Abduction of the Great God

Chapter 18 The pair of bears sitting in the bathroom

That day...it was still early summer, and the rising heat of June was accompanied by the parting cries of the graduates going to the end of the world.

Liu Jibai just wanted to move to the branch in Shunyi for an internship first, not going to another place, so he didn't act like those who were really leaving, only a few buddies helped him move things.An Xin actually appeared among the people moving things. Since Liu Jibai quit the student union, he has been busy graduating and looking for a job and has never seen him again, so it took him about ten seconds to finally remember this and him. The elementary school boy who said hello is here.At this time, An Xin worked hard to lift the heaviest box full of books, Liu Jibai saw that his thin body was shaking when he went downstairs, so he hurried over to carry it together.

After running up and down several times, finally Liu Jibai's things were basically moved downstairs.While waiting for the rented car to arrive, Liu Jibai handed him a bottle of water, while An Xin held the water, and suddenly said to Liu Jibai, "Senior, can I have a word with you?"

"Ah? What are you talking about?" Liu Jibai asked casually without paying attention, when the car came, "Wait a minute."

After Liu Jibai finished speaking, he went forward to talk to the driver, and then the brothers started to load things into the car.An Xin held the bottle of water tightly, stood beside her with her head down and did not move, Liu Jibai remembered what he said just now, and walked over again.

"Student, what did you want to say just now?"

Other seniors passed by from time to time, An Xin held the hand of the water even harder, he was very hesitant, he looked up at Liu Jibai, he was still waiting for him to speak, there was no impatience on his face, An Xin raised his foot and was thinking Take a step forward.

"Okay, tell us to move things, but you are lazy." A senior suddenly joked when passing by, "Student, since you are here to help the senior move things, you can't be lazy!"

"Oh, oh, good." An Xin immediately blushed with embarrassment, lowered her head and hurriedly dodged Liu Jibai to carry things into the car.Liu Jibai was stunned for a long time and just wanted to ask, but other people who saw him off also came, everyone was saying goodbye, and An Xin was desperately moving things over there, so Liu Jibai had to give up, and after a while, he forgot this matter.

Until Liu Jibai was about to get in the car, a senior who was going out of town suddenly suggested that they should hug each other, and everyone hugged Liu Jibai lightly in the end.When it was An Xin's turn, An Xin bit her lower lip, her heart beating extremely fast.He was full of anticipation, but Liu Jibai just patted him on the shoulder and told him to work harder in the future. An Xin took a deep breath, and couldn't help but stepped forward to hug Liu Jibai.

Liu Jibai was stunned for a moment, then hugged An Xin back.Chest against chest, the sudden sense of fullness made Anxin's nose sour and his eyes moist.

"Senior..." I like you, An Xin's voice seemed to be whispering in his ears, only Liu Jibai could hear him, but he still didn't say the last four words after all, after a choked up, it suddenly became "Take care."

"Well, you too." Liu Jibai patted An Xin on the back, feeling a little moved as if he had been infected, and felt inexplicably reluctant to this elementary school boy who he didn't know too well.Maybe this is the reason for the graduation season?

An Xin quickly let go of him, and quietly stood aside with red eyes.

Parting in June is like the rainy season, even the men who have tears and don't flick them often cry wantonly. In fact, there are many people who bid farewell, and most of them cry.An Xin's movements and red eyes did not attract anyone's attention, and no one noticed when he left either.

When Liu Jibai got into the car and suddenly remembered that his junior had something to say, he realized that An Xin had long since disappeared.

Suddenly remembered inexplicably now, Liu Jibai blurted out and asked, "What did you want to say to me the day I graduated?"

"Then, that day...I...I want to say..." Anxin stammered awkwardly, wondering if she should confess after so many years.

'bongbongbong... la, la la la la... la, la la la la, the couple sitting at the entrance of the alley, gently hugging each other...' The cell phone in An Xin's room suddenly rang.

"Senior! Wait a minute!" An Xin jumped up and went to answer the phone, with a complicated expression on her face, she didn't know whether it was regret or relief.Before Liu Jibai could speak, An Xin had already trotted out of the bathroom.

Liu Jibai turned his head and changed his focus, wondering whether An Xin didn't want to say it, or he himself forgot...

I don’t know if the call is from Xiao Chen from Mengyin Magazine. He said that both he and the editor-in-chief have read the trial reading part of An Xin’s novel. Hearing his tone, An Xin felt that she probably hadn’t read it. draft, a little frustrated.

Sure enough, Xiao Chen said: "Unfortunately, the editor-in-chief and I both think that your "Cherish Love" is not suitable for our magazine. In fact, we all think that you may not be suitable for such emotional novels."

"Uh... can you tell me more about it?" Although she was a bit shocked, Anxin still wanted to hear other people's comments.There is no way for me to jump out and objectively evaluate what I write.

"Since you say that, let me say it bluntly." Xiao Chen quickly dropped his polite manners, and immediately spoke venomously: "To be honest, even if your novel is revised and published, it is impossible to sell well. There is no substantive content, it is nothing more than trying to squeeze into the middle and high school reading market, but I am not very optimistic about the middle and high school reading market. The two protagonists are people who have already entered the society. There is no campus life, and the male protagonist is not Tall, rich and handsome, neither funny nor 45 degrees bright and sad, I really can't see where your possibility of being a hit is."

"Uh..." An Xin was depressed.

