People in the original god, the innkeeper, oppressing his sister

Hello everyone, the second volume is finished. First of all, I would like to thank all my friends for their support along the way.

The following is a summary of the previous chapters, prospects for subsequent development, and problems encountered in writing.

What I want to write in this volume is very clear. The previous volume was about coming to a new environment, so this volume is the process of integrating into the new environment, a series of things that happened in the middle.

And the other is the emotional line, the change in the relationship between several people.

Travel missions, Anke games, hauntings of knights, and snowy mountains, in fact, each small part will promote the development of the relationship after completion.

For example, starting from Chapter 131, making a summary of Gu Bai's intentions is paving the way for the end of the Snow Mountain incident in Chapter 151;

From the end of the snow mountain incident to the end of this celebration banquet, the relationship between the few people has undergone certain changes, and they have separated and joined together, and finally came here.

This book is about a harem, but my requirement for myself is that it must be acceptable in terms of rationality. At the very least, the protagonist cannot accept it with peace of mind, and the twists and turns in the middle can be regarded as a process of rationalization.

From acquaintance to acquaintance, there will be some misunderstandings and entanglements in the middle, and then to the happy ending... I prefer to call it the beginning, inheritance, and transition.

As for Qin's thoughts, I think I can explain more, because some friends said that they didn't understand the last chapter.

Suppress first and then raise, the "suppression" in the first half is to highlight the turning point at the end.

And another reason, the reason why she said those vague words was to take this opportunity to say what she wanted to say to Gu Bai.

But it must also be admitted that at the time, she didn't think much about Gu Bai's feelings when she said that, but she still made up her mind. There is a description in it that said she was biting her lip, which was talking about this decision.

There are two reasons, one is that she knows that even if there is a misunderstanding, she will not stay overnight, because these misunderstandings will be revealed when Gu Bai walks back to the room.

Second, as a character in the plot, she didn't know that the Fengmolong incident had not been completely resolved, and thought that Gu Bai would leave after building the hotel, so she called it "the last chance". mentioned in the conversation.

After returning from the snowy mountain, she was waiting for Gu Bai, but she couldn't wait for it. It was also because of this incident that she changed her mind. It is not advisable to wait blindly, and sometimes she has to be more proactive.

And the straight ball confession obviously didn't fit Qin's personality, so she chose that opportunity to say what she wanted to say.

Jean has a quote like this: "If you had come a few days earlier, maybe this conversation wouldn't have happened."

Looking at it for the first time, one would think that it was Gu Bai's delay in responding that caused her to be disheartened;

And after watching it a second time after knowing the ending, you will find that she is talking about her own mental journey, because she has been waiting and can't wait, so she chose a "sword to take a slant" approach.

On the surface, it seems to be talking about another person, but in fact it is talking about Gu Bai, which is also the effect I want to achieve. It sounds so sad when I don’t know the truth, but when I know the truth, I will be touched as much as I feel.

"Very important things, very important people, have different meanings to me."

Right?

It stands to reason that it would be easier to understand adding some psychological descriptions of Qin in the previous chapter, but I deleted it because of the overall structure.

Of course, there is also an opportunity for explanation, which I originally planned to put in the follow-up content.

That is, Qin actually changed the lines herself, which is different from what Lisa gave her, and Gu Bai thought those were just designed by Lisa.

But if you go to see the meeting between him, Lisa and Qin, you will find that the two people's statements and attitudes towards Gu Bai are different. The reason for the disagreement is that Qin gave Lisa to her lines changed.

And when Gu Bai learns about it belatedly, it will be a breakthrough in the relationship between the two.

But some friends reported that they didn’t understand what was going on, so I came here to explain it in advance (although I don’t like the behavior of explaining outside the book.)

Probably that's it.

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Then there is the prospect of the follow-up content.

Because the writing is too slow, I discovered a problem a long time ago. The matter of Mond has not been completely resolved, but readers are already tired of these characters and are looking forward to Liyue's unfolding.

But in terms of the progress of the book, I can't jump to the content of Liyue all at once.

In other words, while facing readers' aesthetic fatigue, I also have to take into account the development of the plot.

As for the solution, of course, I have already thought of it, here is a trick, the only thing that can be reminded——

Do you still remember that Ying once drew three tickets for Yunhan Society to tour Mond?

This foreshadowing can finally be used.

Key words for the next volume: Qin’s home court, Yunhan Club, and the maid’s furniture purchase, what happened on the stage, the relationship between Liyue’s character and Mond’s character, Wind Demon Dragon and Fish God and Night Hero.

Probably that's it.

Finally, there are problems encountered in writing.

Ideas are always easy to change. For example, the title of the first volume of this volume is called Long Qitan under the Moon. In fact, the idea at that time is completely different from the current ending.

Another example is the title of this book.

For another example, for the ending of this chapter, I originally wanted to end with a few people playing games at a banquet.

Similar to Monopoly, for example, some maid counterattacked and became acting head, she was crushed to death while watching fun on the street, she died three years old, and she gave birth to another child.

In fact, there was no misunderstanding from Qin, it was just that the two met, spoke a few words softly, and then chatted together in the office, and many people came in while chatting, so everyone played games with dice, paper and pens until midnight , everyone left, Gu Bai just wanted to yawn, and then the door was pushed open again, and everyone stood outside the door, holding cakes for celebration.

But in the end, I chose this version. According to the plot, it is more appropriate to leave some blank space. Who knows what they will play.

And the constant change of thinking leads to cumbersomeness and procrastination. For example, at the beginning of this volume, Ying picked up the note with Qiuqiu's ballad, but it was completely useless in the end.

