The actor he wrote by himself

Ten minutes later, the coffee table in the living room was filled with supper drinks, and the top actors in the film and television industry sat around the sofa and listened to Mr. Guan's small class.

Guan Che asked the program team to find two large whiteboards, put them together, and held a black water-based marker pen.

Turn around and write five words on the whiteboard.

【other】

【killed】

【Father】

"Should we expand the story?" They're smart enough to understand at a glance.

Immediately afterwards, Guan Che wrote down the words [auxiliary materials] on another whiteboard.

"This is a method I have explored by myself. It can help us build characters and plots, and it is also convenient to mark the rhythm on the plot. It is not an official teaching method. It's a shame, and the teachers can just have fun."

"Applause for Teacher Guan!" Huo Xiuchi sat on the leftmost sofa block and took the lead in applauding.

Everyone cheered enthusiastically with skewers in their mouths, and Guan Che was so frightened that he bowed three times.

Qi Siyun raised his hand: "Ask a question! Teacher Guan, is this similar to our previous acting practice in majors, setting up the situation, adding lines and acting by yourself to experience the characters' emotions?"

"It's about the same, but our profession needs to enrich the characters. Only after the actors get the script can they have a more three-dimensional understanding, so we need to make it more detailed." Guan Che pointed to the words, "For example, this sentence is What the actor finally performed, but the person's growth experience, personality, murder motive, flash point, etc., all need us to enrich and let the actor understand better."

"Oh... I understand." Xu Ying opened a bottle of milk, "Let's extend his plot back and forth, so that it can be combined into a complete story."

"Yes, then... let's start with Sister Ying, one sentence per person, and I will record it. You can add before and after the three words."

"Let me think about it." Xu Ying leaned against the back of the sofa, her expression gradually calmed down, she thought for nearly 30 seconds, and said, "Add in front of [him] — long-term domestic violence."

They didn't sit in groups, they all sat together with familiar people.

The next one is Yuan Miaowen: "In front of [him] Jia's mother ran away with someone when he was three years old."

Guan Che frowned slightly, but didn't say anything, and silently wrote it down on the blackboard.

Ran Cixin: "Both of you add to him, so I will act. Add a fruit knife between [him] and [killed]."

Huang Yiran: "The time is summer."

Guan Che wrote the word Xia under the column of auxiliary materials.

Shen Jing: "Father drank that day."

Ren Jiashu: "The method of committing the crime is to stab twenty knives in the back."

As soon as this sentence came out, a guest seemed to see the picture, frowned and came out, and Shen Jing, who was sitting next to him, patted him and said, "Jia Shu, you are too cruel!"

But Guan Che made a special point of praise: "Brother Jiashu's description has a dramatic effect, and one sentence can make people think of a cruel picture."

"Wouldn't that be too exaggerated?" Shen Jing asked a question because she hadn't had much experience with such crime-solving TV dramas.

At this time, Yuan Miaowen said quietly: "Reality is always more absurd than drama."

The game continues.

Xi Zhiye thought for a moment and said, "The home of father and son is an old residential area, with one bedroom, one living room, one kitchen and one bathroom."

Qi Siyun: "Ah, it's so difficult. Let me think about it—my father wears an old-fashioned vest, works in the mines all year round, coughs often, and makes a lot of noise in everything he does."

"Okay, after Siyun and Brother Xi finished talking, the picture of the scene of the crime has come out." Xu Ying boasted.

"Now only Mr. Huo is left for the first round." Guan Che looked at Huo Xiuchi with a smile, "Please tell me, Mr. Huo."

Huo Xiuchi rubbed his chin, glanced around, and smiled narrowly: "I'll give you a wonderful one."

Everyone looked at him expectantly.

"In front of [Father] - monitor."

Everyone:? !

"Ah?! Xiuchi! Why are you picking it up like this? Isn't everything in front of us messed up?"

"I really didn't expect to go up here!"

"Then the setting about the father has been overturned?"

