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Oda Sakunosuke felt that something was wrong, but he couldn't tell.

The heartwarming story of a god and a believer, shouldn't the heartwarming mean that two people will always be warm?What happened to the last one dying and one disappearing?

He choked up his throat, then looked at the manuscript in his hand that still had no ending, his eyes fixed on Qianli, hesitant to speak.

"It's very warm...?"

"Hey? Isn't it warm?"

Chisato looked at Oda Sakunosuke's puzzled look, and explained seriously.

"Compared to the plot of betrayal or deceit, isn't it warm for two people who maintain a pure relationship until death?"

Believers' belief in gods, gods' love for believers, two people "love" each other from beginning to end.

Isn't this warm or what?You know, dying together is sugar!

After hearing the answer, Oda Sakunosuke fell silent, and he found that he could understand what Chisato said very well.

For a killer who may have died in a certain mission because of an accident, even if he has seen the "warmth" of ordinary people before, it will take time and effort to truly experience it. strenuous business.

Even though he has never encountered it before, he has a better understanding of this kind of trust and emotion that will not be disappointed even if he dies from the beginning to the end.

In other words, almost everyone in a profession in the dark like him will experience it, not the meekness of spending a lifetime together, but the madness of dying together, never betraying, and the romance born of blood.

It can be a partner, a relative, or even an organization.

This is too unusual.

Oda Sakunosuke thought.

At least at this moment, there is no more abnormal existence than this understanding.

He can be sure that Qianli has never been involved in darkness. Her purity contains a kind of natural hope, which is incompatible with this meaning.

If "Sacrifice" is the emotion she expressed when she was helpless, then what is hidden in "The Believer" is the truth in her heart?

He can indeed understand, but for ordinary people, is such an ending really sweet?

Oda Sakunosuke's long silence left Chisato in a daze, she recalled what she said, and felt that there was nothing wrong at all.

The story is very sweet, in the love of the gods for the believers and the belief of the believers in the gods, both are dog belts. Aren't the gods and people in the text happy?

Plain and simple is the truth, what are you doing so much to destroy the world, fall in love and save the world?

"Mr. Oda?"

Qianli tugged on the other party's sleeve nervously, and asked humbly.

"That... do you think there's something wrong? Tell me, and I can change it!"

who is thisThis is the future generation of writer Oda Sakunosuke!The suggestion given is not very accurate?What's more, she is not Japanese, so she doesn't know what is wrong with Japan.

"No, there's nothing wrong with it."

Oda Sakunosuke, who felt his sleeves being pulled and recovered from his contemplation, shook his head, seeing that Chisato had the intention of changing it as soon as he dared to say it, and quickly denied Chisato's words.

"Follow your own thoughts, and don't feel bad about yourself because of what others say."

How can what a writer writes be disturbed by others?What's more, I just know a little bit now, and I haven't reached the point of finished product yet.

He returned the manuscript in his hand to Qianli, his expression softened?

"I'm looking forward to this story."

Anyway, the fact that the other party wants to write a warm story also means that she is no longer as helpless as she was when she wrote "Sacrifice", and feels the warmth, right?

If so, that would be great.

Oda Sakunosuke didn't know what was going on in her mind, she just confirmed her thoughts, and then began to write a novel called "The Believer".

However, when the revision was completed, she noticed something went wrong.

This article seems to be a bit long, and it is too long considering the normal word count of less than 5K or even 2-3k in the monthly article.

But she wrote about [-] words...

Chisato decisively used the landline in Writer Oda to call the phone number left by Editor Asakawa.

"Hi, this is Hayato Asakawa."

As soon as the call was connected, Asakawa Hayato's youthful voice came from the receiver, Chisato blinked and announced his name.

"Hello, Editor Asakawa, I'm Chisato."

There was a sudden slap on the other end of the phone, and then Asakawa Hayato's voice sounded again.

"Teacher Qianli! What's the matter with you?"

Regardless of the water glass that was accidentally knocked down under excitement, Asakawa Hayato subconsciously straightened his back, his voice disturbed.

"Do you need my help? Teacher Qianli, you are welcome, just say anything."

"The thing is like this, my new article is a bit too long after I finished writing it, about [-] words, I don't know if you will accept it?"

Listening to Chisato simply saying "If I don't accept it, I will submit it to someone else", Asakawa Hayato didn't care about anything, and quickly answered firmly.

