How to raise a passer-by wife

And cartoonists need to complete a series of content control such as pictures, lines, storyboards, etc. Compared with the prominence of a certain aspect, the overall harmony is more important.

No matter how exquisite the painting is, it is useless if it does not tell a good story.

As long as it can tell a good story, even Jiulianhei can have the power to shake people's hearts.

In other words, most of the time, cartoonists have to suppress their desire for expression and reduce the completion of the artwork to better tell the story.

From the perspective of a single picture, regardless of those illustrators, their own drawing skills can be better utilized, and more information can be contained in the picture, which is easy.

Especially for these game original paintings, Ying Lili only needs to devote all her heart and soul to the images according to the requirements of the director.

And this is one of the reasons why Benizaka Zhuyin sought her out.

Kato Megumi observed carefully and gained a deeper understanding of Kobayashi Soryo's words.

At the setting level, or when it comes to facial expressions and parts related to the story, Eiriri basically has no ability to resist. She can only grind her teeth while listening to Benizaka Akane's arrangement with tears in her eyes.

When it comes to issues such as the fineness of the picture itself or the composition of the plot image, Ying Lili will relentlessly confront each other, turning all the grievances she just received from Benizaka Akane into anger to vent.

As strong as Akane Benizaka, she will retreat rationally at such a time, respecting Ying Lili's ideas.

Then ruthlessly crush it back on the next topic.

"Ah..." Kato Megumi blinked.

Totally toyed with, Ying Lili.

At the beginning, Akane Benizaka would correct her carefully, and then gradually turned into ridicule, and even scolded mercilessly. When Ying Lili was beaten to pieces, she began to discuss what Ying Lili was good at.

When Ying Lili was resurrected with full blood and high spirits, she would start to discuss what Benizaka Akane was good at, first correcting, then laughing, and finally cursing.

When Ying Lili is depressed and is about to collapse, she will start discussing what Ying Lili is good at.

Kato Hui was thoughtful.

And this kind of play?

Chapter 363

Kobayashi Kongqing is right. Perhaps in terms of the amount of information in the painting, Eiriri has an advantage, and then presents a feeling of being evenly matched with Benizaka Zhuyin.

But in the overall discussion, Ying Lili was completely played by Akane Benizaka.

Whether it is the rhythm of the conversation or the content of the discussion, everything is under the control of Akane Benizaka.

Under Benizaka Zhuyin's control, Eiriri's emotions have always been maintained at a fairly high level.

Normally speaking, in the middle of the night, even Iron Man would inevitably feel a little tired.

If it was conducted like an ordinary discussion meeting, according to the amount prepared by Akane Benizaka, it is estimated that Ying Lili would start to feel drowsy before half of the talk.

However, until the sun rose in the early morning, Ying Lili was still in a good state of mind, and even felt unfinished.

"Okay, we're done talking about Mr. Kashiwagi's part." Benizaka Zhuyin put down the sketch, "Take a break for 10 minutes, and then change to Mrs. Kasumi's part."

The sun outside the window had already risen, and the bright sunshine and sea breeze poured in together.

The high-intensity discussion lasted for four hours, and even Kobayashi Kongqing and Kato Megumi, who were the helpers, were exhausted.

Ying Lili, who was still very energetic before, after hearing what Benizaka Zhuyin said, she lay down on the table like a ball that had suddenly deflated.

Only Hongsaka Zhuyin got up easily, stretched her waist, and took the non-alcoholic beer that Kobayashi Kongqing had prepared a long time ago, and went out to get some fresh air while drinking.

"Eriri," Kato Megumi called softly, "have something to drink, or your throat will hurt."

"Thank you, Hui." Ying Lili struggled to get up, and took a big mouthful of tea.

"Are you okay?" Kato Megumi was a little worried about her state.

"I'm used to it." Ying Lili muttered, "This kind of thing happens once a week."

"......Thanks a lot."

"I would like to ask," Ying Lili looked at Xiao Lin Kongqing, "was she like this before?"

"That's not true." Kobayashi Kongqing shook his head.

"I thought she was always like this..." Ying Lili breathed a sigh of relief.

"In the past, she scolded a group by herself, and there were not many such single-handed situations."

"Hiss..." Ying Lili took a breath, "This guy is really..."

"However, as expected of the illustrator Eri Kashiwagi." Kato Megumi recalled the discussion with Kobayashi Sooqing just now, "Unknowingly, he has grown to the point where he can compete with creators of this level."

"I'm just relying on the ability of the illustrator to barely maintain the amount of drawing information." Ying Lili handed the correction instructions written in red pen on the character setting map she drew to Megumi Kato, "If I relax a little Son, you will be overtaken in no time.”

