[Idol trainee] please pick me up
Chapter 54 The spring night is short, let's move on, girl!
After a day of travel, the teenagers returned to the hotel and planned to hold a Pu Yuzhen criticism meeting before the celebration meeting.
Unlike Chen Linong, who was watching calmly while eating instant noodles, and Detective Jia, who had already seen through everything, Zhu Zhengting ignored Cai Xukun's obstruction and gave Pu Yuzhen an iron fist.
Talking about being brooding is actually just acting like a baby.Chen Linong took a sip of the instant noodle soup.
Is this going to be stopped?He didn't even use [-]% of his strength to hit someone. Justin calmly took a sip of barley tea.
Cai Xukun looked blankly at the two old monks with Buddhist music behind their backs, wondering if they should continue to rescue Pu Yuzhen from Zhu Zhengting's hands, and Pu Yuzhen himself had given up struggling.
Forget it, it would be more appropriate for this love liar to invite them to dinner in the future.
Finally, the remaining four teenagers reached a consensus.
Ah, what happened to wanting to cry even though he won the game at the last minute.
Pu Yuzhen, who was lying on Zhu Zhengting's knee and was beaten dizzily, was unable to think about life.
And soon, a large-scale celebration banquet that gathered directors and staff from all walks of life began as the final curtain call of the event. This was a large-scale banquet attended by dozens of people. people.
Justin bumped into Park Yuzhen suddenly, and then signaled him to look in a certain direction with his eyes.
Li Yunjing and Song Hana were talking with each other with a drink in a corner of the hall, and when they were observing the girls, the two girls also turned their heads and had eye contact with them.
Pu Yuzhen still had a decent smile on his face, but his heart was already burning with anger—the feeling of being fooled has never been so strong.
He didn't want to communicate more with Li Yunjing, he just lowered his head and kept serving dishes to Chen Linong and Justin.
In the middle of the meal, Chen Linong, who had been quietly eating whatever he picked up, finally couldn't help suppressing the Argentine sweet shrimp that he was going to put in his bowl again, and said with a bitter face and a little aggrieved: "I really can't eat anymore, Brother Yuzhen, eat some yourself."
"Report, I'm sorry." Pu Yuzhen realized that he had done something stupid, and his face turned as red as a sweet shrimp.
He got up and smiled at them, "I'm going out to get some air, the room is too stuffy."
He was about to sulk for a while in the corridor, but Li Yunjing followed him.
"Everyone takes it for granted that wolves eat sheep, but unexpectedly there are also wolves who play the role of shepherd dogs."
The line that was supposed to be a compliment now sounds so harsh.
"Sheep eat grass is also people's inherent cognition, who would have thought that sheep would eat people instead?"
Pu Yuzhen retorted.
"You don't need to be so sarcastic about me. Although it is true that I lied to you, it is for the sake of work and the effect of the show after all." Li Yunjing acted aggrievedly, as she would usually do after being beaten up by him. expression, so Pu Yuzhen found helplessly that his heart softened again - he had no resistance to the coquettishness of his younger siblings, nothing at all.
"Besides, I didn't come out to hate you...Let's not talk about it, have you calmed down?" Li Yunjing puffed up her cheeks and shook his sleeves.
"Of course I didn't calm down."
In fact, I am not angry anymore, but I just want her to feel a little guilty.
"It's not fair, I should be angry too, aren't you acting on me too?" Li Yunjing was very upset.
"But I didn't lie to you, not a single word," Pu Yuzhen almost wanted to gnash his teeth, "And do you think everything can be staged?"
Li Yunjing seemed to be greatly shaken by his words, she couldn't maintain the heartless smile just now, and quickly fell silent.
"Besides, the instrument you are best at is not the piano." Pu Yuzhen laughed lightly at this moment.
"I have worked hard to train myself to an amateur level for this program. It would be too much to mock me after learning the truth."
Li Yunjing waved her fist and pouted dissatisfiedly.
"Remember what I said that night," Pu Yuzhen shook his head, and made a gesture of playing the piano in the air, "Your hand shape is wrong. Although the hand shape of a person playing the piano is not necessarily right Whether it is wrong, even professional players will have different degrees of differences due to personal preferences, but your playing posture that pays too much attention to the function of the finger pulp will cause redundant movements of the fingers, and your performance will no longer be coherent—— —Well, let me guess, you were a wind instrument specialist before."
