Tokyo, everyone is drawing comics, who still wants to fall in love?

Chapter 156 The newcomer’s story will collapse!

"If you have time, please come to my humble home more often. Ah, I'm so rude. This house is very nice and can't be considered my humble home." When Oda Shingo said goodbye to the landlady, he wanted to be polite, but he found that it originally belonged to the landlady.

"Oh? Do you want me to come more often?" Mrs. Yukino stood at the door of the bedroom with a playful smile on her lips.

She deliberately glanced at Fujido Kacheng and Namikaze Yuzuru who were almost escorted on the left and right.

"Hehe, don't be so rude, you two. Or, I'll get up by myself." Oda Shingo was about to get out of bed.

"You want to give away your flowered underwear?" Fujido Kacheng found an excuse to stop him.

Let Oda Shingo and the landlady stay together, so that they don't have to flirt with each other.

"Oh? Even Oda-kun knows what you wear. I'm afraid someone won't like me coming a few more times." Mrs. Yukino smiled softly with her lips covered.

Oda Shingo said angrily: "Don't bother with the two children."

Before Fujido Kacheng protested, Namikaze Yukaku said first: "She is not young anymore."

Oda Shingo rolled his eyes, I knew it was this sentence.

The two women sent Mrs. Yukino away, and Oda Shingo confirmed that Halo 2 was indeed invalid.

Oda Shingo tried to ask the system for the specific reason. I don't know if it was a system bug that counted the landlord's wife as unmarried, or some other reason?

But the system kept silent and continued to play dead.

So when the two women came back, Oda Shingo explained to them: "And let Mrs. Yukino come more often for work."

"This reason is really not serious, can I give you another chance?" Fujido Kacheng looked contemptuous. Namikaze Yukaku looked similar.

"With her around, I feel that my work efficiency is much higher." Oda Shingo couldn't explain the existence of the system halo.

The two women didn't answer this time, but judging from their squinting reactions, they looked even more contemptuous.

Forget it, as long as the halo effect exists, it's fine. Oda Shingo invited the landlord's wife to come more often on his mobile phone.

"If you're free." The landlord's wife replied.

Oda Shingo couldn't figure out her attitude, but it was good to have hope.

The next day, Mrs. Yukino really came.

After reading the original draft, she sat there and started to write comments on the copy.

After Oda Shingo read it carefully, he was shocked.

Many of the problems pointed out were very accurate, and some were even places that Oda Shingo himself didn't find.

And after communicating, I felt that Mrs. Yukino was very capable. After correcting some dialogues according to her, the expression effect was indeed better.

"It's just that I've seen too much from reading comics since I was a child." Mrs. Yukino smiled modestly.

But Oda Shingo could notice that she glanced at the two women with pride.

The two women caught this micro-expression very accurately, and immediately worked harder to strive to get Oda Shingo's praise.

I don’t know whether it’s the efficiency-enhancing effect of Halo 2, or the sense of protecting the nest, cough, and competition, but the work efficiency of Oda Shingo’s studio has been greatly improved.

The speed and quality of the manuscripts are even better than before Oda Shingo got sick!

When Oda Shingo recovered from a severe cold a week later, the manuscript of "Parasyte" had been accumulated to the 13th episode!

"Oda-kun, your plot of "Parasyte" is really great." Mrs. Yukino praised sincerely.

She felt that it was more attractive than "One Punch Man" because she had no idea what would happen next.

It’s not an exaggeration to say that it’s unrestrained, and the more you think about the meaning, the more you feel it.

"It needs to be revised significantly, and every climax node needs to be repeatedly scrutinized." Oda Shingo kept screening problems very seriously.

If it was just copying the original work, it would have been confirmed to be successful. But Oda Shingo is not satisfied with this, he wants to get the first place in the popularity list next month!

After "Parasyte" was published in the main magazine of "Jump", the popularity results of the second issue came out.

The number of online votes has decreased significantly, to just over 3,000 votes.

Because the physical votes have increased, from more than 2,000 votes to nearly 3,000 votes.

In the popularity rankings, he ranks third. Although he dropped one place, it is a small fluctuation, and his position is still very stable.

Xinchang surrounded the LINE group and made an analysis at the first time.

"No way, are the readers of this magazine beginning to accept him?" Kosuke Watsuki was a little worried.

Gotada Takeshi is very confident in controlling the setting of female characters: "Impossible, absolutely impossible! Just based on that Tamiya Yoshiko, comic fans can't support him!"

"The attitude of comic fans towards Tamiya Yoshiko is indeed polarized. However, the controversy is too great, which is equivalent to being a GG, and he has taken advantage of it." Your point of view is too old-fashioned! Kosuke Watsuki cursed in his heart.

What era is it, you are still insisting on traditional female characters? Don't be funny, comic fans are tired of it!

"This guy is doing it on purpose! Deliberately let the readers quarrel!" Minister Hayato Hyakki was very uncomfortable.

Gotada Takeshi made an angry expression: "Damn it, how come this guy always gets the upper hand!"

He has made countless villains in his studio. Not to mention the commonplace things like needle stabbing and knife slashing, he has also used wind and rain, hanging and beheading, and even put some villains in the refrigerator.

Maybe Gotada Takeshi's specialty in cursing is better than comics...

Vice President Koyama, who had been silent for a long time, spoke out and made the final decision: "As long as his next plot collapses, everything will be meaningless! As a newcomer, he is serializing two comics at the same time, and the most likely problem is that the plot collapses!"

"President Koyama has a good idea!"

"President Koyama hits the nail on the head!"

"As President Koyama sees it!"

The three subordinates flattered him in succession.

They were eagerly looking forward to the next episode, and the plot collapsed!

The new issue of "Jump" was soon released.

In order to ensure the interests of this magazine, the online serialization of "Parasyte" is half a beat slower than the physical version of this magazine.

So, another comic fan waited at the door of the bookstore.

"Is "Jump" here?"

"Here, here!"

This time, not only four comic fans, but six sat at the door of the bookstore.

The bookstore owner did not drive them away.

This is a living sign. As long as the door of the bookstore is not blocked, as long as someone can leave, it is a good thing.

"Why are you so anxious this time?" The owner asked curiously.

"Parasyte has entered the school! It wants to kill Shinichi in front of ordinary people!"

"Oh? That's right, Mr. A wants to kill Xiaoyou." The owner was looking forward to it, but he was too busy managing the bookstore every day and forgot about it.

Now he remembered the plot again and wanted to read it even more.

He opened "Jump" and thought that since he was busy taking care of the store, he would just take a few glances and know the result.

But once he opened it, he had no choice as to how long to read it.

The plot of the comic begins with Tamiya Yoshiko.

"Stupid thing!" Tamiya Yoshiko felt the murderous aura of Mr. A coming to the campus and suddenly said something in class.

She left the classroom directly, leaving the students to study.

On the other side, Mr. A was stopped by a male teacher on campus.

Unlucky male teacher.

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