Angel on earth

Thanks to all book friends for their favorites, subscriptions, comments and support, as well as the rewards from book friends such as Monty, Yiyifan, Taiji, Kaaay, Chaojiang, sasakura, etc. This is the end of this story XD

In short, Misha and Aaron betrayed the revolution like this!There should be no extra stories about them in the future. I feel that the story is almost done here. Unlike the first book, there are many problems that need to be solved with extra magic, which is a bit of progress.

Another little improvement is that the love line entered early (kimbo).On the one hand, the first book was because I was too embarrassed to write about love, and on the other hand, it was because I read too much from the starting point, so I wrote a lot of words before I started to fall in love. As a result, it seems that this is the end, so let’s end it, in short, it should be more romantic!And then it's over.The ending should not be so abrupt this time... It's a bit deceitful in the introduction. The Japanese-style western fantasy in my impression should be a happy, silly, sweet, poverty-stricken little bourgeois who bakes cakes and pies at home every day. You think I'm Tristan, but it's actually me, Harley, this kind of dance Western fantasy (X)

Introspection link.

The biggest problem is that deciphering and promoting the plot basically rely on dialogue or even monologue, which is very silly, and often writes things that are incomprehensible in the second grade.And I admit that I have changed Mithra's human (god) design in the middle, and I will fix it later and try to round him up as much as possible.The writing is very confusing. At the beginning, it was indeed an ordinary copper-smelting villain with a little bit of satisfaction, and he became a good father halfway through.This problem is mainly because I have been preached before, and I was very embarrassed to listen to it a few times before I ran away... I am in Japan, and I started with Japanese books. I don’t know if it is a local characteristic. The other party is very hostile to Catholicism. I preconceived , but the setting is really better to let yourself go...

Although I have written a lot of dialogues, my dialogue ability is not good, and my social skills are too low. I feel awkward no matter how I write dialogues.I endured some stinging ape expressions, "well" and "ha" are really more unavoidable than "na", I often use it in three-dimensional chatting...I tried hard to suppress my nature.But it's so hard to write dialogue without "well", scratching my head...

Still not good at rhythm.However, the comparison part is very cool, and the special card is not fooled like the first book.Drawing on experience, this time the setting is more detailed. Maps, character settings, etc. have been drawn in advance. Various secondary titles and job title iterations have also been arranged. Each chapter also has an outline, although it is written while supplementing (eat ) settings, but the overall smooth.I will fix it later, so that the supplementary settings appear more naturally... Although it is cool to improvise and invent history every time, it will be embarrassing if there is no foreshadowing in the previous text...

It is really a painful and joyful thing to get the title of Secondary School. One of the main reasons why I like works like bleaching powder is that the name in the combat system is good Secondary School, so cool (hey)!But when I got up, I didn't have a cultural and human taste, it's abominable.

The rhythm at the beginning is too slow, the plot is too little, and the connection is too jumpy.I edited and edited a few versions. After checking the information, I only kept a little bit to enrich the background.In the novel, Jianzheng (?) has a feeling of consuming poor people, and it is not the point. The spread is too low, but I don’t seem to find a way to write it that is not low, just like quoting poems can actually be used overhead. Reasons to avoid but the mindset is hard to get out of... In short, the theme is to get the two of you together quickly (hey).I don’t have the courage, writing power and brain power to write that kind of big theme. If I really want to write about it, it may be nondescript and a damn little bourgeois and boxer, so stay in the comfort zone XD

First, I thought about a story frame, then made a character design, and made a detailed outline based on the character design.However, the detailed outline is a bit of a disaster, and the wild dogs of the characters can't be controlled when they are often written.For example, it was originally set that Misha would take his wife on the road miserably after selling out the Brilliant Girls, and Micah would turn into a jump boy and marry Catherine...

Misha's character design was just the second generation of gods at the beginning, the son of Ivan Kupala.At first it was called Andrei, "brave". If you think about it, you can't both have the surname Anping (the last one I wrote was called Anping), and then I made Mikhail, one I like very much. Mao is also called Mikhail (actually it sucks).Russian is still jumping around at the door, please bear with me if there is a problem with the nickname and father's name, it's just a virtue to pretend to be Federal...