"Hmm..." Kato Megumi didn't quite understand, "Is this very powerful?"

"Kong Qing." Ying Lili shook the manuscript, "How much can this picture be sold in a second-hand manga shop?"

Kobayashi Kongqing gestured a number, "If you let me come, the price can be doubled again."

"That's it." Ying Lili spread her hands.

"I was quite worried before." Megumi Kato tilted his head, "I was worried that you would be criticized and cry in the arms of senior sister."

"..." Ying Lili's expression froze for a moment.

"Huh?" Kato Megumi was curious, "What's wrong with you?"

"Hui, Kong Qing," Ying Lili opened her mouth with difficulty, "That... you'd better get out of here now."

"Eh?"

"Aren't you here to collect materials? Star Cluster and the others should be waking up soon, so go and prepare for the next collection." Ying Lili bit her lower lip lightly, "After all, you don't want to see..."

Kato Megumi asked, "What don't you want to see?"

Ying Lili didn't answer, her eyes fell on Kasumigaoka Shiwa who was sleeping on the table beside her.

Just like a student before the college entrance examination, he can fall asleep in just 10 minutes.

Speaking of it, it seems that Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu has been very quiet.

Quiet a little... too much.

"If you're referring to the embarrassment that senior will endure the stormy trial." Kobayashi Kongqing had already expected, "I've seen this kind of scene many times."

"But..." Yinglili lowered her eyes.

"If senior sister has to bear unbearable criticism later, then we should be here with her, right?" Kato Megumi added, "Ka Yingri, Kashiko and Kashiwagi are not the only ones."

"Then..." Ying Lili took a deep breath, "I ask you to persevere until the end, try not to look away, and don't sympathize with this emotion."

"I've been waiting for a long time!" The paper door was pulled open, and Akane Benizaka returned to the room drinking beer, patted Kasumigaoka Shiwa on the shoulder, and spread out the documents on the table, "The script is going to be reviewed next—Mr. Kasumi, please you~"

"......Um."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu sat up with difficulty, looking at the densely packed documents on the table.

Then......

"It's boring~ Boring! What did you write? You wrote this? Teacher Xia?"

"You... which part are you referring to?"

"What is that part? Don't you realize it yourself?"

"You want to say...that the script I wrote is not good?"

"Yeah, it's rubbish."

"Varied......"

"I thought I could barely see it in the middle, so I endured it all the time. But the ending is so bad that it is completely unbearable. If there is better development in the back, the front is barely qualified, but the back is so bad, how dare you Write the front like this? Thanks to your plan to let players read such things, do you have any deep hatred with them?" Benizaka Zhuyin slammed the document on the table, "Are you kidding me?"

"I've never...not once...in terms of writing...perfunctory."

"That's pure lack of ability." Benizaka Akane concluded, "Isn't that even worse?"

"No...no..."

The originally elegant, black-bellied, cold and arrogant Kasumigaoka Shiyu has completely lost her former composure.

When facing the upgraded version of himself, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu has no power to fight back.

"Wait a minute! Benizaka Zhuyin, you're a little too modest!" Yinglili protested dissatisfiedly, "She's a member of your team! Explain clearly where the problem is, and discuss with each other rationally!"

"Seeing this kind of thing, how can you keep me rational!" Benizaka Akane slapped the document.

"Sister Zhu Yin." Xiao Lin Kongqing glanced at the time, "You have wasted 8 minutes and 32 seconds venting your emotions."

Chapter 364

"Tsk." Taking the non-alcoholic beer handed over by Kei Kato, Akane Benizaka took a long gulp, "Actually, I really hate interfering in the field that the writer is in charge of. After all, Teacher Xia also has her own style. But, there is no way. , facing such a useless writer, we can only teach them step by step from scratch."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu bit her lower lip hard.

Unlike Yingli Li, who can still have an advantage in the amount of information in a picture, Kasumigaoka Shiwa has no advantage in front of the author Benizaka Zhuyin.

In terms of character, Kasumigaoka Shiwa's abilities honed among her students, compared with Benizaka Akane, who has dominated the industry for ten years, is even more naive and pitiful.

What Eriri didn't want Kato Megumi and Kobayashi Kongqing to see was this embarrassed Kasumigaoka Shiwa.

"Here, Teacher Xia." Benizaka Zhuyin pointed at the script, "Why did you hesitate? Why didn't you cut down Fernand?"

"That's because...he also has cause for sympathy and a past..."

