My chastity can't be taken lightly by a dog

Kirino, who also heard the conversation between Eirari and Ayase, quietly said to Ayase: "I feel that Eiriri-senpai is very professional...what about Coraqi."

"Oh, it turns out that in Ayase's animation, there are also magical girls who represent hope and witches who represent despair?" Just as the scene where Mami and Cupid were explaining together, Saori let out a strange cry and hammered He touched his palm, and made a thoughtful look, "It's unexpectedly a kingly setting."

"Is it possible to become a magical girl just by making a wish? This is a bit unexpected. I thought that turning into a magical girl is to fight with witches and maintain justice. Is it because of a wish?" While watching the animation, Saori Discuss the plot with Kirino.

"Madoka's mother is so scary, that expression..." Kirino didn't care too much about the settings Saori said, but found these daily scenes very interesting, and at the same time said full of longing: "If there is a It would be great if Chubby came to sign a contract with me, I will definitely think of a wish right away..."

"Hehe" Just as Kirino fell into narcissism, a sneer came from the position of the black cat.

"Hello? What are you sneering at? Really, you don't have any longing for good things, no wonder you only look at that "masschera" in black. " Tong Nai glared at the black cat, and when he was about to continue talking, he was interrupted by Saori.

"Well, Xiao Tongtong, look quickly, the witch has been found! It seems that a war is about to start!"

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Just now when I was a little clearer myself, I re-read the last chapter, and then I felt explosive.

Thank you readers for not spraying me in the last chapter, I feel that the last chapter is so embarrassing QAQ

I was so moved that I didn't even know how to express my gratitude.

My body is so light, and this is the first time I write a book with such a cheerful mood. There is nothing to be afraid of, because I am no longer alone! [Here is a close-up of two shots, namely me and the reader, still smiling happily]

I know all the readers are still supporting me!So I will take one breath and finish writing this book!

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Finally, the bgm credens justitiam of my sister is really good. When I wrote today’s update, the single looped for three or four hours...

Chapter 230 That's So Delightful

Accompanied by brightly colored freeze-frame images, the warm and lovely ending theme song of "Magic Girl Madoka Magica" appeared at the end of the second episode.

"Eh? Is this the end?" Although Kirino kept complaining about the witch's abstract painting style during the viewing process, but after the second episode really ended, Kirino had a feeling that he couldn't finish it, "Ba Mami The battle scene after the transformation is so cool!"

Compared with the original "magic girl animation" in this world, both the decent and the villain are very beautiful. Although the abstract style of the villain Nakuraqi in Magical Girl Madoka cannot be said to be attractive to everyone. The eyes are bright, at least it can be regarded as ingenious, and it is unique in a sea of ​​cute or beautiful styles.

"By the way, were the parts of Faust written in German on the wall before?" After Kirino finished speaking, Saori also asked Ayase enthusiastically.

"Hmm... so you can even speak German?" Ayase nodded to confirm, but also admired Saori's knowledge.

"Haha, I just have some talent for languages."

"German? Then when the witch appeared, was the name written below it also in German? I thought it was English in cursive." After Saori talked about playing, Kirino also curiously joined the discussion.

"Well, it's a kind of text we created originally, and it's indeed a variation that we got from referring to German." Ayase nodded after pondering for a while, and continued to explain: "That witch...in short, she's called the Rose Witch. Bar."

"The painting that flashed through the gate before fighting the witch was "Napoleon Crossing the St. Bernard Pass in the Alps"?" Although she said the interrogative sentence, Ying Lili said it in an affirmative tone.

"Yes... As expected of Ying Lili, she has such beautiful eyes."

"However, the second episode is much more interesting than the first episode, especially the scene where Asami fights with a flintlock gun. It's great." Probably because "Madoka" is Ayase's work, so Kirino He didn't hesitate to praise himself, "And the setting of witches and magical girls is slowly unfolding."