But Guan Che smiled in great surprise, and even applauded Huo Xiuchi: "Teacher Huo's turning point is really a stroke of genius."

Huo Xiuchi added what he didn't dare to say: "When seeing the title, shouldn't the first reaction be to ask whose father he killed?"

"Then your reading habits are really different." Xi Zhiye said with a smile, "People's reading habits will automatically add attributives. There is already him in front of him, and there is no other subject, so he must subconsciously think it is his own father. .”

"I didn't think about it either, what popped into my mind was why did he want to kill?" Xu Ying said.

The few of them argued for a while, Guan Che saw that they had almost finished speaking, and interrupted: "The story is not over yet, let's start the second round."

"Everyone knows that we have a film and television project with a team of screenwriters. There may not be as many as ten people, but several people always have different ideas and writing styles. This is more obvious in TV dramas. Sometimes we You will feel that a part of the plot suddenly becomes fragmented, and the rhythm is completely disrupted. It may be the reason why the screenwriting team is not unified."

"There are also some very helpless situations, such as in the middle of filming, Party A or the producer suddenly wants to change the plot, or add new characters." Guan Che said with a smile, "You have to add subplots to the plot, or add new characters to the plot. Come back round."

"Oh~" Everyone showed a sudden realization expression.

Qi Siyun slapped his thigh: "So it's like this, did you two discuss it outside? Deliberately increase the difficulty for us in the second round to make the game more fun?"

Huo Xiuchi smiled and shook his head: "Not at all. Don't you think that Guan Guan is also fulfilling the realistic plot we are going on now?"

"Ban nesting dolls!"

"You have risen to the category of philosophy."

"Ms. Huo was joking, I took advantage of the situation." Guan Che continued, "For this second round, please set the background on the basis of Mr. Huo and rationalize the story. This time, we will continue to start with Sister Ying." , or reverse the order?"

"The other way around!" Ren Jiashu booed, "We can't leave Brother Chi at the end, or else he reversed the plot we worked so hard to pick up..."

Xu Ying echoed: "I agree!"

Qi Siyun shook the skewers in his hand: "I agree too!"

Everyone agreed one by one, and looked at Huo Xiuchi with a smile.

Huo Xiuchi shrugged: "I have no objection."

Guan Che made a gesture: "Then let Teacher Huo lead this round, please."

The guests participating in this variety show are undoubtedly very high-quality actors, and their usual hobbies may be quite elegant, and they have read many books, so they can have a unique temperament.

Not to mention Huo Xiuchi, apart from the famous works that he had read since he was a child, in his book alone, with the experience of chasing ten wives and humanities at a time, the plots in his mind could not be shaken out.

He opened his mouth and said, "The squad leader is a girl. She looks ordinary but has a kind personality. She smiles like a star quietly falling to the ground. It is the only light in his small, dark and inferior life for a long time."

Actors are very capable of empathy. As soon as this remark came out, everyone's enthusiasm for coaxing Huo Xiuchi just now disappeared. They seemed to have really seen a young man imprisoned in a dark room. He had never seen light or eaten candy. What little emotion I could wring out over the years had been pinned to a girl.

Huo Xiuchi's words made a good start.

Under the thinking mode that people can't help but follow, the following content will become more and more heartwarming.

Qi Siyun was holding his pork belly, and hadn't thought about eating it for a long time.

He said: "He is 16 years old, a sophomore in high school. After paying attention to her silently for four years, he finally started to approach this girl slowly and try to make friends with her."

"Finally someone has considered age." Guan Che interjected with a smile, raising the atmosphere, making them realize that they are still creating this story, so as not to let their emotions keep sinking.

"Why did he choose to be close to him in the second year of high school?" Xi Zhiye frowned and thought, and then said after a while, "Because this year, his own father was sent to work in a mine [-] kilometers away. There is a dormitory for them in the city, and he only comes back once a week, which opened a gap for him to breathe in his life."