Pu Yuzhen looked into her eyes with burning eyes.
"It's an alto flute," Li Yunjing had to admit, spreading her hands. "As expected of a professional pianist, you still have two brushes."
"I was talking nonsense."
I just didn't expect you, a 'wolf', to bite the hook so easily.Pu Yuzhen rolled his eyes with a smile, and finally regained [-]%.
"Then you're lucky." Li Yunjing rolled her eyes.
Nonsense?Ghost letter.
"Hey, when you think about it carefully, you have too many flaws, but for some reason, we were all selectively blind at that time." Pu Yuzhen rubbed his chin.
On the second day, it stands to reason that it should be a random event with a very small probability that Li Yunjing borrowed a certain book in the huge school library, so how did Cai Xukun know that she would borrow that book the day before and studied the book in advance? in theory?
On the third day, when he was repairing the girl's toilet seat, he found that if the girl stepped on the toilet, he would open the cabinet at the top of the bathroom as if he was standing on the ground. When he opened the cabinet curiously, he saw the flute.
On the fourth day, the girl bumped into them at the riverside without having an appointment with Chen Linong. Before that, he had been looking for Chen Linong for several hours, and in the end he was still in an unknown message. I found it under the reminder of someone's message.
All of this proves that the ones who got the most detailed script were not the teenagers, not Justin who got the divine card of the prophet, or even him, the wolf, but the sheep who appeared as the weakest existence, the girl Li Yunjing.
So from the beginning to the end, it was not him who was a wolf who was performing with Li Yunjing who was a sheep and the other four teenagers who were humans, but everyone else was following the script to accompany him, the wolf, to perform.
"There's nothing I can do about it. Who told me that I'm the kind of silly, sweet person with big breasts and no brains—" Li Yunjing leaned against the window and laughed at herself, but her expression was a little lonely.
"But since it's a game, making yourself happy is the first priority, isn't it?"
Pu Yuzhen tilted his head and asked back.
To play games is to enjoy the process rather than blindly pursue the result, he once said so to the girl.
Li Yunjing was startled, and the smile on her face could not be maintained again, and her big round eyes seemed to be condensed again, but she laughed first before that: "Uncle, what are you talking about, the purpose of playing games is to win .This time I won."
"Alright, you won." Pu Yuzhen could only helplessly agree.
He turned to go back—he was a little hungry after so long a delay.
"Hey, uncle—"
However, Li Yunjing stopped him.
"Only the last two sentences," the girl's expression couldn't be seen clearly in the dark of the corridor, "Only the last two sentences are the truth."
Pu Yuzhen froze for a moment, then showed a gentle smile.
"Thank you."
He said.
Pu Yuzhen opened the door and returned to the hustle and bustle of the dinner party, while Li Yunjing stayed in the quiet place, silently watching the door close in front of her eyes.
The author has something to say:
Tomorrow will return to the official plot~ The wolf boy episode is over, woohoo——
Seeing Xiao Xiao say that the program team has bad ideas, it is true hahaha, is this program team very scheming?Do you have a sense of reversal?
If I told everyone that Chengcheng’s previous ranking, the news of Mr. Park’s sudden deafness was suppressed, and even the follow-up of Lehua’s group will be reversed, would everyone be shocked? 233
It's impossible for mnet to be such a simple and brainless ordinary company!
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Sheep cannibalism is a stalk of the enclosure movement.
"Your sheep are so tame and satisfied with eating a little, but now it is said that they have become very greedy and arrogant, and even want to eat people..." (Thomas More, "Utopia")
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For the powerless guessing party who is at a loss again:
Mr. Park was angry because he thought the girl knew nothing and was a victim of the game, but she came to this party and knew Song Hana very well, which proved that she was not a simple victim. I saw it but didn't think about the details because of stupid sympathy, and instantly understood that the girl was the one who got a more complete script than them. The five of them were being led by the nose by the girl, and Justin also discovered this, so I just reminded Mr. Park, so Mr. Park bombarded the girl with the piano and flute to confirm whether his speculation was correct.
