HP Midnight Light
Chapter 130 Revision Plan
Although I wrote this article with a lot of heart, but no one has read it →_→ I don’t know if it’s because of BE or because of the original heroine.
Anyway, it's time for the end now, so here is a very brief revision plan.
[Highlight]: Xiuwen will not make any changes to the characters, only the plot.
That is to say, in the modified version, Hyacinth is still easy to bully, Olivia is still stupid and sweet, Signus is still brain-dead, and Edmund is still abnormal...
Therefore, the modification of the plot mainly focuses on:
1. Weaken Edmund's sense of existence, after all, he is not the hero.
2. Make Sirius more supple.
3. Fine-tune the emotional line between Blaise and Pansy, I still think their emotional development is a bit abrupt.
4. Cornelia's Dark Thread.
5. Modify the bug of the timeline
6. More abuse.
In addition to solving routine problems such as incoherence in the plot, I also want to reduce the total number of words in this revision. As a result, some roles will definitely be deleted, but some sub-plots will also be improved.
It is expected to start finishing at Christmas time on December 12th, and it is not sure how long it will be completed.
My new pit address is below, welcome to jump into the pit~
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Anyway, it's time for the end now, so here is a very brief revision plan.
[Highlight]: Xiuwen will not make any changes to the characters, only the plot.
That is to say, in the modified version, Hyacinth is still easy to bully, Olivia is still stupid and sweet, Signus is still brain-dead, and Edmund is still abnormal...
Therefore, the modification of the plot mainly focuses on:
1. Weaken Edmund's sense of existence, after all, he is not the hero.
2. Make Sirius more supple.
3. Fine-tune the emotional line between Blaise and Pansy, I still think their emotional development is a bit abrupt.
4. Cornelia's Dark Thread.
5. Modify the bug of the timeline
6. More abuse.
In addition to solving routine problems such as incoherence in the plot, I also want to reduce the total number of words in this revision. As a result, some roles will definitely be deleted, but some sub-plots will also be improved.
It is expected to start finishing at Christmas time on December 12th, and it is not sure how long it will be completed.
My new pit address is below, welcome to jump into the pit~
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