When he came to Ren Jiashu again, he brought the topic to the monitor's father: "During the day-to-day communication, he found that the monitor's situation was similar to his own, and she only lived with her father. Her father ran a small bookstore and was very bookish. He is heavy, and his body does not suffer from pain and injuries like his father, but he is a little blind and often hides under thick glasses to see people."

Shen Jing: "In the process of interacting with the class monitor, his personality has gradually been corrected, and he has also begun to develop towards the positive side of the sun. He also slowly fell in love with the class monitor. One night at the end of summer in the second year of high school, he mustered Courage, ask out the squad leader, and confess to her."

"The style of painting in front of you has suddenly improved step by step. I don't know how to pick it up. It's different from what I expected."

Huang still looked at Yuan Miaowen and Xu Ying behind him, because the game itself had no rules, so the three women whispered to each other for more than a minute, and finally seemed to have settled on a story direction.

"Then I will add his so-called pre-revision personality. Timid and fearful, with little empathy, the most intuitive manifestation is that on the second day of the first day of the year, he passed by a dilapidated fence in the school, and there was a cry from inside. It was a girl who was surrounded. She was being bullied, her face was covered with blood and she couldn't see clearly, and her clothes could barely cover her body, she cried for help, but he didn't even look at him, and just left."

"Hiss... you three." Ren Jiashu frowned in distress.

"Back to the confession. He saw the squad leader suddenly lowered his head and raised it after a long time. His face was pale and his expression became very strange. He said that he should go home, and we will talk about anything later." Yuan Miaowen answered smoothly , she combed a neat high ponytail, capable and calm, and there was a icy gleam in her eyes, "He thinks what the girl said is strange, and usually responds, but she seems to be afraid of something. Out of curiosity, he tracked down the girl's home for the first time. It was the yard behind the bookstore, where both commercial and residential buildings were integrated. He peeked out the window to look inside the dimly lit house, and saw a scene he would never forget in his life. The girl's father told her Sexual assault was carried out."

Huo Xiuchi's and Guan Che's expressions turned serious, no one spoke, even the director team half opened their mouths, listening to their stories in silence.

The last one is Xu Ying's turn.

Her curly chestnut hair almost covered half of her face, and her voice had a frosty texture, like a flower standing up from the wasteland.

"He would go outside her house almost every night, sometimes seeing it, sometimes not. But never once did he step in that door and heroically stop it. He was heartbroken and desperate, but still gave birth to In addition to the obsession with her body, he knows it is extremely perverted, but it is still uncontrollable. In the damp and hot gutter in summer, desire|desire is rotten from the very beginning."

Having said that, she stopped and looked at Huo Xiuchi.Indicate that if he wants to pick it up, he can start.

Huo Xiuchi shook his head: "You continue."

"it is good."

Xu Ying changed her posture with her legs crossed, and hugged the pillow on the sofa: "They were on summer vacation, and one week in the middle his father came home, because the foreman paid two hundred less at the checkout, and the theory failed, so he came back and yelled and beat him to death. Very ruthless...he went out with injuries all over his body, and met the squad leader who also had injuries on the corner of his mouth."

"They were together that night, and the boy confessed that he saw what her father did, saying that they seemed to be people of the same fate. He also touched the girl's body for the first time that night."

Xu Ying didn't go into too much detail, but they all knew what happened to the two young people in the thatched cottage outside that night.

Two souls lick each other's young wounds.

"Okay, it's time for a wonderful essay." Xu Ying smiled, and there was a thin layer of water in her eyes.

Yuan Miaowen took a sip of the milk provided by the advertiser, and continued with the story. Her style of expression was not so literary, but more like a sharp knife poking at the heart of the heart: "He has secretly saved money for ten years for the purpose of One day he will be able to escape from this family, and now that there are more girls in the plan, he saves more fiercely, but is very happy. At the same time, they have to deal with the girl’s father, and they have been collecting evidence of his violations this summer.”

"Seeing that they were about to collect enough, one day after school, the girl said that her father had gone out to study and came back the next day, and invited him to spend the night at her house."

"He went, but when he opened the door, he found her father sitting at the dining table in the living room, with their evidence in his hands and on the table."