"Ah, yes, and Chubby, it's really cute, that's..." At the end of speaking, Kirino frowned slightly, "Why do I always feel that the accompaniment in animation is a bit strange?"

"Huh? Strange?" After hearing Kirino's words, Ayase asked puzzledly, "What's so strange?"

"Well, apart from the opening theme and ending theme, I feel that the interludes are very strange. It seems that they are subtly inconsistent with the style of this animation?" Kirino organized his words carefully, for fear of shocking Ayase.

"...Haha, maybe you're not used to listening to it?" Ayase smiled dryly and perfunctory Kirino, "I can't tell you that the background music perfectly fits the plot behind it..."

While perfunctory Kirino, Ayase noticed that the black cat was staring at him with a half-smile, and turned a blind eye to Ayase's begging eyes for help.

After finally sending Kirino away, while Kirino was playing galgames in the game room, Ayase ran out of the house under the pretext of going to the bathroom, and winked at the black cat before leaving.

"Ah, why are you desperate! I almost didn't know how to explain it to Kirino." Facing the black cat that came out behind her, Ayase rolled her eyes, "I just gave my autograph to You, you will turn your face and deny it."

Just two days ago, when Ayase went to Dengeki Bunko to find editor Tomita, she got the signature of the original author of maschera from him—that is, she had asked the animation production team for a signature before.

"One matter is another matter. The magical girl Madoka you made by yourself is naturally handled by you." The corner of the black cat's mouth twitched, with a look of wanting to snicker but forcibly holding back, with a straight face Said: "That guy seems to like Chubby very much. I'm curious about her reaction after the sixth episode airs."

Although the black cat still maintained its usual expressionless face and tone without ups and downs when she said this, but for some reason, Ayase could hear the hidden meaning of gloating in her words.

"Hey, don't be so gloating, don't forget that you also have a share in this animation." Ayase stared at the black cat, thinking of Kirino's reaction after watching the sixth chapter, she couldn't help but shudder.

"However, in fact, you don't need to think about such a long-term thing. It's time for the third episode next week, right?" The black cat blinked meaningfully, and waved its hair, "In a sense, this animation of yours really It's "continuous climax"..."

"Chapter three..." Ayase swallowed with difficulty, and she couldn't imagine what would happen next—you must know that from the third episode onwards, the entire plot of the magical girl Madoka began to reverse continuously. The inherent setting of the theme of "Magic Girl" has been overturned and rewritten, and it has slipped step by step from the healing of the first episode to the abyss of "depressing people's hearts".

"Hmm, chapter three." The black cat looked at the embarrassed Ayase with playful eyes, chuckled twice, raised the long hair next to his ears, and comforted him with malicious intentions: "Don't worry, at least the third chapter It’s nothing to say, although there are relatively few animations of magical girls dying, but it’s not that there are no…”

"I can't let it go when you say that..." Ayase said halfway, when she suddenly heard footsteps coming from behind, and then saw Saori's iconic green plaid shirt and thick-soled glasses, standing next to her Follow Yinglili, who is wearing a green sportswear.

"Ah, why are you two here?" Seeing that Ayase and the black cat were looking at her, Saori raised her hand to say hello.

"It's nothing, just chatting." Ayase hurriedly said before the black cat, and changed the subject by the way, "Well, Saori, what are you going to do?"

"Oh, I'm about to go to the study." Saori explained to Ayase without doubting him, "Just now I suddenly checked the original text of the "Faust" in the animation. There's Faust."

Seeing that Ayase seemed to want to speak, Saori quickly waved her hand to stop her and said, "Hey, please don't give spoilers to Ayase. After all, thinking about Easter eggs in animation is also a pleasure."

"...Actually, I want to stop you, hey..."

"By the way, there is a computer in the study, would you like to come over with me, Ayase? It's a good time to read the reviews on the Internet." Eirari, who was next to Saori, kindly said to Ayase.

