How to raise a passer-by wife

She herself is very satisfied and thinks the script has a strong sense of substitution.

Kato Megumi originally thought that Tang Keke was in the role, and Tang Keke would feel a little embarrassed.

Now it seems that she was worrying too much.

The second person to call was Ye Yuelian. She read the script carefully and helped to correct the formatting and language problems.

Ye Yuelian really didn't understand the content of ACGN.

Not to mention giving opinions.

But I was too embarrassed to do nothing, so I tried my best.

Then there is Arashi Chisato. She is very satisfied with the script, but she wants to add some interactive plots with Shibuya Kaon, and she talked with Kato Megumi about some interesting things that happened between the two.

Megumi Kato recorded them one by one, handed them over to Sora Kobayashi to fill in the outline, and Teacher Sakurako completed them.

After that, Shibuya Kaon, she said that she is not as gentle and brave as described in the script, and she feels a little embarrassed.

But under the encouragement of Kato Megumi to show the facts and reason, he finally accepted shyly.

It was also because of Kato Megumi's encouragement that she told the reason why she called so late.

"Hmm... I always feel that something is wrong, but I can't say it. It just feels like there are some parts that don't fit." Shibuya Kaon hesitated, "If I find out what the problem is, I'll contact you early. You guys. But I couldn’t find it, so I was wondering if I should say it..."

Shibuya Kaon's hesitation is not without reason.

[What doesn't feel right] This description is too vague, and it's easy to give people a feeling of deliberately finding fault.

Shibuya Kaon has a delicate mind, if it weren't for the encouragement of Kato Megumi, I'm afraid she really wouldn't have said it.

"So..." Kato Megumi read the script many times again, "Where is the problem?"

"Could it be the protagonist's relationship?" Kobayashi Kongqing thought of a possibility, "After all, they have always been active on their own. After adding the protagonist's non-existent help, there will naturally be a sense of disobedience."

"Speaking of assistance," Megumi Kato tilted his head, "I remember you helped a lot, didn't you?"

"My help is optional, even without my help, they can continue to go on." Kobayashi Kongqing explained the difference, "But in the script, the protagonist's help is crucial."

"That's right," Kato Megumi nodded, "The protagonist is the key to the player's substitution. If the sense of presence is too low, it will greatly affect the gaming experience."

"Hmm..." Kobayashi Kongqing was lost in thought, "It's indeed a problem, but it may also be that they haven't been exposed to games before, so they feel a little uncomfortable."

"See what Sumire thinks, and make a decision later." Megumi Kato decided to wait.

It's just that she didn't expect to wait for several days.

What was even more unexpected was that Sumire Heian didn't call, but directly made an appointment, came to Kobayashi Sorao's house and explained to Kato Megumi face to face, and as soon as she opened her mouth, she denied the script.

"I don't think this script is good enough." Sumire Heian pointed out directly.

"Great." Megumi Kato couldn't find the problem, and handed the drink to Sumire Heian, "What's the problem?"

"Uh... isn't your reaction quite right?" Heiana Sumire knew that Megumi Kato had a good temper, but she didn't expect it to be this good.

"Compared to finding the problem, it is more terrifying not to find the problem." Kato Megumi chuckled, "You directly denied the plan, which means you found a serious problem; it took so long to call, it means you have been thinking about it for a long time ;The voice is not urgent, and there is no worry in the tone, which means that you have a corresponding solution, at least a corresponding train of thought—that’s why I have this attitude.”

"..." Heianna Sumire just felt that Kato Megumi had a good temper.

Now, Sumire Heian is a little scared.

Before he said anything, Megumi Kato analyzed so much.

And it's all correct.

Nian Gao glanced at Kobayashi Kongqing in disgust.

This guy has a [my wife is amazing] expression on his face right now.

Quite embarrassing.

"So... what's the problem?"

"Ah...well, that's right." Sumire Heian came back to her senses, "The problem is with Coco."

"Hmm." Kato Megumi responded, showing that he was listening.

"Coco she...is unlikable."

Kobayashi Kongqing was taken aback. He always believed that Ping An Mingjin and Tang Keke had a good relationship, so he probably wouldn't say such a thing.

And judging by her appearance, she was not joking.

So it's not that Tang Keke can't be liked.

Rather...

Megumi Kato thought for a while, "Is it because the role of Ke Ke in the script is not pleasing?"

"That's right!" Sumire Heian nodded vigorously, "I watched it many times, and at first I just felt that something was wrong, so I only watched the single-player plot, and I only discovered this problem when I saw the part about Coco. "

"Can you be more specific?"

"Some things that Ke Ke did were transferred to the protagonist." Heian Mingsumi opened the script and pointed to the notes she had made, "Here, here, and this..."

Megumi Kato looked over one by one, and soon found that Sumire Heiana was right.

In order to highlight the role of the protagonist, some things that should have been done by the star cluster members themselves were placed on the protagonist.

At the same time, because he can't help in acting and professionally, the protagonist does some behind-the-scenes work.

That is the part that Tang Keke has been in charge of in reality.

Chapter 373 We Can't

"No wonder Keke was the first to call." Kato Hui finally understood that Tang Keke was so satisfied, and there was no reason for embarrassment.

Because Tang Keke took the lead.

Most of the things the protagonist does in the script are done by Tang Keke.

The sense of substitution is too strong.

For Tang Keke, this script was written with her as the main character.

Because of this, she didn't pay attention to her own character creation in the script.