And what the girl said "Only the last two sentences are the truth" does not correspond to "Playing games is to win"
I saw some relatives say that they are not very good at reasoning and solving puzzles. First, I feel that I am not too obvious in foreshadowing. Second, I think this is not a text that wants to burn everyone's brains. Just follow along easily, so I will explain the foreshadowing clearly at the end in the future, so that everyone can understand what happened instead of guessing riddles through dialogue. After all, reading novels is for fun, not for brainstorming.
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To explain a bit, in fact, the relationship between Song Hana and Li Yunjing has been hinted a long time ago, but it has nothing to do with the plot, so I explain it here.
The first is that Song Hana is a heroine in Overwatch, and Li Yunjing said Song Hana’s lines in the game; and the erhu egg Hanbok worn by Li Yunjing is also Song Hana’s old one in the previous game Positive New Year skin.
The second is that Song Hana can speak Chinese and looks like an overseas student, but in fact it is because she returned to China with her mother when she was young; and Li Yunjing said that her mother made glutinous rice balls for herself when she was very young. There are indeed instant glutinous rice balls in Korea, but There is no tradition of eating glutinous rice balls, so her mother made it for her before her parents divorced, and the stewed Gangwon-do beef is made by her current mother, so when she sees glutinous rice balls, she is just excited, but when she eats beef stew, she feels homesick.
So Lee Yun-jung and his family got into trouble because they formed a new family, and now Song Hana has been to her father's house because of work, if Mr. Park went upstairs with her that day, he would have had a chance to find out, it should be considered that Lee Yun-jung wanted to show him Yes, but he didn't. At that time, she knew that she had no hope of being with Mr. Park.
Then, these two sisters will play an important role in revealing the truth, so let’s mention them for the time being, because I feel that it’s too careless to single out a chapter about the original characters, so let’s put it here
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Please take a leave of absence tomorrow, really, there may not be any more updates, maybe it will be very late to get home, and it will be after ten o'clock in the evening, everyone, don't wait, take a break early and watch it the next day
Criticize Xiao by name, this producer is really over the top! I even said that I should go to bed early, but I stayed up so late, criticize her!
Chapter 55 Sorry for being late + Suggestion Box (it’s just the author’s nagging, lock it when the text is updated next time)
Probably a little explanation + an apology to everyone, and I hope to discuss with you a little bit about the future direction.
[-]. About sorry
Originally, this episode was just written casually, but I didn’t expect to write high and it seemed to last for too long. My obsessive-compulsive disorder had to squeeze two days into one chapter as soon as possible. It was supposed to be over in seven days and ended in five days, but it was still delayed. It’s a day and—just like the ending of if, it’s so brightly placed on it to take up space. It’s also something that I regret immediately after writing it. Let’s force it, because Jinjiang Xiuwen is not convenient. I’ll finish it. When I sort out the txt for you later, I will reset it in the correct order.
It’s still my first time writing an article and I don’t have much experience. If there is a next book, I should choose to fill in the extra parts slowly after the end instead of stuffing them in the middle of the main text.
[-]. About Fanwai
Maybe the relatives who followed the article earlier did not find out that I changed the description. The newly changed description said that if you don’t read the extras, it will not affect the main text, because
I am afraid that the rhythm will be too tense to throw out this thing for adjustment (well, although the current attempts have failed a bit), so if you don’t make up the previous episodes, you can skip them all.
[-]. About the ending
For example, the truth about the protagonist’s amnesia will not be revealed in any CP line or the ending main line, because—a problem with memory does not mean that he will be bored. For the protagonist, grasping the present and creating the future is better than figuring out his life. Where you come from and where you die is much more important.
Another example is whether the protagonist can make his debut... Actually, I don’t think everyone thinks this is an important matter, so maybe I drank an extra bottle of Coke one night and he was eliminated in the promotion competition. There are too many boys, so many people are better than him if he is qualified to advance, even if he does not advance, it is a matter of course
[-]. About original supporting roles
Let’s talk about Song Hana first, maybe many people don’t have an impression of her.In the main storyline, she is equivalent to a noun that was previously replaced by "staff". After brushing her face in the early stage and later, she has basically been doing interviews after being promoted.
I originally brought her out because I prefer to play Overwatch (exposed). On the other hand, it is a bit troublesome to write about the staff every time, and the interaction is very embarrassing.