"Eh?" Ayase blinked, nodded after thinking for a while - after all, she also really wanted to know the evaluation of the second episode on the Internet.

"Then I'll go back to the game room first." After the black cat finished speaking in a cold tone, he turned and walked towards the game room.

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Hey, I want to save manuscripts, and I want to get up once during the Spring Festival. I can’t always be called short and weak by you! 【fall

Chapter 230 Comments on Madoka Chapter [-]

Himekoji-kun is an ordinary anime fan who likes to stay at home and watch anime when he has nothing to do. In other words, Himekoji-kun is an otaku.

He hadn't paid attention to the animation "Magic Girl Madoka Magica" before, and he didn't know much about the popular junior high school girl writer "Shiba Miyuki", and he hadn't read the light novel "Accelerated World".

If you say why Ji Xiaolu saw "Magic Girl Madoka Magica", it is simply because the drama he was chasing before was over in the evening, so he felt comfortable after eating in the evening. Nested on the sofa and changed to this channel habitually, just saw "Magic Girl Madoka".

——It can also be seen from this that Dengeki Bunko put the broadcast time of "Madoka" in the evening, and suddenly many audiences were not covered by the previous promotion.

Seeing Madoka's animation for the first time, Ji Xiaolu almost spit out the Coke in his mouth, that bun-like face really subverted his aesthetic concept.

He couldn't believe that this kind of character design would appear in an animation like "Magic Girl" that sells cuteness or beauty. It is for this reason that Ji Xiaolu became interested in this animation and moved away. The hand on the remote control, intending to see what kind of stories this kind of magical girl with unusual style of painting will tell.

At the beginning of the first episode, Himekoji's impression of "Madoka" was a healing animation with a strange style of painting, but when he saw the end of the first episode, Himekoji added another line to his previous evaluation, "incorporating abstraction" The strange magical girl animation of "Drawing".

It was also the abstract style of painting at the end of the first episode that made Himekoji-kun a little interested. After searching for this animation on the Internet, Himekolu found out that the original animation of "Madoka" was "Shiba Miyuki", a popular junior high school writer who is in the limelight now, although he has never read the novels written by Ayase, it does not prevent Himekoji-kun, who is a veteran otaku, from hearing about Ayase's pen name.

It is precisely because of this that Jixiaolu-kun did not give up on this animation because of all the bad reviews on the Internet - at least watch one more episode, after all, someone who can become a popular light novel writer at the age of junior high school will not be fooled. Come up with an unspectacular script.

With this in mind, Ji Xiaolu finally waited until the time for Madoka's second episode to be released, and it was precisely because of Madoka's second episode that Ji Xiaolu felt a little thankful that he hadn't given up on this animation prematurely.

Because of some research on German, after seeing the German signs and the excerpts of Faust in the second episode, Himekoji vaguely felt that there was something wrong with this animation-although the battle scene between Ba Mami and the witch It's very smooth and cool, but Ji Xiaolu didn't focus on that. Instead, he focused on the "seed of lament" explained by Ba Mami at the end, and then thought of the beginning saying that "witch" is despair After the incarnation of the magical girl, and the magical girl represents hope, Ji Xiaolu directly told him that this setting is worth deliberating.

So Ji Xiaolu immediately looked up the original text of Faust on the Internet, and found the excerpts from the animation. After reading it carefully, the metaphorical dissonance became even more serious.

Especially recalling the details of using the witch's remains to purify the core of the magical girl, an amazing idea flashed in Ji Xiaolu's mind.

After hesitating for a while, Ji Xiaolu opened the message board of the website and wrote such a line on the title [Conjecture: Will the ultimate form of the magic girl transform into a witch? 】

……

In the study of Yingli Li's house, Ayase was sitting at the desk, looking intently at the screen of the desktop computer in front of her.

With the end of the second episode, many comments about the second episode began to appear on the message board one after another. Compared with the disappointing negative comments after the first episode, the comments after the second episode Much better.