Several versions of the saints have also been deleted and revised, and it was only finalized on the eve of Micah's appearance... The names of the last saints were basically deducted from the Bible. Ya does whatever she wants (the result is that I read the wrong meter, clown mask.jpg)

Aaron, because he wanted to set up the whole middle school, for example, the gentle and generous family doctor with countless SCIs (?) is actually a vampire who craves your body but likes to feed cats.But I want to have a renaissance. Paladins and vampires as the protagonists sound really old, although I have no impression of seeing it (amnesia cat cat head).In the end, the image that was created most of the time seems to be a man with glasses on the cover of a Japanese commercial BL book, and he has been washed out... Bao, Mom loves you, but I am too poor and weak to do it!

Candy Kane is a Benge mage who can't melee and is super weak.Isabella, I got used to being wicked when I gave the villain some misfortune elements. Originally, Arnold was supposed to be Aaron’s father, but that felt boring or too strong... It’s a pity that I don’t have any relationship with the protagonist these days Come out and be a villain? (Hey)

At the beginning, Micah thought that there would not be many appearances in the mysterious ranger, beautiful and cool, but he didn't expect that there would be a lot of pretense, such as the plot of Feng Chang with me, and he became a bear child.Having said that, the setting of this character is actually quite old-fashioned. Sometimes I feel that this person will be placed in the neon club next door to my adoptive father and younger brother to develop a sense of sight for the story of Begonia. I must be in the fast broadcast during my second year of high school. I have seen similar animations (shut up)

Because I am a curly-haired baboon, I did a little research on the information, but most of it was useless to avoid suspicion, and it always feels aggrieved that Western Fantasy is too realistic... Isn't it just for fun that human beings invent magic!

The reference materials are mainly to make the society in the article conform to logic and natural laws. Although the Japanese-style western fantasy warnings, you can understand yourself... To be honest (for a person like me who is not good at liberal arts), the reference materials must be British and unindustrialized. There are quite a few after the revolution, but after working hard, I found some useful and convenient ones, and I didn’t follow the instructions, after all, I added magic variables.And I can't accept that medieval Europe was full of shit, really not.

But it seems that after abandoning some of the settings, it's a little more fun.For example, at the beginning, the theme was decided to be "Ivan Kupala". This is the Russian version of Yuan Zhikong, the God of Harvest, so there must be a Harvest Church. This is not the one, but the priest Maozi and the little moon in the mystery Xiaoyue’s love nest, Xiaoyue’s surname is even White, according to Languo’s standards, this is a proper car accident scene, if he is going to be burned, he should abandon it quickly... In this way, Mikhail doesn’t have to be a filial son (originally he was a kind father and a filial son) story).

Another example is "do what you want, but do no harm".This is a warning at the beginning of a witch's magic book (a mysterious PDF, only about 40 pages, probably not a publication), I originally wanted Candy Kane to say something, think about it, and then "have Light", playing with the stalk.Generally speaking, I want to mix a little fairy tale style with a little bit of medieval knight legends, such as being blinded because of ghosts in my heart, but after defeating the demons, I become stronger (the more famous words seem to be written by the Eternal King), although it is not very successful.

There is also the set of Astral Body Golden Dawn Kabbalah, which is not an upgrade stream, so I will not mention it. This is the pure love channel, and the focus is on falling in love!

I didn’t think too much about the social and historical background at the beginning. The plot needs to be added with the invention of some history. I read some strange materials while writing, and it became blurred. I wish everyone to build communism as soon as possible.The land issue is rather strange, because if you check the information, it is likely to say that the ancient West had a good system to protect farmers' rights and was very civilized... something like that.In the end, there are actually references to domestic books on landlords and land issues (such as the Five Laws of Dragon Slaying), as well as some foreign literary works that I have forgotten myself (few say that farmers live a good life)... Although it is only as a The background of the pure love story should be as relaxed as possible, but if there is a problem with the general direction, it will always be a bit embarrassing...

After that, there will be five personal episodes, namely Micah, Mikhail, Isabella, Batista and Grey, not V.The story of Mikhail and Aaron has no follow-up so far.

When this book was opened, there were only more than [-] words to save the manuscript, and all kinds of anxiety. In the later period, because I was busy three times, the saved manuscript was gone, and the writing was rushed and rushed. The background and plot were also messy... When I saw this summary, I already It is being repaired, and some data will be fine-tuned.The main reason is that the author's math is too bad and his memory deteriorates and he often makes mistakes in calculations. This time, he will recalculate carefully (and then list a chronology) ORZ

Wishing everyone an early year, and wishing everyone a happy new year and all the best!I don't know if I will have time to fish after that, anyway, I will see you again!