Her role in the main plot is limited to this, and you don’t need to remember her... and her sister Li Yunjing and the little boy who appeared in the last episode will not appear in the main text, because it has nothing to do with the main plot. I just want to be good to everyone 233 Don't watch the extra preparations
If there is another role, it should be the real ending without CP after the end of the other people's CP. Only in this episode, that is, those who are interested in seeing the last can see the whole picture of the event, while other episodes The male protagonist will go on happily with the children with his shortcomings.
The true ending I want to create is: the meeting or parting of the teenagers is inevitable, just like Madoka meets Homura, Brooch meets the assistant, and April [-]st meets Yuko.
[-]. About writing
1551 This is the most heart-wrenching point. I also feel from the two days and the message just now that my current writing style is not enough to control my own plot, and the characters often cannot complete a sentence, so it leads to a lot of confusion. It's a feeling that people can't understand without beginning and end. This is indeed my biggest problem (one of them).
I saw a sentence before, but the writer I forgot, it probably said "If a gun appears in your article, someone will definitely use it later."
So I may pay too much attention to the "usefulness" of the plot in normal times, and save all the mess for later use. I feel very bad about this now, because it will cause the previous plot to be too compact, and the foreshadowing behind it will reveal inexplicable OTZ
I always think that the foreshadowing that can attract people to read is called foreshadowing. When it is revealed, everyone's reaction of "oh, so this thing is still useful" is OK, but if you don't understand it, it must be the storyteller's problem. So when you can't understand the plot, don't think "ah, I'm so stupid, why can't I understand".Remember that must be my problem, just bring it up with me, and I will find a way to solve it and rebuild it.
I also don’t want to make my essays look like they’re profound and lofty, they’re all fake, just like my third uncle said, novels can only be divided into bad-looking novels and super-good-looking novels, and now I classify my writing as bad-looking In that category, I hope to write super-good-looking novels in the future, and super-good-looking novels must at least be understandable...
Before Bai Juyi wrote poems, he would show the finished poems to the old rural women. If the old woman said it was good, it was good. If the old woman said something about it, he would change it. Can show off.
So everyone giving me advice is to help me, don’t praise me or praise me without thinking, for me, it hurts me and makes me inflated, and in the end the writing is bad and it still affects everyone’s reading experience. .
[-]. About opinions
Everyone’s comments to me are really important, and I only found out from the comments that I was too procrastinated and unclear, so I still have a bad face and hope you can leave me a lot of comments. If you have any comments, you don’t have to be euphemistic and direct. Proposed.
Now that these problems have been discovered, they will definitely be changed later. The first change is that there will be no messy episodes before the end. Now only the third performance (35 into 22) and the final performance (22 into 11) are left. 32), so the progress should be faster. If the rhythm is relaxed, I don’t know how you feel about chapters 35-[-]. If it is possible, the rhythm will probably be adjusted like this to introduce a large amount of interaction with the teenagers during the tense time.
You can talk to me first about what episodes you want to watch after the end, and I will roughly conceive in my head, trying to stop this kind of messy and incoherent problem from happening again.
[-]. About CP
In the final CP, Wang Zha’s four sons + Nongnong are tentatively decided for Fanwai. If there is no NP ending, they will all be single-player 1V1, and everyone else in that CP line will become good brothers.
I feel that these children interacted more in the early stage, so it would be a little more natural?If you have any other comments or suggestions, please let me know~
[-]. Time limit
The discussion time will be closed until the next update. Before that, I will look at everyone’s opinions and think about the general direction in the future. I have also worked hard on everyone. You have really helped me a lot. 233 Now I feel better than when I first started It's much better, and I won't sit there for half an hour without being able to hold back a word.
This is roughly what I mean, because I have to get up early tomorrow, so the writing is a bit confusing, and the words are also very vulgar, just let everyone understand what I mean.
If you can accept it, please take care of it for now~
(Of course, if this is unacceptable, I can't help it. 233 After all, I have been forced to lose my collection. I thought that everyone would abandon the pit, so I didn't write it. It happened that I was a little busy three times, but I saw that There are little angels chasing after me, I really feel that abandoning the pit is too irresponsible OTZ)
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PS: Because JJ has a lot of harmonious words and my post preview function is not available, so I can only modify the harmonious words after sending them out. If you subscribe, you may get multiple updates in a similar period of time?If you find that I have updated more than once in an hour, I must be correcting a typo or something. Don’t worry about it. My speed is not to mention an hour. It’s good to update once in three hours...