Some things were written at the time, but when it was written later, the plot was changed, so it became unnecessary.

And the adjustment of thinking leads me to need a buffer, so sometimes a little water, um, but it should not be too much water.

There are a lot of things I want to write, and if I want to portray the characters well, it is inevitable to give her pen and ink, but I will never know what is right without being long-winded.

Finally, at the end, I would like to thank everyone who saw this, and many old friends who have been with me since the book was opened, such as honey lemon, sinking into the wind and dust, the black cat who left home, the arrogant panda, and the wooden feather under the sunset Flying snow, where to go, who is the good man, Wujo Wu dancing, the shadow is empty, the chilling cicadas are sad and the rain is just resting...

These are the IDs that I have a deep impression on. There must be many friends who have not mentioned them, because of limited memory and space, sorry.

But thank you very much anyway.

There is also the friend who gave a reward. I want to say one more thing here. In fact, I want to thank you at the end of the chapter every time, but because I update it every day, I forget it every time;

When I remembered it the next day, I forgot again because I had to catch up with the deadline on the third day, so I fell into an endless loop...

I also thank the friends in the group for discussing the plot together. Every time I feel unconfident, I praise the author for a good writing, which makes me very happy and embarrassed.

Also, there are anecdotes in the group, but they were not written by me, but by book friends. Hereby, I would like to thank Superman Weiwei.

The group number is 659048417

In addition, if you encounter a friend whose refresh does not work, you can delete the book from the bookshelf and add it back, which will cause trouble for everyone.

Let’s stop here for a few words, the update is estimated to be postponed to tonight or early in the morning, let’s enter the third volume together.

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Finally push a book, it’s not easy to hit the street to get to py, thank you big brother for being willing to give me a hand, relaxed and happy wind:

Is there something wrong in Yuanshin from zero solo queue?

The whole Tivat, down to Keli, up to General Raiden, is full of his heart-to-heart friends

——Is the heart you are talking about serious or not?

——It couldn't be more serious, piercing the lungs of the lungs.

Everyone pierces each other's lung tubes, and we are good friends for life!

"Is there something wrong with the solo row from zero in Yuanshin?"

When Songs Sound: Chapter 179 Asking for leave, and then failing to ask for leave

Liyue, the ancient kingdom of rocks and contracts.

Rebirth Hall.

"Ask for leave!?"

The girl named Hu Tao was standing on tiptoe, and patted the shoulder of the black-haired man in front of her quite maturely.

"How many times have you counted this month? Or is it a long vacation for several days? What will the hall master do when you leave?"

She patted her chest to catch her breath, but unfortunately her chest didn't move.

"Zhongli, you can't do this."

There was another long exclamation, and Hu Tao turned his gaze to the funeral girl who was holding a broom:

"Qiu Yu, you come to criticize the reasoning, do you think this fake should be given to him?"

Qiu Yu slowly raised her head and patted her head, "Ah, I forgot to take the dustpan!" Said and ran away quickly.

No one can afford to offend these two people.

One is the head of his own family, and the other is a social idler... Ah no, it is Mr. Zhongli who is serving as a guest.

With a handsome appearance, elegant demeanor, and profound knowledge, there are so many advantages in him that I can't finish talking about it for a day. Just looking at it makes people feel admiration and affection.

"Master, you guys talk first, I'll go get things—"

"Tsk."

Seeing that the off-site aid ran away, Hu Tao curled her lips and began to walk back and forth with her hands behind her back, putting on a sincere tone:

"It's okay for you to be free in normal times, but it's different now. You know, next month is to invite Xian Dianyi. It's a good day, and it happens to be the busiest time for us at Xiangshengtang, not to mention that you will be there next month. I asked for a leave of absence in advance."

"If you leave, I won't be able to do it alone, but this hall master is not unreasonable, what do you think, huh?"

Hearing the words, the black-haired man raised his arms, pondered for a moment, and was about to speak;

"Oh, listen to me first, okay..."

In fact, you have been talking about it from the beginning to the end!

The little girl named Qiuyu sneaked back again, hid behind a pillar, and covered half of her face with a broom upside down.

As the saying goes, curiosity killed the cat.

Especially the dispute between the boss and the immediate boss, it stands to reason that such matters should be less involved.

But there is no way, every time I see Mr. Zhongli, who is always calm and indifferent, showing a helpless and headache expression in front of his hall master, it is really one of the few interesting things in this job.

And the tirade on the side continued:

"Zhongli, I didn't mean you..."

No, you are obviously talking about him!

"By the way, why did you ask for leave?"

Is it really appropriate to say Datong without knowing the reason?

"Zhongli, there is a saying that I don't know if I should say it or not..."

If you don’t think you should say it, then don’t say it!

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Finally, after a bunch of crazy complaints, the conversation ended with the girl patted the man on the other shoulder:

"So, you went all the way to Monde just to listen to Yunjin's play, can't you go to Heyu Teahouse to listen to it?"

"To be precise, it's Mr. Yun's new play. If there is no accident, it will premiere in Mond."

"That seems to be quite important..."

"It has a different meaning than usual, but..."

After he finished speaking, he paused, looked at Hu Tao's little face that was starting to get tangled up, and finally sighed:

"It's okay."

"Except for the personal affairs that must be dealt with next month, I will help in the hall until the end of the invitation ceremony."

"That's right."

Looking at the girl's smile again, the man named Zhongli moved his eyes to the distance, a little complicated.

If I were to use an easy-to-understand sentence to sum up the mood of this god walking in the world, it would probably be:

I originally planned to listen to a new play as a souvenir before officially retiring;

It's over.

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"Hey, be obedient, come back with me, okay?"