"Accept! Why don't you accept it! I'll ask the editor-in-chief for instructions, teacher, please wait a moment!"

With a swipe, he stood up and went straight to the editor-in-chief's office, making the other editors envious and jealous.

"Why did this kid get lucky and take charge of Teacher Qianli?"

"Boom boom boom——"

"Enter."

The editor-in-chief who was reading the document looked up, and Asakawa Hayato's excited look appeared in his sight, and he knew why without even thinking about it.

"Is there any news about Teacher Qianli?"

"Yes! Teacher Qianli called me just now."

The calmness of the editor-in-chief calmed Asakawa Hayato's excitement. He took a deep breath and replied respectfully.

"The teacher said that her new article has been written, but the word count is about [-]."

"Ten thousand?"

The editor-in-chief was a little surprised.

"Ten thousand... is not unacceptable."

In this case, either the serialization is divided into two, or the entire monthly issue is published. Although it is a matter of a few pages, it is also a cost.

Others do not have this qualification, but the treatment of the boss is different.

"In this way, since Teacher Qianli has finished writing, then editor Asakawa will accept the manuscript."

Saying that, the editor-in-chief looked at Asakawa Hayato meaningfully.

"With editor Asakawa's literary quality, can you judge the value of the article?"

There are many examples of blockbusters and then obscurity, not to mention that the age of the other party is indeed too young, so this second article can be regarded as an important judgment in his opinion.

Judge whether this is a temporary surprise or a rising star.

Asakawa Zaoren's heart tightened, he bowed his head and said yes.

"Yes, editor-in-chief, I understand."

After Asakawa Hayato came out of the office, he replied to Chisato immediately. Chisato thought about the working hours of Oda Sakunosuke, and soon set up a meeting date with the other party.

Because of the injury, I can't go out yet, so I can only meet at home, but after all, it is Oda Sakunosuke's house, and it is not good to let strangers in if he is not there.

That night, after Oda Sakunosuke came back, Chisato happily explained the situation to the other party.

"Mr. Oda! I finished writing "The Believer" today!"

Chisato lifted up the neatly re-copied stack of manuscript paper and shook it at Oda Sakunosuke,

"Because the number of words is a bit too much, I communicated with editor Asakawa during the day and made an appointment with him to accept the manuscript tomorrow."

Having said that, Qianli paused, and then added.

"Because you are on vacation tomorrow, Mr. Oda, if not, I will change time with him again."

"It's okay, there is really nothing to do tomorrow."

Oda Sakunosuke, who just got off work, hung his coat at the door, walked to the tea table where Chisato was sitting, and fixed his eyes on the manuscript paper in her hand.

"Have you finished writing?"

He boasted.

"A lot faster than I thought."

Chisato looked at Oda Sakunosuke who had prepared for so many years without moving, and hesitated to speak.

It would be faster if she was given a computer or smartphone, and a considerable part of the time was spent on modifying styles and the like.

The point is that it took almost two weeks for [-] words, and she felt that she was already very good.

Unexpectedly, I was still defeated by a real pigeon. As expected of you, Oda Kanosuke.

However, in the face of Odasaku's sincere praise for Chisato, it was difficult to speak directly, so he could only look at the other party without saying a word, and nodded in response.

"Yeah, it's okay."

Oda Sakunosuke, who had long been looking forward to Qianli Xinwen, made a voice of anticipation for wanting to be healthy.

"So, can I be the first reader of your article?"

"Do!"

Qianli handed over the manuscript in his hand without hesitation.

Let alone this one, all are fine!

In this way, a stack of manuscript paper was handed over from the author Qianli to the first reader.Oda Sakunosuke sat on the single sofa to the left of Chisato, and looked down at the first page at the top.

Below the word "believer" at the top is a short but warning sentence.

Oda Sakunosuke concluded that there was only one meaning.

——Do not form a relationship, it will only increase your loneliness.

He froze for a moment, his heart pounded as if he was startled by his own thoughts, and his hand holding the manuscript tightened subconsciously.

Oda Sakunosuke took a deep breath, and after repeatedly looking at this passage again, he suddenly looked up at Chisato.

He moved his lips to say something, but no sound came out.After realizing this, Oda Sakunosuke took a deep look at Chisato, and looked down at the content below again.

Qianli was dazed by the other party's sudden movement.

What's wrong?Could it be that Oda Saku just saw some loopholes after watching it for a few seconds?