Sorry if I bothered you
And you really have to remember to go to bed early, otherwise you will be bald
Unlike Chen Linong, who was watching calmly while eating instant noodles, and Detective Jia, who had already seen through everything, Zhu Zhengting ignored Cai Xukun's obstruction and gave Pu Yuzhen an iron fist.
Talking about being brooding is actually just acting like a baby.Chen Linong took a sip of the instant noodle soup.
Is this going to be stopped?He didn't even use [-]% of his strength to hit someone. Justin calmly took a sip of barley tea.
Cai Xukun looked blankly at the two old monks with Buddhist music behind their backs, wondering if they should continue to rescue Pu Yuzhen from Zhu Zhengting's hands, and Pu Yuzhen himself had given up struggling.
Forget it, it would be more appropriate for this love liar to invite them to dinner in the future.
Finally, the remaining four teenagers reached a consensus.
Ah, what happened to wanting to cry even though he won the game at the last minute.
Pu Yuzhen, who was lying on Zhu Zhengting's knee and was beaten dizzily, was unable to think about life.
And soon, a large-scale celebration banquet that gathered directors and staff from all walks of life began as the final curtain call of the event. This was a large-scale banquet attended by dozens of people. people.
Justin bumped into Park Yuzhen suddenly, and then signaled him to look in a certain direction with his eyes.
Li Yunjing and Song Hana were talking with each other with a drink in a corner of the hall, and when they were observing the girls, the two girls also turned their heads and had eye contact with them.
Pu Yuzhen still had a decent smile on his face, but his heart was already burning with anger—the feeling of being fooled has never been so strong.
He didn't want to communicate more with Li Yunjing, he just lowered his head and kept serving dishes to Chen Linong and Justin.
In the middle of the meal, Chen Linong, who had been quietly eating whatever he picked up, finally couldn't help suppressing the Argentine sweet shrimp that he was going to put in his bowl again, and said with a bitter face and a little aggrieved: "I really can't eat anymore, Brother Yuzhen, eat some yourself."
"Report, I'm sorry." Pu Yuzhen realized that he had done something stupid, and his face turned as red as a sweet shrimp.
He got up and smiled at them, "I'm going out to get some air, the room is too stuffy."
He was about to sulk for a while in the corridor, but Li Yunjing followed him.
"Everyone takes it for granted that wolves eat sheep, but unexpectedly there are also wolves who play the role of shepherd dogs."
The line that was supposed to be a compliment now sounds so harsh.
"Sheep eat grass is also people's inherent cognition, who would have thought that sheep would eat people instead?"
Pu Yuzhen retorted.
"You don't need to be so sarcastic about me. Although it is true that I lied to you, it is for the sake of work and the effect of the show after all." Li Yunjing acted aggrievedly, as she would usually do after being beaten up by him. expression, so Pu Yuzhen found helplessly that his heart softened again - he had no resistance to the coquettishness of his younger siblings, nothing at all.
"Besides, I didn't come out to hate you...Let's not talk about it, have you calmed down?" Li Yunjing puffed up her cheeks and shook his sleeves.
"Of course I didn't calm down."
In fact, I am not angry anymore, but I just want her to feel a little guilty.
"It's not fair, I should be angry too, aren't you acting on me too?" Li Yunjing was very upset.
"But I didn't lie to you, not a single word," Pu Yuzhen almost wanted to gnash his teeth, "And do you think everything can be staged?"
Li Yunjing seemed to be greatly shaken by his words, she couldn't maintain the heartless smile just now, and quickly fell silent.
"Besides, the instrument you are best at is not the piano." Pu Yuzhen laughed lightly at this moment.
"I have worked hard to train myself to an amateur level for this program. It would be too much to mock me after learning the truth."
Li Yunjing waved her fist and pouted dissatisfiedly.
"Remember what I said that night," Pu Yuzhen shook his head, and made a gesture of playing the piano in the air, "Your hand shape is wrong. Although the hand shape of a person playing the piano is not necessarily right Whether it is wrong, even professional players will have different degrees of differences due to personal preferences, but your playing posture that pays too much attention to the function of the finger pulp will cause redundant movements of the fingers, and your performance will no longer be coherent—— —Well, let me guess, you were a wind instrument specialist before."
Pu Yuzhen looked into her eyes with burning eyes.
