The Sun King's Evidence

Last night I watched "The Dragon King's Job!" "Leading to no writing, Kuzuryuu Bayi is awesome! Empty money and high competition!

Is this a hot-blooded boy show? Love it, love it.

I haven’t written it at all, so I’m taking a day off to sort out my next thoughts. As we all know, this book is coming to an end. It is expected to be completed by the end of this year. There are still some things to write, not so soon, but it’s getting there. At the end of the day.

Let’s continue to share some abandoned settings with you here.

1. Regarding Fulgen’s battle to defend Kostantiniya, I originally wanted to write with reference to the Battle of Sarhu, that is, no matter how many enemies came, I would only go all the way and defeat three armies in succession, but later I considered Let Mortarion join. The Lord of the Death Guard is best at judging the war situation and choosing the right time to attack, but his weakness lies in being overly cautious and hesitant to do big things. Seeing small gains and forgetting the original purpose, so it was finally written. so.

Second, the journey to Ulthuan originally had some additional plots, such as the war between the dark elves and the high elves in the north, and also included further battles between Lane and Fulgrim and the undead pirates and the Witch King Malekith, but obviously this One of the reasons for this plot is that the protagonist is not sufficiently involved, and the other is that the readers are not very interested, so in the end it ends a bit hastily.

Third, in the same way, Tomb Kings should also have a whole plot of their own. I originally thought about it a lot. As we all know, Tomb Kings are a very unpopular side camp. If I were to write about it, many people would probably guess it if I didn’t write about the background in detail. It was confusing to read, and the detailed background description was also suspected of being filled with water, so in the end, the plot of the Tomb King was reduced as much as possible, and only a small part of Khalida was written.

Fourth, the chapters that were originally planned to be written after visiting Dulong City, Ryan took the opportunity to continue north to inspect the Chaos Wasteland with Lilith and Morgiana were also deleted. It was unnecessary and they were all described.

Fifth, this book has two regrets. The first regret is that the relationship between several characters in the opening is not handled well. The first one is the wandering knight Ike. In fact, Ryan was a knight of the kingdom at the time, and Ike was essentially the same person. "People within the system", it is inconvenient for him to break up with Ike. On the one hand, he considers his reputation. On the other hand, this kind of wandering knight is from a noble family, which also means problems with connections and getting along with his colleagues in the future. However, I did not have any problems with the readers. Make it clear, so it seems that Ryan is afraid of getting into trouble and is giving in.

six. The second regret is the issue of character design. As we all know, the character Teresa received a lot of criticism at the beginning. I have always wanted to write a character design of a tsundere warlock lady, but on the one hand, I lacked experience, and on the other hand, I lacked writing skills. The problem is that I only wrote about arrogance but not about Jiao. Moreover, this kind of character is no longer likable, and readers can’t see that the three-dimensional view of the real person’s appearance is not enough to make up the five-dimensional view, so I didn’t write it well. To be honest here , sisters like Yennefer and Bayonetta, if they couldn’t see their faces, I’m afraid most readers wouldn’t have a good impression of them.

In the same way, Orika is the one with the most distinctive personality, the strongest sense of presence, and the most likable character.

In the same way, as the first heroine (laughs), Sulia's character has never been established, resulting in a weak sense of existence. I used a lot of writing power to barely establish her status as the main palace. What a failure! The reason is related to item 7 below.

7. Originally, my writing plan included a plot in which the protagonist, after arriving in Baator, would have a solo adventure as the Holy Grail and solve various problems for the common people. This plot was the best way to establish Sulia’s character. Unfortunately, due to pacing issues As a matter of reader preference, I ended up becoming a baron immediately, and it was difficult to write about this after entering lord mode.

8. As mentioned before, only four heroines were originally designed, namely the knight Ji Sulia, the imperial baroness Emilia, the sorceress Theresa and the dark elf maid Orika, but the latter one was not planned. Zhou, the second is the greedy nature of men, and the third is the trend of readers, which led to the addition of several female protagonists. As a result, the plan was broken, the pen and ink were not enough, and many problems occurred. For example, Theresa's role was eliminated by Vero Nica was taken away and divided by Aurora. For example, Surya squeezed Sylvia's scene, for example, Morgiana squeezed Sulia's scene, and the Fairy of the Lake squeezed Morgiana. The roles of the characters are squeezed out one by one, and at the same time, the roles of other characters are squeezed out.

9. Due to the outline problem and the writing being too long, some of the heroine story lines that I had compiled in advance have been written. Therefore, I once thought about adding one or two heroines in the later stage. At that time, I also made a very detailed character design. The prototype is a famous anime heroine from KyoAni, and another prototype is a real-life character who became famous because of a video. However, considering that the book is about to be completed, it will be abandoned in the end, but you don’t have to worry, next time You will see them appear in this book.

10. Regarding the plot of 40K, I deliberately weakened it in the later period. The first one is that I was scolded and criticized too much, which made me extremely irritable. The second one is that the overly ambitious plot of 40K greatly affects the main plot. Furthermore, the complex character of the original body It is very difficult to write the characteristics of each person. I often have to read the official novels over and over again and read the comments of various bosses to figure out and study the characters. This makes writing very difficult and time-consuming. For example, Angron, It's easier to write about primarchs with distinctive personalities like Guilliman and Russ, but when it comes to complex and profound primarchs like Jonson, Fulgrim, and Sanguinius, it's very difficult to read them thoroughly, and it's very tiring to write.

In the same way, writing 40k stuff is also very tiring. If it is too restorative, you will be scolded for copying it. If it is too reductive, it goes without saying what the ending is.

What’s even more funny is that some people will use their own third, fourth or fifth design to criticize my second design after reading other big guys’ interpretations of it.

Brother, they are no longer the same thing at all, they are no longer related.

But the content of 40K will also be written in the future. After all, this is the chessboard where the emperor and the evil god are wrestling, and it is already entering the endgame.

Eleven, I originally planned to write a short story of about ten chapters. It was the plot of the war god young Devon Hill and his old uncle Angron going on an adventure to the ancient ruins of Obiun. The uncle and nephew worked together to solve the story. Obien's ancient secret, but for the same reason, this plot was too long and affected the rhythm of the writing, so it was eventually canceled from the plan.

12. The fatigue in the middle and late stages has tortured me very much. If I didn’t have to finish writing ET, I really want the ending. Some of the plots in the back have always been a little flawed. Maybe many people didn’t notice it. , but I still want to apologize.

Thirteen, all bookings come with benefits, everyone will understand.

14. The next book is already being conceived. It will generally still have this typical Western fantasy style and background, but I will add a little bit of Eastern elements. This time I must have a good character design and outline, and I will not make the same mistakes as before. So I will take a (longer) break after writing.

Finally, the emperor is here to say thank you, and please all readers to accompany this book on its final journey.

The emperor is sticking his butt out to you!

Orz.