On the one hand, it is because many people who were attracted by Dengeki Bunko’s excessive publicity, after watching the first episode, left a dissatisfied comment on the website and stopped paying attention to the second episode of "Madoka", so they stayed to watch The second episode is relatively interested, or more tolerant audience.

Another reason is that compared to the mediocre first episode, the second episode has many more eye-catching settings. In addition, Mami fights against the abstract witch, so many people have long been accustomed to the fighting style in the theme of ordinary magical girls. people have a more novel experience.

[Hahaha, this is the first time I know that magical girls actually fight with muskets, this setting is really interesting w]

[Yeah, it's still an old-fashioned flintlock gun, and it can be pulled out from the skirt and chest]

[Ba Mami, a magical girl with a gun hidden under her skirt. 】

There are not a few comments like this about Ba Mami's fighting style. Of course, some comments are complaining about the witch's style of painting.

【Why is a witch like this?At first, I expected those witches to be sexy and charming big sisters]

[Yeah w, I wonder if it's the kind of revealing clothes, even normal women are fine. 】

[That's right, how can you tell that the thing with butterfly wings is a woman? 】

These complaining comments accounted for at least half of the new additions to the message board. Looking at these comments, Ayase felt a little relieved. After all, although she is confident that in this world, the plot reversal of "Magic Girl Madoka" can be the same. It's a masterpiece, but if the front is always full of negative comments, it will make her very troubled.

Of course, it doesn’t mean that there will be no negative comments this time, and there are indeed many people who are saying something, “It’s hope and despair, it really is an old-fashioned magical girl theme” and “The author is really exhausted.” One category, but the number of comments is much less than other content, so it is not so conspicuous.

In addition to these comments, there were naturally many critique parties discussing the German text that appeared in the second episode-after all, the evening is a relatively good time, and there is a considerable number of audience groups. It is not surprising that some of them understand German things.

So the excerpts from "Faust" also appeared in the comments, but most of the comments thought that "Faust", whether it was in German or in German, was only put in to highlight the mysterious image of the witch, It doesn't have any practical meaning—it's like the name of the witch when she appeared is not an existing text at all.

And among these messages, one titled [Conjecture: Will the ultimate form of the magical girl transform into a witch? ] Attracted Ayase's attention.

After clicking on this message, all the replies below are analysis that question this conjecture.

[The person who proposed this idea must have a problem with his brain, right?How could the magical girl representing hope become a witch? 】

[That's right, it's not too bad that a witch will be transformed into a partner of justice by a magical girl. 】

[That's right, magical girls represent love and justice, so isn't it a customary setting to have an enemy that represents negativity?Why would anyone still question it? 】

[Those people above may not have read the analysis carefully. After I read it, I think that although what is said is somewhat reasonable, many places are too far-fetched, and some are even irresponsible speculations at all, and the most important thing is that it is impossible for someone to do so. Make magical girl animation w. 】

"Who wrote this... an insider?"Fortunately, no one seems to believe it, otherwise the turning point of the next chapter will be much less fun..." After reading the analysis of this comment carefully, Ayase found that although the title says "Magic girl will become a witch" , but there are not many substantive arguments, but more groundless guesses, "Well, it seems that he is not an insider, but I can guess this based on the content of the two words, this person is a bit powerful... Well, the ID of the message is Ji Xiaolu? 』

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Hey, one chapter is only 2000 words, a little bit of plot foreshadowing, expressions, movements, psychology, behavior, and the interaction of each character to enhance feelings or other things, the number of words is almost used...

So two thousand words are not enough at all, I am also very desperate.jpg

Chapter 230 Seventh Episode [-] Upcoming

"Well, fortunately, no one believed it. Judging from the content, it's not an insider's spoiler. 』Don’t look at Ayase who has been telling the black cat that she is also very worried that Kirino will see the plot behind Madoka, but in fact, deep down in Ayase’s heart, she hopes that as many people as possible can see Madoka—after all, Becoming a "Soldier of Love" should be the obligation and responsibility of every traveler who aspires to become Wenchao Gong.