Yuan Miaowen is very good at controlling everyone's emotional rhythm. When she said this, she stopped directly and looked at everyone.

"Oh my god..." Ran Cixin trembled involuntarily, "How desperate and terrified are they?"

Shen Jing hugged her, and hid with her in the air-conditioning blanket.

"This story is too disturbing to come here." Xi Zhiye dryly rubbed the fabric of his pants on his knees, "I'm so stuffed up, I want to have a cigarette."

"Sister Wen, go ahead..." Qi Siyun was sitting on the carpet under the sofa, and now he was lying pitifully on the coffee table with his head on his pillow, his eyes slightly red.

"Conflicts erupted, and the hypocritical mask of his father was torn apart along with the evidence. He even picked up a weighing pole for weighing second-hand books on the cabinet to hit someone. In desperation, the boy grabbed the fruit knife on the coffee table and stabbed He went down and stabbed more than 20 knives in the back, and the humiliation, repression, and humbleness of more than ten years, together with the girl's more than ten years, were all released until the life of this person was bloody and bloody."

The timid female staff members have already begun to wipe their tears.Each of the guests had watery eyes and frowned at the same time, as if they had strong physical discomfort.

The corners of Guan Che's eyes were also moist.

"Their plans were completely disrupted. He became a murderer. In a hurry, he took a knife and ran out of her house with the squad leader. He returned to his home to search for the money he had saved, and wanted to elope with her. But he couldn't find it no matter how hard he searched, suddenly, he thought of the good wine and cigarettes that his father had recently...he understood, and collapsed, and their last hope was also shattered."

Yuan Miaowen sat down and leaned against Xu Ying.

The two filmmakers, once they got into the mood, the rhythm was perfect, and there was some element of acting in their expressions, which made people feel like they were falling into an ice cave.

Xu Ying told the final ending: "In the end he was arrested by the police. After he told the truth about the evil deeds of the girl's father, the police asked the girl to testify, but the girl cried very sadly, saying why did he slander her father? He clearly wanted to He was the one who cheated on her."

"Okay, I think the plot of the story can actually stop here." Xu Ying breathed a sigh of relief and regained her usual expression. She looked at Guan Che, "Let's let Xiaoguan have a sense of participation and give this story a little Finish it."

"The teachers are all amazing. The film's rhythm and sense of storytelling are really good." Guan Che frowned and thought for a while after boasting, "Then I'll give it a try."

Huo Xiuchi couldn't help swallowing, and looked at Guan Che nervously.

"In the prison, the last witness confrontation before the verdict. He looked at the girl with red eyes and asked her why she did this. The girl looked far away, and suddenly smiled and recited his confession."

"'I once felt that life was very dark, and only after I met you did I have light in my life. I used to be a very cowardly person, and I followed you silently for four years, secretly grabbing your light, this time I want to muster up the courage. I like you." The girl laughed wildly, her eyes were full of tears, she said, you haven't recognized me for four years, but I can't forget you at a glance, that male classmate who ran away by the wall, and only The male classmate who dares to stand at the window and watch me being raped, you really haven't changed at all."

"Our ending was doomed from the beginning, darkness and light, the opposite of eternity. Since you like me so much, go to hell for me. Starting today, I will truly welcome my light."

Guan Che paused for a moment, let out a breath, and finally concluded: "After speaking, the girl turned and left without giving any more glances."

Everyone applauded enthusiastically.

The author has something to say: Originally, the story they told was not like this, but they saw the angry incident while surfing at night, so they deleted it and re-written it later, writing a realistic orientation of all villains.

"Reality is always more absurd than drama."

PS: This method is my own nonsense, unprofessional, it’s okay to play thinking games

—感谢在2021-05-0921:18:14~2021-05-1102:49:41期间为我投出霸王票或灌溉营养液的小天使哦~

Thanks to the little angel of irrigation nutrient solution: 1 bottle of wood wine;

Thank you very much for your support, I will continue to work hard!