"It's an alto flute," Li Yunjing had to admit, spreading her hands. "As expected of a professional pianist, you still have two brushes."
"I was talking nonsense."
I just didn't expect you, a 'wolf', to bite the hook so easily.Pu Yuzhen rolled his eyes with a smile, and finally regained [-]%.
"Then you're lucky." Li Yunjing rolled her eyes.
Nonsense?Ghost letter.
"Hey, when you think about it carefully, you have too many flaws, but for some reason, we were all selectively blind at that time." Pu Yuzhen rubbed his chin.
On the second day, it stands to reason that it should be a random event with a very small probability that Li Yunjing borrowed a certain book in the huge school library, so how did Cai Xukun know that she would borrow that book the day before and studied the book in advance? in theory?
On the third day, when he was repairing the girl's toilet seat, he found that if the girl stepped on the toilet, he would open the cabinet at the top of the bathroom as if he was standing on the ground. When he opened the cabinet curiously, he saw the flute.
On the fourth day, the girl bumped into them at the riverside without having an appointment with Chen Linong. Before that, he had been looking for Chen Linong for several hours, and in the end he was still in an unknown message. I found it under the reminder of someone's message.
All of this proves that the ones who got the most detailed script were not the teenagers, not Justin who got the divine card of the prophet, or even him, the wolf, but the sheep who appeared as the weakest existence, the girl Li Yunjing.
So from the beginning to the end, it was not him who was a wolf who was performing with Li Yunjing who was a sheep and the other four teenagers who were humans, but everyone else was following the script to accompany him, the wolf, to perform.
"There's nothing I can do about it. Who told me that I'm the kind of silly, sweet person with big breasts and no brains—" Li Yunjing leaned against the window and laughed at herself, but her expression was a little lonely.
"But since it's a game, making yourself happy is the first priority, isn't it?"
Pu Yuzhen tilted his head and asked back.
To play games is to enjoy the process rather than blindly pursue the result, he once said so to the girl.
Li Yunjing was startled, and the smile on her face could not be maintained again, and her big round eyes seemed to be condensed again, but she laughed first before that: "Uncle, what are you talking about, the purpose of playing games is to win .This time I won."
"Alright, you won." Pu Yuzhen could only helplessly agree.
He turned to go back—he was a little hungry after so long a delay.
"Hey, uncle—"
However, Li Yunjing stopped him.
"Only the last two sentences," the girl's expression couldn't be seen clearly in the dark of the corridor, "Only the last two sentences are the truth."
Pu Yuzhen froze for a moment, then showed a gentle smile.
"Thank you."
He said.
Pu Yuzhen opened the door and returned to the hustle and bustle of the dinner party, while Li Yunjing stayed in the quiet place, silently watching the door close in front of her eyes.
The author has something to say:
Tomorrow will return to the official plot~ The wolf boy episode is over, woohoo——
Seeing Xiao Xiao say that the program team has bad ideas, it is true hahaha, is this program team very scheming?Do you have a sense of reversal?
If I told everyone that Chengcheng’s previous ranking, the news of Mr. Park’s sudden deafness was suppressed, and even the follow-up of Lehua’s group will be reversed, would everyone be shocked? 233
It's impossible for mnet to be such a simple and brainless ordinary company!
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Sheep cannibalism is a stalk of the enclosure movement.
"Your sheep are so tame and satisfied with eating a little, but now it is said that they have become very greedy and arrogant, and even want to eat people..." (Thomas More, "Utopia")
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For the powerless guessing party who is at a loss again:
Mr. Park was angry because he thought the girl knew nothing and was a victim of the game, but she came to this party and knew Song Hana very well, which proved that she was not a simple victim. I saw it but didn't think about the details because of stupid sympathy, and instantly understood that the girl was the one who got a more complete script than them. The five of them were being led by the nose by the girl, and Justin also discovered this, so I just reminded Mr. Park, so Mr. Park bombarded the girl with the piano and flute to confirm whether his speculation was correct.
And what the girl said "Only the last two sentences are the truth" does not correspond to "Playing games is to win"
I saw some relatives say that they are not very good at reasoning and solving puzzles. First, I feel that I am not too obvious in foreshadowing. Second, I think this is not a text that wants to burn everyone's brains. Just follow along easily, so I will explain the foreshadowing clearly at the end in the future, so that everyone can understand what happened instead of guessing riddles through dialogue. After all, reading novels is for fun, not for brainstorming.