Especially now that Madoka's ratings and BD/DVD reservations are not at the level that it should have been after the previous strong publicity. I was sweating -- as the saying goes, concern leads to confusion. You must know that there are many works that were optimistic about all aspects before the screening, and there are many examples of mediocre responses after the broadcast. I did a good job, but I am still worried about the small probability of death by explosion.

Even Ayase herself, after reading the comments of the first episode, was actually a little worried in her heart, and at the same time, she understood why there were rumors in her original world that the third episode was temporarily changed because of the bad reviews. ——Of course, now that she has personally followed up the animation production process, she knows that it is impossible to temporarily change the script.

Not only Ayase herself, but everyone who knew the inside story of "Madoka", including the animation production team and Gosho Togashi, said in their hearts: "...just wait until the third episode. 』

"Ah, don't think about it, it's only a week anyway. 』Standing up from the computer and stretching, Ayase casually closed the webpage in front of her, and raised her head to meet Saori's gaze.

"Ah, have you finished reading Ms. Ayase?" Closing the thick tome and pushing it back into the bookshelf, Saori said to Ayase in a brisk tone, "Kaisaka and Eriri plan to go back and find them."

"Let's go together, I'm fine here." After asking Eirari, Ayase clicked to turn off the phone, and after Eirari turned off the light in the study, she went out with Saori and the others.

On the other hand, after posting a "guess post" and received a lot of questions, Ji Xiaolu was typing hard on the keyboard at home, responding to questions from other messages.

It's just that Madoka has only played two episodes so far, and there is so little information that can be used as an argument, so that at the end of the debate, even Ji Xiaolu himself has some doubts about his own thoughts—"Could it be that I'm really overthinking this? Just an ordinary magical girl?" With such doubts in mind, Ji Xiaolu insisted on leaving a sentence of "wait and see", then turned off the computer, and lay back on his bed. bed.

"Miyuki-sensei, don't let me down, bring a brand new magical girl! ”Himekoji-kun, who closed his eyes and prepared to sleep, said silently before going to bed: “In that case, I will be your loyal fan from now on, Sensei, and I will buy three copies of all works!” 』

Following the speech of a certain mysterious girl A, Ji Xiaolu-kun soon fell into a dreamland.

Unlike Himekoji who is single, Ayase who is surrounded by a large group of girls will naturally not go to bed so early - or even if she wants to sleep now, Kirino will not let her go to sleep.

"Hurry up, Ayase! What are you waiting for!" Kirino's face was flushed, his forehead was covered with beads of sweat, and his voice was hoarse from shouting so hard.

"Even if you let me do it, I'm still a little tired." Ayase said with a wry smile, "Fingers are sore."

"Why did you bully me just now? Why did you soften when you met that dead cat?" Tong Nai pouted, picked up a teacup from the side and poured it into his stomach to replenish the lost water, half complaining Said: "Then let's go together, today we must make this dead cat beg for mercy."

"Hehe, you two go up together." The corner of the black cat's mouth curled into a mocking arc, and it raised an eyebrow at Kirino, and the red eyes with colored contact lenses were full of provocation.

"Ah... ah!" Tong Nai suddenly let out a scream, and then said to Saori: "Why did you get in too!"

"Hey hey, Xiao Tongtong, the so-called solitary joy is not as good as all the joy, but I joined with this mentality." Saori raised the game controller in his hand, and his mouth became an ω shape, like a little devil The same "chi chi" laughter.

At this time, Ayase and the others are gathered in front of the TV, and are fighting the home console version of "True Sister Annihilating SISCALYPSE". Simultaneous melee in "Big Smash Mode".

When Ayase, Saori and the others returned to the game room, they happened to see Kirino's character retreating under the fierce attack of the black cat, and was completely defeated.