The Rise of the Shen Family

Specially spit about the characters and the poisonous points of the plot, as well as the shortcomings of the whole book.

It is convenient for me to correct and study in the next book.

. . . . . . .

In addition, the second part will depict a wider world of immortality, so it is indispensable to have a variety of powerful figures, as well as a variety of heaven and earth treasures.

So start collecting now.

My current framework for the overall great power in the outer world of immortal cultivation is:

Il Palace, Jinhaedo Palace

Two sects, Tiansha Demon Sect, lacking

Three Gates, Crazy Thunder Gate, Missing, Missing

Four pavilions, all missing

Grain, all lack

Six people, the Zhang family, the Lei family...

. . . . .

Finally, when I have time, I will write another side story, mainly about the patriarch. It mainly tells the story of the time when the patriarch cultivated Qi to build the foundation, obtained the spiritual talisman, and became the patriarch and led the family to turn the corner.

Of course, you can also consider who else you need.