"Huh?" Benizaka Zhuyin made a doubtful voice, or should be said to be a questioning voice, urging Kasumigaoka Shiwa to continue.

"This war is not a simple territorial dispute, nor is it pure revenge. I think I have given him enough persuasiveness in his mental journey of being an enemy of the world, so at the last moment, I chose... ...."

"and then?"

"So, there's no real enemy at all. Everyone's right, and everyone's wrong..."

What the two of them are discussing now is the epilogue of "Global Chronicle XIII", the part of the decisive battle with the final boss.

This character is Mr. El Fernand, who was a nobleman and magician a hundred years ago when the protagonists' country was ruled by the royal family.

The protagonist and his party learned about the conspiracy of this ancient great magician during the process of investigating various attacks on their country, and even natural disasters.

After going through hardships and finally fighting him in the final battle, he learns about his sad past.

100 years ago, he was alienated and betrayed by the king of that era, lost his cherished sister, and vowed revenge.

After the protagonist and the others tried their best to defeat Mr. Fernand, in the gradually disintegrating castle, they extended a helping hand to him who was about to be swallowed by the distortion of the world.

Although Sir Fernand once stretched out his hand, trying to grab the helping hand, but in the end, he put it down with a serene smile.

In the end, Sir Fernand sealed the distortion of the world with his own magical power, and became the basis for saving the world...

"It's boring." Benizaka Akane poked hard at the script, "I still don't find it interesting at all."

"Why...?!" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu couldn't understand.

"Since you can't understand, then I can only give you specific instructions... Take Fernand's body to pieces and feed it to the monsters, or let him be rescued and live forever Happy days."

"The two solutions you mentioned are impossible... that would make the piled up plot collapse from the root."

"Teacher Xia, otherwise I will have to destroy and rewrite all your so-called foundations - I will wait for you for another two weeks."

"Are you joking......?"

"You were the one who joked with me first!" Benizaka Zhuyin stared at Kasumigaoka Shiwa, "Actually, the very poor final leader? He changed his past for good at the last moment? But he couldn't save him? A little happy? A little bitter? A little bit A mature ending? Are you mixing a salad? Everything is on top of each other! It’s like a razor, rubbing around and scraping off a few stray hairs! A stupid arrangement that only creates subtle pressure on the player, which is neither enjoyable There is no sense of despair, it is simply useless! Subtle bitterness, subtle ruthlessness, subtle bitterness, and subtle sweetness...the script you wrote is just seasoning! Are you looking down on entertainment works? Maybe, maybe you think this kind of plot is the depth of the story, oops, why don’t you understand this kind of deep meaning, the world is not binary, there are many complicated and entangled places... Haha. "

"Let me tell you," Benizaka Zhuyin laughed, "what you wrote is not depth, it's called miscellaneous taste, which is as extraneous as the strawberry in Mapo tofu."

Kobayashi Kongqing didn't quite understand the previous content.

Regarding the last sentence, Kobayashi Kongqing couldn't agree more.

"If you want the player to cry, you have to use tricky tricks! Even sugar has to be mixed with a knife! If you can't do that, use completely tasteless and plain words to describe the history, and use less Pretending to be deep with pretentious wording!" Benizaka Zhuyin yelled like a cannonball, "At the last moment, I found out the opponent's difficulties, and I reached out to save the opponent, but the protagonist group came all the way!

"The others don't have any difficulties? Just because he is the final boss, there is more space to describe, just think about him, feel sorry for him, what are the people who were killed by him before?

"Do you think you can touch others by touching yourself? Disgusting! Reaching out your hand to the enemy is insulting the protagonist, reaching out to the protagonist is insulting the boss, and extending your hands together is insulting the player, telling the player that you have seen all kinds of misery before and rose up." The anger that arises is a joke!

"If you want to be a joke, don't make me a joke! Put away your childish tricks, sharpen the tip of your pen for me, and write content that can directly pierce the players' hearts and make them feel heartbroken! "

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu passively endured everything, her body shrinking back unconsciously.

"Just treat Fernand as me, and use your characters to show me the evil that surpasses me." Benizaka Akane lowered her voice, her eyes seemed to completely penetrate Kasumigaoka Shiwa, "In this way, You can also feel the anger and pain that the protagonist should feel, and then tear Fernand to pieces from the heart, laughing and tearing it apart."

Hongsaka Zhuyin paused, the corners of her mouth raised, "Or do you want me to live a happy life, after hurting you unscrupulously, live a peaceful and ordinary life, and die with a smile? How kind, Xia Teacher, hahahahahaha!"

The discussion ended with Benizaka Akane laughing almost exactly like the villain.