The Savior of the Villainess in a Romance Novel

Complete Review

First of all, I would like to thank everyone who read my novel.

The first start of this work was the first month since I wrote the article, so there were a lot of things that were somewhat lacking.

Whether it’s a setting error, probability, the character of the main character, sentences, etc. There were countless deficiencies.

Nevertheless, thank you very much to all of you who read my article. Thanks to all of you, I was able to run to the finish, and I think I have grown a lot too.

There are many stories I want to tell.

first.

It is about the direction of the work.

There is no feeling that the main character has become a royal road.

It’s also a big thing that I didn’t use the romance tag well.

It would have been nice if the fight between courtship had been highlighted a little more. How would it have been if the harem members were fighting more against each other? I keep thinking about it.

second.

It’s the fact that I couldn’t save the character.

The story of Mikaris, such as how the main character fell for Mikaris, has not been solved at all. The same goes for Ronia.

Each character had their own personalities.

Mikaris is a highly dependent and obsessive heroine.

Ronia is a heroine who is benevolent and has shady thoughts at the same time.

Line is a heroine with a strong possessiveness and strong personality.

Eileen is a naive and ignorant girl.

I had this kind of personality… but after using it, I couldn’t save it properly and other heroines were treated as air. Several problems have arisen.

It’s all because of lack of experience and skills.. ㅠㅠ

Third, it is related to the ending.

Actually, the end of this work was going to be a loop.

Seri Verdia turns back time and the protagonist loses all his memories and betrays his mistress, Mikaris.

In the process, the protagonist gradually realizes. The path he has walked and the memories with Mikaris.

At the same time, it was going to be that kind of ending where the main character gets everything right… but this was a lot looser than I thought and I thought the main character would look incompetent..

It is also because of the lack of writing skills.

I ground it over and over again for the scenes I wanted to show. But in the end, I chose the most acceptable ending in my opinion.

Fourth, it is platform related.

Many of the web novels I’ve seen are old works or works on other platforms. I haven’t seen Nobelia’s works, or it’s no different.

It seems that there are a lot of things that have lost your expectations because of this. How can a writer succeed when he doesn’t know his readers well?

Therefore, these days, I am analyzing Nobelia works. I want to make a work that you guys will like.

And since there is nothing to do after the completion, I will upload an after story.

There is a 19-year-old at stake, but the detailed 19-year-old scene does not appear.

An indirect act was described, which forced me to take 19.

Lastly, I will greet you all and come back with a better image.

Thank you so much.