"From the content point of view, the story is very flat. The process of the male protagonist chasing the female protagonist went smoothly. Except for the initial anxiety and refusal of the female protagonist, there were not many ups and downs. Later, the female protagonist worked hard to meet the male protagonist. Hurrying to work, being too tired and having a car accident, not to mention that the writing was not new, but after the car accident, the two of them became inexplicably awkward. Isn’t it just a car accident? The heroine can work hard for the hero. In that way, why did the male lead take good care of her after the car accident, but instead made her alienate him?"

"Uh... She thinks it might not be worth it to work so hard for one person..."

"How did you come up with this logic?" Xiao Chen asked, but An Xin was speechless. After a while, seeing that An Xin stopped explaining to Xiao Chen, he said again: "According to romance novels, it should be the time for warmth, but What you wrote is like the heroine's complicated feelings when she finds out that the hero is her father and enemy."

"Uh..." An Xin recalled, "Haha, indeed."

"Afterwards, your mode is almost similar to the suspense type. In fact, I really want to know now, is the male lead really the female lead's father-killing enemy?" Xiao Chen asked with interest.

An Xin said embarrassingly, "No... no, the heroine's father is still alive..."

"Is that really an ordinary romance?" Xiao Chen said disappointedly.

"Yes..." An Xin obviously lacked confidence.

"Okay. Besides, the emotional line is very awkward to read. The female lead obviously likes the male lead, so it's fine to be reserved at first. Even when she is willing to work hard for the male lead, she is still worried about something awkwardly. According to your The argument in the article is that the male lead is better off than the female lead. If this is the reason, I don’t think the disparity is enough. The male lead’s father is the director of a certain bureau, and he’s not the son of a multinational corporation. It is not so taboo. According to common sense, there is no match between men and women. At this time, the heroine should be more stable. However, the hero is also inexplicably unwilling to disclose the identity of the heroine to the family. He is evasive and not like a man. The heroine is too Cowardly, the hero has no responsibility, how can such a hero and heroine please the readers?"

An Xin blushed, and was a little disappointed in herself, "Yes, yes, it seems that I am really not very suitable for writing emotional novels."

"I looked for your two short stories back then, maybe because they didn't involve emotions? The story is very exciting, the narration is smooth, and the development is also very attractive and exciting. But the main focus of the short stories is the plot, But novels mainly focus on the characters. It’s not that the plot is unimportant, it’s just that the characters and their emotions are easier to retain readers. What you lack is the emotion. Even suspense novels, if you want to write long, It’s not easy to completely avoid this part.”

"Yeah." An Xin really still wants to write long novels, even if she doesn't write romantic ones, it's impossible to always write short essays of a few thousand words for suspense.

"A deep relationship is far more memorable than an exquisite logical suspense."

"Well, thank you for your pointers, I will remember."

"'You' or something, don't be so alienated, just use 'you', otherwise it will always make me feel old." Xiao Chen changed the subject, "Actually, your suspenseful short stories are really well written, Have you considered writing short stories again? Welcome to submit to our magazine, and I can help you get more remuneration if the manuscript is accepted."

"Yes, I also want to write another short story," An Xin's eyes lit up, "Then I will trouble you a lot in the future."

"It's okay, then wait for me to send you a copy of the invitation letter, do you need a sample draft?"

An Xin hurriedly said: "Yes, I haven't written for a long time, hehe, I don't know the current preferences of "Meng Yin"."

"Well, there are indeed some changes, but if you used to be like this, there is no problem at all."

"OK, thanks."

After hanging up the phone, An Xin's mind was a little messed up, and when she continued to wash Liu Jibai's hair, she also thought about something and remained silent.

The water temperature is very suitable. An Xin rubbed Liu Jibai's hair and massaged his scalp for a long time...

Liu Jibai was almost falling asleep, he forced his eyes open and said, "I don't know if my scalp will wrinkle after soaking for a long time."

"Ah! I'm sorry, I'm sorry, it's ready." Only then did An Xin realize that he had washed Liu Jibai for a long time, so she quickly turned off the water and helped him get a dry towel to wipe his hair.

Liu Jibai didn't care, moved his neck, and suddenly said with a smile: "After washing, we will become 'that pair of bears sitting in the bathroom'."

"Pfft..." An Xin almost choked on herself despite not drinking any water, "What?!"

"Hehe, didn't you sing it on the ringtone of your mobile phone, the pair of bears sitting in the alley~" Liu Jibai said and hummed a few words, "It's quite interesting, next time I will sing a cover, just sing us, sit down The pair of bears in the bathroom."

Thinking that Liu Jibai was joking, An Xin said with a smirk on purpose: "Do bears wash their hair too..."

"Bears and blindfolded chickens~" Liu Jibai said seriously, reaching out for a towel to wipe his hair.

"Really?" An Xin asked back in disbelief, he never knew that even bears could not see at night.

"Hahaha..." Liu Jibai laughed heartily, but said flatly and calmly, "It's fake."

"Cut!" An Xin also suddenly realized that Liu Jibai was talking about herself, and nuzzled, "Okay, come here and let me blow your hair."

"Okay." Liu Jibai obediently went over and sat in front of Anxin.

The setting sun slanted into the room from the balcony, Liu Jibai turned his head and suddenly found a golden flower bud in the middle of the white fluffy thorns of the prickly pear on the balcony.And An Xin, who was drying his hair, looked at his side face and suddenly thought, if she really said that sentence back then, would it be different now?

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