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To explain a bit, in fact, the relationship between Song Hana and Li Yunjing has been hinted a long time ago, but it has nothing to do with the plot, so I explain it here.
The first is that Song Hana is a heroine in Overwatch, and Li Yunjing said Song Hana’s lines in the game; and the erhu egg Hanbok worn by Li Yunjing is also Song Hana’s old one in the previous game Positive New Year skin.
The second is that Song Hana can speak Chinese and looks like an overseas student, but in fact it is because she returned to China with her mother when she was young; and Li Yunjing said that her mother made glutinous rice balls for herself when she was very young. There are indeed instant glutinous rice balls in Korea, but There is no tradition of eating glutinous rice balls, so her mother made it for her before her parents divorced, and the stewed Gangwon-do beef is made by her current mother, so when she sees glutinous rice balls, she is just excited, but when she eats beef stew, she feels homesick.
So Lee Yun-jung and his family got into trouble because they formed a new family, and now Song Hana has been to her father's house because of work, if Mr. Park went upstairs with her that day, he would have had a chance to find out, it should be considered that Lee Yun-jung wanted to show him Yes, but he didn't. At that time, she knew that she had no hope of being with Mr. Park.
Then, these two sisters will play an important role in revealing the truth, so let’s mention them for the time being, because I feel that it’s too careless to single out a chapter about the original characters, so let’s put it here
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Please take a leave of absence tomorrow, really, there may not be any more updates, maybe it will be very late to get home, and it will be after ten o'clock in the evening, everyone, don't wait, take a break early and watch it the next day
Criticize Xiao by name, this producer is really over the top! I even said that I should go to bed early, but I stayed up so late, criticize her!
Chapter 55 Sorry for being late + Suggestion Box (it’s just the author’s nagging, lock it when the text is updated next time)
Probably a little explanation + an apology to everyone, and I hope to discuss with you a little bit about the future direction.
[-]. About sorry
Originally, this episode was just written casually, but I didn’t expect to write high and it seemed to last for too long. My obsessive-compulsive disorder had to squeeze two days into one chapter as soon as possible. It was supposed to be over in seven days and ended in five days, but it was still delayed. It’s a day and—just like the ending of if, it’s so brightly placed on it to take up space. It’s also something that I regret immediately after writing it. Let’s force it, because Jinjiang Xiuwen is not convenient. I’ll finish it. When I sort out the txt for you later, I will reset it in the correct order.
It’s still my first time writing an article and I don’t have much experience. If there is a next book, I should choose to fill in the extra parts slowly after the end instead of stuffing them in the middle of the main text.
[-]. About Fanwai
Maybe the relatives who followed the article earlier did not find out that I changed the description. The newly changed description said that if you don’t read the extras, it will not affect the main text, because
I am afraid that the rhythm will be too tense to throw out this thing for adjustment (well, although the current attempts have failed a bit), so if you don’t make up the previous episodes, you can skip them all.
[-]. About the ending
For example, the truth about the protagonist’s amnesia will not be revealed in any CP line or the ending main line, because—a problem with memory does not mean that he will be bored. For the protagonist, grasping the present and creating the future is better than figuring out his life. Where you come from and where you die is much more important.
Another example is whether the protagonist can make his debut... Actually, I don’t think everyone thinks this is an important matter, so maybe I drank an extra bottle of Coke one night and he was eliminated in the promotion competition. There are too many boys, so many people are better than him if he is qualified to advance, even if he does not advance, it is a matter of course
[-]. About original supporting roles
Let’s talk about Song Hana first, maybe many people don’t have an impression of her.In the main storyline, she is equivalent to a noun that was previously replaced by "staff". After brushing her face in the early stage and later, she has basically been doing interviews after being promoted.
I originally brought her out because I prefer to play Overwatch (exposed). On the other hand, it is a bit troublesome to write about the staff every time, and the interaction is very embarrassing.
Her role in the main plot is limited to this, and you don’t need to remember her... and her sister Li Yunjing and the little boy who appeared in the last episode will not appear in the main text, because it has nothing to do with the main plot. I just want to be good to everyone 233 Don't watch the extra preparations
If there is another role, it should be the real ending without CP after the end of the other people's CP. Only in this episode, that is, those who are interested in seeing the last can see the whole picture of the event, while other episodes The male protagonist will go on happily with the children with his shortcomings.
