City of Burning Snow

"The City of Burning Snow" is the first long story I actually wrote to the end (mark the key points).

This time it has been brewing for a long time, and the code word time has also been adjusted in order to write it.And in order to ensure my brain power, I didn't stay up much and started to take a nap.Sure enough, after a regular schedule, it is possible for human beings to accomplish anything. Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha...

In fact, the most important thing is because of the agreement.Thinking that this is going to be presented as a gift at Christmas, the date has been chosen, and the outline has been detailed for each day.The result is that I have to bite the bullet and keep writing down. XD

A little bit of trivia about creating it:

In the beginning, this article was born from a scene that appeared in my notebook in March.I wrote two pages of something similar to a movie script. In it, Godot, who didn’t know each other, entered the link of first encounter. The guide Dostoevsky walked to the battlefield, and the out-of-control sentry Gogol came back, and the two were calmed down. A man drove away in a convertible, and a real man never looked at the explosion behind him. Needless to say, Mr. Tuo was driving the car. Gogol was also a real man. He was looking at Mr. Tuo all the way and felt speechless...

cough.I don't know why there is such a magnificent and funny scene.In short, at that time, a sentence was mentioned in the group: I am writing the post!Everyone: Wow!Then we all forget. (cover face)

After a long time, maybe in October, the second scene appeared.Fanfan Xiaochuang and I posted two or three clips of about [-] words, which were the prototypes of the first few shots of Ranxue.But in fact, before that, I seem to have posted a paragraph, which is more original. After Gogol lost control and before he fell into a coma, he fell into the wind in a particularly miserable and beautiful way, and he fell in love with Dostoevs Mr. Key said, Fedya... Ross will leave it to you.

As you all know, this beautiful scene did not appear in the text until the end, and I wonder why I even wanted to write it in the first place.

Let me tell you how I feel about it:

Burning Snow can be said to be my (consistent) rather willful fanfiction.Sometimes when I write, I also think to myself, "Okay, I have no reason to criticize others ooc from now on", and I have always been... er, no... Um, I haven't read it much, and I have never read it. I read one or two articles a few years ago. A few years ago, when I was chatting with other CPs, I also listened to a sentence or two of setting rules, like this.

But I am familiar with Baidu Encyclopedia! (you shut up)

The shaping of the personalities of the two Guotuo, especially Lao Guo, who has more blank space, is actually more to my own taste, and I feel that the writing is a little gentler than the original.I just like to watch the weak and weak angel fruit with innocent grievances and sunny smiles to capture the plan Tong Tuo Sijun... Well, I have to remember to strike out the sentence on the left before posting.I think these two are too cute.At first glance, the gap is very large, but no matter how you look at it, why, hey, it seems that they are a match made in heaven.This is really...

The original intention was to write a dystopian Guotuo Xiangwen. Later, it seemed that the pen was not strong enough, and the time was squeezed too little, so the detailed description in that aspect was weakened a lot. Especially later, I chose the most important and could not be deleted I finished the scene in a hurry. In some places, I feel that I should add some twists and turns to make it complete. But, well, I feel relaxed after writing. Anyway, I don’t think about the printed copy recently. I will talk about it later when I want to proofread Bar. (Ah ha ha)

I originally wrote a character analysis of thousands of words for everyone, but now I don't want to release it after finishing it.I think a story, no matter how well written, must fall into the eyes of others and fall into the eyes of others is different, I do not want to deprive everyone of their own opportunities for private perception.Of course, don’t tell me within half a year if you feel that the writing is too bad. I’m also an ordinary person, and I’ll be sad... Just kidding, I’m a little led astray by Lao Guo, the ghost is still the original ghost, everyone can feel free Just leave a message 2333333

The ending was decided at the beginning. In a sense, I filled the hole crazily for the vulgar and boring purpose of "hahaha let them show their affection in front of Brother Zai" in the later stage, but I will tell you that there are People are like this at the time, you not only need high-level motivation, but also this kind of vulgar and boring motivation... What also gave me the motivation to fill in the hole is Lao Tuo himself going to prison to seek abuse, and Lao Tuo Lao Guo's relationship is good. The link that said that Shibusawa got rid of others was full of slots... Yes, I was wondering why these two people are like this!I sent out this chapter while crying and satisfied when Lao Shi died. I really like the whole chapter except Lao Guo said to Tuo Si after burning the house that he is his soul. Except for that part, I like it the most. It was the words that Mishima said with a smile that suddenly came out from under my hand.I really cried right away, I don’t know which super invincible twisted and painful tendon was poked, anyway, I finished the short paragraph while crying.I originally thought that when Lao Guo went back to the prison later, because it was very similar to the original scene and the personnel were changed, I would cry too, but unexpectedly, I didn't feel much... Maybe I didn't write well because of my limited writing power.

Speaking of it, I don’t know what others think. Anyway, I am writing while feeling that this reading experience, compared with the writing of my favorite writers, my reading of this writing is like walking on a net that is not particularly well-proportioned. On the top, if you step deep and don't pay attention, you will fall off.I'm really sorry, hahaha, but I can only do this level in a month now!I also try my best not to fall into the circle of perfectionism because of this. I have finished writing, no matter whether I want to modify it in the future. Now it is a complete story at this time. Instead of always torturing myself, I should also Praise yourself, I'm not a pit king anymore.Um.

What else do I want to say?

By the way, I would also like to say that when everyone, like me, uses the efficiency software that checks out the deposit and repays the money in order to solve the problem of breaking the update, or to solve other problems in life, don't, don't, Because you can't get it back, click the payment confirmation button continuously!That is tricking you.Not to mention all the meal expenses.Better not to hit that max amount in the first place!

Don't ask me how I know, didn't I fill in the hole smoothly?

I always feel that my paramecium brain dares to describe Plan Tongduo, I am really a hell... ghost.

—Hallelujah, everyone!

灯鬼

Christmas Eve, December 2018, 12