"Although Coco's ability in all aspects is not the strongest, her enthusiasm is the beginning and motivation of the entire school idol activities." Heian Nasumi explained seriously, "And her enthusiasm is reflected in her actions and the venue's dress. , costumes for performances, selection of activities, production of props, fluorescent sticks, banners, slogans... She infected everyone with her enthusiasm, supported everyone with her actions, and achieved many things that others could not do. He did the best he could within the limits of his ability.”

Sumire Heian paused, "Take away everything she does...she will become a character who only has passion and can only shout slogans."

Kaon Shibuya sings very well, Sato Arashi can win the championship in dance competitions, Ren Hazuki can figure skating and piano, and Sumire Heian has accumulated rich stage experience since she was a child.

In all fairness, in terms of acting, Tang Keke really didn't have any outstanding strengths.

However, as Heian Mingjin said, Tang Keke's enthusiasm and the power of action transformed from this enthusiasm are indispensable in the star cluster.

Moreover, her acting ability is only a little weak compared with other members, and her overall level is still there.

Then there's the other side - the main character.

The protagonists of galgame have a very interesting phenomenon, most of them have hair covering their eyes.

This is mainly to increase the player's sense of substitution by covering the eyes and blurring the appearance of the entire character.

This method is a small trick.

If the character itself is well established, there is no need to use such a method.

When the script is not top-notch, the method of enhancing the sense of substitution by blurring the characteristics of the character can greatly improve the player's gaming experience.

In other words, make the player feel as much as possible that he is the protagonist.

Similar to Tang Keke's state when playing games.

Judging from her feedback, this method is very effective.

To blur the characteristics of the character, to put it bluntly, is to make the character as blank as possible.

There are no obvious advantages and disadvantages, no specific strengths and preferences.

It is set that the protagonist can play the piano, but the player can't play the piano, and the sense of substitution will be reduced immediately.

As a mature screenwriter, Teacher Yingzi obviously noticed this.

The shaping of the protagonist in the script also follows the principle of blank paper.

And this begs another question, how can this form of protagonist function in the story and become an integral part?

Enthusiasm, and action.

So the problem is already obvious.

There are too many overlaps between Tang Keke and the protagonist.

Highlighting Tang Keke will make the protagonist appear dispensable.

Highlighting the protagonist will cause serious flaws in Tang Keke's character creation.

Kato Megumi quickly sorted out his thoughts, "Sumire, you are right, do you have any thoughts?"

"I wonder... can we create some new problems and let the protagonist solve them." Heiana Sumire said his suggestion, "Then let the protagonist and Coco have a feeling of being like-minded and walking shoulder to shoulder?"

"Hmm... that sounds great." Megumi Kato nodded, "Well, we'll work on that, anything else?"

"Huh?" Ping An Ming Sumire was taken aback.

"Like your part."

"This..." Sumire Heian looked away, "Well... I'll go back and have a look."

"Huh?" Kato Megumi showed a curious look, "Could it be that after you discovered the problem of Keke's character creation, you have been thinking about the solution, and then you came to me directly after thinking about it, and you haven't had time to look at your own. part?"

"I... I'll leave the rest to you!" Ping An Ming Sumire fled in despair.

"So their relationship is really good..." Xiao Lin Kongqing chuckled, "Although they always quarrel."

Megumi Kato tilted her head, "Just like senior sister and Eriri?"

"Love and kill each other."

"However, fortunately, she discovered this problem." Megumi Kato opened the script, "and proposed a solution."

"This needs to add a lot of plots," Kobayashi Kongqing stretched his waist, "I will contact Teacher Yingzi to respond to this problem, and then determine the outline for the future."

"Well, what happened to the syllabus at the senior sister's side?"

"It's still in the process of being perfected, and some new ideas will be sent one after another." Kobayashi Kongqing replied, "After a while, we can repeat the previous process."

That is, the process of repeated adjustments. Kasumigaoka Shiwa proposed ideas, Kobayashi Souqing added ideas to the outline, Kasumigaoka Shiwa expanded the outline into a story, Kato Megumi polished, Kobayashi Soroyo re-adjusted, Kasumigaoka Shiwa expanded again, Kato Megumi again Touch up...until sanded to your liking.

Kobayashi Kongqing fed back the question to Teacher Yingzi, and got a reply soon.

[Large-scale modification is required, and the existing plot events need to be doubled, which may affect the progress of the project. 】

Kobayashi Kongqing replied to Teacher Yingzi, asking her to conceive first.

Then fell into thinking.

Scripts are very important in planning.

If the Superstar project is regarded as a big tree, the script is undoubtedly the main root of this big tree.

Whether it is the following games or the series of activities that follow, this script is needed as a background story to enrich the characters of the star cluster members.

In other words, when the script is not completed, basically no activities can proceed smoothly.

"Time..." Xiaolin Kongqing tapped his forehead, "Sure enough, the older I get, the more I feel that I don't have enough time."

Kato Megumi pushed Kobayashi Kongqing's hand away and helped him massage his head, "He already sounds like a grandfather."

"Fortunately, the body doesn't look like it."

"Irreverent." Kato Megumi patted Kobayashi Soryo's head lightly, and then rubbed it again, "Is Sumire's method not working?"

"Sumire's method works, but we are the ones who can't." Kobayashi Sorao searched for memories in his mind, "There should be a method that doesn't affect character creation, but also guarantees the player's experience..."

"Meow~" Kato Megumi's movements attracted Mogao's attention, and the big cat came over, wanting to be rubbed too.

"I'm having a problem now," Kobayashi Kongqing scratched the rice cake's chin, "I eat my food and drink my food every day, so you can help me."

"Huh?" Kato Megumi vaguely thought of something.

Chapter 374

Nian Gao snorted twice.

Rice cakes won't help.