The true ending I want to create is: the meeting or parting of the teenagers is inevitable, just like Madoka meets Homura, Brooch meets the assistant, and April [-]st meets Yuko.
[-]. About writing
1551 This is the most heart-wrenching point. I also feel from the two days and the message just now that my current writing style is not enough to control my own plot, and the characters often cannot complete a sentence, so it leads to a lot of confusion. It's a feeling that people can't understand without beginning and end. This is indeed my biggest problem (one of them).
I saw a sentence before, but the writer I forgot, it probably said "If a gun appears in your article, someone will definitely use it later."
So I may pay too much attention to the "usefulness" of the plot in normal times, and save all the mess for later use. I feel very bad about this now, because it will cause the previous plot to be too compact, and the foreshadowing behind it will reveal inexplicable OTZ
I always think that the foreshadowing that can attract people to read is called foreshadowing. When it is revealed, everyone's reaction of "oh, so this thing is still useful" is OK, but if you don't understand it, it must be the storyteller's problem. So when you can't understand the plot, don't think "ah, I'm so stupid, why can't I understand".Remember that must be my problem, just bring it up with me, and I will find a way to solve it and rebuild it.
I also don’t want to make my essays look like they’re profound and lofty, they’re all fake, just like my third uncle said, novels can only be divided into bad-looking novels and super-good-looking novels, and now I classify my writing as bad-looking In that category, I hope to write super-good-looking novels in the future, and super-good-looking novels must at least be understandable...
Before Bai Juyi wrote poems, he would show the finished poems to the old rural women. If the old woman said it was good, it was good. If the old woman said something about it, he would change it. Can show off.
So everyone giving me advice is to help me, don’t praise me or praise me without thinking, for me, it hurts me and makes me inflated, and in the end the writing is bad and it still affects everyone’s reading experience. .
[-]. About opinions
Everyone’s comments to me are really important, and I only found out from the comments that I was too procrastinated and unclear, so I still have a bad face and hope you can leave me a lot of comments. If you have any comments, you don’t have to be euphemistic and direct. Proposed.
Now that these problems have been discovered, they will definitely be changed later. The first change is that there will be no messy episodes before the end. Now only the third performance (35 into 22) and the final performance (22 into 11) are left. 32), so the progress should be faster. If the rhythm is relaxed, I don’t know how you feel about chapters 35-[-]. If it is possible, the rhythm will probably be adjusted like this to introduce a large amount of interaction with the teenagers during the tense time.
You can talk to me first about what episodes you want to watch after the end, and I will roughly conceive in my head, trying to stop this kind of messy and incoherent problem from happening again.
[-]. About CP
In the final CP, Wang Zha’s four sons + Nongnong are tentatively decided for Fanwai. If there is no NP ending, they will all be single-player 1V1, and everyone else in that CP line will become good brothers.
I feel that these children interacted more in the early stage, so it would be a little more natural?If you have any other comments or suggestions, please let me know~
[-]. Time limit
The discussion time will be closed until the next update. Before that, I will look at everyone’s opinions and think about the general direction in the future. I have also worked hard on everyone. You have really helped me a lot. 233 Now I feel better than when I first started It's much better, and I won't sit there for half an hour without being able to hold back a word.
This is roughly what I mean, because I have to get up early tomorrow, so the writing is a bit confusing, and the words are also very vulgar, just let everyone understand what I mean.
If you can accept it, please take care of it for now~
(Of course, if this is unacceptable, I can't help it. 233 After all, I have been forced to lose my collection. I thought that everyone would abandon the pit, so I didn't write it. It happened that I was a little busy three times, but I saw that There are little angels chasing after me, I really feel that abandoning the pit is too irresponsible OTZ)
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PS: Because JJ has a lot of harmonious words and my post preview function is not available, so I can only modify the harmonious words after sending them out. If you subscribe, you may get multiple updates in a similar period of time?If you find that I have updated more than once in an hour, I must be correcting a typo or something. Don’t worry about it. My speed is not to mention an hour. It’s good to update once in three hours...
Sorry if I bothered you
And you really have to remember to go to bed early, otherwise you will be bald
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