.

Even if Atsushi Nakajima has been writing for a long time and can't write about the real protagonist, he still has the confidence to write, after all, he has enough readers.Of course, the wonderful experiences of the false protagonists on the bright side are enough to attract readers to watch.

"I hope readers know that the protagonist they see is not the protagonist, and can maintain their mentality." Akutagawa Ryunosuke covered his face.

The current situation of Atsushi Nakajima also confuses him deeply. Since when did this guy fall in love with pit readers?Who taught him?

"Hahaha, don't worry, my readers are still very strong!" Atsushi Nakajima patted his chest to reassure Ryunosuke Akutagawa, can he still not understand his readers?Those are all ruthless people who have been trained by his novel training, and they will not be broken by such a small situation at all... probably.

"You are not the same as the previous abuse articles..." Akutagawa Ryunosuke admitted that the abuse articles written by Atsushi Nakajima really exercise people, at least now he can barely be a potential reader Akutagawa Ryunosuke, saying that he has been able to keep his face Opened his mouth and ate a knife.

"How should I say it?" Akutagawa Ryunosuke thought for a while, looked directly at Atsushi Nakajima, and said, "Do you feel like you're playing tricks on readers by writing this?"

I have loved the protagonist for so long with true feelings—although there are more than one person who looks like the protagonist in Atsushi Nakajima’s work—you turned back and told me that he is not, he is just a passerby.

It's like a joke.

"Alas?" Atsushi Nakajima stood up straight: "I didn't, I didn't, I definitely didn't think about it that way."

Atsushi Nakajima swears to God that he didn't think so: "I just wanted to write that."

Akutagawa Ryunosuke let out a long sigh: "Okay, I thought you'd finally stop writing about sadomasochism, but I didn't expect you to jump right into the line of cheating readers."

"But you can write it if you want." In the end, Akutagawa Ryunosuke still respects everything Atsushi Nakajima wants to write.

Of course, Ryunosuke Akutagawa understands how difficult it is to change an author's mind.

Some authors, no matter how much you send them blades, those who still write dead are still dead, and there is no chance of resurrection. If you change to a ghostwriter midway, you may still see repeated false resurrections. famous scene.

"Thank you dear~" Atsushi Nakajima hugged Ryunosuke Akutagawa in a good mood.

He really didn't have the idea of ​​cheating people, whether it was from the beginning or now.

When he first wrote the ancient romance novel, Atsushi Nakajima wrote it purely based on his own experience, such as abortion, car accident, amnesia, etc., all the blood was poured on it.Although the book became popular for various reasons, he himself didn't feel any happiness. Instead, he felt that the novel was really...disgusting.

A book is regarded as black history by the author who wrote it, and with this kind of evaluation, you can see how much he hates this book.

Later Nakajima enlightened!

The novels he wrote should be in line with his own wishes first!

And then...then those hair-cut novels appeared, but Nakajima Atsushi didn't feel that he was wrong at all-aren't what I wrote were all facts?

For example, in the book Time Traveler, he and Ryunosuke directly returned to their youth because of the unexpected situation of traveling... No, it's too exaggerated, all in all, they are young!And the young ones are too young to directly become children!So the confession plan he had planned was in vain, and nothing happened.

For another example, that book is similar to "Second Five", the one about the long-distance relationship between the hero and the heroine, is it abuse?Isn't this the case with him and Ryunosuke?He wanted to be with Ryunosuke Akutagawa, but because of work and other reasons, they might not see each other every day.

Isn't this an adaptation based on facts?Where is the abuse.

At most, it has been changed according to reality, and presented in a different way. The more detailed handling of emotions can make readers feel more empathetic.

Anyway, no matter what others think, Atsushi Nakajima is quite satisfied.

Besides, readers are not the only ones who are abused. In the process of writing, Atsushi Nakajima was also abused over and over again.Remembering that he was about to embrace the beauty and was dispelled by a time travel, Atsushi Nakajima felt that he was suffering very much.

But this one is clearly different from the previous ones.

Atsushi Nakajima swears to God, this book will never be abused!Except for the protagonist who is not obvious, any other character feels that his selfishness is not involved.

However, in order to reassure Ryunosuke Akutagawa, Atsushi Nakajima still explained.

"...So, the protagonist did this because of the high-latitude invasion?" Ryunosuke Akutagawa looked at Atsushi Nakajima with "you can make it up".

Everyone knows the words "high-latitude invasion" and what it means, so I won't explain it here. Simply put, it means the conquest of a high-level plane to another plane.

"I think it's pretty good," Atsushi Nakajima said. "Besides, isn't it good to unite as one to fight the invaders? The goal is the same."

"But these will definitely not appear until very late," Atsushi Nakajima wrapped his arms around Ryunosuke Akutagawa's waist, rubbing against each other, "The most important thing for me now is to write out the first story, and the rest of the story is still a matter of time." Not a single one."

"Ha, okay." Akutagawa Ryunosuke dragged such a huge human-shaped pendant and sat on the bed, rubbing: "Anyway, write it out first, I can't see the specifics just by looking at the outline you wrote now—— It’s just a good idea.”

It's pretty good, at least Akutagawa Ryunosuke hasn't seen this kind of writing.

"Phew—it's really not possible, I'll write more hints," Nakajima Atsushi buried himself in Akutagawa Ryunosuke's arms, and compromised, "It's hinted that someone is behind the scenes to promote their spiritual recovery, but they don't tell Who exactly are they?"

"Well, the difficulty is much lower," Atsushi Nakajima puffed up his cheeks in dissatisfaction, "You can't say I'm cheating readers."

"Ahem, of course..." Ryunosuke Akutagawa coughed twice, "Then, on behalf of the readers, I would like to thank you for your mercy."

He is satisfied with these hints, which are better than nothing for the readers to guess.In this way, when the final truth is revealed, readers who are already psychologically prepared should not be overwhelmed, right?

Well, we can't underestimate the readers of this world, and believe that their upper limit of tolerance is still very high.

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All in all, at the end of this month-long trip, Atsushi Nakajima finally wrote his first draft.The content of the story is about a boy in a single-parent family who accidentally noticed some unusual changes in the world.

He is a high school student, an ordinary person, after this change, he will have a different life experience.

As for his deskmate, whose grades in school have always been in the middle, and who only appeared in a few strokes in the article, if there is no accident, it will not be long before this boy and the readers will forget it, right?

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